2015届二轮复习精题分解之短文改错（2）
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2015届高考英语二轮复习精题分解之短文改错（2）
1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I watch TV until nearly 12 o clock, so I could not go over my lessons．This morning I got up very late that I had to hurry school without breakfast yet I was late of the first class ．When I entered the classroom, the maths teacher had to stop explaining a important problem, and all the eyes fixed upon me ．My face turned to red．Something even worse happened to me in the English class．The teacher asked me to recite the text, but I could speak nothing but Sorry , as I did not spend any time preparing my lessons ．The teacher looked at me with his coldly eyes, I stood at my bench without daring to raise my head ．What a terrible day I had! I will never do anything like this．
答案
76．watch--watched 77．very---so 78．hurry后加to 79．of--for 80．a—an
81．eyes后加were 82．to 去掉 83．speak--say 84．as--for 85．coldly—cold
2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My mom learned early on how to cook for a large family． Grew up on a small farm, she was the old of seven children． So you can imagine responsibility that fell on her shoulder． She mom taught her how to make pies and can fruits and vegetables． She let her make meals for companies, too． As a wife and a mother, mom baked and cooked even much, because I have six brothers and four sisters． With so a large family, mom was always make delicious dishes while we were growing up． She always used the freshest herbs and vegetables from our garden． And for each birthday, she would make the birthday-child’s favorite meal．
【答案】
Grew—Growing ; old—oldest ; responsibility前加the ; shoulder—shoulders ; She—Her ; let—lets ; mother前a 去掉 ; much—more ; so—such ; make—making
【解析】文章主要测试以下几方面：现在分词；形容词和副词；冠词；名词；代词；动词（主谓一致）等。
第一行：句子Grew up on a small farm, she was the old of seven children的译文如下：（她）生长在一个小农场，她是七个孩子中最大（oldest）的一个；再根据主谓一致及省略结构可知：grew和she 属于主动关系，所以：grew改为growing；old改为oldest；
第二行：句子译文：所以你可以想想他肩负的责任。她母亲教他如何制作馅饼，水果和蔬菜罐头。此处：responsibility属于特指：on her shoulders上面的责任；另外， shoulder属于可数名词，而且考虑现实人的“肩膀”应该是两个，故此使用复数结构：shoulders；结合所学知识可知：她母亲应该表达为：her mother，故此，she 改为：her；
第三行：根据主谓一致可以识别出：let改为lets（she属于第三人称单数）；句子中：As a wife and a mother, 主要表示：母亲作为一位妻子和母亲，所以属于单数结构，只能使用一个冠词。例如：There is a black and white cat。这儿有只黑白相间的猫（只有一只）；
第四行：根据所学知识：even通常用来加强比较级，此处句子：As a wife and a mother, mom baked and cooked even much, because I have six brothers and four sisters．的译文：作为一位妻子和母亲，妈妈烤制更多食物，因为我有六个弟弟，四个妹妹，所以：much改为more；句子：With so a large family, mom was always make delicious dishes while we were growing up．的译文：如此大一个家庭，妈妈总能做出美味的食物，供我们成长，结合所学知识：so只能修饰：adj或者adv，而such用来修饰：名词，所以：so改为such；另外，mom was always making delicious dishes中动词：make应该使用主动结构：making作表语，故此，make改为making。
3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear friends,
It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the English Club. Although we have been members for a short period of times, we have made a great progress. That is because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!
答案
短文改错
76. real改为 really 77. weekend 改为weekends 78. times改为time
79.去掉 a 80. 去掉 much 81. and 改为 but
82. his 改为 their 83. interested 改为 interesting 84.us 后加 have
85. see 改为 seeing
4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
If you park your car in the wrong place, the traffic policeman will soon find. You will be very luck if he lets you to go without a ticket.Therefore, this does not always happen. Traffic police are sometimes very politely. During a holiday in Sweden, I find this note in my car: 'sir, we welcome you to our city. This is a "No Parking" area. You will enjoy your stay here if you pay attention to your street signs. This note is only a reminder.' Whether you receive a request like this, you can not fail to obey it!
短文改错
If you park your car in the wrong place, the traffic policeman will soon find∧it. You will a
be very luck if he lets you to go without a ticket.Therefore, this does not always happen. Traffic lucky ﹨ However
police are sometimes very politely. During a holiday in Sweden, I find this note in my car: 'sir,
polite found on
we welcome you to our city. This is a "No Parking" area. You will enjoy your stay here if you pay attention to your street signs. This note is only a reminder.' Whether you receive a request like
our If
this, you can not fail to obey it!
Good afternoon,everyone!
5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table teenis. However, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experiences in traveling, taking care pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Li Hua
6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir,
How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
答案
短文改错
Dear Sir,
How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into
an
a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate
去掉in
often held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that
holds making which
disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I
attention
am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is ∧ get a room of my own, one not in the
you to
same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do
but grateful
me the favor.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
7、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Behind my apartment, there was used to be a dirty and messy corner．Bits of plastic bags hanged on the trees．Broken bottles were left laying here and there．There was a damaging car in the center．The whole corner gave away an unpleasant smell．One year ago, we decided to turn it in a beautiful park．Since then, great changes have been taken place in that corner．All the rubbish have been cleared away．Flowers and young trees have planted all over．Now birds come here to sing, children come here to play, and adults come here to enjoy our peaceful life．It has taken on a new look．
答案
短文改错
Behind my apartment, there was used to be a dirty and messy corner．Bits of plastic bags hanged
去掉 hung
on the trees．Broken bottles were left laying here and there．There was a damaging car in the
lying damaged
center．The whole corner gave away an unpleasant smell．One year ago, we decided to turn it in a
off/out into
beautiful park．Since then, great changes have been taken place in that corner．All the rubbish have
去掉 has
been cleared away．Flowers and young trees have∧ planted all over．Now birds come here to
been
sing, children come here to play, and adults come here to enjoy our peaceful life．It has taken on a
their
new look．
1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I watch TV until nearly 12 o clock, so I could not go over my lessons．This morning I got up very late that I had to hurry school without breakfast yet I was late of the first class ．When I entered the classroom, the maths teacher had to stop explaining a important problem, and all the eyes fixed upon me ．My face turned to red．Something even worse happened to me in the English class．The teacher asked me to recite the text, but I could speak nothing but Sorry , as I did not spend any time preparing my lessons ．The teacher looked at me with his coldly eyes, I stood at my bench without daring to raise my head ．What a terrible day I had! I will never do anything like this．
答案
76．watch--watched 77．very---so 78．hurry后加to 79．of--for 80．a—an
81．eyes后加were 82．to 去掉 83．speak--say 84．as--for 85．coldly—cold
2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My mom learned early on how to cook for a large family． Grew up on a small farm, she was the old of seven children． So you can imagine responsibility that fell on her shoulder． She mom taught her how to make pies and can fruits and vegetables． She let her make meals for companies, too． As a wife and a mother, mom baked and cooked even much, because I have six brothers and four sisters． With so a large family, mom was always make delicious dishes while we were growing up． She always used the freshest herbs and vegetables from our garden． And for each birthday, she would make the birthday-child’s favorite meal．
【答案】
Grew—Growing ; old—oldest ; responsibility前加the ; shoulder—shoulders ; She—Her ; let—lets ; mother前a 去掉 ; much—more ; so—such ; make—making
【解析】文章主要测试以下几方面：现在分词；形容词和副词；冠词；名词；代词；动词（主谓一致）等。
第一行：句子Grew up on a small farm, she was the old of seven children的译文如下：（她）生长在一个小农场，她是七个孩子中最大（oldest）的一个；再根据主谓一致及省略结构可知：grew和she 属于主动关系，所以：grew改为growing；old改为oldest；
第二行：句子译文：所以你可以想想他肩负的责任。她母亲教他如何制作馅饼，水果和蔬菜罐头。此处：responsibility属于特指：on her shoulders上面的责任；另外， shoulder属于可数名词，而且考虑现实人的“肩膀”应该是两个，故此使用复数结构：shoulders；结合所学知识可知：她母亲应该表达为：her mother，故此，she 改为：her；
第三行：根据主谓一致可以识别出：let改为lets（she属于第三人称单数）；句子中：As a wife and a mother, 主要表示：母亲作为一位妻子和母亲，所以属于单数结构，只能使用一个冠词。例如：There is a black and white cat。这儿有只黑白相间的猫（只有一只）；
第四行：根据所学知识：even通常用来加强比较级，此处句子：As a wife and a mother, mom baked and cooked even much, because I have six brothers and four sisters．的译文：作为一位妻子和母亲，妈妈烤制更多食物，因为我有六个弟弟，四个妹妹，所以：much改为more；句子：With so a large family, mom was always make delicious dishes while we were growing up．的译文：如此大一个家庭，妈妈总能做出美味的食物，供我们成长，结合所学知识：so只能修饰：adj或者adv，而such用来修饰：名词，所以：so改为such；另外，mom was always making delicious dishes中动词：make应该使用主动结构：making作表语，故此，make改为making。
3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear friends,
It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the English Club. Although we have been members for a short period of times, we have made a great progress. That is because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!
答案
短文改错
76. real改为 really 77. weekend 改为weekends 78. times改为time
79.去掉 a 80. 去掉 much 81. and 改为 but
82. his 改为 their 83. interested 改为 interesting 84.us 后加 have
85. see 改为 seeing
4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
If you park your car in the wrong place, the traffic policeman will soon find. You will be very luck if he lets you to go without a ticket.Therefore, this does not always happen. Traffic police are sometimes very politely. During a holiday in Sweden, I find this note in my car: 'sir, we welcome you to our city. This is a "No Parking" area. You will enjoy your stay here if you pay attention to your street signs. This note is only a reminder.' Whether you receive a request like this, you can not fail to obey it!
短文改错
If you park your car in the wrong place, the traffic policeman will soon find∧it. You will a
be very luck if he lets you to go without a ticket.Therefore, this does not always happen. Traffic lucky ﹨ However
police are sometimes very politely. During a holiday in Sweden, I find this note in my car: 'sir,
polite found on
we welcome you to our city. This is a "No Parking" area. You will enjoy your stay here if you pay attention to your street signs. This note is only a reminder.' Whether you receive a request like
our If
this, you can not fail to obey it!
Good afternoon,everyone!
5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table teenis. However, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experiences in traveling, taking care pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Li Hua
6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir,
How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate often held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I am sure he will agree that the only solution for me is get a room of my own, one not in the same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do me the favor.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
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Dear Sir,
How are you? As a exchange student, I am writing to tell you I would prefer to move into
an
a single room in next term, as I find it inconvenient to share a room with others. My roommate
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often held parties at night, made much noise. Besides, his friends are always visiting him, that
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disturbs me a lot. So I hope to draw your attentions to this problem. If you think in my position, I
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same building and as near to the school campus as possible. I would be gratefully if you could do
but grateful
me the favor.
Best wishes.
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
7、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （﹨）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Behind my apartment, there was used to be a dirty and messy corner．Bits of plastic bags hanged on the trees．Broken bottles were left laying here and there．There was a damaging car in the center．The whole corner gave away an unpleasant smell．One year ago, we decided to turn it in a beautiful park．Since then, great changes have been taken place in that corner．All the rubbish have been cleared away．Flowers and young trees have planted all over．Now birds come here to sing, children come here to play, and adults come here to enjoy our peaceful life．It has taken on a new look．
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Behind my apartment, there was used to be a dirty and messy corner．Bits of plastic bags hanged
去掉 hung
on the trees．Broken bottles were left laying here and there．There was a damaging car in the
lying damaged
center．The whole corner gave away an unpleasant smell．One year ago, we decided to turn it in a
off/out into
beautiful park．Since then, great changes have been taken place in that corner．All the rubbish have
去掉 has
been cleared away．Flowers and young trees have∧ planted all over．Now birds come here to
been
sing, children come here to play, and adults come here to enjoy our peaceful life．It has taken on a
their
new look．