Unit7 Writing课件 (共24张PPT)牛津深圳版（广州沈阳通用）八年级英语下册

(共24张PPT)
Unit7 The unknown world
Writing
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Meeting the people of the Bird World
Liz and Gus finally arrived at the landing site of their mother ship. However, something strange happened.
A.In pairs, look at the picture below and discuss what happened to Liz and Gus when they got to the mother ship.
Writing
a strange noise Captain Troy
bird-like people with wings mother ship
Describe the picture:
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They all heard a strange noise.
They looked up into the sky.
Some bird-like people with wings were flying in the air.
Many of them landed near the mother ship.
B.Liz wanted to make friends with the people of Bird World. Discuss what she might do with your classmate. Use the ideas from the box and the example below to help you.
Writing
dance for the people of Bird World smile sing
draw some pictures for them give them something
No one knew what to do. Then Liz had a good idea.
She started to sing as she wanted to show the people of
Bird World that she was friendly. Liz had a beautiful
voice. Because the people of Bird World liked her song,
they started to sing too. They were happy.
For example:
She smiled at them and started to dance as she wanted to show the people of Bird World that she was friendly. She danced beautifully. Everybody from Bird World liked her dancing very much. They started dancing too. They were happy.
Writing
dance for the people of Bird World smile sing
draw some pictures for them give them something
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C. Write the story of Liz and Gus with your idea from A and B.
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C. Write the story of Liz and Gus with your idea from A and B.
Liz and Gus finally reached the landing site and saw Captain Troy. “Liz! Gus! Welcome back!” said Captain Troy. “I’m very pleased to see you. Now let’s get on the mother ship and …”
Suddenly _______________________________________
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they all heard a strange noise .They looked up into the sky. Some bird-like people with wings were flying in the air. Many of them landed near the mother ship.
No one knew what to do. Then Liz had a good idea.
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And so the people from the Earth and Bird World became friends!
She smiled at them and started to dance as she wanted to show the people of Bird World that she was friendly. She danced beautifully. Everybody from Bird World liked her dancing very much. They started dancing too. They were happy.
Writing
I. 写作指导
本单元中，我们以学习未知世界为主线，了解了“科幻故事与神奇经历”的相关话题。那么，怎么用英语描写自己的神奇经历呢？写作过程中又需要用到哪些词汇和句型呢？
【描写经历的步骤】
1. 时间； 2. 地点； 3. 人物；
4. 事件的起因、经过和结果； 5. 感受。
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【词汇归纳】
描述时间的相关词汇：
yesterday; last week; last month; last year; the day before yesterday; just
now; two years ago; at that time; one day ...
描述地点的相关词汇：
park; store; zoo; market; museum; airport; library; school; cinema; hotel;
playground; restaurant ...
描述人物的相关词汇：
parents; friend; student; classmate; teacher; patient; grandparents ...
描述一个事件起因、经过和结果的相关词汇：
when; where; who; what; how; why; at first; in the beginning; in the middle;
next; then; at last; finally; in the end ...
描述感受的相关词汇：
happy; terrible; unusual; unforgettable; boring; interesting; funny; frightened ...
【句型归纳】
I had a(n) ... experience.
I met ... on my way to ...
When I was ... I saw ...
I felt ...
I thought ...
I was so ... that ...
I had a feeling of ...
II. 写作训练
上周六，你和你的朋友们打算去爬山。在去爬山的路上，你们遇到了外星人。你将这段不寻常的经历分享给了你的同学。请按照以下要点提示以“An unusual experience”为题写一篇文章叙述你的故事。要求：80 词左右，可适当发挥。
内容提示：
1. 上周六，我和我的朋友们打算去爬山；
2. 在路上，我们遇到了一个外星人；
3. 因为他奇怪的长相，我们感到害怕，想尽快逃跑；
4. 让我惊讶的是，他想和我们交朋友，还送给我一张他的星球的地图。
Step 1: 题干细审
人称：第一人称和第三人称为主 时态：一般过去时为主
Step 2: 词汇激活
1. 在某人去往……的路上 __________
2. 因为 __________
3. 感到害怕 __________
4.让某人惊讶的是 __________
on one’s way to
because of
feel frightened
to one’s surprise
Step 3: 句型点拨
5. as soon as possible 意为“尽快”。
我们想尽快逃跑。_________________________________________________________
6. make friends with sb. 意为“和某人交朋友”。
他想和我们交朋友。_________________________________________________________
We wanted to run away as soon as possible.
He wanted to make friends with us.
Step 4: 谋篇布局
Step 5: 范文展示
An unusual experience
I had an unusual experience. Last Saturday, my friends and I planned to climb a mountain. On our way to the mountain, suddenly, a UFO landed just in front of us.
Then an alien came out. Because of his strange appearance, we felt frightened and we wanted to run away as soon as possible. However, to my surprise, he smiled at us and told us that he wanted to make friends with us.
I thought he was very friendly. We talked a lot with each other. Finally, before he left, he gave me a map of his planet as a gift. I was very happy. It was a really unusual gift.
III. 实战演练
假设昨天你在公园散步的时候经历了一件奇妙的事情，请结合下面的提示介绍此次经历。
提示：
1. 你在公园散步时看到一架 UFO，有两个外星人从 UFO 上走了下来；
2. 外星人有着蓝色的皮肤，大大的眼睛，长长的胳膊和腿；
3. 你很害怕，躲在了树后面；
4. 你看到那两个外星人摘下几片叶子，放进一个袋子里，然后乘着 UFO 离开了。
要求：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Yesterday, while I was walking in the park, I heard a loud sound. Suddenly, I saw a strange thing land on the ground. It was a UFO! Two aliens came out of the UFO. Their bodies were very small while their heads were very big. They had blue skin and big eyes. Their arms and legs were very long. I was so frightened that I could do nothing but try to hide behind a tree. Then I saw the two aliens pick some leaves and put them into a bag. After that, they went back to the UFO and flew away. It was an unusual experience for me.
B. 书面表达（本题 15 分）
人类对于太空一直是充满着好奇心的，所以我们一直在努力地探索太空。生活中，我们也看到过很多关于 UFO 和外星人的讨论。假设你是李明，有一天晚上你梦见了 UFO 和外星人。请根据以下提示内容，把你的梦告诉同学们。
提示：
1. UFO 是什么样子？
2. 你和外星人之间发生了什么？
3. 你对这个梦的看法。
要求：
1. 80 词左右（给出部分不计入总词数）；
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Space is strange to us and people are doing many things to get to know more about it. So am I. Last night, I had an amazing dream.
I saw a UFO and five aliens. The UFO slowly landed outside my window like a beautiful umbrella. The door opened and the aliens invited me to enter with smiles. It was big with many bright windows. It took me to travel around many places of interest.
Then the beautiful and kind aliens showed me their houses, hospitals, supermarkets and so on.
Because their houses were always clean, they didn’t need to do cleaning. And they didn’t need to spend money shopping or seeing doctors.
And UFOs could take them and stop anytime, anywhere.
What a strange but wonderful dream!
【书面表达写作指导】
本次书面表达要求写一篇与UFO和外星人有关的作文。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态主要使用一般过去时。根据提示内容进行描写，需要适当想像和发挥，使文章内容丰富。注意要保证行文连贯、语言丰富、表达准确、书写规范。