人教版(2019年)教材必修二
第三单元The Internet单元写作
假设你是李华,你所在的城市某英文报正在举办“How has the internet changed our lives ”征文活动,请写一篇文章投稿,内容包括:
网络带来的益处;
网络造成的不良影响;
你的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
词汇准备
stream 流播; online 网上(offline 网下); database 数据库; download 下载 ; application(APP.)应用程序; account 账户 update更新 delete删除 copy复制 home 首页; page网页; site 网站 ; forum 论坛 software 软件 password 密码 selfie 自拍 social networks社交网络 social media社交媒体
search engine搜索引擎; a blog post 博文 the global village地球村 Wi-fi connections (无线网连接)
surf the internet上网; log in(登录); log out(退出); download software(下载软件); confirm password(确认密码); press the button(按按钮); cope the file(复制文件); click on(点击);
内容构思 + 语块呈现 (划线词块来自其它版本教材)
总体表述: make life easier and more convenient; enable better communication;
句子中英互译
描述网络的优点
如今全世界的人们正变得越来越紧密联系,好像我们生活在一个地球村里。
Nowadays, people all over the world are becoming more and more connected, as if __________________________.
网络给我们的生活带来了巨大益处。(P29)
The Internet ____________________________to our lives.// The Internet has benefited us in various ways.
2. 在网上我们几乎什么都能做到。接入互联网(给我们)带来了优势,真正改变了我们的生活。
We can _____________________—with access to the Internet come some truly life-changing advantages. (译林版B3U3 page 30, lines 4–6)
To a certain extent, the world’s knowledge is all at our fingertips. (译林版 B3U3 page 30, line 12)
___________________________________________________________________________________________
互联网最大的好处之一是能够消除通常存在于人与人之间的距离感.
One of the greatest benefits of the Internet lies in its ability to__________________that usually exists between people.
购物时,我们已经不需要排队或带着现金了。(P28)
_________________________________________________________________________________________
…的日子已经一去不复返了(倒装句)。Gone are the days of doing sth.
描述网络的缺点
然而,尽管网络带来了许多宝贵的益处,但联网也有其问题。(译林版B3U3)
However, while the Internet has brought us ________________________, it also raises all sorts of questions.
一旦你泄露了自己的私人信息,网络身份盗窃就可能会发生在你身上。
Once you __________________________, ____________________ may happen to you.
眼睛紧盯着屏幕,许多人感到与周围的人和事脱节。(译林版B3U3)
With eyes glued to the screen,many feel ____________ from people and things around them.
它能减弱你在真实世界中交朋友的能力。(P36)
It can ____________________________________________________
你很可能会成为网络喷子或网络霸凌的对象,会对你造成精神伤害。
You may become _______________________________, which _________________________________.
建议:
As with any great invention, we must be aware of these problems and be careful to use the Internet properly and responsibly. Only in that way can we enjoy the immeasurable benefits of the Internet. (译林版B3U3)
答案:
描述网络的优点
1.we were living in a global village.
2.has brought great benefits
3.achieve almost anything online
4.从某种程度而言,我们能随时了解全世界的知识。
5.remove the distance that usually exists between people./ a huge amount of information.
6.We no longer have to wait in line or carry cash around when we go shopping.
7.Gone are the days of doing sth./ when...
描述网络的缺点
many valuable benefits.
give out your private information, online identity theft
disconnected
be addicted to ; the real world
a target for a troll or cyberbully; can damage your mental health
建议:
Only in this way can we
人教版(2019年)教材必修二
第三单元The Internet单元写作
一、相关词汇
stream 流播; online 网上(offline 网下); database 数据库; download 下载 ; internet-based 以互联网为基础的; application(APP.)应用程序; podcast 博客; account 账户 update更新 delete删除 copy复制 home 首页; page网页; site 网站 ; forum 论坛 software 软件 password 密码 selfie 自拍
二、词块和短语
1、网站
click on(a click away) 点击; search engine 搜索引擎; page view 网页浏览量; post an update 发布更新 fill out/in填写; apply for 申请
2、网络
Global village 地球村; cyber sense 网络含义; a blog post 博文; online community 网络社区; surf the internet 上网 ; online app 网上小程序 ; bridge the digital divide 消除数字鸿沟; sent online message发网上信息 ; post comment 发帖评论 ; have access to 可以进入 fully-based 全网络覆盖 bank account 银行账户 social media profile 社交媒体账号 social network 社交网络 online safety 网络安全;be concerned about 担忧; be detrimental to 对…有害;
3、网络优点
(1)entertainment (娱乐)
make a comment about 对…做出评论 peak people’s confidence 让人自信心爆棚;benefit from…从中受益 get in good shape 状况良好; stream movies 流播电影
(2)learning (学习)
look up information 查阅信息 take online classes 上网课 download sth. at high speed 高速下载the most updated information 最新消息 keep sb. updates 接收最新信息
(3)social use (社交)
keep track of 跟踪 make sth more convenient 使得更方便; keep sb company 陪伴; remove the distance 除去距离; change people’s life 改变生活; order things from .. to… to预定东西;turn upside down 完全颠倒; get discount on 享受折扣 be inspired by 鼓励;
4、网络安全
(1)online shopping sites
use strong passwords 用强密码; identity theft 身份盗窃;steal identity 盗窃信息; access one’s account 进入账号 avoid bad experiences 避免糟糕的经验
(2)social networking apps
keep… private 保密 ; protect privacy 保护隐私; give out information 泄露信息; get/be stuck in 困住…中
(3)online chat rooms
blog about 发表关于…博客 write sth. mean 写一些刻薄的东西 online troublemaker 网络麻烦制造者; social interaction 社交互动become invested in 执迷于; behave foolishly online 网络表现愚蠢 stir up trouble 兴风作浪;
三、句子
1. There are countless articles telling us how the Internet has made our lives more convenient. 有无数的文章告诉我们互联网是如何使我们的生活更加方便。
2. We realized that one of the greatest benefits of the Internet was its ability to remove the distance that usually exists between people. 我们意识到互联网最大的好处之一是能够消除通常存在于人与人之间的距离感.
3. We believe that it is highly important to bridge the digital divide and make sure that everyone has access to the Internet and knows how to use new technology. 我们认为,消除数字鸿沟并且确保每个人都能接入互联网、知道如何使用新技术是非常重要的
4. In our information technology society, we often have more communications online. 在我们的信息技术社会,我们经常有更多的网上交流。
5. With the development of science and technology, the Internet has changed our way of life, making our life more convenient. 随着科技的发展,互联网已经改变了我们的生活,使我们的生活更加便利。
6.It is very convenient for us to keep in touch with our friends by the Internet. 对我们来说,通过互联网与朋友保持联系是很方便的。
7. Encourage your child to use strong passwords and a different password for their social networking sites. 鼓励你的孩子在他们的社交网站上使用强口令和不同的密码。
五、 其他相关表达
register 注册 subscribe 订阅 stick 置顶 top 返回顶部 log in/on 注册 log off/out 注销 click rate 点击率 information leakage 信息泄露; facial recognition 面部识别; safety awareness 安全意识; promote the development of social 促进社会发展; broaden horizons 拓宽事业; bring much convenient to people’s daily life 给人们的日常生活带来许多便利;;
例文
写作(write a blog)
假定你是李华,在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到一名中学生发帖寻求帮助。请根据相关内容,发帖回应提出的问题,并提出具体建议,内容如下:
Grown-up Post at 28-11-2021 20: 08
Hi, everyone, I'm 17 years old and I was cheated of money when I was shopping online. What should I do?
1.网络既给生活带来便利也给带来安全问题
2.安全建议;
3.你的希望。
注意:
1.80词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第一段:直入主题,说明想在博客上记录的事件。
I am sorry to hear that someone was cheated of money when shopping online.
_________(随着现代技术的快速发展), the Internet ______(become) a necessary part of our daily life and work.
Sometimes we may have bad experiences on the Internet and ________________(不知该如何避免这些坏的影响).
_______________________________________________.(就网友的网络购物安全,我要写篇博客)
第二段:展开话题,描述你发现的问题和对此的建议。
When you find_________________________(购物不安全)on the Internet, you can .
First if you see something that ___________(你不熟悉的) on online shopping site, close the site and leave immediately.
Besides. you’d better ______________________________________________. (使用强密码)
In addition,Isuggested that you should . (保护好你的隐私不泄露给陌生)
Finally, .
________(总之), the Internet gives us a platform ________________(提供许多方便,我们要学会应对网络安全问题)
第三段:欢迎他人评论或留言
Have you had any enjoyable experiences online ______________________________________(欢迎和我们分享)
Do you have any _______________________________________________________(关于安全上网的好建议吗)
Please __________________________________________(将你的评论发表在下面)
答案:
第一段: With the rapid development of modern technology,
has become
do not know how to avoid bad influence.
I would blog about a question about the safety of online shopping.
第二段: it is not safe to shop
do as follows
you are not familiar with
use strong passwords
protect your privacy from being given away to strangers.
Please do not use public computer
In a word
provide a lot of convenience, but we have to learn to solve the problems about online safety.
第三段: Welcome to share with us.
any good advice for staying safe online
Post your comments below!
Information (Learning)
get the most updated information; keep sb updated; receive updates; check the weather; have access to a huge amount of information
take online classes; check online forums; learn a language; learn at their own pace; read online resources; listen to an English
podcast; listen to an audio book online
Communication
remove the distance; post comments; social interaction; post an update ; sent online messages; blog about; comment on an update; discover communities who share our hobbies
keep in touch with loved ones; establish and
maintain social ties; send an instant message;
make a video call; bring people closer;
keep in touch with loved ones; establish and maintain social ties; send an instant message, dis have a group chat, make a video call;
inte
hobbies.
with
Online
activities
E-commerce
raise money; online payment; order food;
book tickets; make travel arrangements; find directions; food delivery apps; order a taxi; pay for almost everything on your smart phone;
doing shopping quickly and easily; bicycle rental;
Entertainment
download movies at high speed; stream TV programs; play video games; make /watch short videos; live streaming platform; take part in a whole range of activities; check friends’
social media updates; post selfies