重庆市2015届中考市级教研课------写作

课件30张PPT。How to Better a Piece of Writing 为了更好地开展2014年全民阅读活动，有关部门就如何为市民创造良好的阅读环境广泛征求意见，你班将举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。请你写一篇发言稿，提出自己的想法和建议。
要点提示:
1. 阅读的重要性。
2. 你的建议。（如建更多小型图书馆，经常性地
介绍好书等）
要求：
1. 词数：80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总数。
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。2014年中考书面表达 (15分)A piece of writing from a student(学生作文） Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading
is very important to us. It can makes us understand
the world, and it can make us feel relaxing. I want to make more people like reading, so I have some good suggestion. We can build lots of small libraries in the city. If there are more new books, people are more interested in reading. We should keep the reading room quiet and clean. It is public place. You can't make sound or put rubbish on the ground. I hope my advices could be good . More people will like reading. Do you think it is a good piece of writing? Why or why not?Better the layout (布局)
Better the grammar
Better the vocabulary (词汇)
Better the sentences
Better the logic (逻辑)
How can we make the writing better ? Better the layout (布局)How to make the writing better Step 1 A better layout can make the writing more clear.Basic layout基本结构

Paragraph 1Paragraph 2Paragraph 3introduction
引入details
细节conclusion
总结 Para. 3 conclusion Para. 2 details
Put the writing into a better layout.Para. 1 introduction Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important to us. It can makes us understand the world, and it can make us feel relaxing. I want to make more people like reading, so I have some good suggestion. We can build lots of small libraries in the city. If there are more new books, people are more interested in reading. We should keep the reading room quiet and clean. It is public place. You can't make sound or put rubbish on the ground. I wish my advices could be good . More people will like reading.Better the grammarStep 2 Grammar plays a very important
role in English writing!How to make the writing better Common mistakes in grammar 常见语法错误

Parts of speech 词性Forms of words 词的形式Tenses of verbs 动词时态Example Xiao Ming is a middle school student. He doesn’t learn English careful at all. At home, he enjoys watch TV. He always forgot to go over his English lessons.carefully watchingforgets Parts of speech 词性Forms of words 词的形式Tenses of verbs 动词时态 Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is very important for us. It can makes us understand the world, and it can make us feel relaxing.
I want to make more people like reading, so I have some good suggestion. We can build lots of small libraries in the city. If there are more new books, people are more interested in reading. We should keep the reading room quietly and clean. It is a public place. You can't make sound or put rubbish on the ground.
I hope my advices could be good. More people will like reading. Find the grammatical mistakesmakerelaxedsuggestionswill be advicequiet Better the vocabulary (词汇)Step 3 Better vocabulary can make the writing more vivid (生动的) and
meaningful.How to make the writing better 1. 我希望你能帮助我。A. I hope you can help me.
B. I look forward to your help.2. 他们冲出教室去吃饭。
A. They rushed out of the classroom for lunch.
B. They ran out of the classroom for lunch.How can we better the vocabulary ? Wonderful phrases ( 短语) can be
used instead of common words.
More suitable words can also be used
according to the context (上下文). 1. It can make us understand the world, and it
can make us feel relaxed.
2. We should keep the reading room quiet
and clean.
3. You can't make sound or put rubbish on the
ground.
4. I hope my advice can be good. More people
will like reading.have a better understanding of noise throw / drop are supposed to useful enjoy Turn the underlined words into better ones. Better the sentencesStep 4 Better sentences can make the writing more attractive (有吸引力的).How to make the writing better 1. 他得了第一名，感到很惊喜。 He won the first place. He was surprised.
B. He was surprised to win the first place.A. I find it really interesting to learn English .
B. Learning English is interesting, I think.2. 我认为学英语很有趣。How can we better the sentences?Sentence pattern (句型) Simple sentences can be put into
complex sentences (复合句) for better.
Better sentence patterns （句型) can
be used to improve the writing.
1. I want to make more people like reading.
I have some good suggestions.
___ _____ ___ make more people like reading,
I have some good suggestions.
We can build lots of small libraries in the city.
Lots of small libraries can ____ _____ in the city.
3. You can't make noise, and you can’t throw rubbish on the ground.
You are not _______ ____ make any noise ____ throw rubbish on the ground.
In order tobe builtallowed to Turn the sentences below into better ones. orBetter the logic (逻辑)Step 5A better logic can make readers have a better understanding of
the writing.How to make the writing better 表并列：and, both… and…; as well as…
表转折：but, yet, however …
表因果：because, so, as a result…
表递进：not only…but also…; what’s more…
表结果：so …that… ; such… that… ;
表先后：First, Second, Third, Next, Finally…
表时间：when, while, after, before, as soon as …
Linking words (连接词) How can we better the logic ? I like Liu Qian.He is a creative magician. I like Liu Qian _______ he is a creative magician.becauseMake sentences with linking words. He did magic shows ___ well ____everyone
was surprised.so that 2009 CCTV Spring Festival Gala_________ he is very young, he has won many prizes.Although Hello, my dear friends. As we all know, reading is
very important for us. It can ____ ____make us have a better understanding of the world, ____ ____ it can make us feel relaxed.
In order to make more people like reading, I have some good suggestions. ______, lots of small libraries can be built in the city. _______, if there are more new books, people will be more interested in reading. ______, we are supposed to keep the reading room quiet and clean. It is a public place, _____ you are not allowed to make noise or throw rubbish on the ground.
I hope my advice could be useful, ___more people will enjoy reading.not only but also Firstly Secondly Thirdly
/ Finally
/ lastly so andFill in the blanks with suitable linking words.Better the layout (布局)
Better the grammar
Better the vocabulary (词汇)
Better the sentences
Better the logic (逻辑)
How to better a piece of writing Writing Task 英语课堂上，老师要求学生就“与人相处”的话题展开讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，以“How to Get on Well with Others” 为题，写一篇英语短文。(15分)
要点提示：
1. 与人友好相处的重要性。
2. 如何与人友好相处的建议。
要求：
1. 词数：80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出。
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 As we all know, it’s very important for us to get on well with others. _________________________
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______________________________________How to Get on Well with Others What do you think of this writing according to what we have learned today?

Group Discussion How to Get on Well with Others
As we all know, it’s very important for us to get on well with others. If you can do that, you will have many friends.
How can we get along well with others? Here I have some suggestions. Firstly, sharing is very important. We can have many friends if we share with others. Secondly, learn to respect others. Everyone likes making friends with people who respect them. Thirdly, we should communicate with each other, because communication can make us popular.
In a word, getting along well with each other will lead to a better world.
Practice makes perfect !