2024外研版高中英语选择性必修第三册同步练习--Unit 2 Part 4 Writing（含答案与解析）
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2024外研版高中英语选择性必修第三册同步
Part 4 Writing
介绍一位具有工匠精神的人物
写作题目
假定你是李华, 请根据下列提示,为校报的英语园地写一篇英语短文,介绍你最崇拜的中国科学家梁建英。
1.出生时间:1972年4月
出生地点:吉林省
2.职务:中国高铁总设计师
3.主要经历:
(1) 1995年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作;
(2) 2007年她率领团队研制出国内首列运行时速为300—350公里的高速列车;
(3) 2017年,“复兴号”以350公里的时速正式投入运营,在高铁运营领域取得了新的突破。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:高速列车G Series High Speed Train
思路点拨
主题 介绍一位你最崇拜的中国科学家 体裁 记叙文
布局 第一段:介绍梁建英的出生时间、出生地点、职务及主要经历; 第二段:表达自己的感想。
人称 以第三人称为主 时态 以一般过去时为主
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.奉献,献身
2. n.创新,革新
3. 对……做出贡献
4. 献身于
5. 开辟新的领域
6. 取得突破
7. adj.费尽心思的
8. vt.激励,激发
答案 1.dedication/devotion 2.innovation 3.contribute to 4.devote oneself to 5.break new ground 6.make a breakthrough 7.painstaking 8.inspire
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:介绍梁建英的出生时间、出生地点、职务及主要经历
(1)梁建英于1972年4 月出生于吉林省。
Liang Jianying was born .
(2)梁建英是中国高铁总设计师。
Liang Jianying is the China’s high speed railway.
(3)梁建英于1995年毕业。
Liang Jianying .
(4)自从毕业后她一直致力于研究中国高速列车的发展。
She researching into the development of China’s G Series High Speed Train since graduation.
(5)2007年,她率领团队研制出国内首列运行时速为300—350公里的高速列车。
In 2007, she led her team to develop the first G Series High Speed Train in China which was operated 300-350 kph.
(6)2017年,“复兴号”以350公里的时速正式投入运营。
In 2017, the Fuxing train officially with the speed of 350 kph.
(7)高铁运营领域取得了新的突破。
in the operation of the high speed railway.
第二段:表达自己的感想
(8)梁建英为我们树立了一个好的榜样。
Liang Jianying .
(9)她的艰苦奉献和革新精神激励着我们努力学习,将来为祖国的发展做出贡献。
Her spirit of to study hard and the development of our country in the future.
答案 (1)in Jilin Province in April 1972
(2)general designer of
(3)graduated in 1995
(4)has been devoting herself to
(5)at the speed of
(6)was put into service
(7)A new breakthrough was made
(8)has set a good example to us
(9)painstaking dedication and innovation inspires us;contribute to
2.句式升级
(10)用同位语合并句(1)和句(2)
(11)用since引导的时间状语从句合并句(3)和句(4)
(12)用which引导的非限制性定语从句合并句(6)和句(7)
(13)用过去分词短语作原因状语改写句(9)
答案 (10)Liang Jianying, general designer of China’s high speed railway, was born in Jilin Province in April 1972.
(11)Since she graduated in 1995, Liang Jianying has been devoting herself to researching into the development of China’s G Series High Speed Train.
(12)In 2017, the Fuxing train was put into service officially with the speed of 350 kph, which made a new breakthrough in the operation of the high speed railway.
(13)Inspired by her spirit of painstaking dedication and innovation, we will study hard and contribute to the development of our country in the future.
连句成篇
参考范文
Liang Jianying, general designer of China’s high speed railway, was born in Jilin Province in April 1972. Since she graduated in 1995,Liang Jianying has been devoting herself to researching into the development of China’s G Series High Speed Train. In 2007, she led her team to develop the first G Series High Speed Train in China which was operated at the speed of 300-350 kph. In 2017, the Fuxing train was put into service officially with the speed of 350 kph, which made a new breakthrough in the operation of the high speed railway.
Liang Jianying has set a good example to us. Inspired by her spirit of painstaking dedication and innovation, we will study hard and contribute to the development of our country in the future.
写作积累
(一)增色词汇
1.人物介绍:poet; celebrity; anthropologist; photographer; scientist; be born in; become interested in; show interest in; at an early age
2.人物评价:ambitious; outstanding; modest; painstaking; be considered as; be regarded as; be famous for; dedicate oneself to
(二)精彩句型
1.Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world famous basketball player.
2.In his life, he got many honours, one of which is the 2015 CCTV Touching China Award.
3.Deng Yaping, whose hobby is playing ping pong, has devoted herself to the sport after graduation.
4.Li Keran, a famous painter and art educator, developed a personal style of landscape painting.
5.Not only is he devoted to his research, but he also concerns himself with the welfare project.
6.In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal, he became the idol of the youth.
7.Not only is she very strict with herself in her study and daily life, but she is also always ready to help others.
8.It is his hard training and his perseverance that lead to his breakthrough and success in swimming.
9.Nie Er is considered as one of the greatest musical geniuses in the history of China and will be remembered by the Chinese people forever.
实战演练
假定你是李华,你校英语报“Great People”专栏正在征文,请写一篇短文,介绍你心目中最具工匠精神的名人,并投稿。内容包括:
1.个人简介;
2.主要贡献;
3.事迹及荣誉。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
读后续写
写作题目
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mother’s Gift
I grew up in a small town where the primary school was a ten minute walk from my house. When the noon bell rang, I would race breathlessly home. My mother would be standing at the top of the stairs, smiling down at me.
One lunchtime when I was in the third grade will always stay with me. I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had rehearsed my lines so hard with me. But no matter how easily I acted at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained that she had written a narrator’s(旁白员) part to the play, and asked me to change roles. Her words, kindly expressed, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.
I didn’t tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my pain. Instead of suggesting we practise my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard.
It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英) in the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold. I watched my mother casually bend down by one dandelion. “I think I’m going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling it up by its roots. “From now on, we’ll have only roses in this garden.”
“But I like dandelions,” I protested. “All flowers are beautiful—even dandelions.”
My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn’t it ” she asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over. “And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that.” Knowing that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened. She listened and smiled reassuringly(安慰地).
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Paragraph 1:
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said,
Paragraph 2:
After the play, I took home the dandelion.
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.sense vt.觉察到
2.bunch n.串,束,扎
3.casually adv.随意地,漫不经心地
4.dig up挖出
5.protest v.反对;坚决地表示
6.shame n.羞耻;丢脸
障碍词汇
1.rehearse v.排演,排练
2.vine n.藤蔓;藤
3.win over说服,赢得……的支持
长难句剖析
原句 Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions in the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold.
分析 该句是一个主从复合句。as if引导方式状语从句,从句中使用了虚拟语气。
译文 在大树下,我们可以看到草地上一丛丛黄色的蒲公英,仿佛是一位画家为我们的风景增添了一点金色。
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:
她说:“但你会成为一名出色的旁白员。”→妈妈又说了一些鼓励“我”的话→“我”接受了旁白员的角色,努力排练→“我”在演出前看到了妈妈送的一朵蒲公英,克服了紧张→演出成功
第二段:
话剧演出结束后,“我”把蒲公英带回了家→妈妈和“我”一起把这朵蒲公英封存起来留作纪念→带给“我”的感触
遣词造句
1.用单词或短语填空
(1) a shining smile 带着灿烂的笑容
(2)be of vital 至关重要的
(3)go on 上台
(4)keep... 陪伴……
(5) 结果是
(6) 注视
(7) v.记起,回忆起
(8) adj.宝贵的
答案 (1)wear (2)significance/importance(3)stage (4)company (5)turn out (6)gaze at (7)recall (8)precious
2.完成句子
(1)“但你会成为一名出色的旁白员,”她说,一如既往地鼓励和安慰我。
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, and me as she always did.
(2)“旁白员的角色同样重要,”母亲补充道,她温柔的脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
“The narrator’s part is equally important,” my mother added, on her soft face.
(3)时光飞逝,演出的那一天到了。
Time had and it reached the performance day.
(4)就在那一刻,我发现了一朵母亲塞进我口袋里陪伴我的蒲公英。
At that very moment, I found a dandelion by my mother to .
(5)妈妈仔细地注视着那朵蒲公英,轻轻地把它放进一本字典里,像往常一样笑了。
Mom carefully the dandelion, gently a dictionary and smiled as usual.
(6)虽然几十年过去了,但我总是记起我们一起度过的宝贵的午餐时光。
Though decades have passed, I we were together.
(7)我很感激母亲脸上的微笑和她的体贴。
I the smile on my mother’s face and her kindness.
答案 (1)encouraging; comforting (2)wearing a shining smile (3)flown by (4)put into my pocket; keep me company (5)gazed at; placed it into (6)constantly recall the precious lunchtime (7)was grateful for
3.句式升级
(8)用强调句型强调时间状语改写句(4)
(9)用形容词作状语合并句(6)和句(7)
答案 (8)It was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company.
(9)Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smile on my mother’s face and her kindness.
连句成篇
Paragraph 1:
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said,
Paragraph 2:
After the play, I took home the dandelion.
参考范文
Paragraph 1:
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, encouraging and comforting me as she always did. “The narrator’s part is equally important,” my mother added, wearing a shining smile on her soft face. I began to accept that the narrator part was of vital significance and rehearsed even harder. Time had flown by and it reached the performance day. Before going on stage I still felt nervous, but it was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company. The play turned out to be a great success.
Paragraph 2:
After the play, I took home the dandelion. Mom carefully gazed at the dandelion, gently placed it into a dictionary and smiled as usual. “We were perhaps the only people who would keep such a sorry looking weed.” Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smile on my mother’s face and her kindness.
写作积累
环境描写
一、环境描写的分类
1.自然环境描写。如:The country is very green in spring.
2.社会环境描写。如:This small village was filled with flames of war at that time.
二、环境描写的手法
1.借助感官(视觉、听觉、嗅觉、味觉、触觉)来进行环境描写。如:After the rain, the lotus flowers in the pond are in full blossom. They give off a faint scent.(借助嗅觉进行描写)
2.从时空的角度进行环境描写,例如,由上到下、由远及近等方式。如:I saw many kids who were laughing happily on the lawn. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky.(采用视觉上的由下到上的方式进行描写)
三、环境描写的素材
the blue sky蓝天,the songs of birds鸟鸣,the fragile flowers娇嫩的花,the raining evening 雨夜,the green grass青草,the fragrant roses芬芳的玫瑰,the setting/rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太阳,a gust of wind一阵狂风,the drooping branches of the weeping willow垂柳的低垂枝条,the soft and cool wind轻柔且凉爽的风
五年高考练
阅读理解
(2021全国新高考Ⅰ,B)
By day, Robert Titterton is a lawyer. In his spare time though he goes on stage beside pianist Maria Raspopova—not as a musician but as her page turner. “I’m not a trained musician, but I’ve learnt to read music so I can help Maria in her performance.”
Mr Titterton is chairman of the Omega Ensemble but has been the group’s official page turner for the past four years. His job is to sit beside the pianist and turn the pages of the score so the musician doesn’t have to break the flow of sound by doing it themselves. He said he became just as nervous as those playing instruments on stage.
“A lot of skills are needed for the job.You have to make sure you don’t turn two pages at once and make sure you find the repeats in the music when you have to go back to the right spot,”Mr Titterton explained.
Being a page turner requires plenty of practice. Some pieces of music can go for 40 minutes and require up to 50 page turns, including back turns for repeat passages. Silent onstage communication is key, and each pianist has their own style of “nodding” to indicate a page turn which they need to practise with their page turner.
But like all performances, there are moments when things go wrong. “I was turning the page to get ready for the next page, but the draft wind from the turn caused the spare pages to fall off the stand,” Mr Titterton said. “Luckily I was able to catch them and put them back.”
Most page turners are piano students or up and coming concert pianists, although Ms Raspopova has once asked her husband to help her out on stage.
“My husband is the worst page turner,” she laughed. “He’s interested in the music, feeling every note, and I have to say:‘Turn, turn!’Robert is the best page turner I’ve had in my entire life.”
词汇积累
1.repeat n.重复段;反复部分 2.onstage adj.& adv.舞台上(的)
3.up and coming adj.有前途的;前程似锦的
1.What should Titterton be able to do to be a page turner
A.Read music. B.Play the piano. C.Sing songs. D.Fix the instruments.
2.Which of the following best describes Titterton’s job on stage
A.Boring. B.Well paid. C.Demanding. D.Dangerous.
3.What does Titterton need to practise
A.Counting the pages.
B.Recognizing the “nodding”.
C.Catching falling objects.
D.Performing in his own style.
4.Why is Ms Raspopova’s husband “the worst page turner”
A.He has very poor eyesight. B.He ignores the audience.
C.He has no interest in music. D.He forgets to do his job.
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Born in July 1924 in Beijing, Ye Jiaying is a Chinese born Canadian poet and scholar of classical Chinese literature.
Professor Ye devoted herself to carrying forward classical Chinese poetry. And with the popularity of her great works, she has become famous among the people who love Chinese poetry. Apart from her academic contributions, she also donated about 35 million yuan to Nankai University to support the study of traditional Chinese culture.
Professor Ye has demonstrated the spirit of craftsmanship in the spread of Chinese culture and truly deserves our respect.
1.重点词汇
①devote oneself to献身于;致力于
②apart from除了……外(还)
③donate vt.捐赠,赠送
④demonstrate v.展现 (才能、品质、感情);证明
⑤deserve one’s respect值得某人的尊重
2.亮点句型
And with the popularity of her great works, she has become famous among the people who love Chinese poetry.(who引导定语从句)随着她的伟大作品的流行,她在热爱中国诗歌的人群中变得出名了。
五年高考练
◎语篇解读 本文为记叙文。在音乐家演奏时为他们翻乐谱的人虽然在舞台上不引人注意,但需要很多技巧和大量的训练。
1.A 细节理解题。根据“Titterton”和“to be a page turner”可知答案区域在第一段。本题题干意为:为了成为一个翻乐谱的人,Titterton应该能做什么 根据第一段中“but I’ve learnt to read music(但是我已经学会了识谱)”可知一个翻乐谱的人应该学会识谱,故答案为A项。
2.C 推理判断题。根据上下文深层推断语篇中的隐含意义。 本题题干意为:下面哪个选项最能描述Titterton在舞台上的工作 根据第三段中“A lot of skills are needed for the job.(这份工作需要大量的技巧。)”以及下文中的关键信息“have to”和“make sure”可综合推断Titterton在舞台上的工作要求很高,故选C项(demanding)。boring没趣的,令人厌倦(或厌烦)的;well paid薪水高的;dangerous危险的。
3.B 推理判断题。根据“need to practise”可知答案区域在第四段。本题题干意为:Titterton需要练习什么 根据第四段中的“and each pianist has their own style of ‘nodding’ to indicate a page turn which they need to practise with their page turner(每个钢琴家都有自己的‘点头’风格来示意翻页)”可推断Titterton需要练习识别钢琴家发出的“点头”信号,才能准确地翻页,故答案为B项。
4.D 推理判断题。根据“Ms Raspopova’s husband”和“the worst page turner”可知要分析最后一段的隐含信息。本题题干意为:为什么Ms Raspopova的丈夫是“最糟糕的翻乐谱的人” 根据最后一段中(他对音乐很感兴趣,能感受到每一个音符,我不得不提醒他:“翻页,翻页!”)可推断由于专注于音乐,他忘了翻页,故答案为D项。
长难句
原句 Silent onstage communication is key, and each pianist has their own style of “nodding” to indicate a page turn which they need to practise with their page turner.
分析 关系代词which引导定语从句,修饰先行词nodding,which在从句中作动词practise的宾语。
译文 舞台上的无声交流是关键的,每个钢琴家都有自己的“点头”风格来暗示翻页,这需要他们和翻乐谱的人共同练习。
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Part 4 Writing
介绍一位具有工匠精神的人物
写作题目
假定你是李华, 请根据下列提示,为校报的英语园地写一篇英语短文,介绍你最崇拜的中国科学家梁建英。
1.出生时间:1972年4月
出生地点:吉林省
2.职务:中国高铁总设计师
3.主要经历:
(1) 1995年大学毕业后开始从事高铁研究工作;
(2) 2007年她率领团队研制出国内首列运行时速为300—350公里的高速列车;
(3) 2017年,“复兴号”以350公里的时速正式投入运营,在高铁运营领域取得了新的突破。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:高速列车G Series High Speed Train
思路点拨
主题 介绍一位你最崇拜的中国科学家 体裁 记叙文
布局 第一段:介绍梁建英的出生时间、出生地点、职务及主要经历; 第二段:表达自己的感想。
人称 以第三人称为主 时态 以一般过去时为主
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.奉献,献身
2. n.创新,革新
3. 对……做出贡献
4. 献身于
5. 开辟新的领域
6. 取得突破
7. adj.费尽心思的
8. vt.激励,激发
答案 1.dedication/devotion 2.innovation 3.contribute to 4.devote oneself to 5.break new ground 6.make a breakthrough 7.painstaking 8.inspire
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:介绍梁建英的出生时间、出生地点、职务及主要经历
(1)梁建英于1972年4 月出生于吉林省。
Liang Jianying was born .
(2)梁建英是中国高铁总设计师。
Liang Jianying is the China’s high speed railway.
(3)梁建英于1995年毕业。
Liang Jianying .
(4)自从毕业后她一直致力于研究中国高速列车的发展。
She researching into the development of China’s G Series High Speed Train since graduation.
(5)2007年,她率领团队研制出国内首列运行时速为300—350公里的高速列车。
In 2007, she led her team to develop the first G Series High Speed Train in China which was operated 300-350 kph.
(6)2017年,“复兴号”以350公里的时速正式投入运营。
In 2017, the Fuxing train officially with the speed of 350 kph.
(7)高铁运营领域取得了新的突破。
in the operation of the high speed railway.
第二段:表达自己的感想
(8)梁建英为我们树立了一个好的榜样。
Liang Jianying .
(9)她的艰苦奉献和革新精神激励着我们努力学习,将来为祖国的发展做出贡献。
Her spirit of to study hard and the development of our country in the future.
答案 (1)in Jilin Province in April 1972
(2)general designer of
(3)graduated in 1995
(4)has been devoting herself to
(5)at the speed of
(6)was put into service
(7)A new breakthrough was made
(8)has set a good example to us
(9)painstaking dedication and innovation inspires us;contribute to
2.句式升级
(10)用同位语合并句(1)和句(2)
(11)用since引导的时间状语从句合并句(3)和句(4)
(12)用which引导的非限制性定语从句合并句(6)和句(7)
(13)用过去分词短语作原因状语改写句(9)
答案 (10)Liang Jianying, general designer of China’s high speed railway, was born in Jilin Province in April 1972.
(11)Since she graduated in 1995, Liang Jianying has been devoting herself to researching into the development of China’s G Series High Speed Train.
(12)In 2017, the Fuxing train was put into service officially with the speed of 350 kph, which made a new breakthrough in the operation of the high speed railway.
(13)Inspired by her spirit of painstaking dedication and innovation, we will study hard and contribute to the development of our country in the future.
连句成篇
参考范文
Liang Jianying, general designer of China’s high speed railway, was born in Jilin Province in April 1972. Since she graduated in 1995,Liang Jianying has been devoting herself to researching into the development of China’s G Series High Speed Train. In 2007, she led her team to develop the first G Series High Speed Train in China which was operated at the speed of 300-350 kph. In 2017, the Fuxing train was put into service officially with the speed of 350 kph, which made a new breakthrough in the operation of the high speed railway.
Liang Jianying has set a good example to us. Inspired by her spirit of painstaking dedication and innovation, we will study hard and contribute to the development of our country in the future.
写作积累
(一)增色词汇
1.人物介绍:poet; celebrity; anthropologist; photographer; scientist; be born in; become interested in; show interest in; at an early age
2.人物评价:ambitious; outstanding; modest; painstaking; be considered as; be regarded as; be famous for; dedicate oneself to
(二)精彩句型
1.Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980, is a world famous basketball player.
2.In his life, he got many honours, one of which is the 2015 CCTV Touching China Award.
3.Deng Yaping, whose hobby is playing ping pong, has devoted herself to the sport after graduation.
4.Li Keran, a famous painter and art educator, developed a personal style of landscape painting.
5.Not only is he devoted to his research, but he also concerns himself with the welfare project.
6.In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal, he became the idol of the youth.
7.Not only is she very strict with herself in her study and daily life, but she is also always ready to help others.
8.It is his hard training and his perseverance that lead to his breakthrough and success in swimming.
9.Nie Er is considered as one of the greatest musical geniuses in the history of China and will be remembered by the Chinese people forever.
实战演练
假定你是李华,你校英语报“Great People”专栏正在征文,请写一篇短文,介绍你心目中最具工匠精神的名人,并投稿。内容包括:
1.个人简介;
2.主要贡献;
3.事迹及荣誉。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
读后续写
写作题目
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mother’s Gift
I grew up in a small town where the primary school was a ten minute walk from my house. When the noon bell rang, I would race breathlessly home. My mother would be standing at the top of the stairs, smiling down at me.
One lunchtime when I was in the third grade will always stay with me. I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had rehearsed my lines so hard with me. But no matter how easily I acted at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained that she had written a narrator’s(旁白员) part to the play, and asked me to change roles. Her words, kindly expressed, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.
I didn’t tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my pain. Instead of suggesting we practise my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard.
It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英) in the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold. I watched my mother casually bend down by one dandelion. “I think I’m going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling it up by its roots. “From now on, we’ll have only roses in this garden.”
“But I like dandelions,” I protested. “All flowers are beautiful—even dandelions.”
My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn’t it ” she asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over. “And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that.” Knowing that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened. She listened and smiled reassuringly(安慰地).
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Paragraph 1:
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said,
Paragraph 2:
After the play, I took home the dandelion.
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.sense vt.觉察到
2.bunch n.串,束,扎
3.casually adv.随意地,漫不经心地
4.dig up挖出
5.protest v.反对;坚决地表示
6.shame n.羞耻;丢脸
障碍词汇
1.rehearse v.排演,排练
2.vine n.藤蔓;藤
3.win over说服,赢得……的支持
长难句剖析
原句 Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions in the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold.
分析 该句是一个主从复合句。as if引导方式状语从句,从句中使用了虚拟语气。
译文 在大树下,我们可以看到草地上一丛丛黄色的蒲公英,仿佛是一位画家为我们的风景增添了一点金色。
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:
她说:“但你会成为一名出色的旁白员。”→妈妈又说了一些鼓励“我”的话→“我”接受了旁白员的角色,努力排练→“我”在演出前看到了妈妈送的一朵蒲公英,克服了紧张→演出成功
第二段:
话剧演出结束后,“我”把蒲公英带回了家→妈妈和“我”一起把这朵蒲公英封存起来留作纪念→带给“我”的感触
遣词造句
1.用单词或短语填空
(1) a shining smile 带着灿烂的笑容
(2)be of vital 至关重要的
(3)go on 上台
(4)keep... 陪伴……
(5) 结果是
(6) 注视
(7) v.记起,回忆起
(8) adj.宝贵的
答案 (1)wear (2)significance/importance(3)stage (4)company (5)turn out (6)gaze at (7)recall (8)precious
2.完成句子
(1)“但你会成为一名出色的旁白员,”她说,一如既往地鼓励和安慰我。
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, and me as she always did.
(2)“旁白员的角色同样重要,”母亲补充道,她温柔的脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
“The narrator’s part is equally important,” my mother added, on her soft face.
(3)时光飞逝,演出的那一天到了。
Time had and it reached the performance day.
(4)就在那一刻,我发现了一朵母亲塞进我口袋里陪伴我的蒲公英。
At that very moment, I found a dandelion by my mother to .
(5)妈妈仔细地注视着那朵蒲公英,轻轻地把它放进一本字典里,像往常一样笑了。
Mom carefully the dandelion, gently a dictionary and smiled as usual.
(6)虽然几十年过去了,但我总是记起我们一起度过的宝贵的午餐时光。
Though decades have passed, I we were together.
(7)我很感激母亲脸上的微笑和她的体贴。
I the smile on my mother’s face and her kindness.
答案 (1)encouraging; comforting (2)wearing a shining smile (3)flown by (4)put into my pocket; keep me company (5)gazed at; placed it into (6)constantly recall the precious lunchtime (7)was grateful for
3.句式升级
(8)用强调句型强调时间状语改写句(4)
(9)用形容词作状语合并句(6)和句(7)
答案 (8)It was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company.
(9)Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smile on my mother’s face and her kindness.
连句成篇
Paragraph 1:
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said,
Paragraph 2:
After the play, I took home the dandelion.
参考范文
Paragraph 1:
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, encouraging and comforting me as she always did. “The narrator’s part is equally important,” my mother added, wearing a shining smile on her soft face. I began to accept that the narrator part was of vital significance and rehearsed even harder. Time had flown by and it reached the performance day. Before going on stage I still felt nervous, but it was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company. The play turned out to be a great success.
Paragraph 2:
After the play, I took home the dandelion. Mom carefully gazed at the dandelion, gently placed it into a dictionary and smiled as usual. “We were perhaps the only people who would keep such a sorry looking weed.” Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smile on my mother’s face and her kindness.
写作积累
环境描写
一、环境描写的分类
1.自然环境描写。如:The country is very green in spring.
2.社会环境描写。如:This small village was filled with flames of war at that time.
二、环境描写的手法
1.借助感官(视觉、听觉、嗅觉、味觉、触觉)来进行环境描写。如:After the rain, the lotus flowers in the pond are in full blossom. They give off a faint scent.(借助嗅觉进行描写)
2.从时空的角度进行环境描写,例如,由上到下、由远及近等方式。如:I saw many kids who were laughing happily on the lawn. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky.(采用视觉上的由下到上的方式进行描写)
三、环境描写的素材
the blue sky蓝天,the songs of birds鸟鸣,the fragile flowers娇嫩的花,the raining evening 雨夜,the green grass青草,the fragrant roses芬芳的玫瑰,the setting/rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太阳,a gust of wind一阵狂风,the drooping branches of the weeping willow垂柳的低垂枝条,the soft and cool wind轻柔且凉爽的风
五年高考练
阅读理解
(2021全国新高考Ⅰ,B)
By day, Robert Titterton is a lawyer. In his spare time though he goes on stage beside pianist Maria Raspopova—not as a musician but as her page turner. “I’m not a trained musician, but I’ve learnt to read music so I can help Maria in her performance.”
Mr Titterton is chairman of the Omega Ensemble but has been the group’s official page turner for the past four years. His job is to sit beside the pianist and turn the pages of the score so the musician doesn’t have to break the flow of sound by doing it themselves. He said he became just as nervous as those playing instruments on stage.
“A lot of skills are needed for the job.You have to make sure you don’t turn two pages at once and make sure you find the repeats in the music when you have to go back to the right spot,”Mr Titterton explained.
Being a page turner requires plenty of practice. Some pieces of music can go for 40 minutes and require up to 50 page turns, including back turns for repeat passages. Silent onstage communication is key, and each pianist has their own style of “nodding” to indicate a page turn which they need to practise with their page turner.
But like all performances, there are moments when things go wrong. “I was turning the page to get ready for the next page, but the draft wind from the turn caused the spare pages to fall off the stand,” Mr Titterton said. “Luckily I was able to catch them and put them back.”
Most page turners are piano students or up and coming concert pianists, although Ms Raspopova has once asked her husband to help her out on stage.
“My husband is the worst page turner,” she laughed. “He’s interested in the music, feeling every note, and I have to say:‘Turn, turn!’Robert is the best page turner I’ve had in my entire life.”
词汇积累
1.repeat n.重复段;反复部分 2.onstage adj.& adv.舞台上(的)
3.up and coming adj.有前途的;前程似锦的
1.What should Titterton be able to do to be a page turner
A.Read music. B.Play the piano. C.Sing songs. D.Fix the instruments.
2.Which of the following best describes Titterton’s job on stage
A.Boring. B.Well paid. C.Demanding. D.Dangerous.
3.What does Titterton need to practise
A.Counting the pages.
B.Recognizing the “nodding”.
C.Catching falling objects.
D.Performing in his own style.
4.Why is Ms Raspopova’s husband “the worst page turner”
A.He has very poor eyesight. B.He ignores the audience.
C.He has no interest in music. D.He forgets to do his job.
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Born in July 1924 in Beijing, Ye Jiaying is a Chinese born Canadian poet and scholar of classical Chinese literature.
Professor Ye devoted herself to carrying forward classical Chinese poetry. And with the popularity of her great works, she has become famous among the people who love Chinese poetry. Apart from her academic contributions, she also donated about 35 million yuan to Nankai University to support the study of traditional Chinese culture.
Professor Ye has demonstrated the spirit of craftsmanship in the spread of Chinese culture and truly deserves our respect.
1.重点词汇
①devote oneself to献身于;致力于
②apart from除了……外(还)
③donate vt.捐赠,赠送
④demonstrate v.展现 (才能、品质、感情);证明
⑤deserve one’s respect值得某人的尊重
2.亮点句型
And with the popularity of her great works, she has become famous among the people who love Chinese poetry.(who引导定语从句)随着她的伟大作品的流行,她在热爱中国诗歌的人群中变得出名了。
五年高考练
◎语篇解读 本文为记叙文。在音乐家演奏时为他们翻乐谱的人虽然在舞台上不引人注意,但需要很多技巧和大量的训练。
1.A 细节理解题。根据“Titterton”和“to be a page turner”可知答案区域在第一段。本题题干意为:为了成为一个翻乐谱的人,Titterton应该能做什么 根据第一段中“but I’ve learnt to read music(但是我已经学会了识谱)”可知一个翻乐谱的人应该学会识谱,故答案为A项。
2.C 推理判断题。根据上下文深层推断语篇中的隐含意义。 本题题干意为:下面哪个选项最能描述Titterton在舞台上的工作 根据第三段中“A lot of skills are needed for the job.(这份工作需要大量的技巧。)”以及下文中的关键信息“have to”和“make sure”可综合推断Titterton在舞台上的工作要求很高,故选C项(demanding)。boring没趣的,令人厌倦(或厌烦)的;well paid薪水高的;dangerous危险的。
3.B 推理判断题。根据“need to practise”可知答案区域在第四段。本题题干意为:Titterton需要练习什么 根据第四段中的“and each pianist has their own style of ‘nodding’ to indicate a page turn which they need to practise with their page turner(每个钢琴家都有自己的‘点头’风格来示意翻页)”可推断Titterton需要练习识别钢琴家发出的“点头”信号,才能准确地翻页,故答案为B项。
4.D 推理判断题。根据“Ms Raspopova’s husband”和“the worst page turner”可知要分析最后一段的隐含信息。本题题干意为:为什么Ms Raspopova的丈夫是“最糟糕的翻乐谱的人” 根据最后一段中(他对音乐很感兴趣,能感受到每一个音符,我不得不提醒他:“翻页,翻页!”)可推断由于专注于音乐,他忘了翻页,故答案为D项。
长难句
原句 Silent onstage communication is key, and each pianist has their own style of “nodding” to indicate a page turn which they need to practise with their page turner.
分析 关系代词which引导定语从句,修饰先行词nodding,which在从句中作动词practise的宾语。
译文 舞台上的无声交流是关键的,每个钢琴家都有自己的“点头”风格来暗示翻页,这需要他们和翻乐谱的人共同练习。
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