Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation?Section B Writing 课件 人教版八年级上册 (共21张PPT)

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Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation
Section B Writing
Presentation
1. Learn to analyze the model article.
2. Write a travel diary.
3. Learn the structures of writing.
4. Learn to work in group and give an evaluation after writing.
5. Enjoy the fun of writing.
Learning aims
The first day of Jane's trip
Revision
Who
Weather
my family
beach
Where
sunny and hot
Food
In the morning
What
Feelings
paragliding
Georgetown
rode bicycles
In the afternoon
saw
Where
How
Malaysian
yellow noodles
buildings;
the houses of
Chinese traders
exciting, delicious,
enjoyable
Revision
The second day of Jane's trip
Who
Where
my father and I
raining
Weather
Penang Hill
How
Feelings
take the train
climbing
Food
What
one bowl of rice and some fish
terrible, so hungry
What a difference a day makes!
Tuesday
Monday
Did Jane have the same feeling
They were all the feelings that Jane couldn’t forget.
So she wrote 2 diaries to keep them in memory.
Our Hometown
Baoding
Let’s enjoy a video.
Monday, August5th
During my summer vacation, I went to Baiyang lake（白洋淀） with my sister. The weather was sunny and cool, and we had a good time. First，we went for a walk along the lake. The sky was bright blue. It is full of bulrush and lotus. The beautiful sight made me happy and relaxed. We took many photos. Then we had lunch in a local（当地的） restaurant. We ate donkey burger（驴肉火烧）. It was really delicious. Next, I tried going boating. It was so exciting. In the evening, we had a party . We sang and danced together. What a wonderful day！
Although I felt very tired, I was happy. I hope to go to Baiyang lake again.
Reading
Fill in the blanks.
Who _My ______ and I.
when ____________________
where We went to ______________ for a vacation.
what
We went for _______and _________________.
We visited______________ .
we ate __________________________ for lunch.
I tried ___________.
In the evening, we had a party.
We ______and_______.
How I felt__________ but __________. I hope to___________________________.
sister
Baiyang lake
walk
happy
took many photos.
tired
go to Baiyang lake again
Monday,August5th
a local family
Donkey burger
going boating
sang
danced
三步五要素
Step1. 注意日记的整体格式。
How to keep a travel diary
？
Pre-writing: Have a structure(结构）
日期的位置：
日期的英文格式：
首行右侧或左侧
1.星期+月+日
2.星期+日+月
Monday, August5th
During my summer vacation, I went to Baiyang lake（白洋淀） with my sister. The weather was sunny and cool, and we had a good time. First，we went for a walk along the lake. The sky was bright blue. It is full of bulrush and lotus. The beautiful sight made me happy and relaxed. We took many photos. Then we had lunch in a local（当地的） restaurant. We ate donkey burger（驴肉火烧） . It was really delicious. Next, I tried going boating. It was so exciting. In the evening, we had a party . We sang and danced together. What a wonderful day！
Although I felt very tired, I was happy. I hope to go to Baiyang lake again.
Step2. 注意人称和时态。
人称：
一般过去时
第一人称
时态：
注意：在表达自己的思想感情时，如I think…, I like this trip, I love it, 时态为一般现在时。
Monday, August5th
During my summer vacation, I went to Baiyang lake（白洋淀） with my sister. The weather was sunny and cool, and we had a good time. First，we went for a walk along the lake. The sky was bright blue. It is full of bulrush and lotus. The beautiful sight made me happy and relaxed. We took many photos. Then we had lunch in a local（当地的） restaurant. We ate donkey burger（驴肉火烧）. It was really delicious. Next, I tried going boating. It was so exciting. In the evening, we had a party . We sang and danced together. What a wonderful day！
Although I felt very tired, I was happy. I hope to go to Baiyang lake again.
Step3. 描述清楚当天所发生的事情，要用到五要素。
人物
地点
时间
活动
感受
Part1
Part2
Part3
beginning
body
ending
Who _My ______ and I.
when
where We went to ____________ for a vacation.
what We went for _______and _______
We visited ___________________.
we ate __________________________ for lunch.
I tried _________.
In the evening，we had a party.
We ______________and____________.
How I felt__________ but __________. I hope to_________________.
sister
Monday,August5th,2023
Baiyang lake
walk
took many photos.
a local restursant
Dongkey burger
going boating
sang
danced
tired
happy
go to Baiyang lake again
Presentation
Look at the pictures. Do you know these places
the Palace Museum
the Great Wall
Tian’anmen Square
National Stadium
the Summer Palace
a Beijing hutong
the old Summer Palace
The Temple of Heaven
Writing Task
Complete the diary about my trip to one of these places. Use the words and phrases in the box to help you.
Wednesday, _______ 20th
Today the weather was ____________. I went to ______________.
It was _____________. We _________________. I liked this place
because______________________________________. For dinner
we had ____________________. It was _____________. In the
evening, I felt really ____.
hot and sunny Beijing duck take some photos buy something special August
learn something important tired delicious beautiful interesting
Writing Task
August
hot and sunny
a Beijing hutong
interesting
took some photos
I learned something important
Beijing duck
delicious
tired
beginning
body
ending
Imagine you had a trip to one of these places.
Write a diary about the vacation
Time
weather place activities Feelings ？
my vacation
Task: Discussion
小组讨论，选定要写的内容。
Writing Task
What’s the type（类型） of the passages in this unit
where
who
what
when
elements (要素)
narrative writings (记叙文)
travel diary
人称：第一人称
时态：一般过去时
how
Tips:
Correct writing format
(正确的书写格式）
The simple past tense
（一般过去时）
Clear structure
(清晰的结构）
While-writing
评价标准及分值 得分
Format/日记格式（2分）
Tense/时态（2分）
Content/内容要求： 查看要求描述的信息是否完整。 Who（1分）
When（1分）
Where（1分）
What（3分）
How (feeling)（2分）
Writing/书写（2分）
Good words/phases/sentences好词，短语结构，句式波浪线画出（1分）
Evaluation(评价)
A travel diary
beginning
body
ending
（总体概述）
（活动描述）
（感受）
who
when
where
what
how
I went to …with my sister/family.
I arrived in…
I reached…
I got to…
First…
Second…
Then…
At last…
In the morning…
In the afternoon…
In the evening…
did
date
bought
…
Although I felt very tired, I was happy.
I hope to visit … again.
This tour is so…that…
I will go there next time.
What a wonderful day!
Summary
Presentation
Falling in love with the diary
A diary entry helps you relive old memories,
happy as well as sad.
Post-reading
Write a travel diary .
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Homework
Who
When
Where
What
How
Level A