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2024年中考英语复习专题★★
英语作文举例指导
中考作文五步走写法
审清题目,列出要点
结合要点,简单表达
连词成句,表达正确
适当扩充,丰富表达
组合成文,适当过渡
假如你是李林,你的美国笔友Sam 要来你的家乡,恰巧你不在,
你想介绍一位与Sam志趣相同学刘凯接待他。请参考下表中Sam的相关信息,用英语写一封邮件,说明刘凯的情况
中考试题再现
Age 16
Hobbies sports, music, traveling…
Personality(性格) honest, friendly, helpful…
Other information want to learn Chinese, like Chinese culture…
要求:1、语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
2、文中不得出现真实地名;
3、词数:60-80词(邮件的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Dear Sam,
Yours,
Li Lin
1.(1)审清题目
审文体: 应用文中的书信
2. 审人称: 第一人称
3. 审格式:
书信的格式是;称呼、问候语、正文、结束语、落款
4. 审时态:一般现在时和将来时
5. 审内容要点:(重点,下页列出)
1.(2)要点分析
朋友要来,自己不在,表达歉意,并说明刘凯接。
介绍刘凯情况:
(1)年龄 (2)喜好(3)性格
3. 处理表格中的其他信息:
Sam可以和刘凯学习汉语,了解中国文化。
4. 表达美好的祝愿。
2. 简单表达
1. come to my hometown, will be away, feel sorry,
Liu Kai as the host.
2. Liu Kai:
(1) 16 years old
(2) like sports, music, and traveling
(3) honest, friendly, and helpful
2. 简单表达
3. Other information:
help him learn Chinese, know about Chinese culture
4. best wishes
3. 连词成句
You are coming to my hometown.
I will be away.
I feel sorry.
I will ask my friend Liu Kai to be the host.
Liu Kai is 16 years old.
Liu Kai likes sports, music, and traveling.
Liu Kai is honest, friendly, and helpful.
3. 连词成句
3. Liu Kai can help you learn Chinese.
You can learn more about Chinese culture.
4. I hope you will have a good time here.
4. 进行扩充
分析一下,需要扩充的是介绍刘凯情况的部分,这是本文的核心所在,所以,对此部分进行表达的丰富。
Liu Kai is 16 years old.
Liu Kai likes sports, music, and traveling.
Liu Kai is honest, friendly, and helpful.
进行扩充:(见下页)
4. 进行扩充
Liu Kai is as old as you.
Liu Kai likes sports. He especially likes basketball and football.
His favorite music is pop music and he is good at it.
He enjoys traveling, too.
You can trust him.
He is always ready to help others. If you have any problems,
Please turn to him for help.
5.组合成文
Dear Sam,
I am glad that you are coming to my hometown. But I feel sorry for I will be away for some time. And I will ask my friend Liu Kai to be your host.
Liu Kai is 16 years old, as well as you. He likes sports, and he especially likes basketball and football. His favorite music is pop music and he is good at it.
5.组合成文
He is an honest boy and you can trust him. He is also friendly and helpful. He is always ready to help others. If you have any problems, you can turn to him for help. You can teach him English and he can teach you Chinese. And I am sure you will learn more about Chinese culture during your stay here. I’m sure you will become good friends and I hope you will have a good time in China.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
总结
中考作文五步走写法:
1. 审清题目,列出要点
审文体,审人称,审格式,
审时态,审内容要点
2. 结合要点,简单表达
3. 连词成句,表达正确
4. 适当扩充,丰富表达
5. 组合成文,适当过渡