2023-2024学年河北省唐山十县高一上学期期中考试英语读后续写课件(共24张PPT)

(共24张PPT)
高一英语读后续写
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题目分析
读后续写
题目再现
范文呈现
努力方向
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Part 1
题目呈现
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续写原文
段首句
Paragraph 1 ：That meeting changed me.
Paragraph 2：From that moment on, David was a different child.
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Part 2
题目分析
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点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；
点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；
点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；
点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。
情节构建的重点
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续写思路分析
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Ms. Mulvaney老师发现David是学校里一个好斗的男孩。开学第一天，David到学校时就很生气打了班里的每个孩子，并且跟老师说话也是不礼貌的。 Ms. Mulvaney老师还观察了这个孩子的每天的经历。找出了他这样的原因。此后Ms. Mulvaney老师对David进行了家访，并与家长一起帮助David。David有了很大进步，变成了一个好孩子。
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续写思路分析
Para 1： That meeting changed me.
由第一段首句内容，家访之后，与家长沟通，思索怎么改变David.，第一段可描写作者找David谈心。
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续写思路分析
Para 2： From that moment on, David was a different child.
由第二段首句内容David改变了自己，变成了一个积极进步的优秀学生。
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写作步骤
1.审题。快速浏览阅读材料和写作要求，明确写作任务。
2.阅读全文。细读阅读材料，明确文章体裁和话题题材。注意文中的关键词，即时间、地点、人物、故事的开端及发展脉络；阅读的同时，尽量标记能描述事件发展过程的词和短语。
3.罗列提纲。根据续写材料所给的开头语，确定每个自然段的段落大意。围绕段落大意，确定每一段的写作要点，罗列提纲。
4.撰写初稿。根据提纲的主题句和写作要点来扩充句子，即：连词成句，连句成篇。写作时注意人称、时态和选词风格应与原文阅读材料保持一致。两个自然段应写10至15个句子，以满足续写的词数要求。
5.修改初稿，定稿撰写。结合原文阅读材料故事复查自己续写的内容，以确保所罗列的要点应满足3方面的要求：
（1）续写材料与原文阅读材料在逻辑上无冲突之处；
（2）续写句子应围绕续写中所给句子的脉络展开，内容上前后连贯，语句通顺；（3）规范眷写并标出使用过的所给阅读材料中标有下划线的关键词语。
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写作素材积累
1.It is our choices that show what we truly are, far more than our abilities.
决定我们一生的，不是我们的能力，而是我们的选择。
2. A year from now, you will wish you had started today.
明年今日，你会希望此时此刻自己已经行动了。
3. Success is simple. Do what's right, the right way, at the right time.
成功很简单：在合适的时间用恰当的方式做正确的事。
4. Don't set your goals according to what are deemed important by others. Only you know what is best for yourself.
别人认为重要的，并不就是你的追求。只有自己才知道什么最合适。
5.Nobody can go back and start a new beginning, but anyone can start today and make a new ending.
没人能回头重新来过，但谁都可以从现在起书写一个不同的结局。
6. It was only later that I realized my mistake.
我到后来才认识到自己的错误。
7. Due to the fact that I was qualified for the post, I did believe that I was capable of handling all the matters.
由于我有资格胜任这个职位，我确实相信我有能力处理所有的事情。
8. Her eyes brimmed with tears, her tone was slightly choking and her limbs were irresistibly trembling.
她热泪盈眶，语气有点哽咽，四肢不由自主地颤抖着。
9. Her eyes were glistening with tears.
她眼里闪着晶莹的泪花。
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10. Being optimistic and energetic, he often takes an active part in after-class activities.
他很乐观而且精力充沛，经常积极参加课余活动。
11. It was her hard work and determination that made her successful.
是她的努力和决心使她成功了。
12. Every single act of kindness will finally contribute to a better world as well as generosity ，gratitude，and trust.（每一个善举最终都将有助于一个更美好的世界，慷慨，感激和信任也是。）
13. 1.Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude.
泪水盈满了她的眼睛，她表达了她衷心的感谢。
14. It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another,and that a simple act could make the world so much better.
我恍然大悟，那一刻的善良对另一个人来说意义重大，而一个简单的行为可以使世界变得如此美好。
15. It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.
学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。
16. Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.
事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。
17. It's never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.
追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。
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18. Attitude is more important than facts for us. We cannot change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.
态度对我们来说比事实更重要。 我们不能改变我们的过去；我们不能改变事实。然而，我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。
19. . Walking /Wandering/Pacing back and forth, sb. was pondering over what to do next.
来回走/徘徊/踱步着，某人正在沉思下一步该做什么。
20. With the load finally taken off her mind, she grinned with relief, a wave of pride flooding over her. 她终于放下了心头的负担，轻松地笑了，一阵幸福的喜悦涌上心头。
21.I touched her hair softly.At that moment, I tightly held her hand, transmitting my warmth and encouragement.我温柔地抚摸她的头发，我紧紧地握住她的毛，传递着我的温暖和鼓励。
22. I gently patted her shoulder and gave her a warm smile. She looked up,
her eyes sparkling with loss and helplessness. I took her hand, feeling her fingers trembling slightly, like her heart. "Your dream hasn't disappeared it's just not achieved temporarily. Everyone will experience setbacks and difficulties, which are just a part of your growth. You will overcome all of this. "I said softly and tightly held her hand ,giving her a determined look. She looked at me, her eyes sparkling with hope.
我轻轻地拍了拍她的肩膀，给她一个温暖的微笑。她抬起头，眼睛里闪烁着失落和无奈。我拉起她的手，感觉她的手指微微颤抖，就像她的内心一样。我温柔地说:“你的梦想并没有消失，只是暂时没有实现每个人都会经历挫折和困难，这只是你成长的一部分。你一定能克服这一切。”我紧紧地握住她的手，给她一个坚定的眼神。她看着我，眼中闪烁着希望的火花。
学生作品欣赏
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Part 3
范文呈现
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范文呈现
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That meeting changed me.On my way back to school. I thought a lot, determined to do something to help David. The next day after school, I called David to come over to my office, where I had a heart- to- heart talk with him. Then I invited him to my flat. On entering it, I ordered him to take a shower in the bathroom. Meanwhile, I selected some old but clean clothes of my son’s and asked David to get changed after he finished taking the shower. Immediately, David took on a completely different appearance. During the whole period, though, David remained silent. I could see that his eyes were red with tears.
范文呈现
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From that moment on, David was a different child. He became well behaved, whether on campus, on the bus or in the lunchroom. He never said rude words to his classmates. More importantly, he became interested in his studies, listening attentively and even volunteering to answer questions in class. Gradually, other students and teachers changed their attitude towards him. Seeing all the changes, I also felt a sense of achievement and greatly relieved. Yes, David's father was right----His son is a superstar.
Part 4
努力方向
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高级结构
名词性从句
高级结构
三连动
虚拟语气
形容词做状语
无灵主语
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定语从句
状语从句
（包含倒装句）
强调句
副词做状语
非谓语
（包括独立主格）
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特殊句式
1.Tears of relief welling up in eyes, he hugged them tightly, asking what they had experienced.
2. Worse still, all the people there seemed to be whispering about him, which made his heart thumping even more wildly.
3. This Christmas, not only did he receive an orange, but he (also) tasted the sweetest fruit of friendship.
4. The moment they spotted their parents, on whose faces anxiety was clearly written, they could hardly choke back their tears any more.
5. In the end, it's not the years in your life that count. It's the life in your years.
6. A polite ripple of applause accompanied the chairwoman as she approached the stage.
当女主席走近舞台时，一阵礼貌的掌声伴随着她。
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7. He shook my hands as if we were long lost friends.
他握住我的手好像我们是失散多年的朋友。
8. Cold as the rain was, great warmth filled his heart like never before.
虽然雨很冰冷，但从未有过的温暖充盈着他的内心。
9. Tears welled up in his eyes at the familiar sound of concern.
听到熟悉的关切之声，他的眼眶里噙满了泪水。
10. With tears welling up in his eyes, he expressed his gratitude in a weak voice.
他眼里噙着泪水，用微弱的声音表达了感激之情。
11. The road to lofty goals is always rough and difficult.
通向崇高目标的道路,总是崎岖艰难的。
12. The larger the island of knowledge, the longer the curious ocean line.
知识之岛越大，好奇的海洋线越长。
13. On the way to success, one should bring his patience and perseverance.
在成功的路上，一个人需要耐心和毅力。
14. Therefore, I am determined to meet the challenge.
因此，我决心迎接挑战。
15. Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.
世上无难事，只要肯攀登。
16. With grateful tears hanging in his eyes, he kept extending（表达）his gratitude(感激）， “Thank you so much!”
他眼中满是感激的泪水，不停地说：“非常感谢！”
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Thank you!