Unit 8 Is there a post office near here Name
Writing
I. Writing Topic
Writing Topic
Please draw a map of neighborhood and write about it. These questions may help you.
1.What kind of neighborhood do you live
2.What places are there in the neighborhood
3.What do you usually do in the neighborhood？
4.What’s your favorite place？Why
5.How do you get there from your home
6.How do you feel about your neighborhood
写作要求：
1. 字迹清楚，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰；
2. 词数70词左右。
II. Make an outline
Person： Tense：
Text： Details：
Structure：
III. Finish the first draft
IV. Finish the second draftMarking ladders
Unit 11 Is there a post office near here
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I write the whole passage into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I lead to the topic (1 point)
Para_____:I describe my neighborhood.(places in the neighborhood ,activities,favorite place and reason,give directions) (3 points)
Para.____:I show my feelings (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language I use verbs correctly. For example:There is a park across from the supermarket To get to the park,I have to cross the Center Street. (3 points)
My punctuation is correct. (1 point)
There are spelling mistakes. (1 point)
I have used some good sentences. (1 point)
I have used some conjunction words. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score
What can I do to improve my writing next time (共18张PPT)
Unit 8 Is there a post office near here
Writing
My house is across from a ______
on Long Street.I usually go
shopping at a __________ near my
house. It is between a ______
and the ________. On weekends, I like to play in
the ______. To get there, I go along Long Street
and turn left on North Street. It is on the right,
next to a ________.
Look at the map of Cindy’s neighborhood and fill in the blanks.
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Pre-writing
library
supermarket
library
post office
park
hotel
Pre-writing
Do they have the same structure
Pre-writing
Aalyze the structure(分析结构)
beginning
body
Pre-writing
Aalyze the content(分析内容)
activites
Pre-writing
favorite place and reasons
Pre-writing
Aalyze the content(分析内容)
places in the neighborhood
Pre-writing
give directions
Aalyze the content(分析内容)
Pre-writing
beginning
body
ending
What kind of neighborhood do they live
What places are there in the neighborhood
What do they usually do in the neighborhood？
What’s their favorite place？Why
How do they get there from their home
How do they feel about their neighborhood
Pre-writing
Writing topic
Please draw a map of neighborhood and write about it. These questions may help you.
What kind of neighborhood do you live
What places are there in the neighborhood
What do you usually do in the neighborhood？
What’s your favorite place？Why
How do you get there from your home
How do you feel about your neighborhood
写作要求：1. 字迹清楚，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰；
2. 词数70词左右.
Let’s make an outline(列提纲)
Person(人称):
Tense(时态):
Text(体裁):
Details:(细节)
The first person
The simple present tense
a passage
1.Introduce your neighborhood. 2.70 words
Pre-writing
Structure
(结构)
Beginning: Lead to the topic
Body:
Ending: Show the feelings
Introduce the neighborhood including places in the neighborhood ,activities,favorite place and reason,give directions...
Let’s make an outline(列提纲)
I live in a...neighborhood./I live...
There is ...in the neighborhood.
In a word/all in all,I love my neighborhood.I hope it can be better.
I often/usually...
My favorite place is...because.../I like to go to...because...
Pre-writing
To get there,I must/need...
Writing Tips(写作小技巧)
2.make some modifier to make the composition more vivid.
用一些修饰词（ 形容词/副词），让描述更加生动。
1.Use some linking words(连接词):and/but/so/beacuse...
3.make some additions to make the description more specific.
做一些补充（时间/地点/方式），让描述更加具体。
Pre-writing
Write a passage in 15 minutes
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已开始计时
时间到
While-writing
Spelling mistakes
Wrong sentences &Punctuation mistakes
Good sentences
Conjunction words
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Check the composition
Post-writing
Work in groups,correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation(标点)
6. languge(语言)
7. fluency(流畅度)
Post-writing
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Post-writing
Polish your first draft and finish the second draft.
Homework
