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2024外研版高中英语选择性必修第四册同步
Part 4 Writing
关于太空生活的日记
写作题目
假如现在是2050年,你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观,举行聚会,与外星人(alien)通电话……总之,你们玩得很愉快。 请根据以上材料,以 “An Exciting Space Trip”为题,描述一下你的火星之旅。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
主题 太空生活 体裁 记叙文
布局 第一部分:介绍在火星上的活动; 第二部分:描述个人感受。
人称 以第一、三人称为主 时态 以一般过去时为主
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. adj.很好的,了不起的
2. v.尖声大叫
3. 航天飞机
答案1.awesome 2.scream 3.the space shuttle
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一部分:介绍在火星上的活动
(1)我们乘航天飞机去了火星。
We to Mars.
(2)在火星上我们发现了很多与地球不同的东西。
On Mars we found a lot of things the earth.
(3)我们邀请了许多外星人来我们的聚会。
We to our party.
(4)聚会是在我们的航天飞机里举行的。
The party in our space shuttle.
(5)他们的歌非常棒。
Their songs .
(6)我们都尖叫起来。
All of us .
第二部分:描述个人感受
(7)这次旅行很有趣,我希望我能很快再去火星旅行。
The trip was very interesting and to Mars again soon.
答案 (1)took the space shuttle (2)different from (3)invited many aliens (4)was held (5)were awesome (6)screamed (7)I hope I can travel
2.句式升级
(8)将句(1)和句(2)合并为含有定语从句的主从复合句
(9)将句(3)和句(4)合并为含有过去分词作定语的句子
(10)用so...that...结构合并句(5)和句(6)
答案 (8)We took the space shuttle to Mars, on which we found a lot of things different from the earth.
(9)We invited many aliens to our party held in our space shuttle.
(10)Their songs were so awesome that all of us screamed.
连句成篇
参考范文
An Exciting Space Trip
It is the year of 2050. Our school organized a great trip to Mars a few days ago.We took the space shuttle to Mars, on which we found a lot of things different from the earth. After that, we invited many aliens to our party held in our space shuttle. They danced and sang together with us. Their songs were so awesome that all of us screamed. Finally, we made phone calls with aliens.
We all had a good time on Mars. The trip was very interesting and I hope I can travel to Mars again soon.
写作积累
1.I believe several decades later, people can live in space.我相信几十年后,人们就可以在太空生活了。
2.Space exploration is the use of astronomy and space technology to explore outer space.太空探索就是利用天文学和空间技术探索外层空间。
3.Life in space is wonderful and challenging!太空生活真是奇妙又有挑战性!
4.Every day in space, I experience amazing and unexpected things.在太空中,我每天都会体验令人惊叹的和令人意想不到的事情。
5.My favorite thing is taking pictures of the Earth.我最喜欢做的事情是给地球拍照。
6.I would like to share my experiments with people on Earth.我愿意和地球上的人分享我的实验。
实战演练
假如你是李华,你有幸参加了一个太空旅行项目,已经在太空生活了几天。请你用英语写一篇短文,向地球上的朋友们简单介绍一下你在太空第一天的生活场景,要包括吃饭、锻炼以及睡觉等几个方面。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Part 4 Writing
实战演练 对应主书P102
One possible version:
There is no gravity in space. After getting up, I had some bread and fruit juice for breakfast. I had to fetch a straw to drink the juice, otherwise it would have floated around in the spacecraft. I worked for several hours and took some exercise. I tied my feet to a special machine so that I wouldn’t float away while working out. When it was time to go to bed, I went into a small cupboard, got into a sleeping bag and tied it to the wall. I thought I must have looked funny.
Living in space is rather difficult but amusing. I enjoy it very much.
1.重点词汇
①otherwise adv.否则
②spacecraft n.宇宙飞船
③float away 飘走
④work out 锻炼
⑤amusing adj.有趣的,逗人笑的
2.亮点句型
I tied my feet to a special machine so that I wouldn’t float away while working out. (so that引导目的状语从句;“while working out”为while引导的状语从句的省略形式)我把脚绑在一个特殊的机器上,这样我锻炼的时候就不会飘走。
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