《高考创新》二轮专题————短文改错5
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《高考创新》二轮专题————短文改错
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Passage 1
(2013咸阳高考模拟)
One day last month,a group of Chinese student arrived in Brisbane.I was one of them.After speaking goodbye to my dear parents at Beijing Airport,I started my long journey.That was my first journey abroad! How exciting I felt when I got on board.We left Shanghai to Hongkong to change to another plane to Melbourne,second largest city in Australia.From there we went to Brisbane,that is the capital city of Queensland,Australia.We were exchange students and send to the country by their government to learn English in Brisbane for twelve months.
From the first few lessons,we found the teachers there really worked hardly,and I am sure of everything will go well in the next months.
答案:One day last month,a group of Chinese arrived in Brisbane.I was one of them.After goodbye to my dear parents at Beijing Airport,I started my long journey.That was my first journey abroad! How I felt when I got on board.We left Shanghai Hongkong to change to another plane to Melbourne, second largest city in Australia.From there we went to Brisbane, is the capital city of Queensland,Australia.We were exchange students and to the country by government to learn English in Brisbane for twelve months.
From the first few lessons,we found the teachers there really worked ,and I am sure everything will go well in the next months.
剖析:1.a group of后应跟可数名词的复数形式。
2.say goodbye to sb.向某人说再见,为固定表达。
3.feel excited感到兴奋的。
4.leave...for sp.离开……去某地。
5.序数词前应加定冠词the。
6.which引导的非限制性定语从句。
7.此处应用send的过去分词与were构成被动语态。
8.前后人称不一致。
9.hard努力地;hardly几乎不。
10.be sure of后不能跟宾语从句。
Passage 2
(2012浙江桐乡二月模拟)
The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school.I was having trouble get along with my parents.I had about fifty dollar in my pockets,and so I thought about leaving home.It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick.Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons:being more responsible,more decisive and more creative.Because of I’m on my own,I get to deal with my duties without be told.I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices.In the other hand,I could make my own future plan.I have made rules for my to follow.
答案:The first time I to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school.I was having trouble along with my parents.I had about fifty in my pockets,and so I thought about leaving home.It took me only two weeks away from home I started to feel homesick.Living on my own is a different experience for three main reasons:being more responsible,more decisive and more creative.Because of I’m on my own,I get to deal with my duties without told.I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their . the other hand,I could make my own future plan.I have made rules for to follow.
剖析:1.前后句时态应保持一致,用一般过去时。
2.have trouble (in)doing sth.为固定表达,意为“做某事有困难”。
3.前面有fifty修饰,因此dollar用复数形式。
4.start为短暂性动词,不与while连用,故用when来引导。
5.修饰形容词different应用total的副词形式。
6.because of为介词短语,后不能跟从句。
7.without是介词,其后跟动词-ing形式。
8.advice为不可数名词,无复数形式。
9.on the other hand为固定短语。
10.介词for后跟物主代词的宾格形式。
Passage 3
(2012陕西宝鸡高三第一次质检)
Dear Li Hua,
It’s a long time since I heard from you in last time.Now I’d like to tell you a impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career.
A boy,Li Ming,whom father died a month ago,was late for school.He stood outside the classroom silent.I smiled to him and asked him to come.After a while,he began to cry.Seeing this,I walked to him and asked what has happened.He told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for her.At the same time,he apologized to me for his lateness.Moved by his word,I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named “Mother” for the students.
From then on,I began to realize we should respect our parents and did our best to help them.Do you think so?I’m looking forward to your reply.
答案:
Dear Li Hua,
It’s a long time since I heard from you in last time.Now I’d like to tell you impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career.
A boy,Li Ming, father died a month ago,was late for school.He stood outside the classroom .I smiled to him and asked him to come .After a while,he began to cry.Seeing this,I walked to him and asked what happened.He told me his mother was ill he had to get some medicine for her.At the same time,he apologized to me for his lateness.Moved by his ,I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named “Mother”for the students.
From then on,I began to realize we should respect our parents and our best to help them.Do you think so?I’m looking forward to your reply.
剖析:1.last time为名词短语在句中作状语,其前无需加介词。
2.impressive修饰可数名词单数story,且以元音音素开头,前面要用不定冠词an。
3.此句是whose引导的非限制性定语从句,whose在从句中作定语修饰father。
4.修饰动词stood,需用silent的副词形式。
5.此处表示“请他进来”,所以用come in“进来”。其中in为副词。
6.主句用了一般过去时,从句动作发生在主句之前,表示过去的过去,因此用过去完成时。
7.前后句之间是顺承关系而非转折关系。
8.word表示“话语”时为可数名词,应用复数形式。
9.此处是定语从句应用which/that,what不能引导定语从句。
10.realize后的宾语从句中,and连接两个并列谓语动词respect和do,因为前面有should,所以用动词原形。
Passage 4
(2012辽宁重点中学协作体期末)
On Saturday afternoon,Li Hua and Wang Ping,members from “Green Eyes”,was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground.They picked it out and found it wounded.Thinking it should die without timely help,they took it home.Under their treatment and care,the lucky bird got recovered soon.When time came for them to flying the bird,they felt a bit of pity but very delightful.I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing.Here I call on the public to show respects for the nature.Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.
答案:On Saturday afternoon,Li Hua and Wang Ping,members from “Green Eyes”, having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they sight of a bird on the ground.They picked it and found it wounded.Thinking it die without timely help,they took it home.Under their treatment and care,the lucky bird got recovered soon.When time came for them to the bird,they felt a bit of pity but very .I think it’s worthwhile for to do such a thing.Here I call on the public to show for the nature.Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.
剖析:1.主语Li Hua and Wang Ping 为复数概念,谓语动词应用复数。
2.主从句时态应保持一致,用一般过去时。
3.pick sth.up为固定词组,意为“把……捡起来”。pick out意为“挑选,辨认出”,不符合语境。
4.此处表示推测,故应用might或could。
5.此处为动词不定式,to后应跟动词原形。
6.delightful令人高兴的,令人愉快的;delighted高兴的,愉快的。此处表示“高兴的,愉快的”,因此用delighted。
7.指代Li Hua 和Wang Ping应用them。
8.respect表示“尊敬,敬重”时为不可数名词,无复数形式。
9.nature表示“自然界”时,其前面无需加冠词。
10.当先行词为the way而从句中缺少状语时,关系词可以用in which、that或省略。所以需加in。
Passage 5
(2012吉林普通中学高中毕业班质检)
Rose wanted a job.She went to many offices and she didn’t like any of them.One day she saw a board in an office read:“This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute.”Rose was exciting.When Rose went to the manager’s office,the man was writing something.Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head.“Do you need a typist?”asked Rose.“Yes!”he said.Rose clapped her hand.She couldn’t help saying,“OK!How much will you pay for me every month?”The manager thought for a while and said,“I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months.Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.”Rose smiled and answer,“Great!I will come and work here three months late.”The manager was speechless.
答案:Rose wanted a job.She went to many offices she didn’t like any of them.One day she saw a board in an office :“This office needs a typist can type 200 words a minute.”Rose was .When Rose went to the manager’s office,the man was writing something.Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised head.“Do you need a typist?”asked Rose.“Yes!”he said.Rose clapped her .She couldn’t help saying,“OK!How much will you pay for me every month?”The manager thought for a while and said,“I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months.Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.”Rose smiled and ,“Great!I will come and work here three months .”The manager was speechless.
剖析:1.前后句之间为转折关系而非顺承关系。
2.read与a board之间为主动关系,故用动词-ing形式作宾补。
3.在定语从句中作主语用who,不用whom。
4.修饰人用excite的过去分词形式,表示“兴奋的”。exciting表示“令人兴奋的”,常修饰物。
5.由上文的the man可知此处应用his。
6.拍的是双手,应该用hand的复数形式。
7.pay sb.some money为固定表达,意为“付给某人多少钱”。
8.序数词前应该加定冠词the。
9.and所连接的两个并列动词的时态应保持一致。
10.three months later三个月以后。
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Passage 1
(2013咸阳高考模拟)
One day last month,a group of Chinese student arrived in Brisbane.I was one of them.After speaking goodbye to my dear parents at Beijing Airport,I started my long journey.That was my first journey abroad! How exciting I felt when I got on board.We left Shanghai to Hongkong to change to another plane to Melbourne,second largest city in Australia.From there we went to Brisbane,that is the capital city of Queensland,Australia.We were exchange students and send to the country by their government to learn English in Brisbane for twelve months.
From the first few lessons,we found the teachers there really worked hardly,and I am sure of everything will go well in the next months.
答案:One day last month,a group of Chinese arrived in Brisbane.I was one of them.After goodbye to my dear parents at Beijing Airport,I started my long journey.That was my first journey abroad! How I felt when I got on board.We left Shanghai Hongkong to change to another plane to Melbourne, second largest city in Australia.From there we went to Brisbane, is the capital city of Queensland,Australia.We were exchange students and to the country by government to learn English in Brisbane for twelve months.
From the first few lessons,we found the teachers there really worked ,and I am sure everything will go well in the next months.
剖析:1.a group of后应跟可数名词的复数形式。
2.say goodbye to sb.向某人说再见,为固定表达。
3.feel excited感到兴奋的。
4.leave...for sp.离开……去某地。
5.序数词前应加定冠词the。
6.which引导的非限制性定语从句。
7.此处应用send的过去分词与were构成被动语态。
8.前后人称不一致。
9.hard努力地;hardly几乎不。
10.be sure of后不能跟宾语从句。
Passage 2
(2012浙江桐乡二月模拟)
The first time I decide to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school.I was having trouble get along with my parents.I had about fifty dollar in my pockets,and so I thought about leaving home.It took me only two weeks away from home while I started to feel homesick.Living on my own is a total different experience for three main reasons:being more responsible,more decisive and more creative.Because of I’m on my own,I get to deal with my duties without be told.I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their advices.In the other hand,I could make my own future plan.I have made rules for my to follow.
答案:The first time I to leave home was when I was upon graduation in high school.I was having trouble along with my parents.I had about fifty in my pockets,and so I thought about leaving home.It took me only two weeks away from home I started to feel homesick.Living on my own is a different experience for three main reasons:being more responsible,more decisive and more creative.Because of I’m on my own,I get to deal with my duties without told.I have to be more careful because my parents are not here to give me their . the other hand,I could make my own future plan.I have made rules for to follow.
剖析:1.前后句时态应保持一致,用一般过去时。
2.have trouble (in)doing sth.为固定表达,意为“做某事有困难”。
3.前面有fifty修饰,因此dollar用复数形式。
4.start为短暂性动词,不与while连用,故用when来引导。
5.修饰形容词different应用total的副词形式。
6.because of为介词短语,后不能跟从句。
7.without是介词,其后跟动词-ing形式。
8.advice为不可数名词,无复数形式。
9.on the other hand为固定短语。
10.介词for后跟物主代词的宾格形式。
Passage 3
(2012陕西宝鸡高三第一次质检)
Dear Li Hua,
It’s a long time since I heard from you in last time.Now I’d like to tell you a impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career.
A boy,Li Ming,whom father died a month ago,was late for school.He stood outside the classroom silent.I smiled to him and asked him to come.After a while,he began to cry.Seeing this,I walked to him and asked what has happened.He told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for her.At the same time,he apologized to me for his lateness.Moved by his word,I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named “Mother” for the students.
From then on,I began to realize we should respect our parents and did our best to help them.Do you think so?I’m looking forward to your reply.
答案:
Dear Li Hua,
It’s a long time since I heard from you in last time.Now I’d like to tell you impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career.
A boy,Li Ming, father died a month ago,was late for school.He stood outside the classroom .I smiled to him and asked him to come .After a while,he began to cry.Seeing this,I walked to him and asked what happened.He told me his mother was ill he had to get some medicine for her.At the same time,he apologized to me for his lateness.Moved by his ,I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named “Mother”for the students.
From then on,I began to realize we should respect our parents and our best to help them.Do you think so?I’m looking forward to your reply.
剖析:1.last time为名词短语在句中作状语,其前无需加介词。
2.impressive修饰可数名词单数story,且以元音音素开头,前面要用不定冠词an。
3.此句是whose引导的非限制性定语从句,whose在从句中作定语修饰father。
4.修饰动词stood,需用silent的副词形式。
5.此处表示“请他进来”,所以用come in“进来”。其中in为副词。
6.主句用了一般过去时,从句动作发生在主句之前,表示过去的过去,因此用过去完成时。
7.前后句之间是顺承关系而非转折关系。
8.word表示“话语”时为可数名词,应用复数形式。
9.此处是定语从句应用which/that,what不能引导定语从句。
10.realize后的宾语从句中,and连接两个并列谓语动词respect和do,因为前面有should,所以用动词原形。
Passage 4
(2012辽宁重点中学协作体期末)
On Saturday afternoon,Li Hua and Wang Ping,members from “Green Eyes”,was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground.They picked it out and found it wounded.Thinking it should die without timely help,they took it home.Under their treatment and care,the lucky bird got recovered soon.When time came for them to flying the bird,they felt a bit of pity but very delightful.I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing.Here I call on the public to show respects for the nature.Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.
答案:On Saturday afternoon,Li Hua and Wang Ping,members from “Green Eyes”, having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they sight of a bird on the ground.They picked it and found it wounded.Thinking it die without timely help,they took it home.Under their treatment and care,the lucky bird got recovered soon.When time came for them to the bird,they felt a bit of pity but very .I think it’s worthwhile for to do such a thing.Here I call on the public to show for the nature.Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we get along well with it.
剖析:1.主语Li Hua and Wang Ping 为复数概念,谓语动词应用复数。
2.主从句时态应保持一致,用一般过去时。
3.pick sth.up为固定词组,意为“把……捡起来”。pick out意为“挑选,辨认出”,不符合语境。
4.此处表示推测,故应用might或could。
5.此处为动词不定式,to后应跟动词原形。
6.delightful令人高兴的,令人愉快的;delighted高兴的,愉快的。此处表示“高兴的,愉快的”,因此用delighted。
7.指代Li Hua 和Wang Ping应用them。
8.respect表示“尊敬,敬重”时为不可数名词,无复数形式。
9.nature表示“自然界”时,其前面无需加冠词。
10.当先行词为the way而从句中缺少状语时,关系词可以用in which、that或省略。所以需加in。
Passage 5
(2012吉林普通中学高中毕业班质检)
Rose wanted a job.She went to many offices and she didn’t like any of them.One day she saw a board in an office read:“This office needs a typist whom can type 200 words a minute.”Rose was exciting.When Rose went to the manager’s office,the man was writing something.Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised her head.“Do you need a typist?”asked Rose.“Yes!”he said.Rose clapped her hand.She couldn’t help saying,“OK!How much will you pay for me every month?”The manager thought for a while and said,“I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months.Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.”Rose smiled and answer,“Great!I will come and work here three months late.”The manager was speechless.
答案:Rose wanted a job.She went to many offices she didn’t like any of them.One day she saw a board in an office :“This office needs a typist can type 200 words a minute.”Rose was .When Rose went to the manager’s office,the man was writing something.Rose knocked at the door and the manager raised head.“Do you need a typist?”asked Rose.“Yes!”he said.Rose clapped her .She couldn’t help saying,“OK!How much will you pay for me every month?”The manager thought for a while and said,“I will pay you 77 dollars for first three months.Then I will pay you 30 dollars every month.”Rose smiled and ,“Great!I will come and work here three months .”The manager was speechless.
剖析:1.前后句之间为转折关系而非顺承关系。
2.read与a board之间为主动关系,故用动词-ing形式作宾补。
3.在定语从句中作主语用who,不用whom。
4.修饰人用excite的过去分词形式,表示“兴奋的”。exciting表示“令人兴奋的”,常修饰物。
5.由上文的the man可知此处应用his。
6.拍的是双手,应该用hand的复数形式。
7.pay sb.some money为固定表达,意为“付给某人多少钱”。
8.序数词前应该加定冠词the。
9.and所连接的两个并列动词的时态应保持一致。
10.three months later三个月以后。