2015届二轮复习精题分解之短文改错(3)
1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (﹨)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Several weeks ago, my parents were away for business, and I had to be all by me for
two days. My parents start early that morning, and I got up soon after they left. The first one
night I was scared, so I turned on all the light and kept them on the whole night. For fear of
get up late the next morning, I put three alarm clocks near bed and set the alarms at 6:00, 6:10,
and 6:15. In order to prove I could take care myself, I washed my own clothes, though I can
wait for my mother to do it. I really felt proud of myself but thought I was a big girl.
答案
2、下面文中共有10处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/),并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am glad to hear of you again. You want to know that everything is going in our school. In
Shortly, all has been improving since the school had began to carry on new policies. In the past,
teachers always keep on explaining the points in class. Our students just listened and took note.
But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raising by the teachers or ourselves. Before class, we enjoy different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read what we are interested in. We can go to the library or surf Internet for various kinds of information. We are now masters of study, and we are happy.
3、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (﹨)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.
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parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find
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part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a
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scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay
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job by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good
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easily win a scholarship.
4、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (﹨)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
、I am angry about the act of dishonesty in the exams. I’m not saying that I’m a good student and that I’ve never cheated. I once write the answer on my hand for a history test but, unluckily, caught by my teacher. Because she was one of my most favorites, there were no words to describe how sorry I felt at once. I thought cheat would help me keep my straight A’s. Little I know that I was hurting not only herself but also my teachers. From this lesson I know teachers want students to succeed by learning with their own and do the best they can, not by cheating.
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and that I’ve never cheated. I once write the answer on my hand for a history test but, unluckily,
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∧ caught by my teacher. Because she was one of my most favorites, there were no words to
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describe how sorry I felt at once. I thought cheat would help me keep my straight A’s. Little∧I
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know that I was hurting not only herself but also my teachers. From this lesson I know teachers
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want students to succeed by learning with their own and do the best they can, not by cheating.
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5、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (﹨)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Friendship is very importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all our lives we can’t live without friendship just as we can’t live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in the front of us. But real friendship is no easy to come by. True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand each other but not on benefits of each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us. By his advices we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore more friends we have, the better we can improve ourselves.
Friendship is very importance. Everyone needs friendship. In all our lives we can’t live
important
without friendship just as we can’t live without air and water. Friendship makes us getting on
get
well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in the front of us. But real
kinds
friendship is no easy to come by. True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand
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each other but not on benefits of each other. A good friend can always be a good teacher to us.
By his advices we are persuading to go the right way. Therefore ∧ more friends we have,
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the better we can improve ourselves.
6、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (﹨)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My secret of staying young is simple: keeping your mind awake and you will stay young all over. Take an interest in world around you, and learn at least one old thing every day. Don’t think that you are ever very old to go back to school. I know a man who entered medical college in 70. He got his degree with honors and became a famous doctor. Other man went to law school at 71 and is now a active lawyer. You may say that staying young is easy only for those live in the future. In fact, you can do it whether you care enough to try to keep your mind awake and active, and which is the only way to be always young.
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over. Take an interest in ∧ world around you, and learn at least one old thing every day. Don’t
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think that you are ever very old to go back to school. I know a man who entered medical
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college in 70. He got his degree with honors and became a famous doctor. Other man went to
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law school at 71 and is now a active lawyer. You may say that staying young is easy only for
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those live in the future. In fact, you can do it whether you care enough to try to keep your mind
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awake and active, and which is the only way to be always young.
7、假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (﹨)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock. This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of mine at nearby pond. I slipped into one. Had my friend not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then, I had come to know the importance of learning to swim. I didn’t attend at any training class but learned it all by myself. Strange to say, I have difficult swimming at all now. Though the way I swim look awkward (笨拙的), at least it can keep me from floating. Thinking of this, I feel quiet satisfied.
My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was a time when I swim like a rock.
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This went on till one day when I was fishing with a friend of mine at ∧ nearby pond. I slipped
a
into one. Had my friend not come to my rescue, I would have been drowned. Ever since then, I
it
had come to know the importance of learning to swim. I didn’t attend at any training class but
have
learned it all by myself. Strange to say, I have no difficult swimming at all now. Though the
difficulty
way I swim look awkward (笨拙的), at least it can keep me from floating. Thinking of this, I
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feel quiet satisfied.
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