【大单元整合教学】Unit 10 I'd like some noodles.作文课件

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Unit10 I’d like some noodles
Writing
What kind of food would you like
Pre-writing
Where would you like to eat
Pre-writing
Hot pot house
Noodle house
Pizza Hut
Dumpling house
Pre-writing
House of Dumplings
Would you like some dumplings Please come to House of Delicious Dumplings.
The restaurant is very clean and quiet.There are two new specials in our restaurant. We have pork and cabbage dumplings for one yuan each. Would you like a small bowl of mutton and carrot dumplings They are only 2 yuan.Would you like something to drink If you are thirsty, you can have green tea for five yuan. What’s more, would you like a large bowl of egg tomato soup for eight yuan or a small bowl for only six yuan It’s really cheap and delicious! Our address is 15 Center Street, next to the library. You can find it easily.You can also call us at 555-8686 for takeout.
Welcome to House of Delicious Dumplings.
Analyze the structure（结构）
Pre-writing
An Ad
Beginning
Body
Ending
简单介绍+引入话题
描述特色+价格+其它
欢迎大家品尝
Analyze the content（内容）
Pre-writing
简单介绍+引入话题
描述特色+价格+其它
欢迎大家品尝
Lead to the topic by using questions.
Environment
Specials ,dishes,size and price
Feelings
Adress
Ordering ways
send an invitation
Beginning
body
Ending
简单介绍+引入话题
Pre-writing
How can we write an ad
Lead to the topic by using questions.
描述特色+价格+其它
Environment
Specials ,dishes,size and price
Feelings
Adress
Ordering ways
欢迎大家品尝
send an invitation
Pre-writing
If you want to open a shop, such as a noodle restaurant, dumpling restaurant, dessert shop, or hot pot restaurant and so on. Please write an advertisement(广告) for your shop.
Writing Topic
写作要求：1. 字迹清楚，语言流畅，表达准确，逻辑清晰；
2. 词数70词左右.
Let’s make an outline(列提纲)
Person(人称):
Tense(时态):
Text(体裁):
Details:(细节)
The first/second person
The simple presant tense
an Ad
1.Write an ad for your shop. 2.70 words
Pre-writing
Structure
(结构)
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
Pre-writing
Let’s make an outline(列提纲)
The shop is...
Come to our ...quickly and you will know it’s a good choice.
We have ...for...each.
The food id...
Would you like .../Would you like to eat...Please come to...
Introduce the information of the shop (Evironment,Specials,dishes,size ,price,Feelings,Adress,and Ordering ways）
Would you like...for...
Send an invitation
Lead to the topic(by asking questions)
Write a passage in 15 minutes
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Pre-writing
Spelling mistakes
Wrong sentences &Punctuation mistakes
Good sentences
Conjunction words
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Check the composition
Pre-writing
Work in groups,correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation(标点)
6. languge(语言)
7. fluency(流畅度)
Pre-writing
Show Time
Pre-writing
Polish your first draft and finish the second draft.
Homework
Pre-writing