2015年《广东中考必备·英语》复习课件 书面表达

课件31张PPT。 书面表达 书面表达”是考查学生综合运用英语能力的一种题型，它要求考生根据所给情景和要求写一篇短文，文章内容要符合所给的情景和要求。文理句子要通顺，它既像作文又不完全是作文，因为书面表达有提示和要求两部分。“提示”一般包括与写作内容紧密相关的信息；“要求”一般包括对短文的文体、格式及字数的要求。我们不能离开情景和要求自行立意、选材，随意发挥。它类似汉译英，但又不同于汉译英，因为我们必须根据所给材料进行适当地发挥，切中题意，语言准确，条理清楚，书写规范。为此我们要做到以下几点，按要求完成题目，取得良好的成绩。 一、审题要仔细 　　仔细阅读“书面表达”的提示及要求，有给文字背景材料的，有看图作文的，还有两者兼而有之的。对于文字材料，我们要仔细阅读其内容，并对材料中所给的信息进行筛选，抓住重点，进行立意，否则，会导致书面表达的错误率升高，甚至逻辑不清，文不对题。对于看图作文，我们把几幅画面联系起来，若是漫画式的，一般主题鲜明，图画中多余的内容很少，读起来比较容易理解。若是写实式的，图画中与主题无关的内容较多，有时容易被细小问题所纠缠而不能明确主题，所以要仔细审题，领会作者究竟想表达一个什么样的中心思想，然后再分别去描述。 二、行文要正确 　　读完提示与要求之后，就要对提供的信息或画面进行语言上的组织，要用英语进行思维，有的学生习惯用汉语打底稿，再逐句翻译，这样一方面浪费时间，另一方面容易写成汉语式的英语。要学会用英语思维，直接用英语表达，使文章意思连贯，语言流畅，逻辑严谨。 三、语言要严谨 　　尽量使用自己熟悉的已经掌握的词汇和句型，长短句子要结合，尽量使用简单句，正确选择人称和时态。若一时想不起某个单词的拼写，可“ 绕道而行”， 由同义词或近义词来代替， 也可使用同义句或者正话反说。如“他英语学得很好” ，可以说He studies English very well./ He is good at English./ He does well in English. 或者His English isn’t poor. 这是关键的一步，只有把握好这一关，才能有效地减少错误的发生。 四、适当发挥 　　适当发挥但不能脱离中心， 还要符合字数要求，切忌多多益善。古人云“言多易失”，你写得越多，出错的几率就越大，所以不可画蛇添足，为了语言的连贯性，适当使用过渡词，如and、then、so、or、but等，可使文章锦上添花。 五、书写要规范 　　卷面要清楚，书写要规范。卷面就像是人的脸面，干干净净，一尘不染最好。首先你就能得到一些感情分，即便有些错误，阅卷者也不愿意忍痛割爱。相反，字迹潦草，涂涂改改，肯定要被扣分，另外书写时要压格，这样会使字迹看起来更清楚、更漂亮。 六、成文多查看 　　文章写完后， 一定要回过头来认真检查，检查时注意以下要点①文章是否符合题意要求，要点有无遗漏②语言是否流畅，语法是否正确，包括单词拼写、大小写，标点符号；动词时态，语态，名词单复数，所有格，主谓一致，词语搭配等。总之，英语书面表达能力的提高是一个从量变到质变的过程，需要我们平时在学习中多注意，多积累，从根本上解决存在的问题，这样才有“一份耕耘，一份收获”，也才能让自己“下笔如有神”。 【训练一】（2014．龙岩）英语课上，老师向同学们介绍了2013年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹，你深受感动。请你用英语写一则日记，写出自己的感受。内容要点及要求：1. 表明自己将向“孝心少年”学习；2. 你将在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母；3. 词数：80左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。提示词（可选用）：learn from, respect, care for, do some housework, study hardMonday, June 30 SunnyThis morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013 ”. _______________________________________________________________________________Monday, June 30 Sunny
This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013”. I was deeply moved. Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring for parents.
I used to make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it. I think I should learn from them. I will help do some housework and take good care of my mum and dad when they are ill. I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter the key high school in our city. I hope I can become a filial piety youth like them.
(88 words) 【训练二】（2014.盐城）亲爱的同学， 初中三年的英语学习中， 《牛津初中英语》教材给我们提供了大量寓教于乐、生动活泼的阅读素材，伴随我们成长。请以“English Textbooks are Good Friends”为题写一篇短文参加学校的英语作文竞赛。注意事项：1. 90词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入
总词数）；表达清楚，语法正确，上下
文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3. 文章必须包括表格中所提供的注要信息，并作适
当发挥。English Textbooks are Good FriendsEnglish textbooks play an important part in our study of English. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ English Textbooks are Good Friends
English textbooks play an important part in our study of English. They are good materials for us to learn English well. They can not only open our minds but also make our school life colorful.
We’ve learned many wonderful things in the world in our textbooks, which help us get a better understanding of different cultures around the world and grow into an excellent person. Some famous people we’ve learned affect us a lot. My favorite one is Audrey Hepburn, a great American successful actress, who devoted much of her time and money to charity. I’ve learned a lot from her. 【训练三】 （2014．漳州）足够的睡眠时间对学生来讲很重要，然而调查显示，许多学生睡眠不足。请根据图示内容，简要指出学生睡眠不足的原因并提出建议。要求：1．要点齐全，并适当发挥：2．词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 It’s important for students to have enough sleeping time．However,______________________ It's important for students to have enough sleeping time. However ,many of them don’ t have enough time to sleep．
There are different reasons for it．Some students often spend too much time on computer games so that they don’t go to bed early．Some students have bad sleeping habits．They often drink too much tea or coffee before going to bed．This makes them too excited to fall asleep .
In order to get enough sleep ,we should keep away from computer games．We shouldn’t stay up too late . What’s more ,we can drink hot milk instead of coffee or listen to soft music before we go to bed ,which can help us have a sound sleep．
In a word, if we make good use of time and form good habits, we’ll have enough sleeping time . Then we’ll be happier and healthier. 【训练四】（2014.黔西南州）有一种节约叫光盘，有一种公益叫光盘！所谓光盘，就是吃光你盘子中的食物，拒绝浪费，珍惜粮食！针对这项行动，并根据以下提示，请你以“No Wasting On Food”为题写一篇短文，号召大家参与这项活动。要点提示：Reason1. a waste of food, money 2. pollute the environment ……Suggestion:1. eat up all your food/clear your plate2. leftovers(剩饭菜)……3. order less or smaller dishes 注意：1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥； 2. 语句流畅，书写规范； 3. 词数80-100词； 4. 文中不能出现真实人名、地名等信息； 5. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 No Wasting On Food Recently, many restaurants around our country have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign(活动) against wasting food by offering smaller dishes. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ No Wasting On Food
Recently, many restaurants in our country have joined the “Clearing Your Plate” campaign（活动） against wasting food by offering smaller dishes.
Many people around us also pay more attention to saving food in their daily life. A number of people have realized the importance of saving food. I believe it is meaningful /necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity. It is a waste of food and money if we order too much food but eat too little. And it’s not easy for farmers to produce the food for us. There are still too many poor people in the poor areas in China, they don’t have enough food to eat. Meanwhile, the environment will be polluted by the wasted food. Also, eating too much is bad for our health. We should take action to support the campaign.
What should we do in our daily life to waste less food? First, we should eat up all the food in our dishes and plates. Second, we may order less or smaller dishes in the restaurant. Third, we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later. In a word, I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food . 【训练五】 （2014.呼和浩特）良好的生活与学习习惯对我们的成长是非常重要的。请从以下的习惯中选择一个你以前做得不够好，但现在已具备的好习惯，谈一谈你养成这个习惯的过程及收益。 要求：1）不使用真实的校名、人名等相关信息； 2）内容完整，书写整齐； 3）80词左右； 4）文章的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 My good habit____________________________________________ is my good habit.__________________________________________________My good habit is early to bed to rise. Two years ago, when I was a Grade 7 student, I liked reading books in bed. Every day after I finished my homework, I lay in bed until 24:00 o’clock. The next day I couldn’t get up on time. I used to be late for school, and I felt tired in class. It was too bad. With the help of my teacher and my parents, I gave up the bad habit. Ever since then, I go to bed early and get up early, I never go to school late again. As a result, I’m much stronger and doing better in school now. 【训练六】（2014.鄂州）不久前，全国有部分省市出台一项新政策：高考英语将由150分降为100分，此事在国内引起极大争议。有的人认为此举很好，有的人则认为不妥。作为一名中学生，你的看法是什么？请分析其原因。注意：1. 词数80词左右；开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 2. 文中不得出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及 其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 3. 参考词汇：reform改革；master掌握； advanced先进的 Not long before, a new policy aroused a heated discussion that the mark of English will be reduced from 150 to 100. … Not long before, a new policy aroused a heated discussion that the mark of English will be reduced from 150 to 100.
As a student, in my opinion, it is of the same importance to learn Chinese and English well. We Chinese certainly should learn our mother language well. At the same time, English is an international language and tool. We should master it to better know about the world and learn advanced technology abroad to serve our motherland. What’s more, as China is developing quickly, we have more chances to communicate with foreigners in English.
In a word, whether the mark of English will be reduced or not, we students should learn it well. 【训练七】（2014.菏泽）假如你是王昆，你的美国网友Tom对中国的传统节日“春节”非常感兴趣，请你以“My Favorite Festival”为题，写一封E-mail.，给他做一介绍。1．要点包括：节日简介、节日准备、节日活动等；2．字数要求：100字左右。3．提示：the Spring Festival, traditional, get together, clean up, be dressed in…The Spring Festival is the most important traditional festival to the Chinese people.
Several days before the New Year, we begin to prepare for it. My parents buy meat, fish and vegetables. Houses are cleaned up.
On the eve of the New Year, the whole family get together and have a big dinner. After the meal we watch “the Spring Evening” on TV until twelve o’clock. On the first day of the New Year, each of us is dressed in new clothes. When meeting others outside, we say “Happy New Year” to each other. We pay New Year calls to friends and relatives. That day my parents and relatives give “Red-bags” (money) to us children. All of us have a great time.
【训练八】（2014．温州）假如你是林思，要去澳大利亚的Melbourne High留学，需要在当地找一个寄宿家庭（host family).请按要求写一封约100词的电子邮件给寄宿家庭中介公司的经理Mr. Porter.内容包括：（1）简单介绍自己的个人情况，如语言，爱 好等 （2）提出自己的对寄宿家庭的要求（如下表所示）注意：邮件需涵盖以上所有要点，可适当发挥；开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词汇）；文中不能出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
Dear Mr Porter,
My name is Li Si, _______________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Lin Si Dear Mr. Porter,
My name is Lin Si. I’m a sixteen-year-old boy from China. I’m going to study in Melbourne High.
I like making friends. English is my favorite subject but I’m weak in spoken English. That’s why I want to find a host family who are native English speakers. In this way, I will have more chances to practice English in daily life. I hope it’s a family without smokers. Moreover, it’s better if the family lives within a twenty-minute walk from my school and provides a bedroom with a bathroom. As for the meals, I’d like to cook by myself because I’m fond of cooking.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes,
Lin Si 【训练九】(2014.内江市)以下是Nick Vujicic的基本信息，请根据这些信息和要求，写一篇英语短文，向某英语报社投稿。注意：所写内容必须包括上面提示的所有要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译；词数：100个词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数；语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整；文中不得出现真实校名、姓名等其它信息，否则，不予评分。 Nick Vujicic is a world - famous speaker . His experience inspires a lot of people in the world . ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Nick Vujicic is a world - famous speaker. His experience
inspires a lot of people in the world. He was born on December 4th, 1982 in Australia. Unluckily, he was born without arms or legs, but he learnt to swim, get dressed, used a computer and so on. At 21, Nick graduated from university. Then he began to travel around the world to give young people speeches on life and dreams. He has spoken to more than 3,000,000 people so far. He has ever visited China five times. In 2008, he visited Chengdu to help the survivors of the earthquake.
From his story , I have learnt that we should not give up when facing difficulties in our life . 【训练十】(2014．连云港)某英语报开展“How to Deal with the Exam Stress”征文比赛，请你根据图片和表格中提示的内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。适当的压力积极思考，认真学习及时复习，防止遗忘过重的压力无法入睡，非常疲倦害怕考试，导致失败应对的措施合理计划，准备充分…… (至少2条)注意：（1）词数90左右，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数 （2）文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名 How to Deal with the Exam StressEveryone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.