2024年课标版高考英语第二轮专题练习--满分练14　短文改错+书面表达（含答案与解析）

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2024年课标版高考英语第二轮专题
满分练(十四)　短文改错+书面表达
(限时:30分钟)
Ⅰ.短文改错
(2023四川广安二诊)
I like keeping a diary.I think keeping diaries are a good habit.It interests people of all age.Older people want to look back on the past and see which they’ve done and like.They also hope to leave something usefully for their grandchildren.Middle-aged people explore their lives by keep diaries.Why do young people enjoy keeping diaries With my opinion,they wish to find out who they are,and where they’re going.If you want to remember your past life,and you need to keep a personal diary throughout their life.That’s because it is impossible for you remember everything you’ve experienced.
Ⅱ.书面表达
(2023陕西西安一模)
假如你是李华,是全国机器人大赛获奖者,育才中学王校长邀请你去给机器人爱好者培训,请你回复邀请函,内容如下:
1.表态接受邀请;
2.介绍培训计划。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear Principal Wang,
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案：
Ⅰ.
[语篇解读]本文是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍人们都喜欢写日记的原因和写日记的好处。
1.第二句:are→is　考查主谓一致。主语是动词-ing形式短语keeping diaries,谓语要用单数形式。故将are改为is。
2.第三句:age→ages　考查名词的数。可数名词age前面有all,名词要用复数形式。故将age改为ages。
3.第四句:which→what　考查连词。see后是宾语从句,从句中缺少动词done和like的宾语,意为“什么”,用连接代词what引导。故将which改为what。
4.第四句:like→liked　考查谓语动词。分析句子结构和意思可知,这里like和前面have done是并列的谓语动词,都用现在完成时,因此like用过去分词。故将like改为liked。
5.第五句:usefully→useful　考查形容词。修饰前面的不定代词something,应用形容词。故将usefully改为useful。
6.第六句:keep→keeping　考查非谓语动词。介词by的宾语应用keep的动词-ing形式。故将keep改为keeping。
7.第八句:With→In　考查介词短语。这里考查介词短语in my opinion,意为“在我看来”。故将With改为In。
8.第九句:删除and　考查连词。这句话是if引导的条件状语从句,后面的连词and多余。故将and删除。
9.第九句:their→your　考查代词。从句提到的人称代词是you,所以用you的形容词性物主代词。故将their改为your。
10.第十句:在remember前面加to　考查非谓语动词。此处为固定句型:it be+adj.+for sb.to do sth.,it作形式主语,后面用动词不定式作真正的主语。故在remember前面加to。
Ⅱ.
Dear Principal Wang,
It’s such a great privilege for me to be invited to share my experience with the robot lovers in your school.With the deepest gratitude,I’m so pleased to accept your invitation.
As is scheduled,the training course will be divided into 3 parts.The most advanced technology and application will be delivered in the first place.To enhance their further motivation,an interactive part will be provided,through which they can share their perspectives on the given sample robot enthusiastically as well as be inspired mutually.In the end,a practical robot designing on their own will be required.
I’m looking forward to meeting with you next week and I do hope the course can be of great benefit to you all.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累　
荣幸:privilege→honour
高兴的:pleased→delighted
观点:perspective→opinion
有益的:be of benefit→be beneficial
2.高分句型
(1)As is scheduled,the training course will be divided into 3 parts.(as引导非限制性定语从句)
(2)To enhance their further motivation,an interactive part will be provided,through which they can share their perspectives on the given sample robot enthusiastically as well as be inspired mutually.(动词不定式作目的状语以及“介词+which”引导非限制性定语从句)
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