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作文精讲-成长变化类
做美德少年
开头、中间、结尾
做美德少年
开头、中间、结尾
第一人称
一般现在时
一般将来时
倡议书:
怎么做:一般现在时
这样做的好处:一般现在时
一般将来时
在学校:
努力学习知识,养成良好的学习习惯;爱运动
基本句式:At school, we should study hard, develop good learning habits.
升级句式:At school, we should study hard and develop good learning habits.
句式: In our spare time, we can do regular exercise to keep healthy.
在家里:
经常与家人交流,分担家务,知错就改
句式:At home, it's our duty to help parents do some housework.
句式:Parents will be happier if we can communicate more with them.
句式:Sometimes, if we make mistakes, we'd better face and correct them timely.
在社会:
遵守规则,注意安全
句式:In society, we must obey the rules in public
句式:Also, keep in mind that safety is the first.
句式:In my opinion, we are supposed to do all of the above.
句式:I sincerely hope everyone can join us, and try to be a virtue teenager.
进阶写作-成长变化类
我们在变化中成长
成长让我们的人生充满了意义
回首三年初中时光
我在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化
We grow up in changes.
Growth makes our life full of meaning.
Look back on the three years of junior high school.
I have experienced many changes in my study, thoughts, personality, life and so on.
We grow up in changes. Growth makes our life full of meaning. Looking back on the three years of junior high school, I have experienced many changes in my study, thoughts, personality, life and so on.
我做出的最大的个人改变是我爱上了阅读.
The biggest personal change I've ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.
当我是个孩子的时候,我根本不喜欢读书.
When I was a child, I didn't enjoying reading books at all.
后来, 我的妈妈总是给我读故事并给我买书.
Later, my mother always read books for me and bought me books.
渐渐地,我开始爱上阅读.
Gradually, I began to love reading.
当阅读的时候,我感觉像在和一个智者交谈.
While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man.
读书也是一个极好的方式来享受我的空闲时间.
Reading is also a fantastic way to enjoy my free time.
我很感激我的变化与成长.
I'm grateful for my changes and growth.
书现在是我的朋友,它们使我受益很多.
Books are my friends now, and they benefit me a lot.