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UNIT 4 SPACE EXPLORATION
Section Ⅳ 写作指导
写作方法指导
太空话题的讨论
【题目呈现】
假设你是李华。最近，你班学生就“太空是否值得探索”这一话题展开讨论。请你根据下面提供的信息，用英语写一封信向你的好朋友Mellisa介绍这一情况，词数80左右。
30%的学生认为不值得探索：
(1)离我们以及我们的日常生活太遥远；
(2)浪费金钱，这些金钱本可以用来解决地球上的饥饿、污染等问题。
70%的学生认为值得探索：
(1)卫星已用于通信传播、天气预报，使我们的生活更加方便；
(2)有望解决地球能源短缺等问题。
Dear Mellisa，
Yours，
Li Hua
【步骤分解】
步骤1 精准审题
本文是应用文；主要时态是____________ ；人称是___________
_______________。
步骤2 构建框架
第一部分：__________________ ；
第二部分：________________________；
第三部分：____________________________。
一般现在时
以第一、
三人称为主
问候并引入主题
讨论会上正反双方的观点
询问对方的看法，并期待回复
步骤3 要点翻译
(1)激烈的讨论 ______________________
(2)值得探索 _____________________
(3)远离 ________________
(4)天气预报 ____________________
(5)能源短缺 ___________________
(6)最近，我们班的学生就___________________展开了热烈的讨论。(画线部分用whether引导宾语从句)
_________________________________________________________________________________
a heated discussion
be worth exploring
far away from
weather forecasts
energy shortages
太空是否值得探索
Recently, students in our class have had a heated discussion on whether
space is worth exploring.
(7)卫星已用于天气预报和通信，这使我们的生活更加方便。(画线部分用make＋宾语＋宾补)
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(8)如果能在其他星球上找到资源，我们地球上的能源短缺问题就可以得到解决。(画线部分用条件句)
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________
Satellites have been used for weather forecasts as well as communication, which makes our life more convenient.
If resources are found on other planets, the problem of energy shortages on our earth can be solved.
步骤4 连句成文：选用下面的连词用在文章中
on the one hand, on the other hand, besides, in addition
Dear Mellisa，
Yours，
Li Hua
【写作模板】
Dear ①________，
Recently, we have had a discussion about ②________(提出问题)．Every coin has two sides.Therefore, people hold different opinions about it.
Some people argue for it.They hold the belief that ③________(列出支持的原因)．However, other people think differently.In their opinion, ④________(列出反对的原因)．
As far as I'm concerned, ⑤________(陈述自己的观点)．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
J 即学即练
假定你是李华，最近你们班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：太空探险意义。请结合下表内容，用英语给校报写一篇文章，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
赞同者 反对者
1.获得新的知识； 2．从太空取得新资源； 3．扩大人类的生存空间。 1.耗资巨大；
2．宇航员的安全问题。
参考范文：
Dear Editor，
We had a discussion over whether it's necessary to carry out the outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day. Some of us think it is important to research the outer space.First, people can get a better understanding of the outer space through their explorations. Second, new resources can be found there for humans to use and bring about new living space for human life.
However, others don't believe so.In their opinion, not only does this kind of exploration cost too much money but also it's very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.
I think such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out.
Yours，
Li HuaSection Ⅳ 写作指导
太空话题的讨论
【题目呈现】
假设你是李华。最近，你班学生就“太空是否值得探索”这一话题展开讨论。请你根据下面提供的信息，用英语写一封信向你的好朋友Mellisa介绍这一情况，词数80左右。
30%的学生认为不值得探索：
(1)离我们以及我们的日常生活太遥远；
(2)浪费金钱，这些金钱本可以用来解决地球上的饥饿、污染等问题。
70%的学生认为值得探索：
(1)卫星已用于通信传播、天气预报，使我们的生活更加方便；
(2)有望解决地球能源短缺等问题。
Dear Mellisa，
Yours，
Li Hua
【步骤分解】
步骤1 精准审题
本文是应用文；主要时态是 一般现在时 ；人称是 以第一、三人称为主 。
步骤2 构建框架
第一部分： 问候并引入主题 ；
第二部分： 讨论会上正反双方的观点 ；
第三部分： 询问对方的看法，并期待回复 。
步骤3 要点翻译
(1)激烈的讨论 a heated discussion
(2)值得探索 be worth exploring
(3)远离 far away from
(4)天气预报 weather forecasts
(5)能源短缺 energy shortages
(6)最近，我们班的学生就太空是否值得探索展开了热烈的讨论。(画线部分用whether引导宾语从句)
Recently, students in our class have had a heated discussion on whether space is worth exploring.
(7)卫星已用于天气预报和通信，这使我们的生活更加方便。(画线部分用make＋宾语＋宾补)
Satellites have been used for weather forecasts as well as communication, which makes our life more convenient.
(8)如果能在其他星球上找到资源，我们地球上的能源短缺问题就可以得到解决。(画线部分用条件句)
If resources are found on other planets, the problem of energy shortages on our earth can be solved.
步骤4 连句成文：选用下面的连词用在文章中
on the one hand, on the other hand, besides, in addition
Dear Mellisa，
Yours，
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Mellisa，
How's everything going Recently, students in our class have had a heated discussion on whether space is worth exploring.
On the one hand, 30%of us think that space exploration is not worthwhile.They think space is too far away from us and our daily life.In addition, space exploration will waste a lot of money, which can be used to solve the problems such as starvation and pollution.On the other hand, 70% of us think space is worthy to be explored.As we all know, satellites have been used for weather forecasts as well as communication, which makes our life more convenient.Besides, if resources are found on other planets, the problem of energy shortages on our earth can be solved.
What about your opinion Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【写作模板】
Dear ① ，
Recently, we have had a discussion about ② (提出问题)．Every coin has two sides.Therefore, people hold different opinions about it.
Some people argue for it.They hold the belief that ③ (列出支持的原因)．However, other people think differently.In their opinion, ④ (列出反对的原因)．
As far as I'm concerned, ⑤ (陈述自己的观点)．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
J 即学即练
假定你是李华，最近你们班举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：太空探险意义。请结合下表内容，用英语给校报写一篇文章，客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。
赞同者 反对者
1.获得新的知识；2．从太空取得新资源；3．扩大人类的生存空间。 1.耗资巨大；2．宇航员的安全问题。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考范文：
Dear Editor，
We had a discussion over whether it's necessary to carry out the outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day. Some of us think it is important to research the outer space.First, people can get a better understanding of the outer space through their explorations. Second, new resources can be found there for humans to use and bring about new living space for human life.
However, others don't believe so.In their opinion, not only does this kind of exploration cost too much money but also it's very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.
I think such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out.
Yours，
Li Hua
