2024年课标版高考英语第二轮专题练习--满分练15　短文改错+书面表达（含答案与解析）

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2024年课标版高考英语第二轮专题
满分练(十五)　短文改错+书面表达
(限时:30分钟)
Ⅰ.短文改错
(2023四川成都一诊)
Looking back at my senior school life,I have so many things to share them with all of you.I still remember that I step into my high school with high expectations.Therefore,I felt so frustrated after the first month test.I even began to doubt that I was qualified to be a senior school student.With the helps of friendly classmates,teachers and parents,I picked up my courage and regained the spirits to devote myself to study,thus do well in some academic performances.Besides,I took active part in colorful after-school activities such as basketball matches,singing competitions and English debates,on which I benefit a lot.In a word,I am really satisfied with my senior school life which are part of my growth.
Ⅱ.书面表达
(2023陕西榆林一模)
假定你是李华,你的英国交换生同学William今年要在他的寄宿家庭过春节。请你给他发一封电子邮件。
内容包括:1.给他送上新年祝福;
2.邀请他到你家做客。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
Dear William,
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
答案：
Ⅰ.
[语篇解读]本文是一篇记叙文。作者回顾了自己的高中生活。
1.第一句:将them去掉　考查代词。分析句子结构,to share作many things的后置定语,them是多余的。故将them去掉。
2.第二句:step→stepped　考查动词的时态。此处陈述过去发生的事情,使用一般过去时。故将step改为stepped。
3.第三句:Therefore→However　考查副词。上文提到“我怀着很高的期望进入高中”,下文提到“我感到非常沮丧”,上下文之间形成转折关系。故将Therefore改为However。
4.第三句:month→monthly　考查形容词。修饰名词test需用形容词monthly作定语。故将month改为monthly。
5.第四句:that→whether/if　考查连词。此处引导宾语从句,从句不缺成分,连接词表示“是否”的含义,需用连接词whether/if。故将that改为whether/if。
6.第五句:helps→help　考查名词的数。help为不可数名词,没有复数形式。故将helps改为help。
7.第五句:do→doing　考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知,已有谓语动词picked up和regained,此处为非谓语动词作状语,I和do为逻辑上的主谓关系,需用现在分词形式。故将do改为doing。
8.第六句:在active前面加an　考查冠词。take an active part in为固定搭配,意为“积极参加”。故在active前面加an。
9.第六句:on→from/through/by　考查介词。benefit from...为固定搭配,意为“从……中受益”,可以将on改为from;或者考虑前面句子和定语从句的关系,表示“通过这些课外活动,我受益良多”,需用介词through/by。故将on改为from/through/by。
10.第七句:are→is　考查主谓一致。which指代school life,不可数,谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。故将are改为is。
Ⅱ.
Dear William,
On knowing that you have decided to spend the Spring Festival at your host family in China,I can’t wait to show my delight for it.
As far as I know,it is the first time you have decided to celebrate the Chinese New Year,which will impress you greatly.As a custom of the Spring Festival,I will send you my best blessings to you.I wish you a happy New Year,all the best,happiness and health.Besides,I sincerely invite you to my home and share the happiness of Chinese New Year with my family.
I’d be more than a little glad if my invitation is accepted.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.词汇积累
兴奋:delight→excitement
我认为:as far as I know→in my point of view
祝福:blessing→wish
开心的:glad→delighted
2.高分句型
(1)As far as I know,it is the first time you have decided to celebrate the Chinese New Year,which will impress you greatly.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
(2)I’d be more than a little glad if my invitation is accepted.(if引导条件状语从句和被动语态结构)
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