2015届高考英语二轮复习精品资料强化练习系列：短文改错、书面表达（二）
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2015届高考英语二轮复习精品资料强化练习系列：短文改错、书面表达（二）
(限时45分钟/每组)
（一）
第一节: 短文改错
（1）
Dear Li Lei,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble in dealing with the new college life. Here I would like to give you some advices. First of all, 1. _______
you should spare effort to work hard at all your 2. _______
lessons and develop different abilities. Only on this 3. _______
way are you likely t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o get ideal job for a better future. 4. _______
Secondly, communication skills were also required if 5. _______
you wants to get along well with your friends on 6. _______
college campus. Last but not least, live independently 7. _______
is of great importance to you, what means you should 8. _______
learn to face all cha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )llenges by yourself, and this will surely benefit from you a lot when you step into 9. _______
society. I’ll be glad ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) if you find my advice practically. 10. _______
Yours,
××
（2）
You said in your letter that you are always trying 1. _______
to improve your English, and your English teacher 2. _______
didn’t appear ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) to appreciate your efforts. So you felt disappointing and lost the desire to learn 3. _______
English. You know why teachers are busy and maybe 4. _______
your teacher is str ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )uggling to provide personal attention with all the students
5. _______
in their class. I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n my opinion, it is a fact of life that 6. _______
sometimes people’ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s hard work went unnoticed. Though it is nice to receive
7. _______
encouragement and supp ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ort, parts of growing up is learning to be 8. _______
motivated and study independent. So keep on working 9. _______
hard at your ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )English because you stop, you are sure to fail. 10. _______
第二节: 书面表达
当前，“酒后驾车”成了人们热议的话题。请你根据以下提示对“酒后驾车”谈谈个人看法：
1．“酒后驾车”的危害, 如引发交通事故，造成交通阻塞，构成生命威胁，造成财产损失等。
2．你的建议。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, drunk driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it. 21世纪教育网版权所有
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________21cnjy.com
（二）
第一节: 短文改错
（1）
Dear Editor,
Recently, my classmates have had a heated discussion about that2·1·c·n·j·y
1. _______
we should have optional courses in high schools. Some students were 21*cnjy*com
2. _______
in favor of the opt ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ional courses. They say interest is the best teacher 【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
3. _______
and our spare time ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )will be colorful and meaningful. Students 4. _______
can not only enla ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rge their knowledges but also improve their abilities. 21*cnjy*com
5. _______
However, others are ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )against the idea, said that optional courses 6. _______
will take up too m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )uch time as well as energy. In addition to, some optional
7. _______
courses have someth ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ing to do with the College Entrance Examination. They
8. _______
are afraid they ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )’ll fall behind their classmates if they will take the optional21教育网
9. _______
courses. I’d like t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o take one or two of the optional courses, which, I think, will certain benefit me a lot. 10. _______
Yours,
××
（2）
Wu Yongqing, 91, lived in a rented cottage in Chongqing. 1. _______
She moved there after ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) her husband died in 1971．The old woman, who has children， 2. _______
can get more t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )han 500 yuan a month from the government．Her cottage is small but simple．Her only comforts 3. _______
are a breaking sofa and an electric fan, which 4. _______
were both founded on the street．She is 5. _______
good for cleaning and she can cook 6. _______
every day．She belie ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ves that she is old but not uselessly and she 7. _______
can take better care of himself than any nurse．She often walks in 8. _______
the park near every ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) morning and talks to the other people there．She can get on well with her neighbor. 9. _______
She likes this kind of a life. 10. _______
第二节: 书面表达
假如你叫李平，是一位成绩优秀的学生，你的 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )班主任在安排座位时，让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生同桌，这在你们班成绩优秀的学生中引起了反响，班会上大家就此进行了讨论。现在请你把讨论结果写一封信向班主任反映一下，并说出自己的观点。
赞成 反对 你的看法
1．人人有长处和不足，成绩差的学生也有可取之处；2．相互学习，建立友谊；3．通过帮助学习差的学生学习，从而使他们建立自信。 1．部分学习差的学生常常违反校规校纪，担心自己会受影响，养成坏习惯；2．老是问问题，使自己不能专心学习。
注意：1．词数：100左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2．短文需包括表中所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
3．参考词汇：成绩差的学生：a slower student
长处：strengths
Dear Mr. Zhang,
We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student. ________________________________________【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【版权所有：21教育】
Yours,
Li Ping
答案解析
（一）
第一节
（1）1.【解析】advices→advice advice为不可数名词，无复数形式。
2.【解析】spare后加no spare no effort to do sth. “不遗余力干某事”。
3.【解析】on→in 介词使用错误。in this way意为“用这种方法”。
4.【解析】get后加an 冠词使用错误。“an ideal job”, 一份理想的工作。
5.【解析】were→are 时态错误。通篇用的是一般现在时。
6.【解析】wants→want 主谓一致错误。从句主语为you, 因此用want。
7.【解析】live→living 非谓语动词错误。此处应该用living，动名词作主语。
8.【解析】what→which 连接手段的错误。此处应是which引导的非限制性定语从句。
9.【解析】去掉from 介词多余。benefit sth. /sb. “使……受益”。
10.【解析】practically ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )→practical 形容词/副词用法错误。此处用practical为形容词作宾补。（2）1.【解析】are→were 主句谓语动词为过去时，宾语从句也应用相应的过去时。
2.【解析】and→but 连接手段的错误。此处用but表转折。
3.【解析】disappointing→disappointed feel disappointed“感到失望”。
4.【解析】去掉why 或者 why→that 此处应为that引导的宾语从句。that可以省略。
5.【解析】with→for provide sth. for sb. 为固定搭配。
6.【解析】their→your 代词错误。
7.【解析】went→goes 时态错误。此句应为一般现在时。
8.【解析】parts→part 从其后的is learning 可知。
9.【解析】independent→independently 形容词/副词用法错误。此处修饰动词study要用副词。21·世纪*教育网
10.【解析】because后加if 意为“如果你停止的话”。
第二节
【参考范文】
Nowadays, drunk dri ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it. www-2-1-cnjy-com
As is known to us all, drunk driving is a sort of terrible behavior that will threaten the safety of people, including the driver himself. Many of the traffic accidents caused by drunk driving have brought about traffic jams, injuries and even deaths. Besides, a great deal of money has to be spent treating the injured and repairing the broken cars, which means a waste of money.
I strongly suggest e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ffective measures be taken before things get worse. Laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drunk driving. Meanwhile, the public, especially drivers, should be more aware of public safety. I hope by doing so, drunk driving can be a thing of the past. 2-1-c-n-j-y
（二）
第一节
（1）1.【解析】that→whether 连接词的错误。此处应用whether“是否”来引导宾语从句。
2.【解析】were→are 时态错误。应用一般现在时。
3. √
4.【解析】our→their 人称错误。根据主语they可知此处应用their。
5.【解析】knowledges→knowledge knowledge为不可数名词。
6.【解析】said→saying 此处应用saying作伴随状语。
7.【解析】去掉 to in addition “另外”。
8.【解析】something→nothing have nothing to do with. . . “和……毫无关系”。
9.【解析】去掉will 条件状语从句要用一般现在时表将来。
10.【解析】certain→certainly 形容词/副词用法错误。此处修饰动词benefit要用副词。
（2）1.【解析】lived→lives 此处意为“她现在住在……”，所以应用一般现在时。
2.【解析】has后面加no 从下文可知她没有孩子。
3.【解析】but→and 此处应为并列关系，而非转折关系。
4.【解析】breaking→broken 一张破沙发。broken为过去分词作定语。21世纪教育网
5.【解析】founded→found founded意为“建立”，不合句意。
6.【解析】for→at be good at固定搭配，意为“擅长”。
7.【解析】uselessly→useless 此处应为形容词作表语。
8.【解析】himself→herself 人称指代错误。
9.【解析】neighbor→neighbors 此处应用复数形式。
10.【解析】去掉a life作“生活”讲时为不可数名词，因此不用冠词。
第二节
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Zhang,
We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student. 21·cn·jy·com
Some are for the idea. As they know, everyone has strengths as well as weaknesses. Although slower students are not good at lessons, they might do well in other fields like sports or arts. Therefore, they can learn from each other and they may develop a friendship. In addition, top students can help slower ones gain self-confidence by helping them with their lessons, which benefits them all. www.21-cn-jy.com
However, others d ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )on’t hold the same view. They think some slower students are always making trouble, such as keeping talking in class, breaking school rules, which may lead them to form the bad habits. Besides, slower students often ask top students questions, which has a bad effect on their studies. 【出处：21教育名师】
In my opinion, I’d ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) like to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other and make progress together. 21教育名师原创作品
Yours,
Li Ping
(限时45分钟/每组)
（一）
第一节: 短文改错
（1）
Dear Li Lei,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble in dealing with the new college life. Here I would like to give you some advices. First of all, 1. _______
you should spare effort to work hard at all your 2. _______
lessons and develop different abilities. Only on this 3. _______
way are you likely t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o get ideal job for a better future. 4. _______
Secondly, communication skills were also required if 5. _______
you wants to get along well with your friends on 6. _______
college campus. Last but not least, live independently 7. _______
is of great importance to you, what means you should 8. _______
learn to face all cha ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )llenges by yourself, and this will surely benefit from you a lot when you step into 9. _______
society. I’ll be glad ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) if you find my advice practically. 10. _______
Yours,
××
（2）
You said in your letter that you are always trying 1. _______
to improve your English, and your English teacher 2. _______
didn’t appear ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) to appreciate your efforts. So you felt disappointing and lost the desire to learn 3. _______
English. You know why teachers are busy and maybe 4. _______
your teacher is str ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )uggling to provide personal attention with all the students
5. _______
in their class. I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n my opinion, it is a fact of life that 6. _______
sometimes people’ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s hard work went unnoticed. Though it is nice to receive
7. _______
encouragement and supp ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ort, parts of growing up is learning to be 8. _______
motivated and study independent. So keep on working 9. _______
hard at your ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )English because you stop, you are sure to fail. 10. _______
第二节: 书面表达
当前，“酒后驾车”成了人们热议的话题。请你根据以下提示对“酒后驾车”谈谈个人看法：
1．“酒后驾车”的危害, 如引发交通事故，造成交通阻塞，构成生命威胁，造成财产损失等。
2．你的建议。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, drunk driving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it. 21世纪教育网版权所有
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________21cnjy.com
（二）
第一节: 短文改错
（1）
Dear Editor,
Recently, my classmates have had a heated discussion about that2·1·c·n·j·y
1. _______
we should have optional courses in high schools. Some students were 21*cnjy*com
2. _______
in favor of the opt ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ional courses. They say interest is the best teacher 【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
3. _______
and our spare time ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )will be colorful and meaningful. Students 4. _______
can not only enla ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rge their knowledges but also improve their abilities. 21*cnjy*com
5. _______
However, others are ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )against the idea, said that optional courses 6. _______
will take up too m ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )uch time as well as energy. In addition to, some optional
7. _______
courses have someth ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ing to do with the College Entrance Examination. They
8. _______
are afraid they ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )’ll fall behind their classmates if they will take the optional21教育网
9. _______
courses. I’d like t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o take one or two of the optional courses, which, I think, will certain benefit me a lot. 10. _______
Yours,
××
（2）
Wu Yongqing, 91, lived in a rented cottage in Chongqing. 1. _______
She moved there after ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) her husband died in 1971．The old woman, who has children， 2. _______
can get more t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )han 500 yuan a month from the government．Her cottage is small but simple．Her only comforts 3. _______
are a breaking sofa and an electric fan, which 4. _______
were both founded on the street．She is 5. _______
good for cleaning and she can cook 6. _______
every day．She belie ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ves that she is old but not uselessly and she 7. _______
can take better care of himself than any nurse．She often walks in 8. _______
the park near every ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) morning and talks to the other people there．She can get on well with her neighbor. 9. _______
She likes this kind of a life. 10. _______
第二节: 书面表达
假如你叫李平，是一位成绩优秀的学生，你的 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )班主任在安排座位时，让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生同桌，这在你们班成绩优秀的学生中引起了反响，班会上大家就此进行了讨论。现在请你把讨论结果写一封信向班主任反映一下，并说出自己的观点。
赞成 反对 你的看法
1．人人有长处和不足，成绩差的学生也有可取之处；2．相互学习，建立友谊；3．通过帮助学习差的学生学习，从而使他们建立自信。 1．部分学习差的学生常常违反校规校纪，担心自己会受影响，养成坏习惯；2．老是问问题，使自己不能专心学习。
注意：1．词数：100左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2．短文需包括表中所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
3．参考词汇：成绩差的学生：a slower student
长处：strengths
Dear Mr. Zhang,
We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student. ________________________________________【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【版权所有：21教育】
Yours,
Li Ping
答案解析
（一）
第一节
（1）1.【解析】advices→advice advice为不可数名词，无复数形式。
2.【解析】spare后加no spare no effort to do sth. “不遗余力干某事”。
3.【解析】on→in 介词使用错误。in this way意为“用这种方法”。
4.【解析】get后加an 冠词使用错误。“an ideal job”, 一份理想的工作。
5.【解析】were→are 时态错误。通篇用的是一般现在时。
6.【解析】wants→want 主谓一致错误。从句主语为you, 因此用want。
7.【解析】live→living 非谓语动词错误。此处应该用living，动名词作主语。
8.【解析】what→which 连接手段的错误。此处应是which引导的非限制性定语从句。
9.【解析】去掉from 介词多余。benefit sth. /sb. “使……受益”。
10.【解析】practically ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )→practical 形容词/副词用法错误。此处用practical为形容词作宾补。（2）1.【解析】are→were 主句谓语动词为过去时，宾语从句也应用相应的过去时。
2.【解析】and→but 连接手段的错误。此处用but表转折。
3.【解析】disappointing→disappointed feel disappointed“感到失望”。
4.【解析】去掉why 或者 why→that 此处应为that引导的宾语从句。that可以省略。
5.【解析】with→for provide sth. for sb. 为固定搭配。
6.【解析】their→your 代词错误。
7.【解析】went→goes 时态错误。此句应为一般现在时。
8.【解析】parts→part 从其后的is learning 可知。
9.【解析】independent→independently 形容词/副词用法错误。此处修饰动词study要用副词。21·世纪*教育网
10.【解析】because后加if 意为“如果你停止的话”。
第二节
【参考范文】
Nowadays, drunk dri ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ving is becoming a heated topic among people in China. Here, I’d like to air my views about it. www-2-1-cnjy-com
As is known to us all, drunk driving is a sort of terrible behavior that will threaten the safety of people, including the driver himself. Many of the traffic accidents caused by drunk driving have brought about traffic jams, injuries and even deaths. Besides, a great deal of money has to be spent treating the injured and repairing the broken cars, which means a waste of money.
I strongly suggest e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ffective measures be taken before things get worse. Laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drunk driving. Meanwhile, the public, especially drivers, should be more aware of public safety. I hope by doing so, drunk driving can be a thing of the past. 2-1-c-n-j-y
（二）
第一节
（1）1.【解析】that→whether 连接词的错误。此处应用whether“是否”来引导宾语从句。
2.【解析】were→are 时态错误。应用一般现在时。
3. √
4.【解析】our→their 人称错误。根据主语they可知此处应用their。
5.【解析】knowledges→knowledge knowledge为不可数名词。
6.【解析】said→saying 此处应用saying作伴随状语。
7.【解析】去掉 to in addition “另外”。
8.【解析】something→nothing have nothing to do with. . . “和……毫无关系”。
9.【解析】去掉will 条件状语从句要用一般现在时表将来。
10.【解析】certain→certainly 形容词/副词用法错误。此处修饰动词benefit要用副词。
（2）1.【解析】lived→lives 此处意为“她现在住在……”，所以应用一般现在时。
2.【解析】has后面加no 从下文可知她没有孩子。
3.【解析】but→and 此处应为并列关系，而非转折关系。
4.【解析】breaking→broken 一张破沙发。broken为过去分词作定语。21世纪教育网
5.【解析】founded→found founded意为“建立”，不合句意。
6.【解析】for→at be good at固定搭配，意为“擅长”。
7.【解析】uselessly→useless 此处应为形容词作表语。
8.【解析】himself→herself 人称指代错误。
9.【解析】neighbor→neighbors 此处应用复数形式。
10.【解析】去掉a life作“生活”讲时为不可数名词，因此不用冠词。
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Dear Mr. Zhang,
We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student. 21·cn·jy·com
Some are for the idea. As they know, everyone has strengths as well as weaknesses. Although slower students are not good at lessons, they might do well in other fields like sports or arts. Therefore, they can learn from each other and they may develop a friendship. In addition, top students can help slower ones gain self-confidence by helping them with their lessons, which benefits them all. www.21-cn-jy.com
However, others d ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )on’t hold the same view. They think some slower students are always making trouble, such as keeping talking in class, breaking school rules, which may lead them to form the bad habits. Besides, slower students often ask top students questions, which has a bad effect on their studies. 【出处：21教育名师】
In my opinion, I’d ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) like to share a desk with a slower student so that we can learn from each other and make progress together. 21教育名师原创作品
Yours,
Li Ping