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2024年中考英语复习专题★★
话题写作指导与训练
《英语话题复习》
WH questions about school
What’s a school
What’s your school like
What’s in your school
School is a place ______ we can ________________.
where
learn and do many meaningful things.
It is very big and beautiful ____ has about 1200 pupils.
There is large sport ground for football, ______ we can
play _______________________.
that
where
during and after school hours
open up eyes to the outside world.
get knowledge
There is a big and beautiful school with several buildings
and lots of trees and flowers.
WH questions about school life(school day/ school subjects/ school activities and people at school)
What lessons do you have on Monday/…
What’s your favorite subject
What do you think of your school day
Who’s your favorite teacher
How long have you studied in this school
What do you usually do after school
Which class are you in
How often do you do sports
…
Pairwork
In the classroom we can ________________.
On the playground In the library
In the dinning hall During the Art Festival
During the sports meeting
In the computer class
In the singing competition
…
Colorful School Life!
Which is your favorite place Why
The thing I like best about our school is _________
because_____________________________.
Topic sentence
Our school life is quite colorful and
interesting.
Topic sentence
I enjoy my subjects, my classmates
my teachers and after-class activities, …
subject
teacher
classmate
after-class activity
…
I’m good at…
I do well in…
My favorite ________ is ________.
Because _____________________.
Colorful School Life!
My favorite teacher is …who is helpful and kind.
subject … that is ….
I like … because …
合并为复合句:
My favorite ___________ is ________.
Because _____________________.
subject
teacher
classmate
after-class activity
…
I’m good at…
I do well in…
Colorful School Life!
Topic sentence
I enjoy my subjects, my classmates
my teachers and after-class activities, …
My favorite teacher is …who is helpful and kind.
subject … that is ….
I like … because …
合并为复合句:
1. I really enjoy my colorful school life because
there are many kinds of colorful activities.
2. Our school life is so rich and meaningful that
I enjoy it very much.
3. What an enjoyable school life we have!
4. In a word, my school life is colorful and interesting.
5. How wonderful my school life is!
Colorful School Life!
What do you think of your school life
Problems in school
I usually deal with my problems by _______.
I have trouble learning …
making friends
getting on well with my classmates.
…
The thing is, I have difficulty in math/….
Topic sentence:
However, I have some trouble/problems in school.
have a hard time doing sth.
have difficulties doing sth.
My School Life
School is a place where we can learn and do many
meaningful things.
Our school life is quite colorful.
I enjoy my subjects, my classmates
my teachers and after-class activities, …
What do my classmates and my
teachers think of me
However, I have some trouble in school.
Outline
Details
1. A good teacher is someone who is helpful and kind, like my history teacher, Mr Miller.
【A good teacher is someone who … 一位好老师是……的一个人 who 引导定语从句】
一位好同学是乐于帮助人的人。
_______________________________________________
2. He is the boy who won the photo competition last year!【he is the boy who … 他是……的一个男孩】
她是一个上学期获得英语演讲比赛冠军的女孩。
_______________________________________________
3. The thing is, he’s really good. 【the thing is 问题是/ 最重要的是 】
问题是,我对数学学习有困难。
_______________________________________________
A good student is someone who is ready to help others.
She is the girl who won the English speech competition last term.
The thing is, I have difficulty in math.
佳句欣赏与模仿
4. The thing I like best about our school is sports ground because I really like playing soccer.
【The thing I like best …is…because +从句 “我最喜欢的事情/事物是……因为……”】
我最喜欢我们学校的事物是图书馆,因为我喜欢在里面阅读很多的书。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________
The thing I like best about our school is library because I like reading lots of books in it.
5. Compared with other years, we received many more photos.【compared with 和……相比】
和去年相比,今年我们取得了更大的成就。
_______________________________________________
Compared with last year, we have had more success this year.
【写作微技能小贴士】
主题句是概括段落中心思想、反映作者写作意图的一个概括性的句子,是段落的核心所在。所以,写好主题句是写好一个段落的前提。主题句通常出现在一篇文章的开头或结尾。段首主题句开门见山,直接点明段落主题,有助于确定段落的主线,使各个发展句围绕段落主题自然展开;段尾主题句具有结论作用,是对前面句子的归纳总结。
写主题句应注意以下几点:
1. 归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点。
2. 提炼出一句能概括上述几个要点的话。
3. 主题句应具有可读性,能吸引读者。
三、写作微技能
请从A、B、C三个选项中给下面的文章选择合适的主题句。
A. I think school is a place where I can enjoy friendship.
B. School is a place where I can meet lots of challenges.
C. School is a place where I can not only get knowledge but also enjoy colorful activities.
My School Life
When I listen to the teachers in class, I feel I become knowledgeable. That makes me feel happy and excited. When I work out difficult problems, I can feel I am like a successful winner and become more confident. On the playground, I play sports with my friends and we are full of energy. What’s more, we can do other colorful activities, such as singing competition, school trips and so on. How wonderful my school life is!
C
九年级的同学感到特别有压力。为此,你校举行
了以“减压”为主题的英语周活动。请你以
“How to Deal with Our Pressure in Study ”
为题,写一篇110词左右的英文短文,谈谈你是
怎么处理校园生活压力的。
写作范例
【参考范文】
How to Deal with Our Pressure in Study
Pressure is a serious problem in school. It’s important to deal with our pressure in study. I felt stressed out last term because my parents wanted me to be one of the top students in my class. Now let me tell you how to deal with it.
First of all, I told my parents that too much pressure had made me not do well in my schoolwork. The more pressure I felt, the worse I would do. They understood me. So talking with parents is a great way. Besides, I go to ask my head teacher who is helpful and kind for help. What’s more, I often listen to music that
is gentle and has great lyrics after class to relax myself.
A good rest between two classes can help me
concentrate more on study. I think the best way to relax
is by taking part in some outdoor activities, such as
playing basketball. That can make me energetic and
healthy.
To my joy, I have succeeded in getting over my
pressure. Now I feel that study is becoming much easier
and my grades are better and better.
【亮点点拨】
文章开门见山,直接进入主题,文中浓体字部分就
是主题句。文章的主体部分能紧扣主题,内容丰富、
详实。语言丰富(见双画线部分)。粗体斜体部分
的连接词也值得借鉴与参考。
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟了校园生活英文
专栏,征集以“My School Life”为题的英语文稿。
请从校园学习与校园活动视角描述校园生活,为
该专栏投稿。
要求:
1. 征文应包含以上内容,可适当拓展;
2. 征文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数:110词左右。
Let’s write!
Read carefully and make sure what we have to write!
审
Don’t forget what you write for!
列
Make an outline to make sure what you want to say!
1. Begin with brief introduction to show what you
write for.
2. Topic sentences for each paragraph.
(1)
(2)
(3)
(4)
3. End with your wishes and show what you write
for again in different expressions.
My School Life
Outline
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
My school life is quite colorful and ….
1. I get on well with my classmates and teachers.
2. I have learned many things from different subjects.
They help me open up my eyes to the outside world.
3. There are also many after-activities in our school.
I really enjoy my colorful school life, just as
the saying goes, "The school life is the source
of students’ happiness."
Details
4. However, I have some trouble in school.
步骤:First, secondly, besides, what’s more,
last but not the least, finally, also, and,
转折: although, however, but , at the same time,
on the one hand, on the other hand,
因果:because, so, as a result,
结果:so … that …
举例: for example, such as, like….
总结: in a word, in fact, as you can see,
其它:to my surprise, to be honest,
Linking words
so …that
so that
too …to…
…enough to …
not only …but also…
both …and …
neither …nor…
either …or…
Useful expressions
It’s + adj. for sb. + to do sth.
Find it + adj. + to do sth
It’s believed that …
It’s a good way to …
It’s our duty to …
so …that + 句子
so that + 句子