2024年课标版高考英语第二轮专题练习--满分练11　短文改错+书面表达（含答案与解析）

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2024年课标版高考英语第二轮专题
满分练(十一)　短文改错+书面表达
(限时:30分钟)
Ⅰ.短文改错
(2023四川内江三模)
Last summer,I went to Djerba,Tunisia.It was true one of the most attractive destination I had ever visited.I must admit that I have never seen such a beautiful coastline before.I spent most of my days walking on the beach but enjoying the sun and the peaceful sound of the waves.On my four day there,I took a tour and visited some local attractions,included the El Ghriba Synagogue.And that was unforgettable experience.Overall,I felt so lucky to be there because of everything was good than I could ever imagine.I’m looking forward to explore more of this beautiful country next time.
Ⅱ.书面表达
(2023四川自贡二诊)
假定你校英文报正在以“养成好习惯,促进我健康”为主题开展征文活动。请写一篇短文,向报社投
稿,内容包括:
1.介绍一项你的好习惯;
2.该习惯对健康的影响;
3.呼吁养成健康习惯。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Good Habits,Good Health
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答案：
Ⅰ.
[语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要描述了作者去杰尔巴岛旅行的经历。
1.第二句:true→truly　考查副词。分析句子结构可知,此处要用副词truly作状语,修饰be动词was。故将true改为truly。
2.第二句:destination→destinations　考查名词的数。根据“one of the most attractive”可知,后面加名词复数,表示“最……的之一”。故将destination改为destinations。
3.第三句:have→had　考查动词的时态。根据句意可知,“承认”是过去的动作,“看见”这一动作发生在“承认”之前,故用过去完成时。故将have改为had。
4.第四句:but→and　考查连词。分析句意可知,“walking on the beach”和“enjoying the sun and the peaceful sound of the waves”是并列关系,不是转折关系。故将but改为and。
5.第五句:four→fourth　考查数词。根据句意可知,“在第四天,参观了一些景点”,用序数词表示。故将four改为fourth。
6.第五句:included→including　考查非谓语动词。句中已有谓语动词“took”和“visited”,因此include应用非谓语形式,“local attractions”和“include”之间是主动关系,故用现在分词。故将included改为including。
7.第六句:unforgettable前面加an　考查冠词。泛指“一次经历”,要用不定冠词修饰名词,unforgettable以元音音素开头,需用不定冠词an。故在unforgettable前面加an。
8.第七句:because后的of删掉　考查连词。根据句意可知,because引导了原因状语从句,because of后只能跟名词、短语等作宾语,不能接从句。故将because后的of删掉。
9.第七句:good→better　考查形容词比较级。根据“than I could ever imagine”可知,要用形容词比较级。故将good改为better。
10.第八句:explore→exploring　考查非谓语动词。look forward to doing sth.表示“期待做某事”,用动词-ing形式作宾语。故将explore改为exploring。
Ⅱ.
Good Habits,Good Health
Now I’ve formed a good habit to improve my health.That is,I play basketball with my friends on the playground for 40 minutes every day after school.
However,a year ago,because of the heavy learning tasks,I always stayed in the classroom,not participating in after-school activities to relax myself.As a result,I found I couldn’t concentrate on my school work and always felt tired.I realized I had to adjust my lifestyle.Then,I began playing basketball since I like this sport.Now,I feel energetic,and my learning efficiency is satisfactory.
A strong nation is based on its strong youths.As senior three students,we should develop healthy habits and have a healthy body.
1.词汇积累
养成:form→develop
任务:task→assignment
因此:as a result→as a consequence
集中:concentrate on→focus on
2.高分句型
(1)I realized I had to adjust my lifestyle.(省略that的宾语从句)
(2)Then,I began playing basketball since I like this sport.(since引导原因状语从句)
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