外研版（2019）必修 第一册Unit 6 At one with nature Developing ideas—Writing课件（39张ppt）

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Unit 6 At one with nature
Summary Writing
Lesson 1
Starting out & vocabulary
威尼斯环境问题及解决方法，自然对人的影响
Lesson 2
Reading
中国龙脊梯田开垦原因及运作原理
Lesson 3
Using language
天然染料
Lesson 4
Speaking& listening
地貌特征，不同气候区的人类生活
Lesson 5
Reading
英国人对园艺的热爱
Lesson 6
Writing
英国果茶草茶文化的概要写作
Lesson 7
Presenting& reflection
自选理想居住地，展示
课时设计与衔接
深入理解人与自然的相关性，辩证看待问题，树立人与自然和谐共处的意识。
大观念：通过了解和思考不同自然环境对人类生活的影响，从而理解人与自然的关系，培养共情能力，提升人与自然和谐共处的意识
不同地貌和气候对人类生活方式的影响
人类对自然的合理运用和改造
引导学生联系实际，讲述环境对自己生活的影响，为整个单元做铺垫
Review
01
The Blessings of Nature
The Great Barrier Reef
大堡礁
The Blessings of Nature
The North Pole
北极
The Blessings of Nature
The Grand Canyon
科罗拉多大峡谷
The Wisdom of Mankind
Terrace fields
梯田
The Wisdom of Mankind
British Gardening
The Blessings of Nature
合一
The Wisdom of Mankind
天人
Read & Analyze
02
any parts of a plant, like leaves and roots, can all be considered as herbs
Flowers (herbs 草药)
tea
This is the other way the British have found to utilize nature
Scan and choose the best topic for the passage (textbook p71)
Tea
Fruit and Herbal Tea
Fruit and Herbal Tea in Britain
2 mins to finish
Pay attention to pictures and words of high frequency (高频词)
Lemongrass Tea
香茅茶/柠檬草茶
Mint Tea
薄荷茶
Apple Tea
Mango Tea
Strawberry Tea
Herbal
Tea
Fruit
Tea
Refer to the tips on p70
Task 5 on p71: Underline the topic sentences
and fill in the blanks
2.5 mins
Many people grow their very own tea gardens with easy-to-grow herbs.
Mango, strawberry, apple, pear, blackberry leaf and dandelion
Relax, beneficial for the immune systems, good for digestion
Check your answers o(∩_∩)o (Task 5 on p71)
British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs.
However, recent years have seen more and more unusual flavours come onto the market.
Herbal tea has various health benefits.
(first sentence)
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
(first sentence)
Topic sentences o(∩_∩)o (Task 5 on p71)
表转折
(in the middle)
British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs.
However, recent years have seen more and more unusual flavours come onto the market.
Herbal tea has various health benefits.
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Read the topic sentences again, and find out the key
words that can summarize the main idea of each paragraph
1 min
The Structure
Fruit and Herbal Tea in Britain
British’s love of tea
Unusual flavours of tea
Health benefits that tea brings
How to write a summary
03
What should a good summary be like
1 min to summarize the tips
p71
Tips for writing a summary
Rewrite and use your own words
Contain only the main ideas
(usually from topic sentences)
Keep it short
(only one paragraph)
Make use of linking words
Can we add our own opinions, using phrases like “I think” or “in my opinion”
How to reconstruct/rewrite a sentence
Use the synonyms or change the parts of speech
(同义替换，词性转换)
Restructure the sentences (句型转换)
30s to think
A typical afternoon tea is usually loose tea in a teapot and you can add milk and sugar to it.
Rewrite:
An afternoon tea is typically loose tea in a teapot with milk and sugar.
= with milk and sugar
typically (词性转换 a.→adv.)
Reconstruct/rewrite a sentence (example)
(句型转换)
Restructure the Sentence
(句型转换)
I like different kinds of English tea.
Unlike Chinese tea, we often add sugar and milk to English tea.
合并为
一个定从
1
Answer
I like different kinds of English tea which unlike Chinese tea, we often add sugar and milk to.
2
Not only前置的倒装句
It was an expensive habit to uphold. Not only was the tea itself costly, but (also) it was served only in porcelain cups, following the Chinese tradition.
3
Among all types of tea, I think the black tea tastes the best.
The black tea was brewed in boiling water.
句2变成done形式引导的非谓语，加入句1
要求
It was an expensive habit to uphold. The tea itself was not only costly, but also served only in porcelain cups (瓷杯), following the Chinese tradition.
Among all types of tea, I think the black tea brewed in boiling water tastes the best.
different various/ a variety of/ diverse
difficult not easy/ hard/ challenging/ demanding
correct right/ proper/ suitable
way method/ means
benefit advantage/ be of benefit to sb/ to one's benefit/ have a beneficial effect on sth.
Useful Synonyms (同义词)
2 mins to take notes
表因果 so, therefore, thus, hence, accordingly, consequently, as a result
表条件 As (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless
表并列 First, second, third... ; firstly, secondly, thirdly ;
First, next, then...; in the first place, in the second place... ;
for one thing, for another thing...
表转折 however, nevertheless, nonetheless, though, yet, otherwise
表对比 on the contrary，in contrast，by contrast，in comparison， by comparison
表层递 also，further，furthermore，likewise，similarly，moreover，
in addition，what’s more
解释举例 for example，for instance，in fact，actually
总结说明 in conclusion，in short，to sum up，to conclude，in a word
Can you come up with more
Accordingly/Consequently (因此), tea drinking became popular in England.
然而
Make use of linking words and phrases (连词/词组)
Fill in the blanks
Brewed tea (泡制茶) doesn’t contain much caffeine (咖啡因).
Someone still cannot fall asleep after drinking it.
Relations
转折
1
Linking
Words
however, but …
2
I enjoy drinking English black tea Earl Grey.
I often order Earl Grey during my tea break.
因果
therefore, so, thus…
3
There are various kinds of English tea.
English breakfast tea, Green tea, Earl Grey, etc.
解释举例
for example, for instance…
Write your own summary
04
Attention:
Use your own words
After writing, read it again and make sure there’s no grammar or spelling error
Write your own summary (within 80 words)
10 mins
(write it either on paper or computer)
Peer answer, sample writing & conclusion
05
Student Answer 1
British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs. They like mint and lemon grass herb, lemon and ginger. However, recent years have seen more and more unusual flavours come onto the market, mango, strawberry, apple and pear, blackberry leaf and dandelion. And herbal tea has various health benefits. It can help people relax. It can help people's immune systems. It can be good for digestion.
Good:
Few spelling & grammar errors.
Include all major points
1 min
Student Answer 1
British people love to make tea with fruit and herbs. They like mint and lemon grass herb, lemon and ginger. However, recent years have seen more and more unusual flavours come onto the market, mango, strawberry, apple and pear, blackberry leaf and dandelion. And herbal tea has various health benefits. It can help people relax. It can help people's immune systems. It can be good for digestion.
To improve:
Rewriting is not enough
Be more authentic (地道)
课文原句，未进行足够改写
重复
herb与前面的mint, lemongrass 重复
Lemon grass一般写成一个单词
British people love fruit and herbal teas and many even grow their own tea gardens. Apart from the traditional flavours, distinctive flavours such as mango and dandelion are growing popular in recent years. In addition to the enjoyable flavours, herbal tea also has various health benefits. Not only can it bring people relaxation but also is beneficial to the immune system and digestion.
Linking words
Word upgrading
Sentence restructuring
句式变形
倒装句
Sample Writing (a possible version)
Type your answer on grammarly.com or 批改网 (pigai.org)
3 mins for self-assessment
Rating Scale 1 2 3
Content Did you include all the major points 3: I did it. 2: I partly did it. 1: I failed to achieve it this time. Grammar Were there any grammar errors Coherence Did you use the linking words properly Language Did you use your own words Self-assessment
total
milk & sugar
VS
English Tea
Chinese Tea
Similarity
High social class >> people from all walks of life
Consider drinking tea as a traditional way to relax
Difference
fruits & herbals
Chinese people like pure tea
desserts & pastries
Conclusion
Write a summary of a passage on British tea
Read and analyze: Grasp the main idea; find the topic sentences and key words; outline the structure
Writing skills: Restructure the topic sentences and use linking words to write a summary
Analyze a peer answer and a sample, learn to self assess
Compare British tea with Chinese tea
Homework
06
Write a summary within 80 words and send it to your teacher:
Mount Fuji is a world famous mountain in Japan. It is one of Japan’s “Three Holy Mountains” along with Mount Tate and Mount Haku. Mount Fuji is 3,776 meters high, and its perfect beautiful shape can be seen from all around.
Mount Fuji presents different faces in different seasons. In Japan, people describe the mountain as “Diamond Fuji” when it is at dawn or dusk and as “Red Fuji” when the mountain is lit by the early morning sun.
Mount Fuji is one of the world’s classic examples of a strato volcano (层状火山), meaning that it is formed from many layers (层) of hardened lava (硬化熔岩) that has spread to produce a huge base. The last eruption (爆发) of Mount Fuji was in 1707.
take a screenshot
1
Write a summary within 80 words and send it to your teacher:
There is a collection of hot springs and lakes nestled around Mount Fuji. The views over the springs are wonderful, with endless blue water, fresh green water plants and fish swimming lazily. You can soak (浸泡) in outdoor hot springs while admiring the view of Mount Fuji and have Japanese food, such as fresh sweet fish.
At the northern foot of the mountain, about 1,000 meters above sea level, is the Fuji Five Lake area. The shores of the lakes are decorated with seasonal flowers. The image of Mount Fuji reflected on a lake surface is called “Upside Down Fuji” in Japan.
The Japanese used to believe that God lived on Mount Fuji. Japan’s highest mountain and highest volcano is closely woven (编织) into the country’s legends and art, and is drawing thousands of tourists.
take a screenshot
2
Write a summary within 80 words and send it to your teacher
Review the words and phrases you’ve learned
Preview textbook p72