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UNIT 2 MORALS AND VIRTUES
Section Ⅳ 写作指导
写作方法指导
如何写寓言评论
【题目呈现】
最近你在《伊索寓言》这本书中，读了《狐狸和葡萄》的故事。故事中狐狸因为摘不到葡萄而故意说葡萄是酸的。这个故事告诉我们：在现实生活中，我们有时也会和狐狸一样，在面对错误或问题时，不是勇敢地去解决，而是不断为自己找借口。请你根据故事内容并结合自己的情况或某些社会现象写一篇评论。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【步骤分解】
步骤1 精准审题
本文是寓言评论；主要时态是一般现在时和一般过去时；人称是第一人称和第三人称 。
步骤2 构建框架
第一部分：关于故事的基本信息；
第二部分：对这个故事的分析 ；
第三部分：对这个故事的看法 。
步骤3 要点翻译
(1)如下_____________
(2)想出_______________
(3)很明显________________________
(4)寻找借口_____________________
(5)在一个炎热的夏日，有一只极度饥饿的狐狸在花园里看到许多葡萄。(hungry)
________________________________________________________________________________
as follows
come up with
It is very clear that
look for an excuse
On a hot summer day, there was an extremely hungry fox seeing a lot of
grapes in the garden.
(6)灰心丧气的狐狸没有想出摘葡萄的办法，而是走开了！(come up with)
_____________________________________________________________________
(7)当他离开的时候，他仍然安慰自己说这些葡萄一定是酸的！(comfort)
______________________________________________________________________________________
The frustrated fox didn't come up with an idea to get the grapes but to
go away！
As he was walking away, he still comforted himself with the thought
that these grapes must be acid！
(8)很明显，他是在为自己不能摘下它们找借口。(It is very clear that)
________________________________________________________________________
(9)读了这个寓言后，我意识到，当我们面对问题时，我们不应该找借口来掩盖自己的不足。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It is very clear that he was looking for an excuse for his not being able
to pick them.
After reading the fable, I realize that when faced with problems, we
should not find an excuse to cover up our own shortcomings.
步骤4 连句成文
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Recently I read a small story from Aesop's Fables, whose name is The Fox and the Grapes.What the story tells us is as follows：
On a hot summer day, there was an extremely hungry fox seeing a lot of grapes in the garden.He wanted very much to pick them down to eat, but he couldn't pick them at all.The frustrated fox didn't come up with an idea to get the grapes but to go away！As he was walking away, he still comforted himself with the thought that these grapes must be acid！It is very clear that he was looking for an excuse for his not being able to pick them.
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After reading the fable, I realize that when faced with problems, we should not find an excuse to cover up our own shortcomings.Only in this way might we succeed someday, otherwise, we may also become the fox in the story.
【写作模板】
Recently I read a small story from Aesop's Fables, whose name is ①_________(故事名称)．What the story tells us is as follows：②_________(对故事做个简单的归纳介绍)．③_________(分析作者的写作目的，故事的详细情节和作者要表达的思想)．
After reading the fable, I realize that ④_________(发表评论)．
J 即学即练
你最近又读了中国古代寓言故事《守株待兔》并从中学到了很多生活哲理，你打算把这则寓言故事分享给你的外国朋友，希望他们能对中国文化有更多的了解，同时能从中学到一些人生的道理。要点包括：
1．对故事的简要介绍；
2．你从中悟出的人生哲理；
3．你的希望……
注意：开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：树桩stump；锄头hoe；讽刺satirize
I read the fable titled“Waiting for gains without pains”again recently.
参考范文：
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A young farmer wanted to eat good food every day, but he didn't like working.One day, while ploughing in his field, he saw a hare bump into a stump by accident and die.He had the chance to eat delicious meat of the hare.From that day on, he put down his hoe, waiting by the stump for a second hare to turn up, but no luck.
I read the fable titled“Waiting for gains without pains”again recently.
The story satirizes those who would rather complain or just wait for luck than make efforts to obtain what they need.I hope we shouldn't be that kind of people.It is working hard that is the most precious.Section Ⅳ 写作指导
如何写寓言评论
【题目呈现】
最近你在《伊索寓言》这本书中，读了《狐狸和葡萄》的故事。故事中狐狸因为摘不到葡萄而故意说葡萄是酸的。这个故事告诉我们：在现实生活中，我们有时也会和狐狸一样，在面对错误或问题时，不是勇敢地去解决，而是不断为自己找借口。请你根据故事内容并结合自己的情况或某些社会现象写一篇评论。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【步骤分解】
步骤1 精准审题
本文是寓言评论；主要时态是 一般现在时和一般过去时 ；人称是 第一人称和第三人称 。
步骤2 构建框架
第一部分： 关于故事的基本信息 ；
第二部分： 对这个故事的分析 ；
第三部分： 对这个故事的看法 。
步骤3 要点翻译
(1)如下 as follows
(2)想出 come up with
(3)很明显 It is very clear that
(4)寻找借口 look for an excuse
(5)在一个炎热的夏日，有一只极度饥饿的狐狸在花园里看到许多葡萄。(hungry)
On a hot summer day, there was an extremely hungry fox seeing a lot of grapes in the garden.
(6)灰心丧气的狐狸没有想出摘葡萄的办法，而是走开了！(come up with)
The frustrated fox didn't come up with an idea to get the grapes but to go away！
(7)当他离开的时候，他仍然安慰自己说这些葡萄一定是酸的！(comfort)
As he was walking away, he still comforted himself with the thought that these grapes must be acid！
(8)很明显，他是在为自己不能摘下它们找借口。(It is very clear that)
It is very clear that he was looking for an excuse for his not being able to pick them.
(9)读了这个寓言后，我意识到，当我们面对问题时，我们不应该找借口来掩盖自己的不足。
After reading the fable, I realize that when faced with problems, we should not find an excuse to cover up our own shortcomings.
步骤4 连句成文
Recently I read a small story from Aesop's Fables, whose name is The Fox and the Grapes.What the story tells us is as follows：
On a hot summer day, there was an extremely hungry fox seeing a lot of grapes in the garden.He wanted very much to pick them down to eat, but he couldn't pick them at all.The frustrated fox didn't come up with an idea to get the grapes but to go away！As he was walking away, he still comforted himself with the thought that these grapes must be acid！It is very clear that he was looking for an excuse for his not being able to pick them.
After reading the fable, I realize that when faced with problems, we should not find an excuse to cover up our own shortcomings.Only in this way might we succeed someday, otherwise, we may also become the fox in the story.
【写作模板】
Recently I read a small story from Aesop's Fables, whose name is ① (故事名称)．What the story tells us is as follows：② (对故事做个简单的归纳介绍)．③ (分析作者的写作目的，故事的详细情节和作者要表达的思想)．
After reading the fable, I realize that ④ (发表评论)．
J 即学即练
你最近又读了中国古代寓言故事《守株待兔》并从中学到了很多生活哲理，你打算把这则寓言故事分享给你的外国朋友，希望他们能对中国文化有更多的了解，同时能从中学到一些人生的道理。要点包括：
1．对故事的简要介绍；
2．你从中悟出的人生哲理；
3．你的希望……
注意：开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：树桩stump；锄头hoe；讽刺satirize
I read the fable titled“Waiting for gains without pains”again recently.
参考范文：
I read the fable titled“Waiting for gains without pains”again recently.
A young farmer wanted to eat good food every day, but he didn't like working.One day, while ploughing in his field, he saw a hare bump into a stump by accident and die.He had the chance to eat delicious meat of the hare.From that day on, he put down his hoe, waiting by the stump for a second hare to turn up, but no luck.
The story satirizes those who would rather complain or just wait for luck than make efforts to obtain what they need.I hope we shouldn't be that kind of people.It is working hard that is the most precious.
