《高考创新》二轮专题————短文改错6
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《高考创新》二轮专题————短文改错
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Passage 1
(2012西安高三第一次质检)
I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer.It was a good trip at the beginning and something unexpected happened half way.One of my friend suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn’t move any far.Nobody knew what to do it.One girl tried to call her mum in her mobile phone,but there was no signal in the mountain area.Lucky we had brought a tent with us.We put it up and let him rested in it.He took some medicine.Then he drink some water,and ate some food.After while,he felt much better and we walked on.We all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain.
答案:I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer.It was a good trip at the beginning something unexpected happened half way.One of my suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn’t move any .Nobody knew what to do it .One girl tried to call her mum her mobile phone,but there was no signal in the mountain area. we had brought a tent with us.We put it up and let him in it.He took some medicine.Then he some water,and ate some food.After while,he felt much better and we walked on.We all enjoyed on the top of the mountain.
剖析:1.前后句之间为转折关系而非顺承关系。
2.one of后跟可数名词的复数形式。
3.not...any farther/further为固定表达,意为“无法再远”。
4.do的宾语是what,故it多余。
5.call sb.on one’s mobile phone意为“给某人打手机”。
6.作状语修饰整个句子,应用副词形式。
7.let sb.do sth.为固定表达,意为“让某人做某事”。
8.and连接的前后动作的时态应保持一致,用一般过去时。
9.after a while为固定短语,意为“一会以后”。
10.enjoy oneself为固定搭配,意为“玩得高兴”。
Passage 16
(2011辽宁实验中学期末)
When Jack bowed to someone,he always did it much too quickly.They needn’t to wait any longer after he finished nodding his head.So he was blamed for no manner.Then a warm-hearted man teaches him,“When you bow to somebody next time,you can count the January,February,March,until December.Then you can lift your body.Thus,the ceremony will almost perfect.”The next day,he met his uncle,but he did as the man told him to.The bow was too long that it made his uncle escape soon with a surprising look.When Jack looked down,he found his uncle gone.So he asked a passer-by,“In which month did she go away?”
答案:When Jack bowed to someone,he always did it much too quickly.They needn’t to wait any longer after he finished nodding his head.So he was blamed for no .Then a warm-hearted man him,“When you bow to somebody next time,you can count the January,February,March,until December.Then you can lift your body.Thus,the ceremony will almost perfect.”The next day,he met his uncle, he did as the man told him to.The bow was long that it made his uncle escape soon with a look.When Jack looked ,he found his uncle gone.So he asked a passer-by,“In which month did go away?”
剖析:1.needn’t在此为情态动词,后面直接加动词wait,去掉to。
2.manners是“礼貌”的意思。manner“举止”。
3.全文都是过去时态,因此应用taught。
4.月份前不用冠词,去掉the。
5.perfect为形容词,因此will后要加be。
6.前后两句为顺承并列关系,因此用and。
7.构成so...that...“如此……以至于……”这一句型。
8.此处指惊讶的表情,因此要用surprised。
9.按照句意知当Jack抬起头时,发现他叔叔走了,因此用look up。
10.此处指代叔叔,要用he。
Passage 2
(2011河南郑州47中高三第三次月考)
It was dinner time.Mr.and Mrs.Smith were about to begin their dinner then they find that their son,Mike,wasn’t there yet.So Mrs.Smith asked her husband to go and find him.Mr.Smith went to Mike’s room and found Mike laying on his face on the floor,read a book.He was laughing!Mr.Smith told him to go for dinner,and he left quite unwilling.Wondering that what absorbed his son so much,Mr.Smith took a look at the book.Now Mrs.Smith and Mike were at the table,waiting Mr.Smith.She got quite patient and sent her son for his father.Mike went back to his room.To his great surprised,he saw his father lying on the floor,reading the same storybook of hers on the floor!
答案:It was dinner time.Mr.and Mrs.Smith were about to begin their dinner they that their son,Mike,wasn’t there yet.So Mrs.Smith asked her husband to go and find him.Mr.Smith went to Mike’s room and found Mike on his face on the floor, a book.He was laughing!Mr.Smith told him to go for dinner,and he left quite .Wondering that what absorbed his son so much,Mr.Smith took a look at the book.Now Mrs.Smith and Mike were at the table,waiting Mr.Smith.She got quite and sent her son for his father.Mike went back to his room.To his great ,he saw his father lying on the floor,reading the same storybook of on the floor!
剖析:1.be about to do...when...为固定结构,意为“正要做……这时……”。
2.整篇文章都是过去时态,因此应用found。
3.lie意为“撒谎;躺”,现在分词形式为lying;lay意为“放置;下蛋”,现在分词形式为laying。
4.reading a book为现在分词短语作伴随状语。
5.副词修饰动词left,因此应用unwillingly。
6.wonder后跟宾语从句且从句中又缺少主语,因此用what,that多余。
7.wait为不及物动词,要加介词for之后才能跟宾语。
8.由上下文可知史密斯夫人很不耐烦,因此应用impatient。
9.to one’s surprise“使某人吃惊的是”,为固定短语。to为介词,介词后跟名词,而surprised为形容词。
10.故事书是儿子的,为男性,因此用his而不用hers。of后跟名词性物主代词或名词所有格形式,因此应用his。
Passage 3
(2011宁夏银川一中模拟)
I’m eighteen years old and I live in small village in the Peak District,not far from Nottingham.I grow up in this village,so I know everyone here.That’s the problem-the problem is there’s nothing to do,and nobody of my age to do it with!At the moments I travel into Nottingham every day to the shop as I work.There’s a bus at 7:30 in the morning or the last bus back in the evening is at 5:30.From September,therefore,I’m going to stay in Nottingham by my aunt and uncle when my cousin joins in the Navy.I can use his room.I’m really looking forward to living in Nottingham.
答案:I’m eighteen years old and I live in small village in the Peak District,not far from Nottingham.I up in this village,so I know everyone here.That’s the problem-the problem is there’s nothing to do,and nobody of my age to do it with!At the I travel into Nottingham every day to the shop I work.There’s a bus at 7:30 in the morning the last bus back in the evening is at 5:30.From September,,I’m going to stay in Nottingham my aunt and uncle when my cousin joins in the Navy.I can use his room.I’m really looking forward to living in Nottingham.
剖析:1.live in a small village“生活在一个小村庄里”,应加不定冠词a。
2.我在村子里长大这个动作已完成,因此应用过去时。
3.根据上下文,可知此处表达的是:那不是问题,问题是无事可做。结合句意,在is后加not。
4.引导表语从句的that不能省略。
5.at the moment“现在,此时此刻”,为固定短语。
6.shop后为定语从句。shop在定语从句中作地点状语,因此应用where。
7.由句意知此处是并列关系,而不是选择关系,因此用and。
8.此处表句意的转折,要用however;而therefore是“因此,所以”的意思。
9.stay with sb.与某人住在一起。
10.join the Navy“加入海军,成为海军中的一员”。join in参加群众性的活动。
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Passage 1
(2012西安高三第一次质检)
I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer.It was a good trip at the beginning and something unexpected happened half way.One of my friend suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn’t move any far.Nobody knew what to do it.One girl tried to call her mum in her mobile phone,but there was no signal in the mountain area.Lucky we had brought a tent with us.We put it up and let him rested in it.He took some medicine.Then he drink some water,and ate some food.After while,he felt much better and we walked on.We all enjoyed us on the top of the mountain.
答案:I went hiking to a mountain with my friends last summer.It was a good trip at the beginning something unexpected happened half way.One of my suddenly felt a terrible pain in his stomach and he couldn’t move any .Nobody knew what to do it .One girl tried to call her mum her mobile phone,but there was no signal in the mountain area. we had brought a tent with us.We put it up and let him in it.He took some medicine.Then he some water,and ate some food.After while,he felt much better and we walked on.We all enjoyed on the top of the mountain.
剖析:1.前后句之间为转折关系而非顺承关系。
2.one of后跟可数名词的复数形式。
3.not...any farther/further为固定表达,意为“无法再远”。
4.do的宾语是what,故it多余。
5.call sb.on one’s mobile phone意为“给某人打手机”。
6.作状语修饰整个句子,应用副词形式。
7.let sb.do sth.为固定表达,意为“让某人做某事”。
8.and连接的前后动作的时态应保持一致,用一般过去时。
9.after a while为固定短语,意为“一会以后”。
10.enjoy oneself为固定搭配,意为“玩得高兴”。
Passage 16
(2011辽宁实验中学期末)
When Jack bowed to someone,he always did it much too quickly.They needn’t to wait any longer after he finished nodding his head.So he was blamed for no manner.Then a warm-hearted man teaches him,“When you bow to somebody next time,you can count the January,February,March,until December.Then you can lift your body.Thus,the ceremony will almost perfect.”The next day,he met his uncle,but he did as the man told him to.The bow was too long that it made his uncle escape soon with a surprising look.When Jack looked down,he found his uncle gone.So he asked a passer-by,“In which month did she go away?”
答案:When Jack bowed to someone,he always did it much too quickly.They needn’t to wait any longer after he finished nodding his head.So he was blamed for no .Then a warm-hearted man him,“When you bow to somebody next time,you can count the January,February,March,until December.Then you can lift your body.Thus,the ceremony will almost perfect.”The next day,he met his uncle, he did as the man told him to.The bow was long that it made his uncle escape soon with a look.When Jack looked ,he found his uncle gone.So he asked a passer-by,“In which month did go away?”
剖析:1.needn’t在此为情态动词,后面直接加动词wait,去掉to。
2.manners是“礼貌”的意思。manner“举止”。
3.全文都是过去时态,因此应用taught。
4.月份前不用冠词,去掉the。
5.perfect为形容词,因此will后要加be。
6.前后两句为顺承并列关系,因此用and。
7.构成so...that...“如此……以至于……”这一句型。
8.此处指惊讶的表情,因此要用surprised。
9.按照句意知当Jack抬起头时,发现他叔叔走了,因此用look up。
10.此处指代叔叔,要用he。
Passage 2
(2011河南郑州47中高三第三次月考)
It was dinner time.Mr.and Mrs.Smith were about to begin their dinner then they find that their son,Mike,wasn’t there yet.So Mrs.Smith asked her husband to go and find him.Mr.Smith went to Mike’s room and found Mike laying on his face on the floor,read a book.He was laughing!Mr.Smith told him to go for dinner,and he left quite unwilling.Wondering that what absorbed his son so much,Mr.Smith took a look at the book.Now Mrs.Smith and Mike were at the table,waiting Mr.Smith.She got quite patient and sent her son for his father.Mike went back to his room.To his great surprised,he saw his father lying on the floor,reading the same storybook of hers on the floor!
答案:It was dinner time.Mr.and Mrs.Smith were about to begin their dinner they that their son,Mike,wasn’t there yet.So Mrs.Smith asked her husband to go and find him.Mr.Smith went to Mike’s room and found Mike on his face on the floor, a book.He was laughing!Mr.Smith told him to go for dinner,and he left quite .Wondering that what absorbed his son so much,Mr.Smith took a look at the book.Now Mrs.Smith and Mike were at the table,waiting Mr.Smith.She got quite and sent her son for his father.Mike went back to his room.To his great ,he saw his father lying on the floor,reading the same storybook of on the floor!
剖析:1.be about to do...when...为固定结构,意为“正要做……这时……”。
2.整篇文章都是过去时态,因此应用found。
3.lie意为“撒谎;躺”,现在分词形式为lying;lay意为“放置;下蛋”,现在分词形式为laying。
4.reading a book为现在分词短语作伴随状语。
5.副词修饰动词left,因此应用unwillingly。
6.wonder后跟宾语从句且从句中又缺少主语,因此用what,that多余。
7.wait为不及物动词,要加介词for之后才能跟宾语。
8.由上下文可知史密斯夫人很不耐烦,因此应用impatient。
9.to one’s surprise“使某人吃惊的是”,为固定短语。to为介词,介词后跟名词,而surprised为形容词。
10.故事书是儿子的,为男性,因此用his而不用hers。of后跟名词性物主代词或名词所有格形式,因此应用his。
Passage 3
(2011宁夏银川一中模拟)
I’m eighteen years old and I live in small village in the Peak District,not far from Nottingham.I grow up in this village,so I know everyone here.That’s the problem-the problem is there’s nothing to do,and nobody of my age to do it with!At the moments I travel into Nottingham every day to the shop as I work.There’s a bus at 7:30 in the morning or the last bus back in the evening is at 5:30.From September,therefore,I’m going to stay in Nottingham by my aunt and uncle when my cousin joins in the Navy.I can use his room.I’m really looking forward to living in Nottingham.
答案:I’m eighteen years old and I live in small village in the Peak District,not far from Nottingham.I up in this village,so I know everyone here.That’s the problem-the problem is there’s nothing to do,and nobody of my age to do it with!At the I travel into Nottingham every day to the shop I work.There’s a bus at 7:30 in the morning the last bus back in the evening is at 5:30.From September,,I’m going to stay in Nottingham my aunt and uncle when my cousin joins in the Navy.I can use his room.I’m really looking forward to living in Nottingham.
剖析:1.live in a small village“生活在一个小村庄里”,应加不定冠词a。
2.我在村子里长大这个动作已完成,因此应用过去时。
3.根据上下文,可知此处表达的是:那不是问题,问题是无事可做。结合句意,在is后加not。
4.引导表语从句的that不能省略。
5.at the moment“现在,此时此刻”,为固定短语。
6.shop后为定语从句。shop在定语从句中作地点状语,因此应用where。
7.由句意知此处是并列关系,而不是选择关系,因此用and。
8.此处表句意的转折,要用however;而therefore是“因此,所以”的意思。
9.stay with sb.与某人住在一起。
10.join the Navy“加入海军,成为海军中的一员”。join in参加群众性的活动。