(共15张PPT)
UNIT 1 FESTIVALS AND CELEBRATIONS
Section Ⅳ 写作指导
写作方法指导
有关节日经历的记叙文
【题目呈现】
假如你是Lucy，在刚刚过去的春节里，你应邀前往中国与笔友一起欢度中国年。请你用英语写一篇80词左右的短文来记录这一段难得的异国经历和感受。内容包括：
1．春节期间你们参加了什么活动；
2．你的感受。
【步骤分解】
步骤1 精准审题
本文是记叙文；主要时态是一般过去时和一般现在时；人称是第一人称和第三人称。
步骤2 构建框架
第一部分：受邀共度春节；
第二部分：详细描述这段经历；
第三部分：简要总结。
步骤3 要点翻译
(1)adj.高兴的；满意的__________
(2)vt.邀请_________
(3)adj.愉快的；快乐的____________
(4)探索外国文化____________________________
(5)一个特殊的场合_____________________
(6)聚会；联欢_______________
(7)传统食品____________________
(8)参加_______________
pleased
invite
enjoyable
explore a foreign culture
a special occasion
get together
traditional foods
take part in
(9)独特的文化和迷人的风景_________________________________
(10)adj.(经历)难以忘怀的；不会被遗忘的________________
(11)很高兴，上个春节，我的一个中国笔友邀请我和她一起庆祝。(pleased)
______________________________________________________________________________________________________
unique culture and attractive scenery
unforgettable
I was pleased that one of my pen friends in China invited me to
celebrate with her during the past Spring Festival.
(12)中国的春节是中国家庭团聚的特殊日子，所以我们一起拜访了她的一些家人和亲戚。(so)
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(13)此外，我们吃了一些传统食物，看了舞龙舞狮，并参加了一些其他的庆祝活动，如庙会。(besides, such as)
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(14)在我看来，探索外国文化确实值得。(worthwhile)
__________________________________________________________
The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families
to get together so we visited some of her families and relatives together.
Besides, we tried some traditional foods, watched Dragon and Lion
dance and took part in some other celebration activities, such as a temple fair.
In my point of view, it's indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.
步骤4 连句成文：选用下面的连词用在文章中
so, besides, such as, in my point of view
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I was so pleased that one of my pen friends in China invited me to celebrate with her during the past Spring Festival.That was really an enjoyable and unforgettable experience for me.
The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families to get together so we visited some of her families and relatives together.Besides, we tried some traditional foods, watched Dragon and Lion dance and took part in some other celebration activities, such as a temple fair.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Greatly impressed by Chinese unique culture and attractive scenery, I
have known further about China.In my point of view, it's indeed worthwhile
to explore a foreign culture.
【写作模板】
I still remember how ①_________(心情) I was ②_________(事件发生的时间), when I ③_________(什么事件)．
④_________(事件发生的过程)．The smile shone in the whole day and the following days.A week later ⑤_________(事件的结果)．
Thanks to ⑥_________ I ⑦_________(谈谈自己的看法)．
J 即学即练
(2023·河北石家庄市第十五中学检测)
假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Mike对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣，在端午节来临之际，他写信向你询问中国传统节日的相关习俗。请你用英语写一封回信，向他介绍中国的端午节。要点包括：
1．介绍中国的端午节(时间、意义、风俗等)；
2．欢迎他来中国并邀请他来观看龙舟赛。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike，
I'm glad to know you have a great interest in Chinese traditional festivals.
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
__________
__________________________________________________________As the Dragon Boat Festival is approaching, I'm writing to introduce it to you.
The Dragon Boat Festival, one Chinese traditional festival, falls on May 5th in the lunar calendar.People celebrate it in memory of Qu Yuan, one of the greatest Chinese poets.Besides, people in China will hold a variety of activities, such as dragon boat racing, eating tasty rice dumplings and so on.
Dear Mike，
I'm glad to know you have a great interest in Chinese traditional festivals.
If there is a chance, welcome to China to experience it personally.I'd like to invite you to watch dragon boat racing, which takes place annually on the Dragon Boat Festival.In this way, you'll have a better understanding of it.
_________
_________
Yours，
Li HuaSection Ⅳ 写作指导
有关节日经历的记叙文
【题目呈现】
假如你是Lucy，在刚刚过去的春节里，你应邀前往中国与笔友一起欢度中国年。请你用英语写一篇80词左右的短文来记录这一段难得的异国经历和感受。内容包括：
1．春节期间你们参加了什么活动；
2．你的感受。
【步骤分解】
步骤1 精准审题
本文是记叙文；主要时态是 一般过去时和一般现在时 ；人称是 第一人称和第三人称 。
步骤2 构建框架
第一部分： 受邀共度春节 ；
第二部分： 详细描述这段经历 ；
第三部分： 简要总结 。
步骤3 要点翻译
(1)adj.高兴的；满意的 pleased
(2)vt.邀请 invite
(3)adj.愉快的；快乐的 enjoyable
(4)探索外国文化 explore a foreign culture
(5)一个特殊的场合 a special occasion
(6)聚会；联欢 get together
(7)传统食品 traditional foods
(8)参加 take part in
(9)独特的文化和迷人的风景 unique culture and attractive scenery
(10)adj.(经历)难以忘怀的；不会被遗忘的 unforgettable
(11)很高兴，上个春节，我的一个中国笔友邀请我和她一起庆祝。(pleased)
I was pleased that one of my pen friends in China invited me to celebrate with her during the past Spring Festival.
(12)中国的春节是中国家庭团聚的特殊日子，所以我们一起拜访了她的一些家人和亲戚。(so)
The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families to get together so we visited some of her families and relatives together.
(13)此外，我们吃了一些传统食物，看了舞龙舞狮，并参加了一些其他的庆祝活动，如庙会。(besides, such as)
Besides, we tried some traditional foods, watched Dragon and Lion dance and took part in some other celebration activities, such as a temple fair.
(14)在我看来，探索外国文化确实值得。(worthwhile)
In my point of view, it's indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.
步骤4 连句成文：选用下面的连词用在文章中
so, besides, such as, in my point of view
I was so pleased that one of my pen friends in China invited me to celebrate with her during the past Spring Festival.That was really an enjoyable and unforgettable experience for me.
The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families to get together so we visited some of her families and relatives together.Besides, we tried some traditional foods, watched Dragon and Lion dance and took part in some other celebration activities, such as a temple fair.
Greatly impressed by Chinese unique culture and attractive scenery, I have known further about China.In my point of view, it's indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.
【写作模板】
I still remember how ① (心情) I was ② (事件发生的时间), when I ③ (什么事件)．
④ (事件发生的过程)．The smile shone in the whole day and the following days.A week later ⑤ (事件的结果)．
Thanks to ⑥ I ⑦ (谈谈自己的看法)．
J 即学即练
(2023·河北石家庄市第十五中学检测)
假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Mike对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣，在端午节来临之际，他写信向你询问中国传统节日的相关习俗。请你用英语写一封回信，向他介绍中国的端午节。要点包括：
1．介绍中国的端午节(时间、意义、风俗等)；
2．欢迎他来中国并邀请他来观看龙舟赛。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike，
I'm glad to know you have a great interest in Chinese traditional festivals.
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文：
Dear Mike，
I'm glad to know you have a great interest in Chinese traditional festivals.As the Dragon Boat Festival is approaching, I'm writing to introduce it to you.
The Dragon Boat Festival, one Chinese traditional festival, falls on May 5th in the lunar calendar.People celebrate it in memory of Qu Yuan, one of the greatest Chinese poets.Besides, people in China will hold a variety of activities, such as dragon boat racing, eating tasty rice dumplings and so on.
If there is a chance, welcome to China to experience it personally.I'd like to invite you to watch dragon boat racing, which takes place annually on the Dragon Boat Festival.In this way, you'll have a better understanding of it.
Yours，
Li Hua
