2024届高三英语二轮复习基础课二：定语从句写作方法课件(共39张PPT)
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(共39张PPT)
高中写作基础课
定语从句-通用基础版
常见问题
背标准答案，练衡水体，没有意义；
大部分人假努力，不清楚改卷规则，不研究考试方向；
均分低，满分少，方向错误导致过程低效
写作基础课
定语从句
真题再现：
【2019.北京】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华.你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息.请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1.交通出行；2.必备衣物.
写作基础课
定语从句
真题再现：
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack昨天给你来信告知你他将来西安旅游度假。请你根据所给文字提示，用英文写一封回信。回信必须包括以下要点：
1.欢迎他来西安；
2.恰好你也有一个月的假期，可以带他游览西安；
3.西安旅游资源丰富，有许多世界著名的风景名胜，如华山，兵马俑，华清池，历史博物馆等；
◆4.西安美食丰富，你将带他品尝各种小吃；5.期间你们可以相互学习
写作基础课
定语从句
Dear Jack,
Welcome to Xi’an. I’m so happy. I will have a one-month holiday, too. I will show you around in that time. Xi’an is a very famous city. Its history is long. Xi’an people are warm-hearted. there are many places of interest. These ones are especially visited: Mount Hua, Terra-Cotta Warriors. Huaqing Pool and history museum. We will miss none of them.Then, we will eat some traditional food. The food in Xi’an is special and delicious.
We will enjoy great moments. We can learn about eacher’s culture. I really look forward to that day.
Yours,
Li Hua
真假难辨
Dear Jack,
Welcome to Xi’an. I’m so happy that I will have a one-month holiday, too, in which I will show you around in Xi'an. Xi’an is a famous city whose history is long and whose people are arm-hearted. Of all the places of interest which are visited in Xi’an， the most polular ones are Mount Hua, Terra-Cotta Warriors, Huaqing Pool and history museum, none of which we will miss. Then, we will eat some traditional food, which is special and delicious.
I really look forward to the holiday when we can enjoy great moment and learn about each other’s culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
优势分析
劣势分析
◎内容要点全覆盖！
◎没有语法错误，简直牛！
◎卷面清晰，字迹工整！
◎用词灵活，表达有亮点！
◎句子太短！
◎句子太短！
◎句子太短！
◎句子太短！
写作基础课
定语从句
被动语态写作 定从写作 名从写作
状从写作 倒装写作 虚拟语气写作
非谓语写作 词汇并级
学会谋篇
学会造句
◎首段：自我介绍+写信背景+写信目的
◎中间段：逻辑清晰+语言简练+句式多样
◎尾段：重提主题+期待回信
写作大纲
你要多参加一些集体活动，如果这样，就能改变同学们对你的态度。
上完课你会写出这样的句子：
Among the many suggestions which I would like to offer you, the first one is to attend more group activities in which you can learn about other students, in which case, you can change their attitude to you.
本课目标
避免通篇五言绝句，
写有质量的长句子。
定语从句写作
提高版
关键点一：定从写作步骤与方法
I want to find a pen-pal. His English is good. I can write letters to him.
1. 请问这三个句子还有相同的部分吗？
2. 秘笈：只要把普通代词换成连接代词，你就成功的写出了定语从句！
定语从句写作
基础版
我将有一个假期。
第一步
写一个句子
I will have a holiday.
第二步
◆利用上句中名词再写一句，来修饰上句中某个名词，或整个句子。
在那一个假期里，我将会带你游览西安。
In this holiday, I will show you around in Xi'an.
第三步
连接代词替换相同名词（或普通代词）。相同名词是人用who/whom 相同名词是物用which
I will have a holiday.
I will show you around in that holiday.
替换为which
▲
in which
西安是一座著名的城市。西安历史悠久。西安人民热情好客。
Have a try-中文思路构建
Xi'an is a famous/well-known/reputed city. Its history is long and its people are warm-hearted.
Xi'an is a famous/well-known/reputed city whose history is long and whose people are warm-hearted.
Have a try-中文思路构建
你应该跟妈妈加强交流。
第一步
她做任何事情都是因为爱你。
合并替换。
第二步
第三步
You should talk more with your mom.
She does everything out of love for you.
You should talk more with your mom who does everything out of love for you.
Have a try-中文思路构建
一个男孩儿进步快。
第一步
他的学习方法是正确的。
合并替换。
第二步
第三步
A boy can make progress quickly.
His learning approaches are correct.
A boy whose learning approaches are correct can make progress quickly.
Have a try-中文思路构建
西安旅游资源丰富，其中华山，兵马俑等最受欢迎。我们将一一参观这些地方。
第一步
相同部分进行替换。
合并替换。
第二步
第三步
There are many places of interest. In these places, Mount Hua Terra-Cotta Warriors are the most popular. We will miss none of them.
There are many places of interest, in which Mount Hua Terra-Cotta Warriors are the most popular, none of which we will miss.
Of the many places of interest which are visited in Xi'an, the most popular ones are Mount Hua, Terra-Cotta Warriors and so on, none of which we will miss.
定语从句写作
提高版
关键点二：逆向修正思路
原因一：中文太复杂
例子：我期待他日重逢
英文特点：一句一主谓，显性特征明显
中文特点：表意为主，显性特征不明显
=我期待一天+在这一天我们会重逢。
I look forward to the day.
We will meet each other again on that day.
I look forward to the day on which/ when we will meet each other again.
学生常见问题
问：老师，中文能想到，英文翻译不出来，怎么解决？
答：完全对等的中英翻译，本来就不可能。
找主句-定从位置
不轻言放弃的人更有可能成功。
=一个人更有可能成功+这个人不容易放弃。
A man is more likely to succeed.
The man never gives up.
A man who never gives up is more likely to succeed.
找主句-定从位置
我们已经到了一个必须立即采取措施的关键点。
=我们已经到了一个关键点+在这个关键点上我们必须采取措施。
We have come to a critical point.
At this point, we must take measures immediately.
We have come to a critical point where we must take measures immediately.
哪个词等于修饰语 等于次要信息？
关键的(/decisive/vital/essential/crucial/key)
You should attend more competitions.
You can communicate with your classmates in those competitions.
=你应该多参加一些比赛 + 在这个比赛中，你能够与同学交流。
原句：你应该多参加一些能够与同学交流的比赛。
You should attend more competitions in which /where you can communicate with your classmates.
找主句-定从位置
A man is not a true man.
A man has not climbed the Great Wall.
=一个人不是好汉 + 这个人没爬过长城。
原句：不到长城非好汉。
A man who has not climbed the Great Wall is not a true man.
找主句-定从位置
写定从的目的：写有目的的长句子
第一步 ：写一个句子
第二步：利用上一句子中的名词再写一个单词
第三步：用连接代词替换相同的名词 物-which 人-who-whom\...的whose
想把定从写的更好
写好句子：中英文转化问题要解决
1.简化中文-拆成简单的两句中文 一个句子中只能有一个谓语
2.请接着学
知识小结
原因二：逻辑不清晰
例子：我们现在面临的最大困难是缺乏交流。
Our biggest challenge is the lack of communication.
=我们面临很多困难+其中最大的是缺乏交流。
We are faced with many difficulties.
The biggest difficulty is the lack of communication.
We are faced with many difficulties, the biggest of which is the lack of communication.
=Among the many difficulties which we face, the biggest is the lack of communication.
例子：西安是我去过最令人印象深刻的城市。
=我去过许多城市+其中西安是令人难忘的。
I have visited many cities.
Of the many cities, Xi'an is the most unforgettable one.
Of the many cities which I've visited, the most unforgettable one is Xi'an.
例子：蒋老师是我最喜欢的老师。
=有很多老师教过我+期中蒋老师是我最喜欢的老师。
Miss Jiang is my favorite teacher.
There are many teachers who have taught me..
Among the many teachers who have taught me, Miss Jiang is my favorite.
2020浙江
假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter 因病回国休假，请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.询问近况 2.分享班级最新消息 3.表达祝愿
Among the many festivals which are celebrated in China, the Spring Festival is the most popular one.
春节在中国最受欢迎。
对防疫最大的帮助就是待在家里。
Among the many things which you can do, the first is to stay at home.
常见应用
Among the many suggestions which I would like to offer, the first is to believe yourself.
我想给你的第一条建议是相信自己。
你首先要解决词汇量的问题。
Among the many problems which you need to solve, the first is to expand your vocabulary.
常见应用
关键点三：
非限制定语从句在写作中的高级用法
2011 书面表达（满分30分）
假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong？
写作要点：1.表明自己的看法；2.陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；3.提出至少两条建议
Hi,Tiger Mom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is..
结构：in which case 如此以来（=if this happens）
你应该倾听你女儿的心声，这样你才能真正帮助她。
You should lend an ear to your daughter,
in which case, you can really help her with her difficulties.
建议动作
建议结果
超高级：Among the many suggestions which I would like to offer, the first is to lend an ear to your daughter, in which case, you can really help her.
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信. 要点：
1.参加中文学习班
2.看中文书刊、电视；
3. 学唱中文歌曲；
4. 交中国朋友。
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信. 要点：
1.参加中文学习班
题目解读
in which case， 这样你就能提升中文。
在中文学习班， 你能得到专家指导。
You should attend Chinese learning classes, in which case, you can improve your language.
In those classes, you can get guidance from an expert.
You should attend Chinese learning classes in which you can get guidance from an expert, in which case, you can improve your language.
Among the many suggestions which I would like to offer you, the first is to attend Chinese learning classes in which you can get guidance from an expert, in which case, you can improve your language.
2014安徽
为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了"HEART-TO-HEART"专栏，假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：
1.表示理解并给予安慰 2.提出建议并说明理由
参考词汇：temper脾气，情绪
假定你是李华，你的好友向你来信，告知你他在新学校里，适应新环境遇了困难，写信向你求助，请根据以下要点给他回信。
要点：1. 表示安慰
2. 给出建议；
3. 表达祝愿
Among the many suggestions which I would like to offer you, the first one is to attend more group activities in which you can learn about other students, in which case, you can change their attitude to you.
知识回顾
1.定语从句的写作步骤
2.写不出来的原因 拆结构或补逻辑（最、第）
3.高级定从的写作方法 （in which case）
简单中文=精彩英文
高中写作基础课
定语从句-通用基础版
常见问题
背标准答案，练衡水体，没有意义；
大部分人假努力，不清楚改卷规则，不研究考试方向；
均分低，满分少，方向错误导致过程低效
写作基础课
定语从句
真题再现：
【2019.北京】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华.你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息.请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：1.交通出行；2.必备衣物.
写作基础课
定语从句
真题再现：
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack昨天给你来信告知你他将来西安旅游度假。请你根据所给文字提示，用英文写一封回信。回信必须包括以下要点：
1.欢迎他来西安；
2.恰好你也有一个月的假期，可以带他游览西安；
3.西安旅游资源丰富，有许多世界著名的风景名胜，如华山，兵马俑，华清池，历史博物馆等；
◆4.西安美食丰富，你将带他品尝各种小吃；5.期间你们可以相互学习
写作基础课
定语从句
Dear Jack,
Welcome to Xi’an. I’m so happy. I will have a one-month holiday, too. I will show you around in that time. Xi’an is a very famous city. Its history is long. Xi’an people are warm-hearted. there are many places of interest. These ones are especially visited: Mount Hua, Terra-Cotta Warriors. Huaqing Pool and history museum. We will miss none of them.Then, we will eat some traditional food. The food in Xi’an is special and delicious.
We will enjoy great moments. We can learn about eacher’s culture. I really look forward to that day.
Yours,
Li Hua
真假难辨
Dear Jack,
Welcome to Xi’an. I’m so happy that I will have a one-month holiday, too, in which I will show you around in Xi'an. Xi’an is a famous city whose history is long and whose people are arm-hearted. Of all the places of interest which are visited in Xi’an， the most polular ones are Mount Hua, Terra-Cotta Warriors, Huaqing Pool and history museum, none of which we will miss. Then, we will eat some traditional food, which is special and delicious.
I really look forward to the holiday when we can enjoy great moment and learn about each other’s culture.
Yours,
Li Hua
优势分析
劣势分析
◎内容要点全覆盖！
◎没有语法错误，简直牛！
◎卷面清晰，字迹工整！
◎用词灵活，表达有亮点！
◎句子太短！
◎句子太短！
◎句子太短！
◎句子太短！
写作基础课
定语从句
被动语态写作 定从写作 名从写作
状从写作 倒装写作 虚拟语气写作
非谓语写作 词汇并级
学会谋篇
学会造句
◎首段：自我介绍+写信背景+写信目的
◎中间段：逻辑清晰+语言简练+句式多样
◎尾段：重提主题+期待回信
写作大纲
你要多参加一些集体活动，如果这样，就能改变同学们对你的态度。
上完课你会写出这样的句子：
Among the many suggestions which I would like to offer you, the first one is to attend more group activities in which you can learn about other students, in which case, you can change their attitude to you.
本课目标
避免通篇五言绝句，
写有质量的长句子。
定语从句写作
提高版
关键点一：定从写作步骤与方法
I want to find a pen-pal. His English is good. I can write letters to him.
1. 请问这三个句子还有相同的部分吗？
2. 秘笈：只要把普通代词换成连接代词，你就成功的写出了定语从句！
定语从句写作
基础版
我将有一个假期。
第一步
写一个句子
I will have a holiday.
第二步
◆利用上句中名词再写一句，来修饰上句中某个名词，或整个句子。
在那一个假期里，我将会带你游览西安。
In this holiday, I will show you around in Xi'an.
第三步
连接代词替换相同名词（或普通代词）。相同名词是人用who/whom 相同名词是物用which
I will have a holiday.
I will show you around in that holiday.
替换为which
▲
in which
西安是一座著名的城市。西安历史悠久。西安人民热情好客。
Have a try-中文思路构建
Xi'an is a famous/well-known/reputed city. Its history is long and its people are warm-hearted.
Xi'an is a famous/well-known/reputed city whose history is long and whose people are warm-hearted.
Have a try-中文思路构建
你应该跟妈妈加强交流。
第一步
她做任何事情都是因为爱你。
合并替换。
第二步
第三步
You should talk more with your mom.
She does everything out of love for you.
You should talk more with your mom who does everything out of love for you.
Have a try-中文思路构建
一个男孩儿进步快。
第一步
他的学习方法是正确的。
合并替换。
第二步
第三步
A boy can make progress quickly.
His learning approaches are correct.
A boy whose learning approaches are correct can make progress quickly.
Have a try-中文思路构建
西安旅游资源丰富，其中华山，兵马俑等最受欢迎。我们将一一参观这些地方。
第一步
相同部分进行替换。
合并替换。
第二步
第三步
There are many places of interest. In these places, Mount Hua Terra-Cotta Warriors are the most popular. We will miss none of them.
There are many places of interest, in which Mount Hua Terra-Cotta Warriors are the most popular, none of which we will miss.
Of the many places of interest which are visited in Xi'an, the most popular ones are Mount Hua, Terra-Cotta Warriors and so on, none of which we will miss.
定语从句写作
提高版
关键点二：逆向修正思路
原因一：中文太复杂
例子：我期待他日重逢
英文特点：一句一主谓，显性特征明显
中文特点：表意为主，显性特征不明显
=我期待一天+在这一天我们会重逢。
I look forward to the day.
We will meet each other again on that day.
I look forward to the day on which/ when we will meet each other again.
学生常见问题
问：老师，中文能想到，英文翻译不出来，怎么解决？
答：完全对等的中英翻译，本来就不可能。
找主句-定从位置
不轻言放弃的人更有可能成功。
=一个人更有可能成功+这个人不容易放弃。
A man is more likely to succeed.
The man never gives up.
A man who never gives up is more likely to succeed.
找主句-定从位置
我们已经到了一个必须立即采取措施的关键点。
=我们已经到了一个关键点+在这个关键点上我们必须采取措施。
We have come to a critical point.
At this point, we must take measures immediately.
We have come to a critical point where we must take measures immediately.
哪个词等于修饰语 等于次要信息？
关键的(/decisive/vital/essential/crucial/key)
You should attend more competitions.
You can communicate with your classmates in those competitions.
=你应该多参加一些比赛 + 在这个比赛中，你能够与同学交流。
原句：你应该多参加一些能够与同学交流的比赛。
You should attend more competitions in which /where you can communicate with your classmates.
找主句-定从位置
A man is not a true man.
A man has not climbed the Great Wall.
=一个人不是好汉 + 这个人没爬过长城。
原句：不到长城非好汉。
A man who has not climbed the Great Wall is not a true man.
找主句-定从位置
写定从的目的：写有目的的长句子
第一步 ：写一个句子
第二步：利用上一句子中的名词再写一个单词
第三步：用连接代词替换相同的名词 物-which 人-who-whom\...的whose
想把定从写的更好
写好句子：中英文转化问题要解决
1.简化中文-拆成简单的两句中文 一个句子中只能有一个谓语
2.请接着学
知识小结
原因二：逻辑不清晰
例子：我们现在面临的最大困难是缺乏交流。
Our biggest challenge is the lack of communication.
=我们面临很多困难+其中最大的是缺乏交流。
We are faced with many difficulties.
The biggest difficulty is the lack of communication.
We are faced with many difficulties, the biggest of which is the lack of communication.
=Among the many difficulties which we face, the biggest is the lack of communication.
例子：西安是我去过最令人印象深刻的城市。
=我去过许多城市+其中西安是令人难忘的。
I have visited many cities.
Of the many cities, Xi'an is the most unforgettable one.
Of the many cities which I've visited, the most unforgettable one is Xi'an.
例子：蒋老师是我最喜欢的老师。
=有很多老师教过我+期中蒋老师是我最喜欢的老师。
Miss Jiang is my favorite teacher.
There are many teachers who have taught me..
Among the many teachers who have taught me, Miss Jiang is my favorite.
2020浙江
假定你是李华，你校来自爱尔兰的外教Peter 因病回国休假，请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.询问近况 2.分享班级最新消息 3.表达祝愿
Among the many festivals which are celebrated in China, the Spring Festival is the most popular one.
春节在中国最受欢迎。
对防疫最大的帮助就是待在家里。
Among the many things which you can do, the first is to stay at home.
常见应用
Among the many suggestions which I would like to offer, the first is to believe yourself.
我想给你的第一条建议是相信自己。
你首先要解决词汇量的问题。
Among the many problems which you need to solve, the first is to expand your vocabulary.
常见应用
关键点三：
非限制定语从句在写作中的高级用法
2011 书面表达（满分30分）
假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
I'm the mother of a fourteen-year-old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong？
写作要点：1.表明自己的看法；2.陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；3.提出至少两条建议
Hi,Tiger Mom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is..
结构：in which case 如此以来（=if this happens）
你应该倾听你女儿的心声，这样你才能真正帮助她。
You should lend an ear to your daughter,
in which case, you can really help her with her difficulties.
建议动作
建议结果
超高级：Among the many suggestions which I would like to offer, the first is to lend an ear to your daughter, in which case, you can really help her.
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信. 要点：
1.参加中文学习班
2.看中文书刊、电视；
3. 学唱中文歌曲；
4. 交中国朋友。
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信. 要点：
1.参加中文学习班
题目解读
in which case， 这样你就能提升中文。
在中文学习班， 你能得到专家指导。
You should attend Chinese learning classes, in which case, you can improve your language.
In those classes, you can get guidance from an expert.
You should attend Chinese learning classes in which you can get guidance from an expert, in which case, you can improve your language.
Among the many suggestions which I would like to offer you, the first is to attend Chinese learning classes in which you can get guidance from an expert, in which case, you can improve your language.
2014安徽
为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了"HEART-TO-HEART"专栏，假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：
1.表示理解并给予安慰 2.提出建议并说明理由
参考词汇：temper脾气，情绪
假定你是李华，你的好友向你来信，告知你他在新学校里，适应新环境遇了困难，写信向你求助，请根据以下要点给他回信。
要点：1. 表示安慰
2. 给出建议；
3. 表达祝愿
Among the many suggestions which I would like to offer you, the first one is to attend more group activities in which you can learn about other students, in which case, you can change their attitude to you.
知识回顾
1.定语从句的写作步骤
2.写不出来的原因 拆结构或补逻辑（最、第）
3.高级定从的写作方法 （in which case）
简单中文=精彩英文