八上 Unit 3 I'm more outgoing than my sister. 3a-3c Writing 课件(共27张PPT)

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Writing
Unit 3 Section B (3A-3C)
Compare the following people
Liu Xiang is taller than Pan Changjiang.
Jenny Linda
Jenny has longer hair than Linda.
comparative:比较级
Wang Singling and Lou Lilia are best friends. Look at the chart below and compare them.
3a
Wang Lingling
Liu Lili
Wang Lingling Liu Lili
tall tall
long straight hair short straight hair
likes reading likes sports
popular popular
outgoing outgoing
serious funny
hard-working smart
similarities
differences
Wang Lingling Liu Lili
tall tall
long straight hair short straight hair
likes reading likes sports
popular popular
outgoing outgoing
serious funny
hard-working smart
Wang Lingling' s best friend is Liu Lili. They are both tall, but
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Wang Lingling's straight hair is longer than Liu Lili. Wang Lingling likes reading and Liu Lili likes sports.
Both of them are popular and outgoing.
Wang Lingling is more serious, and Liu Lili is funnier.
Wang Lingling is more hard-working, and Liu Lili is
smarter than Wang Lingling.
How to compare one person
appearance
(外貌)
personality
(性格)
hobby
(爱好)
tall/short
thin/heavy
long/short hair
big eyes/wear glasses
smart(clever)
love music
funny/serious
outgoing/shy
Friendly/kind
like sports
enjoy studying
A
Good English Writing
内容全面，无遗漏要点
条理清晰（过渡词，分段）
句式多样化
地道的高级词汇
一审要点
二列提纲
三列要点 扩句
五美文章
（改和誊）
01
02
03
05
四连成文
写作五步法
04
Before
Writing
（写作前）
1. Cross-question(审题)
※ Main idea ※ Style
※ Verb tense ※ Person
2. Make the outline (列提纲)
Catch the major points/key words (列要点）
审
列
Writing steps
While Writing
（写作中）
3. Sentences connection (连句成文)
Words/phrases Sentences
4. add proper conjunctions(添加适当的连词，确保连贯)
连
扩
Writing steps
Post
Writing
（写作后）
5. Correct the mistakes
6. Copy to the paper beautifully
改
誊
Writing steps
典例分析
你校英语社团正在开展主题为“My Friends”的征文比赛。请你写一篇英语短文介绍你的两位朋友(一位与你相似，一位与你不同)，进行投稿。内容包括如下：1.外貌 2.性格 3.兴趣爱好 4.学习 5.运动等方面。词数：80~100
My friends---Jenny and Linda
一审要点
文体：_____________________
人称：_____________________
时态：_____________________
字数：_____________________
注意：_____________________
记叙文
第一，三人称
一般现在时态
你校英语社团正在开展主题为“My Friends”的征文比赛。请你写一篇英语短文介绍你的两位朋友(一位与你相似，一位与你不同)，进行投稿。
内容包括如下：
1.外貌
2.性格
3.兴趣爱好
4.学习
5.运动等方面。
词数：80~100
80~100
比较人物特征时，正确使用比较级
二列提纲
My friends
Beginning
Body
Ending
A friend (similarities)
A friend (differences)
1.
2.
3.
4…………
5.
6.
7.
8………….
引出话题
结论和感受
具体内容
Beginning
1、
2、
3、
三列要点/扩句
Body
A friend(similarities)：
A friend(differences)：
三列要点/扩句
Ending
1、
2、
三列要点/扩句
四、连词成文
主语
错误
拼写
错误
大小写
错误
固定搭配
错误
主谓一致
错误
时态
错误
中式英语
错误
漏词
错误
选词
错误
高分
句型
五美文章
句子仿写
1.朋友在我们的生活中是十分重要的。尽管我们不经常见面，但是我们都彼此的熟悉
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2.在某些方面，Jenny 是相似于我/不同于我。
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3. 那就是为什么，我们都喜欢阅读和学习。
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4. 她总是都能帮忙激发出我的全部所能/最好的一面。
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5.我觉得挚友犹如天上的星星。你不时常看见他们，但是你知道他们在那儿。
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Friends are important for our life. Although we don’t see each other often, we know very well.
Jenny is similar to me in some ways. Jenny is different from me in some ways.
That’s why, we both enjoy reading and studying.
She always helps to bring out the best in me.
I thinks good friends like stars---- you don’t always see them, but you know they are there.
My friends—Jenny and Linda
Friends are very important in our life. I have lots of good friends. Although we don't see each other often, we know each other very well. Here are two of my best friends---- Jenny and Linda.
Jenny is similar to me in some ways. We both have small eyes and wear glasses. And We are both tall and a little heavy. Also, we are both quiet and serious. That’s why we like reading and studying, so both of us usually enjoy reading and studying together. However, Linda is quite different from me. She is shorter and thinner than me though she is 2 years older than me. Also, Linda is more outgoing and funnier than me, as a result, it’s easy for her to make friends. At school, we are both hard-working, but she is more hard-working, so she always gets better grades than me. Because I plays tennis better than her, I always win. What’s more. She always helps to bring out the best in me.
In short, I don't care if friends are the same as me or different as long as they're good. I think good friends are like stars. You don't always see them, but you know they are there.
Show Time
standard for a writing (评分标准)
第五档 (19-20分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务，涵盖了所有内容要点，或在发挥时有新意或亮点；语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。
第四档 (16-18分) 完成规定的任务，涵盖了基本的内容要点；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。
第三档 (11-15分) 基本完成了规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。
第二档 (6-10分) 未能恰当完成规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。
第一档 (0-5分) 未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误很多，未能清楚传达信息。
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自我写作
你校英语社团正在开展主题为“My Friends”的征文比赛。请你写一篇英语短文介绍你的两位朋友(一位与你相似，一位与你不同)，进行投稿。内容包括如下：1.外貌, 2.性格 3.兴趣爱好 4.学习 5.运动等方面。词数：80~100
My friends
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