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2024外研版高中英语必修第三册同步
Part 4 Writing
描述一次活动经历
写作题目
上周末你的学校组织了一次爬山活动,请把这次经历记录下来。内容应该包括下列要点:
1.出发的时间和乘坐的交通工具;
2.爬山途中令你印象深刻的事情。
注意:词数80左右。
思路点拨
主题 活动日志 体裁 记叙文
布局 第一部分:交代出发的时间和所用交通工具; 第二部分:按照时间顺序来写爬山的过程及见闻。
人称 以第一人称为主 时态 一般过去时
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. adj.被迷住的,被吸引住的
2. v.围绕,环绕
3. n.努力;尝试
4. v.失败→ n.失败
5. n.伤,损害→ adj.受伤的,有伤的
6. 给某人留下深刻印象
答案 1.fascinated 2.surround 3.attempt
4.fail;failure 5.injury;injured 6.leave a deep impression on sb.
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一部分:交代出发的时间和所用交通工具
(1)我们一大早乘公共汽车出发,8点钟到达目的地。
We in the early morning by bus and
at 8 o'clock.
第二部分:按照时间顺序来写爬山的过程及见闻
(2)我被沿途的美景吸引。
I the beautiful scenery along the road.
(3)美景给我留下了深刻的印象。
The beautiful scenery me.
(4)为了尽快爬到山顶,我们尝试去找到最近的路。
We to find the shortest way in order to climb to the top of the mountain as soon as possible.
(5)在失败很多次之后,我们最终寻找到一条被许多树木环绕的路。
After failing many times, we finally found a road
many trees.
(6)沿途中,我们遇到了一条蛇。
, we encountered a snake.
(7)它一看见我们就爬走了。
It crawled away it saw us.
答案 (1)set off;arrived at the destination
(2)was fascinated by
(3)left a deep impression on
(4)made an attempt
(5)that was surrounded by
(6)Along the way
(7)immediately
2.句式升级
(8)将句(2)和句(3)合并为含定语从句的句子
(9)将句(6)和句(7)合并为含定语从句的句子
答案 (8)I was fascinated by the beautiful scenery along the road, which left a deep impression on me.
(9)Along the way, we encountered a snake, which crawled away immediately it saw us.
连句成篇
参考范文
Last weekend, I went to climb the mountain with my classmates. We set off in the early morning by bus and arrived at the destination at 8 o'clock. I was fascinated by the beautiful scenery along the road, which left a deep impression on me. We made an attempt to find the shortest way in order to climb to the top of the mountain as soon as possible. After failing many times, we finally found a road that was surrounded by many trees. Along the way, we encountered a snake, which crawled away immediately it saw us. Fortunately, no one was injured. Finally, we climbed to the top of the mountain successfully.
写作积累
描述活动经历的句式:
1.We set off from...by...at...and arrived at...
2.It took us about...to get to the destination.
3.The first thing we did was...
4.I was fascinated by...along the road.
表达感受的句式:
1.What a...day it is!
2.We not only had a...day but also learned something new.
3.I am looking forward to taking part in...
实战演练
假定你是李华,今年暑假去了三亚旅游,生平第一次潜水使你很激动。请写一篇日记,记述潜水的经历。
内容包括:
1.介绍潜水中的所见、所想;
2.说明潜水的感受。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Friday 21 August
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 5 What an adventure!
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Friday 21 August
It was a day of pure magic! I went diving beneath the ocean near Sanya with my family yesterday morning. The first thing I became aware of was all the vivid colours surrounding me. It was the fantastic corals which were shaped like fans,plates,mushrooms,the branches of trees and the horns of deer that impressed me most. And all kinds of small and elegant fish were swimming around the corals. However, some creatures such as sharks were so dangerous that I wasn't permitted to get too close to them. From the experience, I realize that the amazing underwater world is waiting for us to explore.
1.重点词汇
①magic n.魔力,魅力;魔法
②become aware of意识到
③fantastic adj.极好的;了不起的
④be shaped like呈……形状
⑤amazing adj.令人大为惊奇的
2.亮点句型
①It was the fantastic corals which were shaped like fans,plates,mushrooms,the branches of trees and the horns of deer that impressed me most.(强调句型;which引导定语从句)最让我印象深刻的是那些形状像扇子、盘子、蘑菇、树枝和鹿角的神奇的珊瑚虫。
②However, some creatures such as sharks were so dangerous that I wasn't permitted to get too close to them.(so...that...引导结果状语从句)然而,有些生物,比如鲨鱼,太危险了,我不被允许太靠近它们。
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