(共17张PPT)
UNIT 5 THE VALUE OF MONEY
Section Ⅳ 写作指导
写作方法指导
如何写作品介绍
【题目呈现】
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Alice想阅读中文小说。请用英语给她写一封信，为她推荐一部小说。内容包括：
1．推荐的小说；
2．推荐理由；
3．表达祝愿。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice，
Yours，
Li Hua
【步骤分解】
步骤1 精准审题
本文是应用文；主要时态是____________；人称是____________。
步骤2 构建框架
第一部分：______________________；
第二部分：_____________________；
第三部分：____________________。
一般现在时
第三人称
开门见山，点明主题
描述要推荐的小说
表达诚挚的愿望
步骤3 要点翻译
(1)喜欢 _____________
(2)热衷于 _____________
(3)强烈推荐 _____________________
(4)讲述……的故事 _______________________
(5)被……深深吸引 _________________________
(6)正如你提到的，你特别热衷于魔幻小说。(as引导定语从句)
_________________________________________________________________________________________________
be fond of
be keen on
strongly recommend
tell the story of ...
be deeply attracted by
As you mentioned, you are particularly keen on traditional magical
novels with superb fantasy.
(7)这部小说由吴承恩所写，是一部充满奇幻故事的杰作。(画线部分用过去分词短语作定语)
___________________________________________________________________________
(8)人们普遍认为这部小说是一部关于神仙和妖怪的杰作。(画线部分用it作形式主语)
___________________________________________________________________________
The novel, written by Wu Cheng'en, is an outstanding work filled with
fantastic tales.
It is generally recognized that the novel is a masterpiece about the gods
and monsters.
步骤4 连句成文：选用下面的连词用在文章中
so, first of all, in addition, and, what's more, in a word
Dear Alice，
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Alice，
I'm very delighted to know you are fond of Chinese novels.As you mentioned, you are particularly keen on traditional magical novels with superb fantasy, so I strongly recommend Journey to the West to you.
First of all, the novel, written by Wu Cheng'en, is an outstanding work filled with fantastic tales.In addition, it is generally recognized that the novel is a masterpiece about the gods and monsters.And the novel tells the story of a monk named Tang Sanzang in Tang Dynasty, overcoming 81 difficulties and defeating various monsters before eventually reaching India, with the help of
his three disciples: Sun Wukong, Zhu Bajie and Sha Seng.What's more, the novelist displays the intelligence and bravery of Sun Wukong, the religious loyalty of Tang Sanzang, the openness of Zhu Bajie, and the kindness of Sha Seng.
In a word, I firmly believe that you can be deeply attracted by those fantastic and exciting tales.
Yours，
Li Hua
【写作模板】
Dear ①________，
I'm pleased to hear that you are interested in ②________ (点明主题)．Therefore, it is strongly recommended that you should read ③________ (说出作品名称)．
The book, recognized as a masterpiece, is written by ④________ (引出作者)．It can arouse your curiosity by ⑤________(列出作品的特色)．Besides, it gives readers vivid pictures of ⑥________ (作品的内容)．
In conclusion, the book is well worth reading.You are bound to be fascinated by it.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
J 即学即练
假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校近日将举行中国传统文化节系列活动。请你给外教Mr.Smith写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加。邮件的内容包括：
①活动目的、时间、地点、参与人员；
②活动内容(如中国传统书画展、古诗词诵读、京剧表演等)。
参考词汇：书法 calligraphy 京剧Beijing Opera
注意：①写作词数应为80左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Mr. Smith，
It is my honor to represent our school to invite you to participate in Traditional Chinese Culture Festival to be held by our school at the auditorium of teaching building next Saturday afternoon, from 2 p．m. to 5 p．m.
To help people learn more about traditional Chinese culture, our school is intended to hold a series of activities, such as exhibitions of Chinese calligraphy works and paintings, ancient poetry reciting competition and Beijing Opera show. All the school staff, the students and even their parents as well as anyone who is interested in it are welcomed.
We sincerely hope you can come and enjoy it. If you have any questions about it, you can contact me.
Yours，
Li HuaSection Ⅳ 写作指导
如何写作品介绍
【题目呈现】
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Alice想阅读中文小说。请用英语给她写一封信，为她推荐一部小说。内容包括：
1．推荐的小说；
2．推荐理由；
3．表达祝愿。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice，
Yours，
Li Hua
【步骤分解】
步骤1 精准审题
本文是应用文；主要时态是 一般现在时 ；人称是 第三人称 。
步骤2 构建框架
第一部分： 开门见山，点明主题 ；
第二部分： 描述要推荐的小说 ；
第三部分： 表达诚挚的愿望 。
步骤3 要点翻译
(1)喜欢 be fond of
(2)热衷于 be keen on
(3)强烈推荐 strongly recommend
(4)讲述……的故事 tell the story of ...
(5)被……深深吸引 be deeply attracted by
(6)正如你提到的，你特别热衷于魔幻小说。(as引导定语从句)
As you mentioned, you are particularly keen on traditional magical novels with superb fantasy.
(7)这部小说由吴承恩所写，是一部充满奇幻故事的杰作。(画线部分用过去分词短语作定语)
The novel, written by Wu Cheng'en, is an outstanding work filled with fantastic tales.
(8)人们普遍认为这部小说是一部关于神仙和妖怪的杰作。(画线部分用it作形式主语)
It is generally recognized that the novel is a masterpiece about the gods and monsters.
步骤4 连句成文：选用下面的连词用在文章中
so, first of all, in addition, and, what's more, in a word
Dear Alice，
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Alice，
I'm very delighted to know you are fond of Chinese novels.As you mentioned, you are particularly keen on traditional magical novels with superb fantasy, so I strongly recommend Journey to the West to you.
First of all, the novel, written by Wu Cheng'en, is an outstanding work filled with fantastic tales.In addition, it is generally recognized that the novel is a masterpiece about the gods and monsters.And the novel tells the story of a monk named Tang Sanzang in Tang Dynasty, overcoming 81 difficulties and defeating various monsters before eventually reaching India, with the help of his three disciples: Sun Wukong, Zhu Bajie and Sha Seng.What's more, the novelist displays the intelligence and bravery of Sun Wukong, the religious loyalty of Tang Sanzang, the openness of Zhu Bajie, and the kindness of Sha Seng.
In a word, I firmly believe that you can be deeply attracted by those fantastic and exciting tales.
Yours，
Li Hua
【写作模板】
Dear ① ，
I'm pleased to hear that you are interested in ② (点明主题)．Therefore, it is strongly recommended that you should read ③ (说出作品名称)．
The book, recognized as a masterpiece, is written by ④ (引出作者)．It can arouse your curiosity by ⑤ (列出作品的特色)．Besides, it gives readers vivid pictures of ⑥ (作品的内容)．
In conclusion, the book is well worth reading.You are bound to be fascinated by it.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
J 即学即练
假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校近日将举行中国传统文化节系列活动。请你给外教Mr.Smith写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加。邮件的内容包括：
①活动目的、时间、地点、参与人员；
②活动内容(如中国传统书画展、古诗词诵读、京剧表演等)。
参考词汇：书法 calligraphy 京剧Beijing Opera
注意：①写作词数应为80左右；
②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Mr. Smith，
It is my honor to represent our school to invite you to participate in Traditional Chinese Culture Festival to be held by our school at the auditorium of teaching building next Saturday afternoon, from 2 p．m. to 5 p．m.
To help people learn more about traditional Chinese culture, our school is intended to hold a series of activities, such as exhibitions of Chinese calligraphy works and paintings, ancient poetry reciting competition and Beijing Opera show. All the school staff, the students and even their parents as well as anyone who is interested in it are welcomed.
We sincerely hope you can come and enjoy it. If you have any questions about it, you can contact me.
Yours，
Li Hua
