《高考创新》二轮专题————短文改错3
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《高考创新》二轮专题————短文改错
（3）
Passage 1
(2009海南、宁夏)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mrs Winthorp,
So my first week at college is over!No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going.
I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm.I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor.There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so that we can help each other on the course work.Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.
Well,I had better to stop now.I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon,for I’ve got some preparation to make.Keep in touch.
Best,
Carol
答案:
Dear Mrs Winthorp,
So my first week at college is over!No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know things are going.
I’m glad to say that has worked out fine in the dorm.I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they me a comfortable one on second floor.There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make with them so that we can help each other the course work.Everyone else seems very nice and here.
Well,I had better to stop now.I’m going to attend first lesson this afternoon, I’ve got some preparation to make.Keep in touch.
Best,
Carol
剖析:1.表示让对方知道情况进展如何,应该用how来代替what。
2.“一切进展顺利”中“一切”应该为everything;anything为“任何事情”之意,常用于否定句和疑问句中。
3.考查时态,该句谈论的是在大学的第一周所发生的事,属过去的事情,所以用过去式。
4.序数词second前应该有定冠词修饰。
5.make friends with sb.为固定结构,意为“与某人交朋友”。
6.help sb.with sth.与help sb.(to) do sth.均为固定结构。
7.系动词seem后用形容词作表语。
8.had better do sth.为固定结构,意为“最好做某事”。
9.mine为名词性物主代词,后面不能再接名词lesson,所以必须改成形容词性物主代词my。
10.该句表示结果,而不是原因,应该用so。
Passage 2
(2013银川一中高三第二次模拟)
When you go aboard,there are a number of things to remember.There are three important areas of every new culture you must adopt to: the language,the food and the clothing.The best thing to do is to do how the people of the country do.Unless they eat snack for breakfast,you should try snack too.Your vacation will be comfortable and pleasant if you dare follow it.If you have never traveled overseas before,you may find difficult to face the problems you meet.But you can always get off cultural difficulties by visiting some old great museum.Don’t spend all your time alone or you will be lonely.You should spend some time make friends.In this way you could learn about the new culture and have fun.
答案:When you go ,there are a number of things to remember.There are three important areas of every new culture you must to: the language,the food and the clothing.The best thing to do is to do the people of the country do. they eat snack for breakfast,you should try snack too.Your vacation will be comfortable and pleasant if you dare follow it.If you have never traveled overseas before,you may find difficult to face the problems you meet.But you can always get cultural difficulties by visiting some old great .
Don’t spend all your time alone or you will be lonely.You should spend some time friends.In this way you learn about the new culture and have fun.
剖析:1.此处表示出国,故应用abroad。
2.adapt to表示“适应”。
3.此处为what引导的宾语从句。
4.此处为假设的一种情况。if如果。
5.此处并非表示“敢不敢”,而是表示“跟从”。
6.find与difficult之间缺少形式宾语it。
7.get round/ around在此处表示“顺利应付或克服”。
8.museum为可数名词,应用其复数形式。
9.spend some time (in)doing something 花费时间做某事,为固定表达。
10.此处不是表示过去,而是表示将来的事。故不用can的过去式。
Passage 3
(2013海口高考调研测试)
It was snowing heavily Monday morning.Li Hua was at the bus stop,waited for Bus No.601 to go to school.After the while,the bus came and she got on it.There are many passengers in the bus.Some were talking but some were looking out of the windows.Suddenly the bus stopped.The driver turned around and said,“Sorry.The bus has been broken down.Please get off and help push the bus.” When we heard this,Li Hua and the other passenger got off the bus.They worked hardly together,pushing the bus slowly backward.Soon the bus was running again.All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.
答案:It was snowing heavily Monday morning.Li Hua was at the bus stop, for Bus No.601 to go to school.After while,the bus came and she got on it.There many passengers in the bus.Some were talking some were looking out of the windows.Suddenly the bus stopped.The driver turned around and said,“Sorry.The bus has been broken down.Please get off and help push the bus.” When heard this,Li Hua and the other got off the bus.They worked together,pushing the bus slowly .Soon the bus was running again.All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.
剖析:1.在具体某一天的上午要用介词on。
2.wait与主语之间为主动关系,故应用其现在分词形式。
3.after a while 一会儿,为固定短语。
4.前后时态应保持一致。
5.前后句之间是对比关系,而非转折关系。
6.此处表示汽车抛锚,无需被动,没有强调人为造成的。
7.前后人称应保持一致。
8.passenger为可数名词,此处应用复数形式。
9.hardly表示“几乎不”;hard表示“努力地”。
10.众人在推车,故车应该向前(forward)行。
Passage 4
(2013吉林白山第一中学高三第二次模拟)
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago,my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunately,one of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance,which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours’ treatment they finally escaped from death.
As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly,we seldom care about the necessary safety measures or care which happens to consumers.They must be charged with law.Meanwhile,I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.
Yours,
Wang Ming
答案:
Dear Editor,
I’ m writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago,my ate a bag of food from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and their faces pale.Fortunately,one of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance,which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours’ treatment they finally escaped from death.
As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, seldom care about the necessary safety measures or care happens to consumers.They must be charged law.Meanwhile,I do hope whole society can realize the of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.
Yours,
Wang Ming
剖析:1.由下文可知,此处并不是一个邻居。
2.buy与food之间为动宾关系,应用其过去分词作后置定语。
3.前后时态应保持一致。
4.call作“打电话叫”讲时,为及物动词。
5.be interested in...对……感兴趣。
6.此处指代前面的商人,故用they来表示。
7.what引导的宾语从句表示发生在顾客身上的事情。
8.受到法律的惩罚应用介词“by”,表示动作的主使者。
9.the/our whole society表示“整个社会”。
10.此处表示重要性,应用important的名词形式。
Passage 5
(2013吉林实验中学高三第二次模拟)
In order to realize his dream,Bill Gates,richest man in the world,gave up studying in Harvard University,that is the most famous in the world.He set up a company and researching the computer software.An old saying go,“Interest is the best teacher.”I quite agree with this idea.I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl.I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs.To meet me curiosity,I read in English stories every day.It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day.As a result,I always did very well in English exam.Interest is the key of success.
答案:In order to realize his dream,Bill Gates, richest man in the world,gave up studying in Harvard University,is the most famous in the world.He set up a company and the computer software.An old saying ,“Interest is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this idea.I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl.I got interested in foreign cultures customs.To meet curiosity,I read in English stories every day.It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day.As a result,I always did very well in English .Interest is the key success.
剖析:1.形容词最高级前应加定冠词the。
2.that不能引导非限制性定语从句。
3.set up与research之间为并列关系。两个动作同时进行。
4.单数名词作主语谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式。
5.副词修饰形容词。
6.此处cultures 与customs之间为并列关系,而非选择关系。
7.此处需用形容词性物主代词。
8.read为及物动词,其后无需加介词。
9.此处指多次考试。
10.the key to表示“……的关键”。
（3）
Passage 1
(2009海南、宁夏)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mrs Winthorp,
So my first week at college is over!No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going.
I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm.I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor.There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so that we can help each other on the course work.Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.
Well,I had better to stop now.I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon,for I’ve got some preparation to make.Keep in touch.
Best,
Carol
答案:
Dear Mrs Winthorp,
So my first week at college is over!No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know things are going.
I’m glad to say that has worked out fine in the dorm.I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they me a comfortable one on second floor.There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make with them so that we can help each other the course work.Everyone else seems very nice and here.
Well,I had better to stop now.I’m going to attend first lesson this afternoon, I’ve got some preparation to make.Keep in touch.
Best,
Carol
剖析:1.表示让对方知道情况进展如何,应该用how来代替what。
2.“一切进展顺利”中“一切”应该为everything;anything为“任何事情”之意,常用于否定句和疑问句中。
3.考查时态,该句谈论的是在大学的第一周所发生的事,属过去的事情,所以用过去式。
4.序数词second前应该有定冠词修饰。
5.make friends with sb.为固定结构,意为“与某人交朋友”。
6.help sb.with sth.与help sb.(to) do sth.均为固定结构。
7.系动词seem后用形容词作表语。
8.had better do sth.为固定结构,意为“最好做某事”。
9.mine为名词性物主代词,后面不能再接名词lesson,所以必须改成形容词性物主代词my。
10.该句表示结果,而不是原因,应该用so。
Passage 2
(2013银川一中高三第二次模拟)
When you go aboard,there are a number of things to remember.There are three important areas of every new culture you must adopt to: the language,the food and the clothing.The best thing to do is to do how the people of the country do.Unless they eat snack for breakfast,you should try snack too.Your vacation will be comfortable and pleasant if you dare follow it.If you have never traveled overseas before,you may find difficult to face the problems you meet.But you can always get off cultural difficulties by visiting some old great museum.Don’t spend all your time alone or you will be lonely.You should spend some time make friends.In this way you could learn about the new culture and have fun.
答案:When you go ,there are a number of things to remember.There are three important areas of every new culture you must to: the language,the food and the clothing.The best thing to do is to do the people of the country do. they eat snack for breakfast,you should try snack too.Your vacation will be comfortable and pleasant if you dare follow it.If you have never traveled overseas before,you may find difficult to face the problems you meet.But you can always get cultural difficulties by visiting some old great .
Don’t spend all your time alone or you will be lonely.You should spend some time friends.In this way you learn about the new culture and have fun.
剖析:1.此处表示出国,故应用abroad。
2.adapt to表示“适应”。
3.此处为what引导的宾语从句。
4.此处为假设的一种情况。if如果。
5.此处并非表示“敢不敢”,而是表示“跟从”。
6.find与difficult之间缺少形式宾语it。
7.get round/ around在此处表示“顺利应付或克服”。
8.museum为可数名词,应用其复数形式。
9.spend some time (in)doing something 花费时间做某事,为固定表达。
10.此处不是表示过去,而是表示将来的事。故不用can的过去式。
Passage 3
(2013海口高考调研测试)
It was snowing heavily Monday morning.Li Hua was at the bus stop,waited for Bus No.601 to go to school.After the while,the bus came and she got on it.There are many passengers in the bus.Some were talking but some were looking out of the windows.Suddenly the bus stopped.The driver turned around and said,“Sorry.The bus has been broken down.Please get off and help push the bus.” When we heard this,Li Hua and the other passenger got off the bus.They worked hardly together,pushing the bus slowly backward.Soon the bus was running again.All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.
答案:It was snowing heavily Monday morning.Li Hua was at the bus stop, for Bus No.601 to go to school.After while,the bus came and she got on it.There many passengers in the bus.Some were talking some were looking out of the windows.Suddenly the bus stopped.The driver turned around and said,“Sorry.The bus has been broken down.Please get off and help push the bus.” When heard this,Li Hua and the other got off the bus.They worked together,pushing the bus slowly .Soon the bus was running again.All the passengers were smiling and the sun was shining.
剖析:1.在具体某一天的上午要用介词on。
2.wait与主语之间为主动关系,故应用其现在分词形式。
3.after a while 一会儿,为固定短语。
4.前后时态应保持一致。
5.前后句之间是对比关系,而非转折关系。
6.此处表示汽车抛锚,无需被动,没有强调人为造成的。
7.前后人称应保持一致。
8.passenger为可数名词,此处应用复数形式。
9.hardly表示“几乎不”;hard表示“努力地”。
10.众人在推车,故车应该向前(forward)行。
Passage 4
(2013吉林白山第一中学高三第二次模拟)
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago,my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunately,one of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance,which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours’ treatment they finally escaped from death.
As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly,we seldom care about the necessary safety measures or care which happens to consumers.They must be charged with law.Meanwhile,I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.
Yours,
Wang Ming
答案:
Dear Editor,
I’ m writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident.Several days ago,my ate a bag of food from the market.After the meal,they had stomachaches and their faces pale.Fortunately,one of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance,which carried them quickly to a hospital.After several hours’ treatment they finally escaped from death.
As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, seldom care about the necessary safety measures or care happens to consumers.They must be charged law.Meanwhile,I do hope whole society can realize the of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.
Yours,
Wang Ming
剖析:1.由下文可知,此处并不是一个邻居。
2.buy与food之间为动宾关系,应用其过去分词作后置定语。
3.前后时态应保持一致。
4.call作“打电话叫”讲时,为及物动词。
5.be interested in...对……感兴趣。
6.此处指代前面的商人,故用they来表示。
7.what引导的宾语从句表示发生在顾客身上的事情。
8.受到法律的惩罚应用介词“by”,表示动作的主使者。
9.the/our whole society表示“整个社会”。
10.此处表示重要性,应用important的名词形式。
Passage 5
(2013吉林实验中学高三第二次模拟)
In order to realize his dream,Bill Gates,richest man in the world,gave up studying in Harvard University,that is the most famous in the world.He set up a company and researching the computer software.An old saying go,“Interest is the best teacher.”I quite agree with this idea.I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl.I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs.To meet me curiosity,I read in English stories every day.It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day.As a result,I always did very well in English exam.Interest is the key of success.
答案:In order to realize his dream,Bill Gates, richest man in the world,gave up studying in Harvard University,is the most famous in the world.He set up a company and the computer software.An old saying ,“Interest is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this idea.I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl.I got interested in foreign cultures customs.To meet curiosity,I read in English stories every day.It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day.As a result,I always did very well in English .Interest is the key success.
剖析:1.形容词最高级前应加定冠词the。
2.that不能引导非限制性定语从句。
3.set up与research之间为并列关系。两个动作同时进行。
4.单数名词作主语谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式。
5.副词修饰形容词。
6.此处cultures 与customs之间为并列关系,而非选择关系。
7.此处需用形容词性物主代词。
8.read为及物动词,其后无需加介词。
9.此处指多次考试。
10.the key to表示“……的关键”。