-2024届高三英语作文复习写作专项读后续写旅途遇险类--天气多变，爱永恒不变 讲义
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The four mountain climbers were still breathing heavily as they looked out into the distance. The views from the top of the mountain were breathtaking. In all directions, valleys, forests and other mountains were laid out before them. They could even see the small wooden houses of the village where they had spent the night and the route they had taken to reach the top of this small but dangerous mountain. Laughing loudly, they were surprised at their courage in climbing such a steep and rocky mountain slope. Filled with an enormous sense of achievement, the four young climbers patted each other on the back.
As the other three continued to enjoy the views, Jason, the leader of the group, stared at the horizon with a troubled look on his face.
“What is it, Jason ” Sofia, the youngest of the group, asked.
“Those dark clouds in the distance mean a heavy storm is fast on the way,” Jason replied. He remembered the villagers had warned him of the unpredictable weather conditions on top of the mountain and that a terrible storm could appear from nowhere.
“But it's so warm and sunny here. I don't think the storm is coming this way,” Sofia said, more in hope than expectation.
However, Jason feared the worst and knew only too well what would happen if the storm caught them in the open. He addressed the group in a calm but serious tone, “If the storm hits us, the temperature will fall dramatically. The rain and mist will make it difficult for us to see where we are going and we could easily get lost or fall off a cliff. The wind will take our strength, so we need to get moving fast.”
The four mountain climbers packed up their facilities and immediately started back down the mountain. Unfortunately, despite their best efforts, the storm was upon them sooner than expected. The wind screamed in their ears, the driving rain stung (刺痛) their eyes and the mist made it impossible for them to see clearly.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With it getting dark, Jason decided that it was just too dangerous to continue. ____________
Finally, the storm showed signs of stopping and the climbers decided to continue their way down the mountain._______________________________________________________________
第一步 :
揣测文脉，按需分配，细化问题，完成闭环一
1.依据两句话，锁定闭环一。既给的文章(350词部分)后面所给的两句话(斜体句)之间形成的闭环。
2.分析一段问题，揣测文脉。一段问题：避难，如何躲过暴风雨？天色变黑了，杰森决定不能再继续下山了，不然太危险。◎他们看到了什么？◎他们想到了什么？◎他们表露了什么？◎他们说了什么？◎他们做了什么？最后，暴风雨看来就要停下来了。爬山者们决定下山。
3.按需分配，细化恰当问题。
既然是避难，以躲过暴风雨，我们遴选出"他们做了什么 "
继而通过追问，细化做了什么：
什么时候做
在哪做
怎么做
做得结果如何
第二步:深拓情节，寻读具象，升华主题，完成闭环二
1.分析二段问题，深拓情节。
二段问题：暴风雨后，体力不支，如何下山？
2.寻读问题解决关键，选定具象。
前文中提到的关键词：village, villager.
◎村民们做了什么？
◎回到村庄时大家感觉是什么？
寻读问题解决关键，选定具象。
前文中提到的关键词：village, villager.
4.关联具象，凸显大爱。自然无情，村民有爱。
#凝练一下模板，就是2句话：
01 遴选主要问题，细化主要问题
02 寻读文章具象，升华情节主题
大家不妨对照正确答案，来细细体会，一学就会哦！
With it getting dark, Jason decided that it was just too dangerous to continue. He gathered the group in the shelter of a large rock, where he noticed that the other three were frightened and looking to him for a way out. Pushed by responsibility and pressure of leadership, Jason, shouting against the wind, explained that the safest thing for the moment was taking shelter from the pouring rain. They had expected that the storm would pass very soon. However, as darkness settled over them, the shower swept in. How time dragged!
Finally, the storm showed signs of stopping and the climbers decided to continue their way down the mountain. Unbearably cold and hungry, they felt their way downward with great difficulty, eager for a miracle. Suddenly, something caught Jason's eye. Was it a flash of light There it was again…and another! In response, Jason immediately flashed his torch, exclaiming, “Over here! We are here!” His companions joined in. Rescue eventually arrived. Seeing the climbers, all the searching villagers breathed a sigh of relief and lovingly helped them return to the village. You see, weather changes but love remains.
语言积累：
marvel 感到惊奇
steep 陡峭的
unpredictable
gear所有物
almost upon us 行在 If an event is upon you, it is just about to happen. e.g. The long threatened storm was upon us.配酿多时的暴风雨就要向我们袭来。
sting,stung stung 刺丁(使)感觉刺痛，感觉灼痛the driving rain 倾盘大雨
The four mountain climbers were still breathing heavily as they looked out into the distance. The views from the top of the mountain were breathtaking. In all directions, valleys, forests and other mountains were laid out before them. They could even see the small wooden houses of the village where they had spent the night and the route they had taken to reach the top of this small but dangerous mountain. Laughing loudly, they were surprised at their courage in climbing such a steep and rocky mountain slope. Filled with an enormous sense of achievement, the four young climbers patted each other on the back.
As the other three continued to enjoy the views, Jason, the leader of the group, stared at the horizon with a troubled look on his face.
“What is it, Jason ” Sofia, the youngest of the group, asked.
“Those dark clouds in the distance mean a heavy storm is fast on the way,” Jason replied. He remembered the villagers had warned him of the unpredictable weather conditions on top of the mountain and that a terrible storm could appear from nowhere.
“But it's so warm and sunny here. I don't think the storm is coming this way,” Sofia said, more in hope than expectation.
However, Jason feared the worst and knew only too well what would happen if the storm caught them in the open. He addressed the group in a calm but serious tone, “If the storm hits us, the temperature will fall dramatically. The rain and mist will make it difficult for us to see where we are going and we could easily get lost or fall off a cliff. The wind will take our strength, so we need to get moving fast.”
The four mountain climbers packed up their facilities and immediately started back down the mountain. Unfortunately, despite their best efforts, the storm was upon them sooner than expected. The wind screamed in their ears, the driving rain stung (刺痛) their eyes and the mist made it impossible for them to see clearly.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
With it getting dark, Jason decided that it was just too dangerous to continue. ____________
Finally, the storm showed signs of stopping and the climbers decided to continue their way down the mountain._______________________________________________________________
第一步 :
揣测文脉，按需分配，细化问题，完成闭环一
1.依据两句话，锁定闭环一。既给的文章(350词部分)后面所给的两句话(斜体句)之间形成的闭环。
2.分析一段问题，揣测文脉。一段问题：避难，如何躲过暴风雨？天色变黑了，杰森决定不能再继续下山了，不然太危险。◎他们看到了什么？◎他们想到了什么？◎他们表露了什么？◎他们说了什么？◎他们做了什么？最后，暴风雨看来就要停下来了。爬山者们决定下山。
3.按需分配，细化恰当问题。
既然是避难，以躲过暴风雨，我们遴选出"他们做了什么 "
继而通过追问，细化做了什么：
什么时候做
在哪做
怎么做
做得结果如何
第二步:深拓情节，寻读具象，升华主题，完成闭环二
1.分析二段问题，深拓情节。
二段问题：暴风雨后，体力不支，如何下山？
2.寻读问题解决关键，选定具象。
前文中提到的关键词：village, villager.
◎村民们做了什么？
◎回到村庄时大家感觉是什么？
寻读问题解决关键，选定具象。
前文中提到的关键词：village, villager.
4.关联具象，凸显大爱。自然无情，村民有爱。
#凝练一下模板，就是2句话：
01 遴选主要问题，细化主要问题
02 寻读文章具象，升华情节主题
大家不妨对照正确答案，来细细体会，一学就会哦！
With it getting dark, Jason decided that it was just too dangerous to continue. He gathered the group in the shelter of a large rock, where he noticed that the other three were frightened and looking to him for a way out. Pushed by responsibility and pressure of leadership, Jason, shouting against the wind, explained that the safest thing for the moment was taking shelter from the pouring rain. They had expected that the storm would pass very soon. However, as darkness settled over them, the shower swept in. How time dragged!
Finally, the storm showed signs of stopping and the climbers decided to continue their way down the mountain. Unbearably cold and hungry, they felt their way downward with great difficulty, eager for a miracle. Suddenly, something caught Jason's eye. Was it a flash of light There it was again…and another! In response, Jason immediately flashed his torch, exclaiming, “Over here! We are here!” His companions joined in. Rescue eventually arrived. Seeing the climbers, all the searching villagers breathed a sigh of relief and lovingly helped them return to the village. You see, weather changes but love remains.
语言积累：
marvel 感到惊奇
steep 陡峭的
unpredictable
gear所有物
almost upon us 行在 If an event is upon you, it is just about to happen. e.g. The long threatened storm was upon us.配酿多时的暴风雨就要向我们袭来。
sting,stung stung 刺丁(使)感觉刺痛，感觉灼痛the driving rain 倾盘大雨