2015高考每周专训：短文改错+书面表达

2015高考每周专训：短文改错+书面表达1
下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
（1）
We all want to grow up happily, and for these goal we must doing several thing. Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consisted of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because of knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to build my country but enjoy life better. In the order to study good, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply go for walk after a day’s study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily.

（2）
Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic. It has serious
influenced people daily life and economic development. To solve the problem，some pieces
of advice is put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads are built. By this
way，the traffic density can be reduced, thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars.
　　
Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic
flow. But on the other hand, this will effect the consumption and makes buses more crowded.
　　
In my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under the control. And at the same time，
buses should have their own special routes cannot be used by other vehicles.?
第二节书面表达 （满分30分）
随着高考的临近，部分高三住校生要求搬出学生宿舍，在学校附近租房子。针对这种现象，各方反应不一。请根据下面提示，一分为二地写一篇短文，说说两者各自的好处与弊端，并发表你的观点。
1.学习时间和效果 2.安全性 3.自由性 4.与同学交往
注意：1.两方面的理由至少要两条；
2.词数：100左右
Nowadays, some students_______________________________________________________

改错（共10分）
1. Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. It has seriously influenced people’s daily life and economic development. To solve the problem，some pieces of advice are put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads should be built. In this way，the traffic density can be reduced, thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars.
　　Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic flow. But on the other hand，this will affect the consumption and make buses more crowded.
In my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under control. And at the same time，buses should have their own special routes which/that cannot be used by other vehicles.?

2015高考每周专训：短文改错+书面表达2
下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
（1）
One day a boy went to a garden followed his parents. They planted flowers and watered
them as soon as possibly. A few days after, they came there again. To their joy,
the flowers they planted were growing so good. The father picked a flower and gave
it to his wife to show her love, which was saw by his son. The following day the
boy picked all the flowers to send it to his parents. Only at this moment the father
realize what a bad effect he had on his son. So I think parents can be bad and good
examples for their children, and they should set up good examples.
（2）
A visitor visits an island where two tribes live. One tribe always tells the truth and an other always lies. The truth tellers live on the western side of the island, and those which lie live on the eastern side. The visitor wants determine whether the native beside he is a truth teller or not by ask only one question. He asks the native, “Go or ask the native in the distance which side of the island he lives to.” When the messenger returned, he says, "He said he lives on the western side of the island."
Is the messenger a truth teller or not one? How can the visitor be surely?
第二节书面表达 （满分30分）
民工子女的教育问题现在受到全社会的关注。最近你与你的同学共同对你所在城市的民工学校进行了一次调查。请你用英语给北京伯乐马教育研究所写信，反映这次调查的情况并呼吁全社会关注民工学校，帮助民工子弟。
信的主要内容包括如下要点：
1. 民工学校的现状：设施简陋，师资匮乏，但民工子弟热爱学习
2. 调查引发的感受
3. 改善民工学校现状的建议（至少两点）
注意：词数：120词左右；信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： 民工学校－migrant school
Dear editor,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours Sincerely,
Li hua
短文改错
1. followed→following 2. possibly→possible 3 . after→later 4. good→well
5. her→his 6. saw→seen 7. it→them 8. moment后加did 9. and→or 10. set去掉up
A visitor visits an island where two tribes live. One tribe always tells the truth and an other
the
always lies. The truth tellers live on the western side of the island, and those which lie live on
who
the eastern side. The visitor wants / determine whether the native beside he is a truth teller or not
to him
by ask only one question. He asks the native, “Go or ask the native in the distance which side of
asking and
the island he lives to.” When the messenger returned, he says, "He said he lives on the western
on returns
side of the island."
Is the messenger a truth teller or not one? How can the visitor be surely?
(删除) sure
书面表达范文
One possible version:
Dear editor,
We have done some research about migrant schools in our city lately and we are surprised to see the environment of the schools is so poor. The schools have no modern equipment, no playground, no library, and even don’t have enough teachers. All those problems are due to one key point---the lack of money.
And yet, the good thing we saw is that migrant kids are eager to learn. Can we do something to help them? Yes. Our government can invest more money in migrant schools. Our community resources can be made use of and city students can help collect money or donate books to them. There are a lot more things we can do.
I do hope that the whole society can care more about the migrant kids. If everybody contributes a bit, migrant kids can surely enjoy equal education opportunities.
Yours Sincerely,
Li hua
2015高考每周专训：短文改错+书面表达3
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Senior three student will face a problem after they pass by the college entrance examination. Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students preferred to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested. It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They think that students graduate from key universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, we can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.
2
Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain can not stop us. We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit. On either side of the road was green fields. We could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by. The beauty of the scenes. After short rest, we started going down It rained more harder. We were wet all over, and we still felt happy.
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
假设你们学校最近就你们所在的城市是否应该发展旅游业(tourism)作为研究性课程的内容进行课题讨论，请你根据下面所给出的要点提示，写一个在讨论会上的英语发言稿。发言稿中应包括：
1. 旅游业给当地经济发展和人民生活带来的好处；
2. 旅游业过快发展的弊端；
3. 提出建议。
注意：字数120字左右。
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2.
can—could 考查情态动词。根据Last weekend 可知是一般过去时，故改成could
extreme—extremely 考查副词。本句使用副词extremely修饰形容词narrow做状语
spirit—spirits 考查固定短语。In high spirits高度兴奋；
was—were 考查主谓一致；句意：道路两边是绿色的草。这是个倒装句,正常的句子结构是Green fields were on either side of the road.
mixing—mixed 考查非谓语动词。本句中使用的而是形容词短语be?mixed?with混合着…；作为宾语补足语对宾语the?sound?of?the?rain?and?our?footsteps进行说明
to去掉。 考查动词的用法。Reach是及物动词，不接介词。
there—where 考查定语从句；先行词是the mountain，在山顶我们对于这美景感到非常的吃惊；
after后面加a 考查冠词。After a short rest 休息了一会之后；
more—much 考查副词。Much可以用来修饰比较级而more是用来构成比较级的；
and—but 考查连词。句意：我们浑身都湿透了，但是我们仍然很开心地唱歌根据句意可知上下文之间存在这转折关系，故使用but连接这两个分句

第二节书面表达 （满分30分）
2015高考每周专训：短文改错+书面表达4
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 ( 从第11处起 ) 不计分。
例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I
the
was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday.
am on
In the traffic court of a large mid-western city, a young lady is brought before the judge to
answer a ticket given her for drive through a red light. He explained that she was school teacher
and requested an immediately disposal of her case in order that she might hurried to her classes.
A wild idea came upon to the judge’s mind. “You are a school teacher, eh?” said he. “Madam, I
shall realize me life-long ambition. Sit down on that table and write ‘I went through a red light’
five hundred time.”
（2）
The other day after work, I was walking down the street while I saw a boy riding a nice unicycle, one of those bicycle with only one wheel. Dressing in all pink from head to toe, he was singing a song which was sounded like a kid’s song. I thought he must be total crazy. Just then, a lady dropped 20-dollar bill on the ground, but he didn’t realize it and started to walk away. The guy in pink picked out the money and gave it back to her. After that, he rode on but soon disappeared before the lady could thank him. How a strange and good guy!
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
请你以“The World is Getting Smaller”为题，写一篇短文。
要点：1. 我们都感觉到现在的世界变得越来越小。
2. 分析这种感觉的原因。
注意：词数100-120。
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
In the traffic court of a large mid-western city, a young lady is brought before the judge to
was
answer a ticket given her for drive through a red light. He explained that she was∧school teacher
driving She a
and requested an immediately disposal of her case in order that she might hurried to her classes.
immediate hurry
A wild idea came upon to the judge’s mind. “You are a school teacher, eh?” said he. “Madam, I
shall realize me life-long ambition. Sit down on that table and write ‘I went through a red light’
my at
five hundred time.”
times
2.
The other day after work, I was walking down the street while I saw a boy riding a nice unicycle,
改为when
one of those bicycle with only one wheel. Dressing in all pink from head to toe, he was singing a
改为bicycles Dressed
song which was sounded like a kid’s song. I thought he must be total crazy. Just then, a lady
去掉was 改为totally
dropped ∧20-dollar bill on the ground, but he didn’t realize it and started to walk away. The guy
加 a 改为she
in pink picked out the money and gave it back to her. After that, he rode on but soon disappeared
改为up 改为and
before the lady could thank him. How a strange and good guy!
改为What
2015高考每周专训：短文改错+书面表达5
下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Senior three student will face a problem after they pass by the college entrance examination. Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students preferred to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested. It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They think that students graduate from key universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, we can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.
2.
On the first day when I went to high school，I felt exciting．After 9 years’study, I felt I was so closely to university．During the first year, I made many friends．I got to know all of my classmates．Because the school work was tough．I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends．When second year came，I was arranged to other class．I was worried that no one could talk to me，but I made new friends quickly．Now it was the last year of my high school life，but I'm determined to study more harder and make greater progress．High school life is challenging for me，but I won’t give out．
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
假设你们学校最近就你们所在的城市是否应该发展旅游业(tourism)作为研究性课程的内容进行课题讨论，请你根据下面所给出的要点提示，写一个在讨论会上的英语发言稿。发言稿中应包括：
1. 旅游业给当地经济发展和人民生活带来的好处；
2. 旅游业过快发展的弊端；
3. 提出建议。
注意：字数120字左右。
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第一节（10分，每小题1分）
Senior three student will face a problem after they pass by the college entrance examination.
students
Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students preferred to consider majors first
or prefer
so that they can learn what they are interested/. It will also make it possibly for them to take their
in possible
favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is
believe
important to one’s development. They think that students graduate from key universities are often
graduating(或who graduate)
more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to choose a good major at a good
university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter
can't
where we study, we can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.
2.
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第二节（30分）
One possible version: [126 words]
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over developing tourism. In fact, tourism can benefit us a lot. It will help the city's economy and people's life will improve greatly. We will have nice parks, the first-class roads and grand buildings. We will get lots of chances to communicate with tourists from all over the world.
But every coin has two sides. Without proper planning, tourism can be a problem. If tourism grows too quickly, people will move from their early jobs to those concerning tourism. Local industry will suffer. Too many tourists can crowd public places and cause some pollution.
I think it necessary to develop tourism, but first of all we should have a proper plan so that it can be developed steadily and efficiently.
2015高考每周专训：短文改错+书面表达6
下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

How nice to hear from you again! You want to know how is going on in schools in China? In short, things had begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce students’ learning load. I don’t know about others, so I used to have to work even if at weekends doing endless homework and attend classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interest such as reading books, visiting to museums, and taking computer lessons. In evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What’s worse, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this newly arrangement of things.
2. Trying to come to a decision complete on your own can be risky．Some decisions are so important that they shouldn’t made without talking to others first．There have several advantages if you consult the persons you trust．For one thing，they can give you valuable advice and they may point out some things you may have been overlooked．For another，friends may stop you from make big mistakes．
When consulting others about importance decisions，you should keep two things in mind．The first one is that you need to find someone whom you respected enough to trust their judgment．The second thing to consider is how to do if you disagree with this person．Maybe turning to a third or fourth person for help is the best option．In a word，making any big decision alone can lead in problems．Talking to friends or family members first are always a good idea．
第二节：书面表达（满分30分）
父母给予我们生命，哺育我们成长，教育我们长大，没有父母便没有我们，我们要懂得报答父母的养育之恩，我们要珍惜父母的深情，我们要感恩父母。假如你的名字叫李华，你校英语报开展“感恩家书”征文活动，请用英语写一封100~120个词的信，向校英语报投稿，内容包括：
1、父亲或母亲给你印象最深的一件事；
2、对父亲或母亲的感恩。
注意：信的开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）。
Dear_________________________________________________________________________
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___________________________________________________________________________ _
Li Hua
改错(每小题1分，共10分)：
How nice to hear from you again! You want to know how is going on in schools in China?
what
In short, things had begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I
have
don’t know about others, so I used to have to work even if at weekends, doing endless homework
but
and attend classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interest such as
attending interests
reading books, visiting to museums, and taking computer lessons. In ^evenings I can watch news
the
on TV or read newspapers. What’s worse, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is
more
happy about this newly arrangement of things.
new
2.
1. complete→completely 此处应用副词completely修饰介词短语on your own。
2.shouldn't后加be 情态动词should后应该动词原形，they是make动作承受者，故在should后加be。
3.have→are 此处是there be句型，故将have改为be。
4. 去掉been you may have been overlooked为some things的定语从句，overlooked的宾语是引导词that，故应去掉been。
5.make→making make前的from为介词，故将make改为making。
6.importance→important decisions为名词，应用形容词important修饰。
7.respected→respect 这两句之间的关系是转折关系，故将and改为but。
8.how→what 题干中的to do后缺少宾语，故how改为what。
9.in→to lead to导致，通向，故将in改为to。
10.are→is 主语为talking短语，谓语动词应用单数形式，故are改为is。
作文(共30分)： One possible version:

2015高考每周专训：短文改错+书面表达7
下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

第一节：短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily
the
I was completely free then, so I'll say "yes". I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8 p. m.
am
on a Friday evening.
A group of scientists were planning to go to the countryside to do some scientific research in order to find out that whether the environment of the country had polluted. In arrival, they started to check the air or water. To our surprise, they found how terribly the situation was. They could see the serious pollution. Look into the cause, they persuaded the government to pass laws to protect the environment and kept the balance of nature. Now everything changed. Birds are singing while tree and grass are waving.
据报道， 大量农民工骑摩托车回家乡过兔年。春节前十天经过广东肇庆境内的摩托车日流量在一万以上。请根据这一消息，以 “Peasant Workers Go to Hometown by Motorcycle”为题用英语按以下要点写一篇100—120 字的短文。
描述以上有关农民工骑摩托车回家过年的信息。
分析原因（如：火车票贵；日夜排队买票；……）。
简短评论。
注意：短文的标题已给出（不计词数）。
(提示： 肇庆 Zhaoqing)
“Peasant Workers Go to Hometown by Motorcycle”
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第二节 书面表达（满分30分）
A possible version.
Peasant Workers Go to Hometown by Motorcycle
It is reported that a large number of peasant workers choose to ride motorcycles a long way to spend the Rabbit Year at home. During the ten days before the Spring Festival, more than ten thousand motorcycles pass Zhaoqing, Guangdong Province each day.
There are reasons for this phenomenon. Firstly, the ticket prices are too high for the peasant workers with very low incomes. Secondly, to get the tickets they have to stand in line day and night. Another reason is that it’s more convenient. Riding motorbikes, it’s up to them to decide the time and the route of their journey.
I hope the government should ensure the safety of the peasant workers and take measures to solve this problem. (120 words)