牛津版（深圳 广州）初中英语八年级上册期中复习（题型专练）：书面表达
一、书面表达
1．越来越多的新发明给我们的生活带来了很多便利。请以 "The most important invention to me" 为题，写一篇短文介绍对你来说最重要的发明。
内容:
1）这项发明的名称；
2）介绍这项发明；
3）你使用这项发明做什么。
要求:
1）词数80字左右；
2）短文条理清晰，语言顺畅；可适当增加内容。
参考词汇: function; convenient
2．下面内容是从《百科全书》上摘取的关于巴尔扎克(Balzac）的介绍。请你根据提示，用英语写一篇文敢介绍巴尔扎克。要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。
1.一位著名的作家，创作了很多著名的作品，被誉为现代小说之父: 2.1799年出生于法国:1816年进入法律学校学习；毕业后开始写作; 3.1834年，完成对《高老头》(Old Goriot）的创作，这也是巴尔扎克最优秀的作品之一: 4.他的创作才能来源于他的生活经历。
3．请以“The most useful invention to me”为题根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示:1）What is the most useful invention to you
in your daily life
2）What do you use it for and how often do you use it
3）How do you feel if you can't use it in your life
The
most useful invention to me
Inventions change the world and our way of life.
They help us live a better life.
I think it makes our life better and
better.
4．现在有许多新的购物方式，网上购物是其中的一种。越来越多的人熟悉和喜欢网购，但是网购利有弊。请根据下面提供的信息，以“Online shopping”为题写—篇短文，描述网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。
优点：1）可以在任何时间购物；2）只需要一台电脑和鼠标；3）方便比较同类产品的价格，可以省钱；4）无论何时何地都可以收到所购物品……
缺点：1）网上付款有时不安全；2）看不到实物，也不能试穿衣服……
注意：1）不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和
姓名；2）语句连贯，表达准确，词数80~100。
Online shopping
There are many new ways of shopping, and
online shopping is one of them. One day no one will go to the shops any more,
because you'll be able to buy almost everything on the Internet.
5．根据提示记录大象的信息，以"The
elephant"为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
提示：1）大象是现在陆地上最大的动物; 2）出生时重约90公斤，高达1米; 12岁时，3米多高; 3）通常是灰色，有长长的鼻子，嘴的两侧分别有一颗大大的象牙; 4）性情温和，人们常常让它来运送重物，做许多事。
参考词汇：large; kilogram; trunk(象鼻）;
tusk(象牙）;
gentle（温和的）; on land; be known As.... use....to..…
The elephant
The elephant is the largest animal on land today.
It is also a tool for people to do many things.
答案解析部分
1．【答案】 There are many important Inventions in the world such as computers, televisions, radios, modern vehicles and so on. For me, the most important one is the mobile phone.
We could be found wherever we are as long as we take the mobile phone with us. The mobile phones make it convenient for us to get in touch with each other. What's more, it has more and more functions. We can use the mobile phone to do many things, such as listening to music, watching videos and taking photos. We can also use the mobile phone to search for information and paying money for something we buy online.
How convenient it is!
As for me. I usually use my mobile phone to contact my friends and relatives. Besides, when I read English newspapers or magazines, I often use the mobile phone to look up the new words online. When I feel tired or stressed. I listen to music on the mobile phone to relax myself. In one word, it's the most important invention to me.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提示性文章，要求以"The most important invention to me"为题写一篇英语短文。这篇短文主要介绍对你来说最重要的发明，第一段介绍这项发明的名称，第二段介绍这项发明，第三段介绍你使用这项发明做什么。
【点评】写作时，作文内容全面 ，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，例如：such as，the most important，make it convenient for sb，use ...to do ...，search for information，pay money for，look up the new words，feel stressed等等，注意段落层次，符合英语思维逻辑，同时要使用好时态，以及一些衔接词,如such as，what's more，besides，in one word，等，文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。
2．【答案】 Balzac is a famous writer full of great intelligence and he has created many famous works. People call him "Father of modern novel". He was born in 1799 in France. At first, he entered the law school to study in 1816, but when he graduated, he started writing. He loved writing very much at that time and he also worked hard to make it a big success. In 1834, he finished writing the book Old Goriot. It's one of the most famous works of Balzac.
His writing ability comes from his life experience. He is really a great writer.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。按照所给的提示内容来介绍 巴尔扎克 生平和代表作。根据材料内容可知本文以一般过去时为主，且有部分的一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称单数。注意主谓一致和连词的使用。写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑，符合英语表达习惯。
【点评】这篇文章根据所给内容的提示将四个方面逐一进行了陈述，内容符合题意，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如be full of , be born, at that time, work hard , come from.等以及句型结构，如 People call him "Father of modern novel". It's one of the most famous works of Balzac.His writing ability comes from his life experience. 等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
3．【答案】The most useful
invention to me
Inventions change the world and our way of
life. They help us live a better life. Of all the inventions, I think the mobile
phone is the most useful Invention.
The mobile phone has many functions. We can
make phone calls to our family or friends anytime and anywhere. We can surf the
Internet, listen to pop songs and watch films on it. What's more, we can use it
to take photos.
I almost use it every day. It's really
convenient. Without it, I feel uncomfortable.
I think it makes our life better and
better.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提示性作文，要求写一下你认为最有用的发明，在写作时，首先要告诉读者在日程生活中你认为最重要的发明是什么。你用这种东西平常都做什么，多长时间使用一次，最后写如果没有了这种东西，你的感受是什么。人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时。
【点评】文章并没有直接告诉我们他认为最重要的发明是什么，而是叙述了发明的重要性，然后点明了今天要介绍的东西——手机。介绍了平时用手机做什么，都是什么时候使用它的，同时写了没有手机时的感受。结构完整，从语言角度考虑，首先使用了一定数量的短语，比如：help sb. do sth.；of ass；make phone calls；surf the Internet；what's more；better and better等等。从句子上看，有简单句，并列句和复合句， I think the mobile phone is the most useful Invention. 这是一个宾语从句， We can surf the Internet, listen to pop songs and watch films on it. 这是一个并列句， Of all the inventions, I think the mobile phone is the most useful Invention. 这是一个包含了形容词最高级的句子。总体考虑，这是一篇不错的习作。
4．【答案】Online shopping
There are many new ways of shopping, and
online shopping is one of them.
Online shopping has several advantages.
First, you can shop at any time. Second, you only need a computer and a mouse
to shop on the Internet
Third, you can compare the prices of the same
product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any
time!
But
shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet
isn't always safe. You can't see the product or try the clothes on.
I think our life is changing because of
online shopping.
One day no one will go to the shops any more,
because you'll be able to buy almost everything on the Internet.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本题要求以Online shopping为题写一篇短文，描述网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。根据要求及要点提示，短文可以从“网购的优点”、“网购的缺点”、“自己的看法”三个方面进行写作。短文提示要点较多，要注意表达的条理性。短文用一般现在时态，写作时要注意语句连贯，表达准确。
【点评】这是一篇很好的短文，从新购物方式着笔，引出“网购”。过渡自然。第二段讲述网购的优点及其缺点、最后谈论自己的看法。层次清楚，条理分明。第二段里用first, second, third等等罗列各要点，清楚明了；还运用了两个动名词短语作主语，shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet isn't always safe. 语言简捷、精炼。最后一段One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you'll be able to buy almost everything on the Internet.用展望未来的方式表达自己的看法，方式新颖独特。
5．【答案】The elephant
The elephant is the largest animal on land
today. It weighs about ninety kilograms and is about one metre tall at birth.
When it is 12 years old, it is over three metres tall.
The elephant is usually grey. It has a long
trunk and a large tusk on each side of its mouth.
The elephant is known as a kind of gentle
animal. People often use the elephant to carry heavy things. It is also a tool
for people to do many things.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲类命题作文。主要以第三人称和一般现在时从大象是现在陆地上最大的动物；出生时重约90公斤，高达1米; 12岁时，3米多高；通常是灰色，有长长的鼻子，嘴的两侧分别有一颗大大的象牙；性情温和，人们常常让它来运送重物，做许多事。来介绍大象。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。
【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。on land陆地上；at birth 出生；be known as 以......闻名。The elephant is the largest animal on land today. （形容词最高级）People often use the elephant to carry heavy things. （固定搭配）It is also a tool for people to do many things.（不定式短语作主语） 还运用了but , also， 等使上下文衔接的更好。
1 / 1牛津版（深圳 广州）初中英语八年级上册期中复习（题型专练）：书面表达
一、书面表达
1．越来越多的新发明给我们的生活带来了很多便利。请以 "The most important invention to me" 为题，写一篇短文介绍对你来说最重要的发明。
内容:
1）这项发明的名称；
2）介绍这项发明；
3）你使用这项发明做什么。
要求:
1）词数80字左右；
2）短文条理清晰，语言顺畅；可适当增加内容。
参考词汇: function; convenient
【答案】 There are many important Inventions in the world such as computers, televisions, radios, modern vehicles and so on. For me, the most important one is the mobile phone.
We could be found wherever we are as long as we take the mobile phone with us. The mobile phones make it convenient for us to get in touch with each other. What's more, it has more and more functions. We can use the mobile phone to do many things, such as listening to music, watching videos and taking photos. We can also use the mobile phone to search for information and paying money for something we buy online.
How convenient it is!
As for me. I usually use my mobile phone to contact my friends and relatives. Besides, when I read English newspapers or magazines, I often use the mobile phone to look up the new words online. When I feel tired or stressed. I listen to music on the mobile phone to relax myself. In one word, it's the most important invention to me.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提示性文章，要求以"The most important invention to me"为题写一篇英语短文。这篇短文主要介绍对你来说最重要的发明，第一段介绍这项发明的名称，第二段介绍这项发明，第三段介绍你使用这项发明做什么。
【点评】写作时，作文内容全面 ，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，例如：such as，the most important，make it convenient for sb，use ...to do ...，search for information，pay money for，look up the new words，feel stressed等等，注意段落层次，符合英语思维逻辑，同时要使用好时态，以及一些衔接词,如such as，what's more，besides，in one word，等，文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。
2．下面内容是从《百科全书》上摘取的关于巴尔扎克(Balzac）的介绍。请你根据提示，用英语写一篇文敢介绍巴尔扎克。要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。
1.一位著名的作家，创作了很多著名的作品，被誉为现代小说之父: 2.1799年出生于法国:1816年进入法律学校学习；毕业后开始写作; 3.1834年，完成对《高老头》(Old Goriot）的创作，这也是巴尔扎克最优秀的作品之一: 4.他的创作才能来源于他的生活经历。
【答案】 Balzac is a famous writer full of great intelligence and he has created many famous works. People call him "Father of modern novel". He was born in 1799 in France. At first, he entered the law school to study in 1816, but when he graduated, he started writing. He loved writing very much at that time and he also worked hard to make it a big success. In 1834, he finished writing the book Old Goriot. It's one of the most famous works of Balzac.
His writing ability comes from his life experience. He is really a great writer.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文。按照所给的提示内容来介绍 巴尔扎克 生平和代表作。根据材料内容可知本文以一般过去时为主，且有部分的一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称单数。注意主谓一致和连词的使用。写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑，符合英语表达习惯。
【点评】这篇文章根据所给内容的提示将四个方面逐一进行了陈述，内容符合题意，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如be full of , be born, at that time, work hard , come from.等以及句型结构，如 People call him "Father of modern novel". It's one of the most famous works of Balzac.His writing ability comes from his life experience. 等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
3．请以“The most useful invention to me”为题根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示:1）What is the most useful invention to you
in your daily life
2）What do you use it for and how often do you use it
3）How do you feel if you can't use it in your life
The
most useful invention to me
Inventions change the world and our way of life.
They help us live a better life.
I think it makes our life better and
better.
【答案】The most useful
invention to me
Inventions change the world and our way of
life. They help us live a better life. Of all the inventions, I think the mobile
phone is the most useful Invention.
The mobile phone has many functions. We can
make phone calls to our family or friends anytime and anywhere. We can surf the
Internet, listen to pop songs and watch films on it. What's more, we can use it
to take photos.
I almost use it every day. It's really
convenient. Without it, I feel uncomfortable.
I think it makes our life better and
better.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提示性作文，要求写一下你认为最有用的发明，在写作时，首先要告诉读者在日程生活中你认为最重要的发明是什么。你用这种东西平常都做什么，多长时间使用一次，最后写如果没有了这种东西，你的感受是什么。人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时。
【点评】文章并没有直接告诉我们他认为最重要的发明是什么，而是叙述了发明的重要性，然后点明了今天要介绍的东西——手机。介绍了平时用手机做什么，都是什么时候使用它的，同时写了没有手机时的感受。结构完整，从语言角度考虑，首先使用了一定数量的短语，比如：help sb. do sth.；of ass；make phone calls；surf the Internet；what's more；better and better等等。从句子上看，有简单句，并列句和复合句， I think the mobile phone is the most useful Invention. 这是一个宾语从句， We can surf the Internet, listen to pop songs and watch films on it. 这是一个并列句， Of all the inventions, I think the mobile phone is the most useful Invention. 这是一个包含了形容词最高级的句子。总体考虑，这是一篇不错的习作。
4．现在有许多新的购物方式，网上购物是其中的一种。越来越多的人熟悉和喜欢网购，但是网购利有弊。请根据下面提供的信息，以“Online shopping”为题写—篇短文，描述网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。
优点：1）可以在任何时间购物；2）只需要一台电脑和鼠标；3）方便比较同类产品的价格，可以省钱；4）无论何时何地都可以收到所购物品……
缺点：1）网上付款有时不安全；2）看不到实物，也不能试穿衣服……
注意：1）不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和
姓名；2）语句连贯，表达准确，词数80~100。
Online shopping
There are many new ways of shopping, and
online shopping is one of them. One day no one will go to the shops any more,
because you'll be able to buy almost everything on the Internet.
【答案】Online shopping
There are many new ways of shopping, and
online shopping is one of them.
Online shopping has several advantages.
First, you can shop at any time. Second, you only need a computer and a mouse
to shop on the Internet
Third, you can compare the prices of the same
product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any
time!
But
shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet
isn't always safe. You can't see the product or try the clothes on.
I think our life is changing because of
online shopping.
One day no one will go to the shops any more,
because you'll be able to buy almost everything on the Internet.
【知识点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本题要求以Online shopping为题写一篇短文，描述网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。根据要求及要点提示，短文可以从“网购的优点”、“网购的缺点”、“自己的看法”三个方面进行写作。短文提示要点较多，要注意表达的条理性。短文用一般现在时态，写作时要注意语句连贯，表达准确。
【点评】这是一篇很好的短文，从新购物方式着笔，引出“网购”。过渡自然。第二段讲述网购的优点及其缺点、最后谈论自己的看法。层次清楚，条理分明。第二段里用first, second, third等等罗列各要点，清楚明了；还运用了两个动名词短语作主语，shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet isn't always safe. 语言简捷、精炼。最后一段One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you'll be able to buy almost everything on the Internet.用展望未来的方式表达自己的看法，方式新颖独特。
5．根据提示记录大象的信息，以"The
elephant"为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
提示：1）大象是现在陆地上最大的动物; 2）出生时重约90公斤，高达1米; 12岁时，3米多高; 3）通常是灰色，有长长的鼻子，嘴的两侧分别有一颗大大的象牙; 4）性情温和，人们常常让它来运送重物，做许多事。
参考词汇：large; kilogram; trunk(象鼻）;
tusk(象牙）;
gentle（温和的）; on land; be known As.... use....to..…
The elephant
The elephant is the largest animal on land today.
It is also a tool for people to do many things.
【答案】The elephant
The elephant is the largest animal on land
today. It weighs about ninety kilograms and is about one metre tall at birth.
When it is 12 years old, it is over three metres tall.
The elephant is usually grey. It has a long
trunk and a large tusk on each side of its mouth.
The elephant is known as a kind of gentle
animal. People often use the elephant to carry heavy things. It is also a tool
for people to do many things.
【知识点】命题作文；提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲类命题作文。主要以第三人称和一般现在时从大象是现在陆地上最大的动物；出生时重约90公斤，高达1米; 12岁时，3米多高；通常是灰色，有长长的鼻子，嘴的两侧分别有一颗大大的象牙；性情温和，人们常常让它来运送重物，做许多事。来介绍大象。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。
【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。on land陆地上；at birth 出生；be known as 以......闻名。The elephant is the largest animal on land today. （形容词最高级）People often use the elephant to carry heavy things. （固定搭配）It is also a tool for people to do many things.（不定式短语作主语） 还运用了but , also， 等使上下文衔接的更好。
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