《高考创新》二轮专题————短文改错2
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《高考创新》二轮专题————短文改错
（2）
Passage 1
(2012浙江)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Two years before,I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.Unfortunate,I had an accident and hit another car,and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week.I called my parents,so I did not tell them what had happened.I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away,and that my mother would not sleep if she knew.Therefore,I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.As a result,nobody knew truth.I still think that it was the right thing to do.
答案:Two years ,I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.,I had an accident and hit another car,and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two .I called my parents, I did not tell them what had happened.I knew that they be worried about because I was so away,and that my mother would not sleep if she knew.Therefore,I told them stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.As a result,nobody knew truth.I still think that it was the right thing to do.
剖析:1.由下文时态得知。
2.因为rent是及物动词。
3.此处是副词作状语。
4.前有two,故用可数名词复数形式。
5.此处上下文之间表示语意上的转折,所以用but。
6.由上下文时态得知。
7.此处是介宾短语,需宾格代词。
8.此处无表示比较之意。
9.interesting“有趣的”,修饰物,interested“感兴趣的”,修饰人,因为此处修饰stories,所以用interesting。
10.因为指代上面的真实情况。
Passage2
(2012辽宁)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you.It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend,Gina.Unfortunate,the only problem was the journey home.There had been a terrible accident on the highway and,for a result,there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile.In the end,we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear.In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry.They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.
Much love,
Fiona
答案:
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we with you.It was so kind you to let us bring Anne’s friend,Gina.,the only problem was the journey home.There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, a result,there was a long line of traffic for at least six .In the end,we drove to a service station and waited there the road was clear.In the car park Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.
Much love,
Fiona
剖析:1.由下文可知此处应用过去式had。
2.此处kind修饰you,说明you的品质,故用介词of。
3.unfortunately为副词,修饰后面的句子。
4.as a result结果,是固定词组。
5.前面有six,故用复数名词miles。
6.until/till直到……,符合此处的语境。
7.在那儿的一个停车场,故用there。
8.car为可数名词,此处表示泛指,故用不定冠词a。
9.由后面的our可知,此处应用we。
10.home为副词,故前面不用介词。
Passage 3
(2012陕西)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线( ),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。?
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area,but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices,and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
答案:My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area, it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a double-room with a big bath.What I liked best the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared my friends many photos in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices,and we enjoyed several local .
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of who is going to Beijing.
剖析:1.由时间状语last month可知此处应用一般过去时。
2.前后是因果关系或并列关系。
3.anywhere是副词,前面不加介词。
4.作定语应该使用形容词。
5.what引导的主语从句作主语,谓语动词由宾语或表语而确定,故谓语动词用单数。
6.share with...和……一起分享、分担。
7.photos与take之间为被动关系,故用过去分词。
8.dish为可数名词,前面有several修饰,要用复数形式。
9.hotel为可数名词,要加不定冠词,构成“such a(n)+adj.+单数可数名词+that+其他”结构。great的发音以辅音音素开头故用a。
10.any friend of mine我的朋友中的任何一个,此处应该使用名词性物主代词。
Passage 4
(2011新课标全国)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
答案:My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station a ticket to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money my pocket,but the only clothes I had those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any .When I finally arrived at my he lent to me lots of clothes.I very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
剖析:1.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station是主系表结构的主干句,需要用buying作状语。
2.去看望在杭州的朋友,远指用there。
3.因为holiday是可数名词,去度假习惯上说“go for a holiday”。
4.bought my ticket和turned around两个动作间是并列关系。
5.钱在口袋里,用介词in。
6.be动词的主语是clothes,又因为上下文都用过去时态,所以用were。
7.luggage为不可数名词。
8.arrived at(到达)的应当是朋友的家,my friend’s=my friend’s house。
9.动词lend的用法是lend sb.sth.或lend sth.to sb.。
10.此处表述“我”在当时得到朋友的帮助很高兴,应用一般过去时。
Passage 5
(2011辽宁)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In early January this year,the rate of UFO reports were steady,around three per weeks.When,however,on Monday,January 16,a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who directly responsible for the study of all such reports,decided to making his findings known.They wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.Follow this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,because the rate remained above the previous level.
答案:In early January this year,the rate of UFO reports steady,around three per .When,however,on Monday,January 16,a science fiction film about visitors outer space was shown on television,there was immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who directly responsible for the study of all such reports,decided to his findings known. wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings, the rate remained above the previous level.
剖析:1.因为句子的主语为the rate,是单数,所以谓语动词要用单数形式。
2.因为前面有per(每一),所以用单数形式week。
3.来自外太空的……,所以用from。
4.名词increase为泛指,且其前有发音以元音音素开头的immediate修饰,所以用不定冠词an。
5.who引导的定语从句中缺少谓语动词。
6.不定式to后用动词原形。
7.因为代替的是一个人Wayne Tyler,所以用He。
8.副词naturally作状语修饰动词explained,不需要加介词for。
9.现在分词短语作状语,drop与follow之间为逻辑上的主谓关系。
10.前后句子间为转折或让步关系,所以用表转折或让步的连词。
Passage 6
(2011陕西)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线( ),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。?
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday morning,when I was having a walk in the park near my home,I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.I didn’t have my camera with me at that time,but I rushed back home to get.Unfortunately,by the time I got back,they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere.I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building.He was right there in the front of me!I couldn’t believe my luck—not only did I had my photo taken with him,but he signed his name on my shirt!
答案:Last Sunday morning,when I was having a walk in the park near my home,I came across a crew a new film with one of my favourite .I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, I rushed back home to get .Unfortunately,by the time I got back,they finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen .I was really and about to leave when he walked out a building.He was right there in the front of me!I couldn’t believe my luck—not only did I my photo taken with him,but he signed his name on my shirt!
剖析:1.a crew与make之间存在逻辑上的主谓关系,用现在分词短语作后置定语修饰crew。
2.“one of+可数名词”结构中,应用可数名词的复数形式。
3.句子的前后之间为因果关系,用so。也可用and表顺承关系。
4.get表示“(去)拿来”时为及物动词,需加宾语,it指代前文中的camera,避免重复。
5.整篇文章以一般过去时为主,finish这个动作发生在got back之前,故用过去完成时。
6.否定句中应用anywhere来表示“到处”。
7.表示人感到失望时应用disappointed。
8.walk out后接宾语时需加of,表示“从……中走出来”。
9.在事物的前面用in front of...,in the front of表示在事物内部的前面。
10.倒装句中did表示过去,已提前,had应用原形have。
Passage 7
(2010新课标全国)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US,which was very interested.One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help.As the old man looked over the things on the yard that were to be sold,he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees.On the box was a card say:“25 cents each.”“You will never sell these for that much,”he told Nick.Convinced,Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece.Without a moment’s delay,my neighbor picked up the box but announced:“I’ll take them.”
答案:My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US,which was very .One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door by to help.As the old man looked over the things that were to be sold,he stopped at a box of golden for Christmas trees.On the box was a card :“25 cents each.”“You will never sell these for that much,”he told Nick.Convinced,Nick has brought the price to 10 cents a piece.Without a moment’s delay, neighbor picked up the box announced:“I’ll take them.”
剖析:1.story为可数名词单数,表泛指,应用不定冠词a。
2.主语为物,应用interesting。
3.故事发生时间为one day,句子时态为过去时,故用came。
4.考查固定搭配,on the ground和in the yard。
5.a box of golden balls“一盒金色的球”,应用可数名词复数。
6.saying为现在分词作伴随状语。
7.整篇文章都在叙述过去发生的一件事,故应用一般过去时态。
8.副词用错,语意矛盾。价格从原先的每个25美分降到每个10美分。
9.代词用错,人称不合适。由第一句的his及第二句的he可知用his。
10.此处表并列动作,应用and。
（2）
Passage 1
(2012浙江)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Two years before,I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.Unfortunate,I had an accident and hit another car,and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week.I called my parents,so I did not tell them what had happened.I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away,and that my mother would not sleep if she knew.Therefore,I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.As a result,nobody knew truth.I still think that it was the right thing to do.
答案:Two years ,I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car.,I had an accident and hit another car,and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two .I called my parents, I did not tell them what had happened.I knew that they be worried about because I was so away,and that my mother would not sleep if she knew.Therefore,I told them stories and how I was enjoying Brazil.As a result,nobody knew truth.I still think that it was the right thing to do.
剖析:1.由下文时态得知。
2.因为rent是及物动词。
3.此处是副词作状语。
4.前有two,故用可数名词复数形式。
5.此处上下文之间表示语意上的转折,所以用but。
6.由上下文时态得知。
7.此处是介宾短语,需宾格代词。
8.此处无表示比较之意。
9.interesting“有趣的”,修饰物,interested“感兴趣的”,修饰人,因为此处修饰stories,所以用interesting。
10.因为指代上面的真实情况。
Passage2
(2012辽宁)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you.It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend,Gina.Unfortunate,the only problem was the journey home.There had been a terrible accident on the highway and,for a result,there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile.In the end,we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear.In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry.They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.
Much love,
Fiona
答案:
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we with you.It was so kind you to let us bring Anne’s friend,Gina.,the only problem was the journey home.There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, a result,there was a long line of traffic for at least six .In the end,we drove to a service station and waited there the road was clear.In the car park Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.
Much love,
Fiona
剖析:1.由下文可知此处应用过去式had。
2.此处kind修饰you,说明you的品质,故用介词of。
3.unfortunately为副词,修饰后面的句子。
4.as a result结果,是固定词组。
5.前面有six,故用复数名词miles。
6.until/till直到……,符合此处的语境。
7.在那儿的一个停车场,故用there。
8.car为可数名词,此处表示泛指,故用不定冠词a。
9.由后面的our可知,此处应用we。
10.home为副词,故前面不用介词。
Passage 3
(2012陕西)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线( ),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。?
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area,but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices,and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
答案:My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we Beijing last month.It is in the downtown area, it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a double-room with a big bath.What I liked best the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared my friends many photos in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices,and we enjoyed several local .
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of who is going to Beijing.
剖析:1.由时间状语last month可知此处应用一般过去时。
2.前后是因果关系或并列关系。
3.anywhere是副词,前面不加介词。
4.作定语应该使用形容词。
5.what引导的主语从句作主语,谓语动词由宾语或表语而确定,故谓语动词用单数。
6.share with...和……一起分享、分担。
7.photos与take之间为被动关系,故用过去分词。
8.dish为可数名词,前面有several修饰,要用复数形式。
9.hotel为可数名词,要加不定冠词,构成“such a(n)+adj.+单数可数名词+that+其他”结构。great的发音以辅音音素开头故用a。
10.any friend of mine我的朋友中的任何一个,此处应该使用名词性物主代词。
Passage 4
(2011新课标全国)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
答案:My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station a ticket to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money my pocket,but the only clothes I had those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any .When I finally arrived at my he lent to me lots of clothes.I very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
剖析:1.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station是主系表结构的主干句,需要用buying作状语。
2.去看望在杭州的朋友,远指用there。
3.因为holiday是可数名词,去度假习惯上说“go for a holiday”。
4.bought my ticket和turned around两个动作间是并列关系。
5.钱在口袋里,用介词in。
6.be动词的主语是clothes,又因为上下文都用过去时态,所以用were。
7.luggage为不可数名词。
8.arrived at(到达)的应当是朋友的家,my friend’s=my friend’s house。
9.动词lend的用法是lend sb.sth.或lend sth.to sb.。
10.此处表述“我”在当时得到朋友的帮助很高兴,应用一般过去时。
Passage 5
(2011辽宁)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In early January this year,the rate of UFO reports were steady,around three per weeks.When,however,on Monday,January 16,a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who directly responsible for the study of all such reports,decided to making his findings known.They wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.Follow this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings,because the rate remained above the previous level.
答案:In early January this year,the rate of UFO reports steady,around three per .When,however,on Monday,January 16,a science fiction film about visitors outer space was shown on television,there was immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding officer,Wayne Tyler,who directly responsible for the study of all such reports,decided to his findings known. wrote an article,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. this explanation,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings, the rate remained above the previous level.
剖析:1.因为句子的主语为the rate,是单数,所以谓语动词要用单数形式。
2.因为前面有per(每一),所以用单数形式week。
3.来自外太空的……,所以用from。
4.名词increase为泛指,且其前有发音以元音音素开头的immediate修饰,所以用不定冠词an。
5.who引导的定语从句中缺少谓语动词。
6.不定式to后用动词原形。
7.因为代替的是一个人Wayne Tyler,所以用He。
8.副词naturally作状语修饰动词explained,不需要加介词for。
9.现在分词短语作状语,drop与follow之间为逻辑上的主谓关系。
10.前后句子间为转折或让步关系,所以用表转折或让步的连词。
Passage 6
(2011陕西)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线( ),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。?
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday morning,when I was having a walk in the park near my home,I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.I didn’t have my camera with me at that time,but I rushed back home to get.Unfortunately,by the time I got back,they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere.I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building.He was right there in the front of me!I couldn’t believe my luck—not only did I had my photo taken with him,but he signed his name on my shirt!
答案:Last Sunday morning,when I was having a walk in the park near my home,I came across a crew a new film with one of my favourite .I didn’t have my camera with me at that time, I rushed back home to get .Unfortunately,by the time I got back,they finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen .I was really and about to leave when he walked out a building.He was right there in the front of me!I couldn’t believe my luck—not only did I my photo taken with him,but he signed his name on my shirt!
剖析:1.a crew与make之间存在逻辑上的主谓关系,用现在分词短语作后置定语修饰crew。
2.“one of+可数名词”结构中,应用可数名词的复数形式。
3.句子的前后之间为因果关系,用so。也可用and表顺承关系。
4.get表示“(去)拿来”时为及物动词,需加宾语,it指代前文中的camera,避免重复。
5.整篇文章以一般过去时为主,finish这个动作发生在got back之前,故用过去完成时。
6.否定句中应用anywhere来表示“到处”。
7.表示人感到失望时应用disappointed。
8.walk out后接宾语时需加of,表示“从……中走出来”。
9.在事物的前面用in front of...,in the front of表示在事物内部的前面。
10.倒装句中did表示过去,已提前,had应用原形have。
Passage 7
(2010新课标全国)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US,which was very interested.One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door come by to help.As the old man looked over the things on the yard that were to be sold,he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees.On the box was a card say:“25 cents each.”“You will never sell these for that much,”he told Nick.Convinced,Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece.Without a moment’s delay,my neighbor picked up the box but announced:“I’ll take them.”
答案:My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US,which was very .One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door by to help.As the old man looked over the things that were to be sold,he stopped at a box of golden for Christmas trees.On the box was a card :“25 cents each.”“You will never sell these for that much,”he told Nick.Convinced,Nick has brought the price to 10 cents a piece.Without a moment’s delay, neighbor picked up the box announced:“I’ll take them.”
剖析:1.story为可数名词单数,表泛指,应用不定冠词a。
2.主语为物,应用interesting。
3.故事发生时间为one day,句子时态为过去时,故用came。
4.考查固定搭配,on the ground和in the yard。
5.a box of golden balls“一盒金色的球”,应用可数名词复数。
6.saying为现在分词作伴随状语。
7.整篇文章都在叙述过去发生的一件事,故应用一般过去时态。
8.副词用错,语意矛盾。价格从原先的每个25美分降到每个10美分。
9.代词用错,人称不合适。由第一句的his及第二句的he可知用his。
10.此处表并列动作,应用and。