2024届高三英语二轮复习写作专项读后续写情绪表达的方法讲义-

在高考英语读后续写中，情绪描写可以推动情节的发展，或者说情节发展到一定程度主人公会呈现出不同的情绪。情绪描写在展现人物性格，故事发展，价值引领等方面都有重要作用。大部分的读后续写除了在情节上遵循“conflict---solution”的原则之外，还有一条暗线，即人物是从“负向negative”情绪，最终转化到“正向positive”情绪，比如从anxious到calm；从sad到happy；从desperate到充hopeful，从worried到relieved等等。
描写情绪通常会有两种方法：
第一、直接描写，即句子中直接出现表示情绪的单词或者短语。比如：Nervous and anxious, he paced up and down in the room.
第二、间接描写，即通过表情和肢体动作或者环境烘托来体现人物的某种情绪。如:He stormed out of the room, slamming the door heavily behind him.此句就是采用动作描写来表现人物的“愤怒和生气”。
直接描写的方法和语料（跟句型搭配在一起如：分词做状语、倒装……）
用情绪形容词做伴随状语。首先，以描写开心喜悦为例：我们要积累表示“开心，喜悦”的形容词。比如happy, delighted, cheerful, joyful, merry, thrilled, excited等例句：Delighted, he opened the box immediately and read the letter written by his father.开心不已，他立刻打开盒子，读了父亲写来的信。
2.用无灵主语，以表示情绪的名词作为主语。
①a flush/flood/wave/ripple/wave/sense of +名词joy/happiness+sweep over/flood over/rush through/surge through +sb 表示“一股……之情涌上……”例句：The audience applauding wildly, she felt a sense of happiness surging through her body.观众疯狂鼓掌，她感到很开心。
②情绪名词+seize/dominate/overcome/overwhelm/consume/swallow/take over/take hold of/get the better of/take control of + sb 被某种情绪支配例句：Seized by terror, she couldn’t move an inch at the sight of the frightening bear.看到可怕的熊，她被恐惧支配着，一动不敢动。
③情绪名词+creep on sb 某种情绪爬上心头。A wave of panic crept on Marry when she walked through the trail alone in the darkness.当玛丽独自走在黑暗的小路上时，一阵恐慌向她袭来。
3.与so...that...倒装和as if/though联合使用例句：So furious was he that he felt as if her lungs were to explode. 她气得肺都要炸了。
间接描写方法及语料
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方法一、神态表情、肢体动作（仅举几例）表示开心：his face lit up, smile from ear to ear; eyes sparkled/twinkled/glowed/shone with joy; jump up and down; throw arms to the air...表示伤心：tears stream down the face, bury one’s face in hands; sob bitterly...表示生气：stamp one’s feet; glare at sb; bite one’s lips; clench one’s fist; face flush red; shout at the top of one’s voice; storm out of the room...表示内疚和惭愧：her face flush red/burned; lower/duck/hang one’s head...表示焦虑：pace up and down/back and forth; feel as if sitting on pins and needles...表示紧张：palms/hands/forehead were sweating; legs were shaking/trembling/shivering/quivering; heart race; cloth was soaked with sweat; face pale/turn pale; knees shook uncontrollably; my hair stand on end...
方法二、巧用修辞手法(包括比喻、夸张、俚语等）The smile on her face shone like a diamond.I feel like I am floating in an ocean of happiness.His words pierce me like a sword.Roars and screams pierced the silence with needle-like shrillness.She was restless, feeling as if sitting on pins and needles.I was stuck in the forest like a wandering sleep.It seemed as if the world were coming to an end.He felt over the moon when hearing that she was employed.With butterfly in her stomach, she was unable to utter a word.He rushed to the boy as quickly as his legs could carry him as if with a spring in his steps.
句型三、用环境烘托表达情绪正向情绪(总体感觉风是轻柔的，太阳是暖人的，雨是滋润的……）：
例句：With gentle breeze kissing her cheeks, she went camping with her friends.The sunset cast an orange glow on the ground, the mother and his son started the car and hit the road again.Rays of sunshine flooded in through the window, warming the whole room as well as our heart.
负向情绪例句：There was a deadly stillness in the house. A heavy silence blanketed the room.The never-ending darkness consumed everything.