Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes Section B Writing课件(共26张PPT) 2023-202

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Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes
Section B (3a~Self check)
Writing
课前练习
允许某人做某事____________________
要求某人做某事____________________
需要做某事________________________
同意某事/人__________________________
不反对做某事______________________
6. 某人自己做决定_______________________
7. 对某人严格_______________________
8. 担心_____________________________
9. 依我之见_________________________
allow sb. to do sth.
ask sb. to do sth.
need to do sth.
agree with sb./sth.
have nothing against doing sth.
make one’s own decision
be strict with sb.
be worried about
in my opinion
Dear Fiona,
Every family has ______ own rules. There are so ______ rules in my home. I must get up early and make my bed every morning. I can’t leave the dirty dishes in the ______. And I am not ______ to hang out with friends at night. They make me feel ______!
I ______ that I must get up early and make my bed every morning. Because it’s a good habit. And I think it’s ______ that I can't leave the dirty dishes in the kitchen. Because it's important to keep the house clean and tidy. ______, I disagree that I am not allowed to hang out with friends at night. I need some time to spend ______ my friends and relax. For that reason, I think I should be allowed to hang out with friends sometimes. I ______ my parents will allow me to do it if I promise not to stay out late.
As the saying goes,Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards. Both parents and we should understand each other. And I think the rules can help us become better.
Yours,
Jack
课前练习
allow kitchen it wish many terrible strict however agree disagree fair with
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Dear Fiona,
I have so many rules in my home. I must get up early and make my bed every morning. I can't leave the dirty dishes in the kitchen. And I am not allowed to hang out with friends at night. They make me feel terrible!
I agree that I must get up early and make my bed every morning. Because it's a good habit. And I think it's fair that I can't leave the dirty dishes in the kitchen. Because it's important to keep the house clean and tidy. However, I disagree that I am not allowed to hang out with friends at night. I need some time to spend with my friends and relax. For that reason, I think I should be allowed to hang out with friends sometimes. I wish my parents will allow me to do it if I promise not to stay out late.
As the saying goes,Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.Both parents and we should understand each other. And I think the rules can help us become better.
Yours,
Jack
rules
opinions
reasons
Changes
Feelings
I must/can’t/ am not allowed to ...
I agree that I must....... Because....
I think it’s fair to ....... Because....
I disagee that I must/can’t/ am not allowed to....
I think I should be allowed to ...
I wish my parents will allow me to do it if I promise.....
How to write the family rules
I think the rules can help us ...
Rules, rules,rules! It’s terrible
Lead-in
There are too many rules in her family.
Linda
What are her family rules
She is not allowed to
_____________________________ for a long time.
______________________________
__________________.
___________________________________
____________________
play with mobile phones
play computer games
stay up late
travel alone
Look and say
get part-time jobs
He can’t
_______________ .
_______________ .
_______________________________.
_____________________________.
talk back
make up
choose my own clothes
get my ears pierced
What are her family rules
Look and say
What are her family rules
Look and say
She must
_______________________ after school.
__________________________ .
_______________________________.
___________________
do her hmowork
do some housework
have dinner at home
do sports
Does she agree with these rules
exercise
____________________she must exercise.
Because it ___________________________ .
is good for health
Look and say
（对身体有好处）
She agrees that
Does she agree or disagree Why or Why not
travel alone
_________________________she is not allowed to travel alone.
too dangerous
Look and say
（太危险）
Because it is ____________________.
She agrees that
not safe
Does she agree or disagree Why or Why not
get one’s ears pierced
____________________ she is not allowed to get her ears pierced.
Because she is ____________________.
Do you agree or disagree Why or Why not
Look and say
She agrees that
too young
（太年轻）
not old enough
play phones for a long time
__________________she can’t play phones for a long time.
Because it _________________________ .
is bad for eyes
Look and say
（对眼睛有害）
She agrees that
Does she agree or disagree Why or Why not
______________________ she can’t choose her own clothes.
Because she ___________________________.
choose my own clothes
Look and say
（可以自己做决定）
can make decisions by herself
She disagrees that
Does she agree or disagree Why or Why not
have part-time jobs
________________________she is not allowed to have part-time jobs.
Because I can ___________________.
make money
Look and say
（赚钱）
learn a lot from it
（从中学到了很多）
Does she agree or disagree Why or Why not
She disagrees that
However, She thinks some rules should be changed.
choose my own clothes
Look and say
_____________________she should be allowed to choose her own clothes.
She wishes her parents allow her to do it
if she can____________________________.
She thinks that
How does think the rule should be change
（买到好看又便宜的衣服）
buy beautiful and cheap clothes
have part-time jobs
Look and say
_____________________she should be allowed to have part-time jobs.
She wishes her parents allow her to do it
if she can____________________________.
She thinks that
（白天能完成作业 ）
finish her homework in the day
How does think the rule should be change
There are too many rules in my family, too
My family rules
1. 我家有好多规则。
1. 我家有如此多规则。
There are _______ _______ ________ in my family.
2. 我不能长时间玩电脑游戏。
I _____ ______ _______ ________ for too long.
3. 我不被允许长时间玩手机。
I_____ ___ ______ ______ ______ _______ ____ ____ for too long.
4. 我必须在家吃晚饭。
I ______ _______ _______ at home.
so many rules
can’t play computer games
am not allowed to play with mobile phones
must have dinner
______________I can’t play computer games for too long. Because it ___________________________.
2. 我同意我不能长时间玩电脑游戏,因为对眼睛有害。
______________________I am not allowed to watch TV. Because some TV programes _____________________.
3. 我不同意我不被允许看电视。因为有些节目是有意义的。
___________________________ I must have dinner at home. Because I need to ______________________________.
4. 我不理解我必须在家吃晚饭。因为我需要和朋友一起度过时光。
1. 我认为这些规则有一点严格。
I think these rules __________________.
are meaningful
are a little strict
I agree that
I disagree that
I don’t understand that
is bad for eyes
spend time with friends
opinions and reasons
Changes
1. 我认为我被应该允许看电视。如果我完成作业,我希望我的父母允许我看。
___________________________________ watch TV. I wish my parents allow me to do it ____________________________.
2.依我之见，青少年被应该允许和朋友一起逛街。如果我不在外面待太晚，我希望我的父母允许我逛街。
___ _____ _________, teenagers should be allowed to _____ _____ with my friends.
I wish my parents allow me to do it ___ ___ _______ ______ ___ ___.
3.我认为我被应该允许单独旅行。如果我能保证安全，我希望我的父母允许我单独旅行。
I thinks I should be allowed to ______ ______.
I wish my parents allow me to do it _____ ___ ____ _____ _____.
I think I should be allowed to
if I finish my homework
In my opinion
hang out
if I don’t stay out late
travel alone
if I can keep safe
俗话说“国有国法，家有家规”，每个家庭都有各自的家规。你的家庭都有些什么家规？你对这些家规有什么看法？请你以“My Family Rules”为题，写一篇文章简单介绍你家的家规。词数80左右；作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。内容包括：
1. 列举你家制定的规则（至少三个）；
2. 你对家规的看法，并给出理由；
3. 无规矩不成方圆，我们要互相理解并遵守规则。
My Family Rules
Every family has its own rules. So does my family.______________________
_________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考：无规矩不成方圆 Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.
俗话说“国有国法，家有家规”，每个家庭都有各自的家规。你的家庭都有些什么家规？你对这些家规有什么看法？请你以“My Family Rules”为题，写一篇文章简单介绍你家的家规。词数80左右；作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。内容包括：
1. 列举你家制定的规则（至少三个）；
2. 你对家规的看法，并给出理由；
3. 无规矩不成方圆，我们要理解家长并遵守规则。
审
审人称、审时态、审要点
人称 时态 要点
第一人称 I
一般现在时
1.列举父母制定的规矩(至少三个),
2.表达你对这些规矩的看法（同意/不同意），并说出理由；
3.虽然规矩很多，但是无规矩不成方圆，要理解家长并遵守规则。
While writing
beginning
Body
Ending
outline
rules---
1. I can't /must /have to...
2. I am not allowed to...
opinions and reasons---
1. I agree /disagree that..
2. I think it's fair /unfair that...
changes---
1. I think I should be allowed to..
2. I wish...if I promise...
Feelings
连接词: and, but, however, because, for that reason...
Post writing
评分档次
1. 第一档（13-15分）
信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。
2. 第二档（10-12分）
信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量错误，但不影响意思表达。
3. 第三档（7-9分）
能传递部分信息，表达不够流畅，但句子基本可读。
4. 第四档（4-6分）
只能传递少量信息，表达不通顺，只有少量句子可读。
5. 第五档（1-3分）
只能传递个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。
Sample
My Family Rules
Every family has its own rules.My parents make many rules for me to obey(遵守). For example, I must spend most of my time on study. I can’t watch TV even on weekends.What’s more, I am not allowed to hang out with my friends even on weekends.
I agree that I can’t play phones for a long time because it is bad for my eyes. I agree that I am not allowed to go out alone at night because it is very dangerous. However, I think some of the rules should be changed. Firstly, I disagree that I can’t watch TV on weekends becuase not all the TV programs are not healthy. I think I should be allowed to do it if I watch meaningful TV programs . Secondly, I don’t agree that I am not allowed to hang out with friends on weekends because I will feel lonely without friends. I should be allowed to do it as long as I don’t stay out too late.
As the saying goes,Nothing can be accomplished without norms or standards.And I think the rules can help us become better.
Thank you！
Homework
1. Please polish your own passage after class.
2. Check and evaluate others' passages.