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2024年课标版高考英语第二轮专题
满分练(十二) 短文改错+书面表达
(限时:30分钟)
Ⅰ.短文改错
(2023陕西榆林三模)
Dad and I go to my grandparents’ home last weekend.Besides visited my grandparents,we wanted to help them to have the broadband network fixing.Dad asked the communication company to do it in the advance.A technician came on time and finished his work rapid.Then it was my turn.I just taught my grandparents what to use their smartphones step by step.Soon we learned to read news,shop online or do something else.They showed much interest in video chat,which they thought was the most useful functions.Now,I usually chat my grandparents online.
Ⅱ.书面表达
(2023四川绵阳二诊)
假设你是李华,上周末去学校周边某社区参加了志愿者活动。请给你校官网英文专栏写一篇短文介绍你们的活动情况,要点包括:
1.活动概况;
2.感悟与收获。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Many hands make light work
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答案:
Ⅰ.
[语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲的是作者和爸爸在上周末去帮助爷爷奶奶修理宽带和教爷爷奶奶使用智能手机的事情。
1.第一句:go→went 考查动词的时态。由“last weekend”可知,句子描述过去的事情,时态用一般过去时,故将go改为went。
2.第二句:visited→visiting 考查非谓语动词。Besides是介词,其后跟动词-ing形式作宾语,故将visited改为visiting。
3.第二句:fixing→fixed 考查非谓语动词。network和fix之间为逻辑上的被动关系,应用过去分词作宾补。故将fixing改为fixed。
4.第三句:去掉第二个the 考查固定短语。in advance是固定短语,意为“提前”,故去掉the。
5.第四句:rapid→rapidly 考查副词。修饰动词finished要用副词rapidly,意为“快速地”,故将rapid改为rapidly。
6.第六句:what→how 考查特殊疑问词。根据语境可知,表示“如何”用副词how,“如何使用”是how to use,为“特殊疑问词+不定式”结构作宾语,故将what改为how。
7.第七句:we→they 考查代词。根据语境可知,此处表示“他们学会了阅读新闻、网上购物和做其他事情”,“他们”作主语,用they,故将we改为they。
8.第七句:or→and 考查连词。read news,shop online和do something else是并列动作,用and连接,故将or改为and。
9.第八句:functions→function 考查名词的数。此处表示他们认为视频聊天是最有用的功能,指一个功能,function要用单数,故将functions改为function。
10.第九句:在chat后加with 考查介词。chat with sb.是固定短语,意为“和某人聊天”,故在chat后加with。
Ⅱ.
Many hands make light work
Last weekend we went to a community near our school to do some volunteer work.When we got there in the morning,we were warmly welcomed by everybody.Soon we got down to work.Some of us went to the local nursing home to help the elderly with chores.They were glad to see so many young faces around them.The others joined the locals to clean up the neighborhood.We helped sweep the streets and collect rubbish.Soon the whole area took on a new look.
The activity did not last long,but we learned a lot.By joining our hands we can accomplish big things and make the world a better place.
1.词汇积累
到达:get→arrive
高兴:glad→delighted
参加:join→participate
收集:collect→gather
2.高分句型
(1)When we got there in the morning,we were warmly welcomed by everybody.(when引导时间状语从句)
(2)Some of us went to the local nursing home to help the elderly with chores.(不定式作目的状语)
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