2024年课标版高考英语第二轮专题练习--满分练13　短文改错+书面表达（含答案与解析）

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2024年课标版高考英语第二轮专题
满分练(十三)　短文改错+书面表达
(限时:30分钟)
Ⅰ.短文改错
(2023四川宜宾三诊)
I am applying a volunteer position for the games.Personally,I consider me a qualified candidate from the follow three aspects.Firstly,as a sports fan,my sports talents let me to fit in any volunteer position.Secondly,my fluently English will enable me to well understand the needs of sportsmen than others,and thus offer timely help.Thirdly,my voluntary experiences have not only strengthened my team spirit,but also equip me with practical skills and knowledges.
I keep passion for sports,but I hope to make a contribution to this world sports event.I would appreciate it when I am offered this opportunity.I have attached my resume and look forward to an interview.
Ⅱ.书面表达
(2023四川成都、绵阳五校高三适应性考试)
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom很喜欢中国文化,最近他在学习汉语,但他发现记忆汉字很困难,因
此发邮件向你求助。请你给他回一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.培养语感;
2.广泛阅读;
3.反复书写;
4.熟练运用。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案：
Ⅰ.
[语篇解读]本文是一篇应用文。文章主要讲述了作者正在申请奥运会志愿者的职位。作者从以下三个方面认为自己是一个合格的候选人。
1.第一句:在applying后加for　考查动词短语。根据句意可知,此处为动词短语apply for“申请”,满足句意要求。故在applying后加for。
2.第二句:me→myself　考查代词。根据句意以及主语I可知,此处为对应主语的反身代词myself “我自己”,满足句意要求。故将me改为myself。
3.第二句:follow→following　考查形容词。由three aspects为名词短语可知,此处为形容词形式修饰该名词短语。故将follow改为following。
4.第三句:删除to　考查动词不定式。分析句子可知,此处为let sb.do sth.,为使役动词的用法,后需接省略to的动词不定式。故将to删除。
5.第四句:fluently→fluent　考查形容词。由English为名词可知,此处应为形容词形式修饰该名词。故将fluently改为fluent。
6.第四句:well→better　考查副词比较级。由该句中的than可知,此处为副词well的比较级better修饰动词understand。故将well改为better。
7.第五句:equip→equipped　考查非谓语动词。由not only连接的strengthened为现在完成时的过去分词可知,此处but also后也应为过去分词形式,与其保持一致。故将equip改为equipped。
8.第五句:knowledges→knowledge　考查名词。该句中的knowledge表示“知识”,为不可数名词,所以此处应为单数形式。故将knowledges改为knowledge。
9.第六句:but→so/and　考查连词。根据句意可知,此处为连词so/and表示“所以或接下来”,满足句子逻辑关系。故将but改为so/and。
10.第七句:when→if　考查连词。根据句意可知,此处为连词if表示“如果”,引导条件状语从句,满足句意要求。故将when改为if。
Ⅱ.
Dear Tom,
I’m more than glad to receive your email,which tells me you have trouble remembering Chinese words.I have some advice on how to improve your vocabulary.
Firstly,you should read aloud as often as possible,for it can develop your language sense.Secondly,you must read more.Reading can certainly enlarge your vocabulary and you can easily find plenty of reading materials that interest you.Thirdly,every time you meet a new word,it’s not enough to just write it down.The more you repeat it,the better you’ll remember it.Finally,you need to put your words into practice.Only in this way can you use them skillfully.
I hope the above advice can give you some help.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→delighted
有困难:have trouble(in) doing sth.→have difficulty (in) doing sth.
培养:develop→cultivate
最后:finally→at last
2.高分句型
(1)I’m more than glad to receive your email,which tells me you have trouble remembering Chinese words.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
(2)Only in this way can you use them skillfully.(部分倒装)
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