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Part 4 Writing
描述无法解释的现象
写作题目
“大脚怪 (Bigfoot)”一直引发人们的热议。请根据所给的文字提示写一篇英语短文来参与讨论。
神秘生 物描述 在北美地区被首次看到,像猿(ape),身高约2米,体重在500磅以上,全身覆盖棕色或红色毛,头和眼睛很大,脚印长达0.6米
发现 情况 科学家和研究人员找到了与它相关的粪便(faeces)、毛发等
结论 无其他证据证明其存在,也许这只是当地传说,以吓唬徒步者或猎人
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
主题 神秘生物 体裁 说明文
布局 第一部分:神秘生物出现的地点; 第二部分:根据所给内容,描述其神秘之处; 第三部分:科学家的相关研究情况及结论。
人称 第三人称 时态 一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. adj.神秘的,难以解释的
2. n.调查
3. 多达,高达
答案 1.mysterious 2.investigation 3.up to
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一部分:神秘生物出现的地点
(1)大脚怪是世界著名的神秘生物之一。
The Bigfoot is .
(2)它是在北美洲被首次看到的。
It in North America.
第二部分:根据所给内容,描述其神秘之处
(3)据说它身高约2米。
It about 2 metres tall.
(4)它的体重在500磅以上。
over 500 pounds.
(5)它全身覆盖棕色或红色的毛发,有着大大的眼睛和头。
It was covered in brown or red fur and a big head.
(6)它的脚印长达0.6米。
Its footprints were 0.6 metres.
第三部分:科学家的相关研究情况及结论
(7)在调查后,一些科学家和研究人员已经找到了与它相关的东西,如粪便、毛发等。
, some scientists and researchers have found things related to it, faeces, fur and so on.
(8)但是,还没有其他证据证明其存在。
However, to prove its existence.
答案 (1)one of the world famous mysterious creatures (2)was first seen (3)was said to be (4)It weighed (5)with large eyes
(6)up to (7)After investigation;such as (8)there has been no other evidence
2.句式升级
(9)将句(1)和句(2)合并为含有非谓语动词作定语的句子
(10)将句(3)和句(4)合并为含有现在分词作状语的句子
(11)将句(5)和句(6)合并为含有定语从句的句子
答案 (9)The Bigfoot, first seen in North America, is one of the world famous mysterious creatures.
(10)It was said to be about 2 metres tall, weighing over 500 pounds.
(11)It was covered in brown or red fur with large eyes and a big head, whose footprints were up to 0.6 metres.
连句成篇
参考范文
The Bigfoot, first seen in North America, is one of the world famous mysterious creatures.
Witnesses described it as an ape like creature. It was said to be about 2 metres tall, weighing over 500 pounds. It was covered in brown or red fur with large eyes and a big head, whose footprints were up to 0.6 metres.
After investigation,some scientists and researchers have found things related to it, such as faeces, fur and so on. However, there has been no other evidence to prove its existence. Some people think it may be just folk tales to terrify hikers or hunters in North America.
写作积累
1.描述科学家及有关专家们对神秘现象的解释及其证据的常用语句:
①Some scientists think that...
②Some experts believe in its existence, because...
③By recent research, we can learn that...
④Other scientists consider that...
2.描述作者个人对神秘现象的认识的常用语句:
①Personally, I (don’t) believe...
②As far as I am concerned,...
③In my point of view, ...
实战演练
假定你是李华,你的美国网友 Tom 给你发来邮件,想了解楼兰古国的相关情况。请根据所给提示,用英语给他回一封电子邮件。
要点包括:
1.位于罗布泊(Lop Nor)西部,曾是古代丝绸之路上的一个小国;
2.在古代丝绸之路上占有极为重要的地位;
3.公元630年神秘消失,现今只留下一片废墟。
注意:1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
Yours,
Li Hua
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Part 4 Writing
实战演练 对应主书P86
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
Hearing that you’re intrigued by the ancient city of Loulan, I’m writing to introduce it briefly.
Located west of Lop Nor, the ancient city of Loulan used to be a small country on the ancient Silk Road, which linked China and the West as an important centre of trade historically. However, the year 630 AD witnessed this great city disappeared mysteriously. What people can see nowadays is only its ruins. Though scientists and archaeologists worldwide throw themselves into investigating its cause, no notable hard proof has been found.
If you have any question, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重点词汇
①be intrigued by对……感兴趣,被……吸引
②historically adv.从历史上看,历史上地
③witness v.见证,目睹
④throw oneself into积极投身到……中去
2.亮点句型
Located west of Lop Nor, the ancient city of Loulan used to be a small country on the ancient Silk Road, which linked China and the West as an important centre of trade historically.(“Located...Lop Nor”是过去分词短语作地点状语,which引导非限制性定语从句,修饰a small country)楼兰古国位于罗布泊西部,曾是古代丝绸之路上的一个小国,在历史上是连接中国和西方的重要的贸易中心。
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