2015届高考英语二轮复习精品资料强化练习系列：短文改错、书面表达（一）

2015届高考英语二轮复习精品资料强化练习系列：短文改错、书面表达（一）
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（一）
第一节: 短文改错
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Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly, 1. _______
a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you 2. _______
tell him a secret, n ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ever will he talks about it with anybody 3. _______
else. Besides, a frie ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nd is always good listener when you 4. _______
need one. After hear ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )your sad stories, he will say some 5. _______
words that is ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes 6. _______
him happily too. Wh ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at’s more, a good friend is willing to 7. _______
offer the help to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) which you need, or can at least give you 8. _______
some advices. In ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )a word, friends are those you like and 9. _______
trust, and you will en ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )joy every minute that you spent with them. 10. _______
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One Sunday morning, Jack and I go fishing on a river. 1. _______
To our surpri ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )se, we found the water was very dirty and smelly 2. _______
that we coul ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )dn’t see the river bed at all. We also found some 3. _______
rubbish or dead fish floating on the water. That afternoon 4. _______
we caught only one ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )small fish, that seemed ill. Most fish in 5. _______
the river were dead ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ). Why That is because of the chemical 6. _______
factories along t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )he river are always pouring its waste water and 7. _______
rubbish into the riv ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )er, making the water polluting seriously. 8. _______
Therefore, it is difficult for us see fish alive in the river. 9. _______
I think some measu ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )re must be taken to stop the pollution. 10. _______
第二节: 书面表达[21世纪教育网]
你叫李浩，你美国的笔友Jack在网上发 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )现这样一幅漫画，他写信询问你这幅漫画的意思。请你用英文给Jack写一封回信，解释一下这幅漫画所反映的社会现象。内容要点包括：
1．据报道70%以上的火锅店都向火锅里添加化学添加剂
2．火锅店这样做的目的是降低成本、节约时间，让火锅更诱人；
3．向火锅里添加化学物质对人体的危害；
4．如何解决这一危害大众健康的问题。
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注意：1．参考词汇：漫画car ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )toon; 火锅hotpot; 化学添加剂chemical additives; 食品安全food safety21cnjy.com
2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3．词数100左右。信的开头、结尾和格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear fr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )om you again. ______________________________________
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It is a great pity that I may not be able to treat you to a delicious hotpot when you come to visit me one day, isn’t it 2·1·c·n·j·y
Yours,
Li Hao
（二）
第一节: 短文改错
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Not all people like t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o work and everyone likes to play. All over 1. _______
the world men ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since 2. _______
long ago, many adul ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ts and children called their friends together 3. _______
to spend hours, eve ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )n days play games. One of the reasons people 4. _______
like to play is that ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) sports help them to live happily. In other words, 5. _______
they help to keep peop ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )le strong and feel good. When people are 6. _______
playing games, the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y move a lot. That is how sports are good activities 21世纪教育网版权所有
7. _______
for their health. H ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )aving fun with their friends make them happy. 8. _______
Many people enjoy sp ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )orts by watching the others play. In American 9. _______
big cities, thous ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 21教育网
10. _______
（2）
I picked out a baby bird without any feathers on my 1. _______
way home. It was t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )oo young to feed itself, so I took it 2. _______
into my room and fe ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d it careful. It grew up a month later. 3. _______
It kept in a birdcage made by myself. One morning, I 4. _______
happened to th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ink that it should return to the nature and that 5. _______
the forest sh ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ould be it’s home indeed, so I set it free. 6. _______
To my surprise and jo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y, it fly down and stood on my shoulder, 7. _______
appeared to welcome me when I came back after school. 8. _______
From then, I often saw ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) it fly away as I left for school 9. _______
and fly back when I ca ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )me to home. We were good friends for years. 10. _______
第二节: 书面表达
假设你是武汉大学附中高三(1)班的李华，今年即将高中毕业。请根据以下要点给某英文报写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的看法。【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
1. 对获得的帮助表示感谢;
2. 消除与同学之间的误会;
3. 努力学习，实现人生梦想;
4. 对学弟、学妹的建议。
注意：1. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯;
2. 词数：100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
High school is regarded as the best time in a person’s life. As a Senior 3 student, it won’t take long before I graduate._______________________________21·世纪*教育网
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答案解析
（一）
第一节
（1）1.【解析】how→what 由what引导宾语从句，从句中like缺宾语。
2.【解析】secrets后加with share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某物。
3.【解析】talks→talk will后须加动词原形。
4.【解析】always后加a listener是可数名词，且此处是泛指。
5.【解析】hear→hearing after是介词，后接名词或动词-ing形式。
6.【解析】is→are that代指先行词words，所以谓语动词要用复数形式。
7.【解析】happily→happy 形容词作宾语补足语。
8.【解析】去掉to which you need作定语修饰help，意为：提供你所需要的帮助。
9.【解析】advices→advice advice是不可数名词。
10.【解析】spent→spend 前后时态须一致。
（2）1.【解析】go→went 由时间状语one Sunday morning可知该处需要用一般过去时。
2.【解析】very→so 由下文中的that, 可知此处应是so. . . that. . . 结构。
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4.【解析】or→and 该句为肯定句，rubbish与dead fish为并列关系，所以应用并列连词and。
5.【解析】that→which 此处是非限制性定语从句。
6.【解析】去掉of 此处是because引导的表语从句。
7.【解析】its→their 用their代指the factories’。
8.【解析】polluting→polluted 水被污染。此处用过去分词作宾语补足语。
9.【解析】see前加to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) It’s difficult for sb. to do sth. 中，it为形式主语，for sb. to do sth. 为真正的主语。www-2-1-cnjy-com
10.【解析】measure→measures measure当“措施”讲时，为可数名词，所以此处应改为measures。　　21*cnjy*com
第二节
【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to hear from you again. The cartoon you came across shows a major concern about food safety in China. It is reported that over 70% of the hotpot restaurants are adding chemical additives to their hotpot to save time, reduce cost, and make the hotpot look more inviting. However, the effects of the chemical substances on people’s health remain unknown and most people tend to believe that chemical additives will do great harm to human bodies, even causing cancer in some cases. It is certain that strong measures should be taken to make sure hotpot is safe. Whoever adds harmful elements into the hotpot is a danger to society and should be severely punished. Otherwise, people in China may never have hotpot. 【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
It is a great pi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ty that I may not be able to treat you to a delicious hotpot when you come to visit me one day, isn’t it 【出处：21教育名师】
Yours,
Li Hao
（二）
第一节
（1）1.【解析】and→but 连词错误。两句之间是转折关系。
2.【解析】woman→women 平行结构的错误。短语men and women表示“男男女女”。
3.【解析】called前加have 一致关系的错误。根据文章语境，这里应用现在完成时。
4.【解析】play→playing 非 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )谓语动词形式的错误。句型spend time (in) doing sth. ，意为“做某事花费多少时间”。2-1-c-n-j-y
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6.【解析】feel→feeling 非谓语动词形式的错误。keep people feeling good使人们感觉良好。
7.【解析】how→why 连接手段的错误。That is why. . . , 那就是……的原因。
8.【解析】make→makes 一致关系的错误。非谓语动词充当主语时，谓语动词用单数。21世纪教育网【版权所有：21教育】
9.【解析】去掉the 冠词使用的错误。短语the others是“其余的人”，这里指的是“别人”。
10.【解析】sell→buy 行文逻辑上的错误。根据文意是“买票看球赛”。
（2） 1.【解析】out→up 短语搭配错误。pick up为“捡起，捡到”的意思。pick out挑出。
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3.【解析】careful→carefully 形容词/副词用法错误。此处修饰动词fed, 需要用副词carefully。
4.【解析】kept前加was 语态错误。主语为物，keep为及物动词，因此应使用被动语态。
5.【解析】去掉the “return to nature” 表示“回归自然”之意。
6.【解析】it’s→its 此处用its来代指“小鸟的”。
7.【解析】fly→flew 时态错误。由stood可知，应用flew。flew与stood为并列谓语。
8.【解析】appeared→appearing 非谓语动词错误。此处应当用appearing来作伴随状语。
9.【解析】then后加on from then on从那以后，为固定搭配。
10.【解析】去掉to 介词多余。come home为固定搭配，此处home是副词。
第二节
【参考范文】
High school is rega ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rded as the best time in a person’s life. As a Senior 3 student, it won’t take long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students.
Firstly, I would ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it’s high time to say sorry to my classmates whom I hurt or munication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, I’ve made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, “No pains, no gains. ”
Finally I hope t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hat all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no man.