2015届高考英语二轮复习精品资料强化练习系列：短文改错、书面表达（三）
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2015届高考英语二轮复习精品资料强化练习系列：短文改错、书面表达（三）
(限时45分钟/每组)
（一）
第一节: 短文改错
（1）
We had done a survey recently to find out whom students 1. _______
will turn to when in trouble．Here is the results. 2. _______
Most of students will turn to their friends, because they 3. _______
are of the same age ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )and are able to understand each other 4. _______
easy．Some students will tell their parents or teachers about 5. _______
their troubles for th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e reason they have rich experience and 6. _______
love them very much．They can be trust by their kids or 7. _______
students．Only a few s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )tudents preferred to solve the problems 8. _______
all by themse ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lves．We hate to talk with others and can’t get 9. _______
in well with others ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )．As a result, they have fewer friends. 10. _______
（2）
When people are a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )sked about precious things, they usually think of money or jewelry．I am not very rich, and I have 1. _______
something very pr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eciously in my room．It’s not a CD player or 2. _______
a cellphone．It’s the v ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )iew outside my window．I’m lucky live 3. _______
near a park．M ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y window faces with the tops of the trees in the 4. _______
park. Below ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the trees I can see child on the playground, 5. _______
young couples walke ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d quietly, mothers playing with children, 6. _______
and old people sitt ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ing on the benches．The whole world seems to 7. _______
be before their e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )yes．My classmates like to surf the Internet or 8. _______
listen to music, but ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) when I have a free time, I just sit in my 9. _______
room and enjoyed t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )he most precious thing alone: the view. 10. _______
第二节: 书面表达
据《中国青年报》报道，四川省高中生从新 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )学期开始必须选修一门新课程，如修马桶、做凳子、换灯泡等日常生活实用技术。你很赞同这种做法并打算用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，简要向同学们介绍该新闻报道的观点，并谈谈你的看法。2·1·c·n·j·y
新闻报道的观点：
1. 学生能独立解决实际生活问题；
2. 享受劳动乐趣和成功的喜悦；
3. 激发学生的创造力；
4. 担心会增加学生负担。
注意：1. 不必逐条翻译，可适当发挥；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 参考词汇：凳子stool 马桶 toilet 灯泡 light bulb
It is reported ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )in China Youth Daily that senior students in Sichuan Province must take a new course from this new term on, in which they will learn ______________【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________www-2-1-cnjy-com
（二）
第一节: 短文改错
（1）
I have a very embarrassing experience this evening. 1. _______
I saw a man at a bus stop when I was on my way back 2. _______
home. Though I saw hi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )m from behind, but I was sure he was 3. _______
a friend of mi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ne which I hadn’t seen for a long time. I gave 4. _______
him a tap on the sh ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )oulders with my umbrella and shouted to 5. _______
him at the same tim ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e. He turned round, completely taking by 6. _______
surprise. Unfortunat ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ely, he was my friend but a complete 7. _______
stranger. He was terri ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )bly embarrassed, for I didn’t know 8. _______
how to explain him ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ). I could only say in a low voice, “I’m so 9. _______
sorry, sir. ” After that I walked away as quickly as possibly. 10. _______
（2）
Dear John,
Glad to tell you th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at great changes have been taken place here 1. _______
in recent years．First the natural scenery is more beautiful．More highways
2. _______
have been built, whi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ch makes them very convenient for people to travel. 【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
3. _______
There are also many modern and beautiful high buildings．As result, 21cnjy.com
4. ___
people’s living conditions have been great improved．Besides, a great【出处：21教育名师】
5. _______
number of people ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )enjoys themselves traveling and more people can afford
6. _______
and go abroad to t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ravel with the increase of income．What’s worse, cars and
7. _______
computers have made their way into million of homes．With China’s21教育网
8. _______
economy developed quickly, more and more foreign companies have come
9. _______
to make investment here．I’m expecting your visiting to China soon. 21*cnjy*com
10. _______
Best wishes．
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节: 书面表达
假设你是李华，在纽约学习期间，到当地一 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )家商店购买了一台随身听，但回到住处后发现“播放”键失灵了。请你按以下内容要点用英文给商店经理写一封信。
1．离店时的情况；
2．使用时的问题；
3．该物品的用处；
4．对商店的要求。
参考词汇：随身听walkman
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头与结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
Dear Manager,
I’m one of your customers. __________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________21·世纪*教育网
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案解析
（一）
第一节
（1）1．【解析】had→have 由recently可知此处应用现在完成时。
2．【解析】results→result或is→are 主谓一致错误。
3．【解析】of后加the 此处应为特指。
4．√
5．【解析】easy→easily 此处用easily修饰动词understand。
6．【解析】reason后加that that引导同位语从句，不可省略。
7.【解析】trust→trusted 此处应用被动语态。be trusted被信赖。
8．【解析】preferred→prefer 时态应用错误。此处应用一般现在时。
9．【解析】We→They 指代上文中的a few students。
10．【解析】in→on get on well with意为“与……友好相处”。
（2） 1.【解析】and→but 此处应用but表转折。21世纪教育网
2.【解析】preciously→precious 不定代词后应该用形容词修饰。
3.【解析】lucky后加to be lucky to do。
4.【解析】去掉with “face sth. ”意为“面向……”。
5.【解析】child→children 此处应用复数形式。
6.【解析】walked→walking “see sb. doing sth. ”现在分词作宾补。2-1-c-n-j-y
7. √
8.【解析】their→my 人称指代错误。
9.【解析】去掉a have free time意为“有空闲的时间”。
10.【解析】enjoyed→enjoy 时态错误。此处应用一般现在时。
第二节
【参考范文】
It is reported in China Youth Daily that senior students in Sichuan Province must take a new course from this new term on, in which they will learn some practical living skills, such as fixing toilets, making stools and changing light bulbs. 【版权所有：21教育】
Most people th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ink it is necessary to have such a course. They believe that students can not only solve some problems in our daily life by themselves but also enjoy the pleasure of labor and the happiness of success. What’s more, it will help develop students’ creativity. On the other hand, some people are concerned about it. They think that this course will be a new burden to students.
In my opinion, students will benefit from such a practical course and they will acquire more knowledge in an interesting way. 21教育名师原创作品
（二）
第一节
（1）1.【解析】have→had 从下文可知本文通篇使用的是一般过去时。
2. √[来源:21世纪教育网]
3.【解析】去掉but though/although不能和but连用。
4.【解析】which→whom 指人用whom不用which。
5.【解析】shoulders→shoulder 单复数错误。
6.【解析】taking→taken 此处应用过去分词表被动。
7.【解析】was后加 not 句意应为“他不是我的朋友”。
8.【解析】He→I 此处应为“我感到很尴尬”。
9.【解析】explain后加to “explain to sb. ”意为 “向某人解释”。
10.【解析】possibly→possible “as quickly as possible”意为“尽可能快地”。
（2）1.【解析】去掉been take place 为不及物动词，没有被动语态。
2. √
3.【解析】them→it it为形式宾语，代指“to travel”。
4.【解析】As后加a as a result为固定搭配，意为“因此”。
5.【解析】great→greatly 此处应用副词形式修饰动词improved。
6.【解析】enjoys→enjoy 主谓一致错误。由主语a great number of people可知。
7.【解析】worse→more what’s more并且。
8.【解析】million→millions millions of数百万。
9.【解析】developed→developing 此处应用developing作宾补。
10.【解析】visiting→visit a visit to. . . 为固定搭配。
第二节
【参考范文】
Dear Manager,
I’m one of yo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ur customers. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I did check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, however, I found a fault with it. The problem is that the “Play” key doesn’t work at all. Probably it’s not your fault and nor is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person. 21世纪教育网版权所有
You see, a walkman is of great use for me to learn English and I cannot wait too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you receive my letter. 21·cn·jy·com
Hoping to hear from you in the earliest possible time! www.21-cn-jy.com
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(限时45分钟/每组)
（一）
第一节: 短文改错
（1）
We had done a survey recently to find out whom students 1. _______
will turn to when in trouble．Here is the results. 2. _______
Most of students will turn to their friends, because they 3. _______
are of the same age ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )and are able to understand each other 4. _______
easy．Some students will tell their parents or teachers about 5. _______
their troubles for th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e reason they have rich experience and 6. _______
love them very much．They can be trust by their kids or 7. _______
students．Only a few s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )tudents preferred to solve the problems 8. _______
all by themse ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lves．We hate to talk with others and can’t get 9. _______
in well with others ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )．As a result, they have fewer friends. 10. _______
（2）
When people are a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )sked about precious things, they usually think of money or jewelry．I am not very rich, and I have 1. _______
something very pr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eciously in my room．It’s not a CD player or 2. _______
a cellphone．It’s the v ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )iew outside my window．I’m lucky live 3. _______
near a park．M ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y window faces with the tops of the trees in the 4. _______
park. Below ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the trees I can see child on the playground, 5. _______
young couples walke ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d quietly, mothers playing with children, 6. _______
and old people sitt ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ing on the benches．The whole world seems to 7. _______
be before their e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )yes．My classmates like to surf the Internet or 8. _______
listen to music, but ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) when I have a free time, I just sit in my 9. _______
room and enjoyed t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )he most precious thing alone: the view. 10. _______
第二节: 书面表达
据《中国青年报》报道，四川省高中生从新 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )学期开始必须选修一门新课程，如修马桶、做凳子、换灯泡等日常生活实用技术。你很赞同这种做法并打算用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，简要向同学们介绍该新闻报道的观点，并谈谈你的看法。2·1·c·n·j·y
新闻报道的观点：
1. 学生能独立解决实际生活问题；
2. 享受劳动乐趣和成功的喜悦；
3. 激发学生的创造力；
4. 担心会增加学生负担。
注意：1. 不必逐条翻译，可适当发挥；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 参考词汇：凳子stool 马桶 toilet 灯泡 light bulb
It is reported ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )in China Youth Daily that senior students in Sichuan Province must take a new course from this new term on, in which they will learn ______________【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________www-2-1-cnjy-com
（二）
第一节: 短文改错
（1）
I have a very embarrassing experience this evening. 1. _______
I saw a man at a bus stop when I was on my way back 2. _______
home. Though I saw hi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )m from behind, but I was sure he was 3. _______
a friend of mi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ne which I hadn’t seen for a long time. I gave 4. _______
him a tap on the sh ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )oulders with my umbrella and shouted to 5. _______
him at the same tim ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e. He turned round, completely taking by 6. _______
surprise. Unfortunat ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ely, he was my friend but a complete 7. _______
stranger. He was terri ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )bly embarrassed, for I didn’t know 8. _______
how to explain him ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ). I could only say in a low voice, “I’m so 9. _______
sorry, sir. ” After that I walked away as quickly as possibly. 10. _______
（2）
Dear John,
Glad to tell you th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at great changes have been taken place here 1. _______
in recent years．First the natural scenery is more beautiful．More highways
2. _______
have been built, whi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ch makes them very convenient for people to travel. 【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
3. _______
There are also many modern and beautiful high buildings．As result, 21cnjy.com
4. ___
people’s living conditions have been great improved．Besides, a great【出处：21教育名师】
5. _______
number of people ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )enjoys themselves traveling and more people can afford
6. _______
and go abroad to t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ravel with the increase of income．What’s worse, cars and
7. _______
computers have made their way into million of homes．With China’s21教育网
8. _______
economy developed quickly, more and more foreign companies have come
9. _______
to make investment here．I’m expecting your visiting to China soon. 21*cnjy*com
10. _______
Best wishes．
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节: 书面表达
假设你是李华，在纽约学习期间，到当地一 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )家商店购买了一台随身听，但回到住处后发现“播放”键失灵了。请你按以下内容要点用英文给商店经理写一封信。
1．离店时的情况；
2．使用时的问题；
3．该物品的用处；
4．对商店的要求。
参考词汇：随身听walkman
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头与结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。
Dear Manager,
I’m one of your customers. __________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________21·世纪*教育网
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案解析
（一）
第一节
（1）1．【解析】had→have 由recently可知此处应用现在完成时。
2．【解析】results→result或is→are 主谓一致错误。
3．【解析】of后加the 此处应为特指。
4．√
5．【解析】easy→easily 此处用easily修饰动词understand。
6．【解析】reason后加that that引导同位语从句，不可省略。
7.【解析】trust→trusted 此处应用被动语态。be trusted被信赖。
8．【解析】preferred→prefer 时态应用错误。此处应用一般现在时。
9．【解析】We→They 指代上文中的a few students。
10．【解析】in→on get on well with意为“与……友好相处”。
（2） 1.【解析】and→but 此处应用but表转折。21世纪教育网
2.【解析】preciously→precious 不定代词后应该用形容词修饰。
3.【解析】lucky后加to be lucky to do。
4.【解析】去掉with “face sth. ”意为“面向……”。
5.【解析】child→children 此处应用复数形式。
6.【解析】walked→walking “see sb. doing sth. ”现在分词作宾补。2-1-c-n-j-y
7. √
8.【解析】their→my 人称指代错误。
9.【解析】去掉a have free time意为“有空闲的时间”。
10.【解析】enjoyed→enjoy 时态错误。此处应用一般现在时。
第二节
【参考范文】
It is reported in China Youth Daily that senior students in Sichuan Province must take a new course from this new term on, in which they will learn some practical living skills, such as fixing toilets, making stools and changing light bulbs. 【版权所有：21教育】
Most people th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ink it is necessary to have such a course. They believe that students can not only solve some problems in our daily life by themselves but also enjoy the pleasure of labor and the happiness of success. What’s more, it will help develop students’ creativity. On the other hand, some people are concerned about it. They think that this course will be a new burden to students.
In my opinion, students will benefit from such a practical course and they will acquire more knowledge in an interesting way. 21教育名师原创作品
（二）
第一节
（1）1.【解析】have→had 从下文可知本文通篇使用的是一般过去时。
2. √[来源:21世纪教育网]
3.【解析】去掉but though/although不能和but连用。
4.【解析】which→whom 指人用whom不用which。
5.【解析】shoulders→shoulder 单复数错误。
6.【解析】taking→taken 此处应用过去分词表被动。
7.【解析】was后加 not 句意应为“他不是我的朋友”。
8.【解析】He→I 此处应为“我感到很尴尬”。
9.【解析】explain后加to “explain to sb. ”意为 “向某人解释”。
10.【解析】possibly→possible “as quickly as possible”意为“尽可能快地”。
（2）1.【解析】去掉been take place 为不及物动词，没有被动语态。
2. √
3.【解析】them→it it为形式宾语，代指“to travel”。
4.【解析】As后加a as a result为固定搭配，意为“因此”。
5.【解析】great→greatly 此处应用副词形式修饰动词improved。
6.【解析】enjoys→enjoy 主谓一致错误。由主语a great number of people可知。
7.【解析】worse→more what’s more并且。
8.【解析】million→millions millions of数百万。
9.【解析】developed→developing 此处应用developing作宾补。
10.【解析】visiting→visit a visit to. . . 为固定搭配。
第二节
【参考范文】
Dear Manager,
I’m one of yo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ur customers. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I did check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, however, I found a fault with it. The problem is that the “Play” key doesn’t work at all. Probably it’s not your fault and nor is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person. 21世纪教育网版权所有
You see, a walkman is of great use for me to learn English and I cannot wait too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you receive my letter. 21·cn·jy·com
Hoping to hear from you in the earliest possible time! www.21-cn-jy.com
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua