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2024外研版高中英语选择性必修第四册同步
Part 4 Writing
推荐文化旅游胜地
写作题目
假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。你校交换生Jim 打算寒假出去旅游,发来邮件请你推荐一座中国历史文化名城。请给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你推荐的城市;
2.推荐理由;
3.食宿建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
主题 历史文化名城介绍 体裁 应用文
布局 第一段:引出推荐的城市; 第二段:写出推荐的理由及食宿等方面的建议; 第三段:总结。
人称 以第三人称为主 时态 以一般现在时为主
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.证据;证明
2. 接触……;体验……
3. 为……带来生机;使……更生动
4. 引起共鸣
答案1.testimony 2.be exposed to 3.bring...to life 4.strike a chord
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:引出推荐的城市
(1)我了解到你打算去另一个城市旅行。
I have learnt that you are travel to another city.
(2)这个城市是中国悠久的历史和丰富的文化的证明。
The city is to the of China.
第二段:写出推荐的理由及食宿等方面的建议
(3)它被证实曾是13个朝代的都城。
It was to be the of 13 dynasties.
(4)在这里你可以接触到无数的历史遗迹,如兵马俑和大雁塔。
You can countless here, such as the Terra cotta Warriors and the Dayan Pagoda.
(5)西安还是一个非常奇妙的地方,它赋予了东方迷人的艺术和文化生命力。
Xi’an is also a wonderland, the fascinating art and culture of the East .
第三段:总结
(6)我相信,美丽而有历史意义的西安一定会引起你的共鸣!
I am sure the wonderful and historic Xi’an will with you!
答案 (1)planning to (2)testimony; long history and rich culture (3)proved; capital city (4)be exposed to; historic relics
(5)which brings; to life (6)strike a chord
2.句式升级
(7)将句(1)和句(2)合并为含有定语从句的句子
(8)将句(3)和句(4)合并为含有定语从句的句子
答案 (7)I have learnt that you are planning to travel to another city which is testimony to the long history and rich culture of China.
(8)It was proved to be the capital city of 13 dynasties, where you can be exposed to countless historic relics, such as the Terracotta Warriors and the Dayan Pagoda.
连句成篇
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Jim,
I have learnt that you are planning to travel to another city which is testimony to the long history and rich culture of China. Then I want to recommend Xi’an to you.
It was proved to be the capital city of 13 dynasties, where you can be exposed to countless historic relics, such as the Terracotta Warriors and the Dayan Pagoda. Xi’an is also a wonderland, which brings the fascinating art and culture of the East to life. You can choose to live someplace near the ancient city wall. What’s more, the bustling snack street in the downtown is a must for tourists.
I am sure the wonderful and historic Xi’an will strike a chord with you!
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累
1.Having learned that you’re planning to visit Nanjing, I am writing to put forward my suggestions about your tour.得知你计划来南京旅游,我写信对你的旅行提出我的建议。
2.The reason why I recommend the Great Wall is that it is one of the “New Seven Wonders of the World”.我推荐长城的原因是它是“世界新七大奇迹”之一。
3.It’s a charming city with rich culture and a long history, where you can enjoy various caves and carvings.它是一个拥有丰富文化和悠久历史的迷人城市,在这里你可以欣赏到各种洞穴和雕刻。
4.May you have a wonderful travelling experience!祝你有一段美好的旅行经历!
实战演练
假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Jerry将从广州出发到北京进行为期一周的旅游,他发邮件向你咨询相关信息。请你给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1.推荐北京的景点(至少两处);
2.表达祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Part 4 Writing
实战演练 对应主书P53
One possible version:
Dear Jerry,
Knowing that you’re going to Beijing for vacation, I’m more than pleased to give you some advice.
The first place I recommend you to go is the Great Wall. The reason why I recommend it is that it is one of the new seven wonders in the world. As a symbol of ancient Chinese civilisation, it is one of the world’s oldest and most magnificent man made scenes. The next place of interest you cannot miss is the Summer Palace, which is the largest and best preserved royal garden in China.
May you have an unforgettable tourist experience!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重点词汇
①more than很,非常
②recommend v.建议;推荐
③magnificent adj.宏伟的,壮丽的
④unforgettable adj.难以忘怀的
2.亮点句型
The next place of interest you cannot miss is the Summer Palace, which is the largest and best preserved royal garden in China.(省略关系词的定语从句;which引导非限制性定语从句)下一个你不能错过的景点是颐和园,它是中国最大、保存最完好的皇家园林。
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