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UNIT 3 DIVERSE CULTURES
Section Ⅳ 写作指导
写作方法指导
如何介绍地点
【题目呈现】
假如你是李华，请你给某英文报社的“城市风采”栏目写一篇短文，介绍我们的首都——北京。要点如下：
1．基本概况：人口约2 000万，面积16 000多平方千米，位于华北平原北部；
2．气候：四季分明，夏季炎热多雨，冬季寒冷干燥；
3．历史与文化：有3 000多年的历史，是我国的政治、文化中心，有很多著名大学，如清华大学、北京大学等；
4．交通与旅游：交通便利，有天安门广场、故宫、长城等很多旅游景点。
注意：词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【步骤分解】
步骤1 精准审题
本文是应用文；主要时态是一般现在时；人称是第三人称。
步骤2 构建框架
第一部分：北京的基本概况包括地理位置、占地面积、人口和气候；
第二部分：北京的历史与文化；
第三部分：北京的交通及旅游状况。
步骤3 要点翻译
(1)占地……(面积)_______________________
(2)有……人口___________________________
(3)位于_________________________
(4)有3 000多年的历史_________________________________
(5)政治、文化中心____________________________________
(6)北京是中国的首都。
___________________________________
cover an area of ...
have a population of ...
be situated/located in
have a history of more than 3,000 years
the political and cultural center
Beijing is the capital of China.
(7)北京位于华北平原北部。
__________________________________________________
(8)北京有3 000多年的历史。
__________________________________________
(9)北京是中国的政治、文化中心。
_____________________________________________
(10)它成功举办了2008年奥运会，吸引了世界的眼光。
_________________________________________________________________________
Beijing is located in the north of the North China Plain.
Beijing has a history of more than 3,000 years.
Beijing is the political and cultural center of China.
It successfully hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and drew the attention
of the world.
(11)北京也是一个度假的好去处，且交通便利。
________________________________________________________________________
(12)北京有很多旅游景点，如天安门、故宫、长城和鸟巢等。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Beijing is also a great place to enjoy your holiday and it's convenient to
travel there.
There are many places of interest, such as Tian'anmen Square, the
Forbidden City, the Great Wall and the Bird's Nest.
步骤4 连句成文
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Beijing, the capital of China, is located in the north of the North China Plain.It covers more than 16,000 square kilometers and has a population of about 20 million.It is hot and rainy in summer and cold and dry in winter.
Beijing has a history of more than 3,000 years.As the political and cultural center of China, Beijing successfully hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and drew the attention of the world.There are many famous universities in Beijing, such as Tsinghua University and Peking University.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Beijing is also a great place to enjoy your holiday and it's convenient to travel there.There are many places of interest, such as Tian'anmen Square, the Forbidden City, the Great Wall and the Bird's Nest.Now, Beijing is playing a more and more important role in the world.
【写作模板】
①________ is situated in ②________(位置) covering an area of ③________(面积)．It has a history of ④__________(多长时间)．The population of it is ⑤______(人口数)．The climate is ⑥________(气候)．It is rich in ⑦________(物产)．It is famous for ⑧________(景点), attracting many tourists from all over the world every year.
I'm convinced that you'll have a wonderful journey.
J 即学即练
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter打算今年暑假到西藏旅游，请写一封电子邮件介绍西藏。要点如下：
①位置：中国西南部，位于有“世界屋脊”之称的青藏高原；
②人口数量：300多万；面积：120多万平方千米；
③基本情况：拉萨是西藏的首府；有许多旅游景点，比如布达拉宫(the Potala Palace)；近年来，其在经济、政治和文化等方面都取得了巨大进步。
注意：①可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
②词数80左右。
参考范文：
Dear Peter，
I am so glad to know that you will come to Tibet for a visit.Now let me introduce something about Tibet for you.
Located in the southwest of China, Tibet is on the Qinghai-Tibet plateau, known as the “roof of the world”．It has a population of over 3 million, covering an area of more than 1.2 million square kilometers.The capital city is Lhasa, which is honoured as one of the highest cities in China.It has a number of world-famous places of interest, such as the Potala Palace.In the past few years, it has made great progress in economy, politics and culture.
I'm sure you will have a wonderful journey in such a great place.Looking forward to your coming to China.
Yours，
Li HuaSection Ⅳ 写作指导
如何介绍地点
【题目呈现】
假如你是李华，请你给某英文报社的“城市风采”栏目写一篇短文，介绍我们的首都——北京。要点如下：
1．基本概况：人口约2 000万，面积16 000多平方千米，位于华北平原北部；
2．气候：四季分明，夏季炎热多雨，冬季寒冷干燥；
3．历史与文化：有3 000多年的历史，是我国的政治、文化中心，有很多著名大学，如清华大学、北京大学等；
4．交通与旅游：交通便利，有天安门广场、故宫、长城等很多旅游景点。
注意：词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【步骤分解】
步骤1 精准审题
本文是应用文；主要时态是 一般现在时 ；人称是 第三人称 。
步骤2 构建框架
第一部分： 北京的基本概况包括地理位置、占地面积、人口和气候 ；
第二部分： 北京的历史与文化 ；
第三部分： 北京的交通及旅游状况 。
步骤3 要点翻译
(1)占地……(面积) cover an area of ...
(2)有……人口 have a population of ...
(3)位于 be situated/located in
(4)有3 000多年的历史 have a history of more than 3,000 years
(5)政治、文化中心 the political and cultural center
(6)北京是中国的首都。
Beijing is the capital of China.
(7)北京位于华北平原北部。
Beijing is located in the north of the North China Plain.
(8)北京有3 000多年的历史。
Beijing has a history of more than 3,000 years.
(9)北京是中国的政治、文化中心。
Beijing is the political and cultural center of China.
(10)它成功举办了2008年奥运会，吸引了世界的眼光。
It successfully hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and drew the attention of the world.
(11)北京也是一个度假的好去处，且交通便利。
Beijing is also a great place to enjoy your holiday and it's convenient to travel there.
(12)北京有很多旅游景点，如天安门、故宫、长城和鸟巢等。
There are many places of interest, such as Tian'anmen Square, the Forbidden City, the Great Wall and the Bird's Nest.
步骤4 连句成文
Beijing, the capital of China, is located in the north of the North China Plain.It covers more than 16,000 square kilometers and has a population of about 20 million.It is hot and rainy in summer and cold and dry in winter.
Beijing has a history of more than 3,000 years.As the political and cultural center of China, Beijing successfully hosted the 2008 Olympic Games and drew the attention of the world.There are many famous universities in Beijing, such as Tsinghua University and Peking University.
Beijing is also a great place to enjoy your holiday and it's convenient to travel there.There are many places of interest, such as Tian'anmen Square, the Forbidden City, the Great Wall and the Bird's Nest.Now, Beijing is playing a more and more important role in the world.
【写作模板】
① is situated in ② (位置) covering an area of ③ (面积)．It has a history of ④ (多长时间)．The population of it is ⑤ (人口数)．The climate is ⑥ (气候)．It is rich in ⑦ (物产)．It is famous for ⑧ (景点), attracting many tourists from all over the world every year.
I'm convinced that you'll have a wonderful journey.
J 即学即练
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter打算今年暑假到西藏旅游，请写一封电子邮件介绍西藏。要点如下：
①位置：中国西南部，位于有“世界屋脊”之称的青藏高原；
②人口数量：300多万；面积：120多万平方千米；
③基本情况：拉萨是西藏的首府；有许多旅游景点，比如布达拉宫(the Potala Palace)；近年来，其在经济、政治和文化等方面都取得了巨大进步。
注意：①可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
②词数80左右。
参考范文：
Dear Peter，
I am so glad to know that you will come to Tibet for a visit.Now let me introduce something about Tibet for you.
Located in the southwest of China, Tibet is on the Qinghai-Tibet plateau, known as the “roof of the world”．It has a population of over 3 million, covering an area of more than 1.2 million square kilometers.The capital city is Lhasa, which is honoured as one of the highest cities in China.It has a number of world-famous places of interest, such as the Potala Palace.In the past few years, it has made great progress in economy, politics and culture.
I'm sure you will have a wonderful journey in such a great place.Looking forward to your coming to China.
Yours，
Li Hua
