2024届高考英语读后续写灾难故事类 值班护士在地震中奋力救出病人 课件(共22张PPT)

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高考英语读后续写语篇练习
灾难故事——值班护士在地震中奋力救出病人
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题目分析
读后续写
题目再现
范文呈现
努力方向
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Part 1
题目呈现
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续写原文
When I worked as a nurse, I was on day duty while my workmates were on night duty. On one shift, I sensed something just before going off duty at 11 am. I put down the tray(托盘） on the table and suddenly it fell off the table. At first I thought I had accidentally knocked it over, but then I felt the whole building shaking and heard patients were screaming.
I realized that an earthquake was happening. I quickly caught hold of a nearby patient, who was terribly frightened and pushed her under a bed. And then, I got under another bed myself. As soon as the earthquake stopped, I decided to try and get the patient safely outside. I carried her out and helped her down to the grassland, where several other people had gathered.
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续写原文
Afraid that my other workmates were in danger, I went back inside the building again. When I met Lucy ,our ward sister(护士长），I found her patient couldn't walk. We made a seat for the patient by linking our hands and arms, and carried her outside together. We went back through the building to check no one was left behind in our ward(病房）.
Just then, we saw that a man doctor was calling for volunteers to go down to other wards with him to help more people. So we went together. The doctor went ahead of us and found one of the nurses partially covered with rubble（碎石），luckily still alive. Suddenly, the aftershock (余震）struck and the doctor ordered us to leave. The brave doctor intended to stay alone and risk his own life to save the nurse.
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段首句
Paragraph 1 ：However, without any hesitation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nurse together.
Paragraph 2：Later in the afternoon, I had time to look around and saw some destroyed buildings.
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Part 2
题目分析
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点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；
点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；
点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；
点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。
情节构建的重点
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续写思路分析
本文是以人物为线索，讲述一名护士在值班时碰到了地震，就想方设法把尽可能多的人救出病房和医院大楼。
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续写思路分析
Para 1：However, without any hesitation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nurse together.
由第一段首句内容“然而，没有犹豫，我们决定和那位医生一起就那位护士。”可知，第一段可描述作者、护士长和医生一起救那位护士的过程。
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续写思路分析
Para 2：Later in the afternoon, I I had time to look around and saw the some destroyed buildings.
由第二段首句内容“下午晚点的时候，我有时间看看周围，发现了一些被毁了的建筑。”可知，第二段可描述作者在地震之后的所见所想。
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续写思路分析
续写线索
和护士长留下——医生鼓励被困护士——挪开砖头瓦砾——救出被困护士——感慨劫后余生——期待震后重建
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续写素材
可用词汇：
行为类
①集中在…上：focused on/fix on
②面对：were faced with/face
③继续：continued /keep on
情绪类
①保持镇定：stay calm/keep calm
②感觉有压力：felt a weight in my chest/feel stressed
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续写素材
可用句型：
[高分句型1]The doctor encouraged the trapped nurse to stay calm, and in the meanwhile ,we focused our efforts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body.（由that引导的定语从句）
[高分句型2]However, sometimes we were faced with falling rubble from time to time, despite which we continued.（由which引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3]I held the firm belief that some day in the future my workplace would came back to life and took on a new look, where we would continue working together to save more patients. （由that引导的同位语从句和where引导的定语从句）
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Part 3
范文呈现
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范文呈现
However, without any hesitation, we made up our minds to stay with the doctor and save the nurse together. The doctor encouraged the trapped nurse to stay calm, and in the meanwhile ,we focused our efforts on removing the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body. However, sometimes we were faced with falling rubble from time to time, despite which we continued. Gradually and slowly, we lifted the nurse out of the rubble. The doctor put the nurse on his back and walked out of the building with the help of us. Finally, all, including patients, nurses and doctors, were in the safe place.
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范文呈现
Later in the afternoon, I I had time to look around and saw the some destroyed buildings. My beautiful workplace lay beyond recognition, even some in ruins. At the sight of this, I felt a weight in my chest. Suddenly, the gentle wind danced around me, which made me thought of all the people surviving the earthquake with our help. It was our teamwork that made a difference. I held the firm belief that some day in the future my workplace would came back to life and took on a new look, where we would continue working together to save more patients.
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范文译文
然而，我们毫不犹豫地下定决心要和医生在一起，一起救护士。医生鼓励被困护士保持冷静，与此同时，我们集中精力清除困住她的砖块和瓦砾。然而，有时我们不时会遇到瓦砾，尽管如此，我们仍在继续。慢慢地，我们把护士从废墟中抬了出来。医生把护士放在背上，在我们的帮助下走出了大楼。最后，包括病人、护士和医生在内的所有人都在安全的地方。
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范文译文
下午晚些时候，我有时间环顾四周，看到了一些被毁的建筑。我美丽的工作场所面目全非，有些甚至成了废墟。一看到这一幕，我就感到胸口有一块重物。突然，轻柔的风在我周围飞舞，这让我想起了在我们的帮助下在地震中幸存的所有人。是我们的团队合作带来了不同。我坚信，在未来的某一天，我的工作场所会复活，并呈现出新的面貌，我们将继续合作，拯救更多的患者。
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Part 4
努力方向
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高级结构
名词性从句
高级结构
三连动
虚拟语气
形容词做状语
无灵主语
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定语从句
状语从句
（包含倒装句）
强调句
副词做状语
非谓语
（包括独立主格）
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