英语·2015备考精品解析分类汇编--第九期（2015.2）--E单元+短文改错

E单元　短文改错
目录
E单元　短文改错 1
E1 短文改错记叙文 1
E2 短文改错应用文 3
E3 短文改错议论文 3
E4 短文改错说明文 3

E1 短文改错记叙文
【英语卷（解析）·2015届河北省保定市高三上学期期末考试（201501）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain can not stop us. We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit. On either side of the road was green fields. We could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by. The beauty of the scenes. After short rest, we started going down It rained more harder. We were wet all over, and we still felt happy.
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【文章综述】文章介绍作者上周末去爬山的事情，虽然下着雨，但是他们玩的很高兴。
【答案解析】
can—could 考查情态动词。根据Last weekend 可知是一般过去时，故改成could
extreme—extremely 考查副词。本句使用副词extremely修饰形容词narrow做状语
spirit—spirits 考查固定短语。In high spirits高度兴奋；
was—were 考查主谓一致；句意：道路两边是绿色的草。这是个倒装句,正常的句子结构是Green fields were on either side of the road.
mixing—mixed 考查非谓语动词。本句中使用的而是形容词短语be?mixed?with混合着…；作为宾语补足语对宾语the?sound?of?the?rain?and?our?footsteps进行说明
to去掉。 考查动词的用法。Reach是及物动词，不接介词。
there—where 考查定语从句；先行词是the mountain，在山顶我们对于这美景感到非常的吃惊；
after后面加a 考查冠词。After a short rest 休息了一会之后；
more—much 考查副词。Much可以用来修饰比较级而more是用来构成比较级的；
and—but 考查连词。句意：我们浑身都湿透了，但是我们仍然很开心地唱歌根据句意可知上下文之间存在这转折关系，故使用but连接这两个分句
【英语卷（解析）·2015届河北省正定中学高三上学期第六次月考（201501）】第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下便条。便条中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除；把多余的词 用斜线（ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1；每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day after work, I was walking down the street while I saw a boy riding a nice unicycle, one of those bicycle with only one wheel. Dressing in all pink from head to toe, he was singing a song which was sounded like a kid’s song. I thought he must be total crazy. Just then, a lady dropped 20-dollar bill on the ground, but he didn’t realize it and started to walk away. The guy in pink picked out the money and gave it back to her. After that, he rode on but soon disappeared before the lady could thank him. How a strange and good guy!
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】
The other day after work, I was walking down the street while I saw a boy riding a nice unicycle,
改为when
one of those bicycle with only one wheel. Dressing in all pink from head to toe, he was singing a
改为bicycles Dressed
song which was sounded like a kid’s song. I thought he must be total crazy. Just then, a lady
去掉was 改为totally
dropped ∧20-dollar bill on the ground, but he didn’t realize it and started to walk away. The guy
加 a 改为she
in pink picked out the money and gave it back to her. After that, he rode on but soon disappeared
改为up 改为and
before the lady could thank him. How a strange and good guy!
改为What
第一行：while改为when：was/were doing sth when … 是固定搭配；
第二行：bicycle改为bicycles，those后应当用复数；dressing 改为dressed，dress是及物动词，与主语是被动关系，故用过去分词形式；
第三行：去掉sounded前的was，sound是不及物动词，不能用被动语态；total改为totally，用副词修饰形容词；
第四行：dropped后加a，一张20美元的钞票；bill是可数名词；he改为she，此处应当指代的是a lady；
第五行：out改为up，pick up是固定短语，捡起；but改为and，上下句是并列关系；
第六行：How改为what，固定句型：what a/an adj+可数名词单数=How adj a/an 可数名词单数。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届河南省郑州市高三第一次质量预测（201501）word版】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It appear that people don't need phone boxes any longer. In a small British village, people decided to turning a red phone box into a library. Now, the phone box is one of the country smallest libraries. About 150 books sit on shelves in a phone box. Villagers there can take whatever they want and leave their own books for exchanges. They can use the library around the clock when it's open 365 days a year and 24 hours a day. Since the library opened its bright door, people from all parts of the village paid it a visit. Among it there're senior citizens living in the neighbourhood, children getting off school buses and university students are stopping by late at night. It is convenient for them to use such a wonderful library.
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】
It appear that people don’t need phone boxes any longer. In a small British village, people
appears
decided to turning a red phone box into a library. Now, the phone box is one of the country
turn country’s
smallest libraries. About 150 books sit on shelves in a phone box. Villagers there can take
the
whatever they want and leave their own books for exchange. They can use the library around the
in
clock when it’s open 365 days a year and 24 hours a day. Since the library opened its bright door,
because / since / as / for
people from all parts of the village ∧ paid it a visit. Among it there’re senior citizens living in
have them / those
the neighborhood, children getting off school buses and university students are stopping by late at
night. It is convenient for them to use such a wonderfully library.
wonderful
1. appear——appears it做主语，谓语用第三人称单数
2. turning—— turn decide to do sth 决定做某事
3. country—— country’s 修饰名词libraries要用country的名词所有格来表示， 这个乡村最小的图书馆
4.a ——the 特指
5. for—— in in exchange 作为交换
6. when ——because/for/since/as 两个句子是因果关系
7. paid—— have paid 关键词Since提示我们，这里要用现在完成时。
8. it——them 这里代词代替上文的people，故用them/those。
9. 删除are 根据上文的enior citizens living in the neighborhood, children getting off school buses and ，是一组并列结构，要保持一致，故删除are。
10. wonderfully—— wonderful such+a/an+形容词+可数名词单数。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届吉林省东北师大附中高三上学期第三次摸底考试（201501）】第一节 单句改错（共5小题；每小题1分，满分5分）
注意：此题要求改正所给句子中的错误，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词，并按下列情况改正：
多一词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符（∧），并在下方写出该加的词。
错一词：在错的词下划一横线，并在下方写出改正后的词。
If she worked hard enough, she would have passed the English exam.
The daughter began treating her father disrespectful after she had got all she could from him.
The doctor, whom the nurse is talking to him, is leaving for Africa next month.
Among them were a soldier who was wounded in the stomach.
Considering to be a great writer, Shakespeare is more famous today.
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】
81.worked前加had，本句是对过去的虚拟，if条件句应用过去完成时态。
82.disrespectful改为disrespectfully ，副词修饰动词，做状语。
83.去掉him，whom the nurse is talking to him , 是定语从句，引导词whom做的是to的宾语，此处不能再加宾语。
84.were改为was，本句是倒装句型，主语是a soldier, 单数，故谓语动词应当用单数。
85.Considering 改为Considered，consider与Shakespeare 是被动关系，所以应当用过去分词作状语，表示“被动”。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届山东省莱芜市莱芜一中高三1月自主考试（201501）】第一节 短文改错(共l0题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语诹上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改，
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On the first day when I went to high school，I felt exciting．After 9 years’study, I felt I was so closely to university．During the first year, I made many friends．I got to know all of my classmates．Because the school work was tough．I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends．When second year came，I was arranged to other class．I was worried that no one could talk to me，but I made new friends quickly．Now it was the last year of my high school life，but I'm determined to study more harder and make greater progress．High school life is challenging for me，but I won’t give out．
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【答案解析】
1. exciting——excited 修饰人用excited。
2. closely——close 在was后需要形容词作表语。
3.Beacuse ——Although尽管学校的工作是艰难的，但是我和我的朋友分享快乐与悲伤。
4. for——with share…with sb. 与某人分享
5. 在second前加上the 序数词前加上the
6. other——another 到了第二年，我被安排到另一个班。
7. was——is now提示我们要用一般现在时
8. but——and 两句话没有转折之意。现在这是我高中生活的最后一年,并且我决心更加努力学习,取得更大的进步。
9. 删除more and前后都用比较级，more 修饰的是多音节词，而hard的比较级是harder, 故more多余。
10. out——in give in 放弃
【英语卷（解析）·2015届四川省绵阳市高三二诊（201501）】第二节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）
下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/ )， 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Linda,
How's everything going? I can't wait to tell you the good news that my parent have finally agreed to take me from England this winter. That'll be a wonderful chance for I to experience English culture. I had learned English for many years, but I have a few chances to experience real English. Could you offer me some advices on how to deal with everything there? I'd appreciate very much if you could provide me with some necessarily information. I'm sure your suggestions would make my trip easier and more enjoyable.
I'm looking forward to hear from you soon.
Best wishes!
【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文
【文章综述】本文是一封书信，来介绍作者向笔友来寻求英语方面的帮助；
【答案解析】
parent—parents 考查名词复数。父母用复数形式；
form—to 考查介词。 Take sb to someplace带某人去某处；
I ---me 考查宾语。For是介词后面用宾格形式；
had---have 考查动词的时态。句意：我已经学英语许多年了。用现在完成时；
a few去掉a 考查固定短语。句意：但我没有机会体验真正的英语。Few chances几乎没有机会；
advices—advice 考查名词的单复数。Advice当建议讲时是不可数名词。
appreciate后面加it 考查固定短语。I would appreciate it if you do sth 如果你做某事我将不胜感激；
necessarily---necessary 考查形容词。Some necessary information一些必要的信息，形容词用来修饰名词。
would---will 考查动词的时态。句意：我肯定你的建议会上我的旅行变得更容易和快乐；
hear—hearing 考查动词短语。Look forward to 盼望，to是介词。
E2 短文改错应用文
【英语卷（解析）·2015届山东省泰安市高三上学期期末考试（201501）】第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。[网]
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Trying to come to a decision complete on your own can be risky．Some decisions are so important that they shouldn’t made without talking to others first．There have several advantages if you consult the persons you trust．For one thing，they can give you valuable advice and they may point out some things you may have been overlooked．For another，friends may stop you from make big mistakes．
When consulting others about importance decisions，you should keep two things in mind．The first one is that you need to find someone whom you respected enough to trust their judgment．The second thing to consider is how to do if you disagree with this person．Maybe turning to a third or fourth person for help is the best option．In a word，making any big decision alone can lead in problems．Talking to friends or family members first are always a good idea．
【答案】【知识点】E2 短文改错应用文
【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。
【答案解析】
1. complete→completely 此处应用副词completely修饰介词短语on your own。
2.shouldn't后加be 情态动词should后应该动词原形，they是make动作承受者，故在should后加be。
3.have→are 此处是there be句型，故将have改为be。
4. 去掉been you may have been overlooked为some things的定语从句，overlooked的宾语是引导词that，故应去掉been。
5.make→making make前的from为介词，故将make改为making。
6.importance→important decisions为名词，应用形容词important修饰。
7.respected→respect 这两句之间的关系是转折关系，故将and改为but。
8.how→what 题干中的to do后缺少宾语，故how改为what。
9.in→to lead to导致，通向，故将in改为to。
10.are→is 主语为talking短语，谓语动词应用单数形式，故are改为is。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届山东省烟台市莱州一中等高三上学期期末考试（201501）】第一节 短文改错(共l0题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语诹上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改，
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On the first day when I went to high school，I felt exciting．After 9 years’study, I felt I was so closely to university．During the first year, I made many friends．I got to know all of my classmates．Because the school work was tough．I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends．When second year came，I was arranged to other class．I was worried that no one could talk to me，but I made new friends quickly．Now it was the last year of my high school life，but I'm determined to study more harder and make greater progress．High school life is challenging for me，but I won’t give out．
【答案】【知识点】E2 短文改错应用文
【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。
【答案解析】
1. exciting→excited。 主语为I，谓语动词为felt，应用excited感到激动的。
2. closely→close 系动词was后应用形容词形式close。
3. Because→Though/Although 该复合句主从句之间的关系是让步关系，故将Because改为Though/Although。
4. second前加the second为序数词，一般与定冠词the连用。故其前加the。
5.other→another class为可数名词，other为形容词，学校的班级肯定不止两个，将other改为another另一个（三个以上的）。
6.was→is 根据it前的now判断应用一般现在时，故将was改为is。
7.but→and 这两句之间的关系是转折关系，故将and改为but。
8.must后加be 根据句意：答案页须从报纸上剪下……。句子的主语为cut的动作承受者，故must后加be。
9.out→in。 give in屈服，give out发出，根据句意将out改为in。
【英语卷（解析）·2015届四川省宜宾市高三第一次诊断考试（201501）】第二节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，共15分）
短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 3. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Having a dream is of great importance. Your dreams are ordinary and realistic. I hope I will
admitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I will graduate from university. I
hoped one day I can find a cure for cancer. I hope those whom love me and those whom I love
will be healthy and live happy every day. To realize my dreams, I will take more exercises to build
up my body. I will try my best to focus time and energy to my study. I must work hard at my
lessons or be fully preparing for the entrance exam.
Having a dream is of great importance. Your dreams are ordinary and realistic. I hope I will∧
My be
admitted into a top university and become a good doctor after I will graduate from university. I
hoped one day I can find a cure for cancer. I hope those whom love me and those whom I love
hope who/that
will be healthy and live happy every day. To realize my dreams, I will take more exercises to build
happily exercise
up my body. I will try my best to focus time and energy to my study. I must work hard at my
on
lessons or be fully preparing for the entrance exam.
and prepared
【答案】【知识点】E2 短文改错应用文
【思路点拨】短文改错中的错误都是学生们经常犯的错误，修改时应考虑语法和词法知识，如动词、名词、形容词等形式的变化等。
【答案解析】
1.Your—My 根据下文都在讲述的I的故事，故将your改为my。
2.will后加be will后跟动词原形，句子的主语是admit的动作承受者，故在will后加be。
3.去掉will after引导的时间状语从句，用一般现在时代替将来时，故去掉will。
4.hoped—hope 根据上下文都是一般现在时，此处也应一般现在时，故将hoped改为hope。
5.whom—who/that those的定语从句中引导词应做主语，故将whom改为who/that。
6.happy—happily 此处应用副词修饰动词live，故将happy改为happily。
7.exercises—exercise 此处的exercise为不可数名词，故将exercises改为exercise。
8. to—on 根据短语focus…on…将……集中于……，故将to改为on。
9. or—and 根据该词前后的关系应是并列关系，故将or改为and。
10.preparing—prepared be prepared for为……准备好，故将preparing改为prepared。
E3 短文改错议论文
E4 短文改错说明文