北师版（2019）必修第一册Unit1 Life Choices WRITING WORKSHOP A PERSONAL EMAIL 课件(共28张PPT)

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WRITING WORKSHOP
A PERSONAL EMAIL
GET READY FOR WRITING
①Pair Work You are going to write an email to a junior secondary school classmate about your new school. Discuss your ideas with a partner. 结对作业你要给初中同学写一封关于你新学校的电子邮件。与合作伙伴讨论你的想法。
1.Who are you going to write to 你打算给谁写信？
2.What do you want to tell him / her
你想告诉他/她什么？
3.What do you want to know from him / her
你想从他/她那里了解什么？
READ FOR WRITING
Read the email. Answer the questions.阅读电子邮件，回答问题。
①Who is Fang Lan Why is Wang Ying writing to her
① 方兰是谁？王英为什么给她写信？
②ls the email formal or informal Why is it written this way 。
② 这封电子邮件是正式的还是非正式的？为什么是这样写的？
3Find and Circle examples of 3查找并圈出的示例
●contractions (e.g. don't) 收缩（例如不要）
● dashes (一) and exclamation points （ ! ）
短划线(一) 和感叹号（！）
● informal words and phrases (e.g. well)
非正式的单词和短语（例如well）
From: Wang Ying 《 wangying@***.com 》
To: Fang Lan 《fanglan@***.com》
Subject: Hello from an old friend
Hi Fang Lan,你好，方兰，
How's your life in Canada 你在加拿大过得怎么样？
I hope you have adapted well to the new situation and are enjoying your new school. 我希望你已经很好地适应了新的生活，并享受你的新学校生活。
I love my new senior secondary school. It's much bigger than my junior secondary school and there's a huge gym! Do you remember Xie Zijun 我喜欢我的新高中。它比我的初中大得多，还有一个巨大的健身房！你还记得谢子君吗？
Guess what - we are in the same school! It's always good to have a friend, right Life in senior secondary school is very different from that in junior secondary school! 你猜怎么着——我们在同一所学校！有朋友总是很好的，对吧？高中生活和初中生活大不相同！
You know, we don't have a fixed classroom! We go to different classes for different subjects and also for different levels.你知道，我们没有固定的教室！我们为不同的科目和不同的水平上不同的课。
I'm in the same class with Zijun for English and physics but in different classes for Chinese and maths. We also have many different clubs after class. 我和子君英语和物理在同一个班，但语文和数学在不同的班。课后我们还有很多不同的俱乐部。
You know, like dancing, so I'm in the Dancing Club. At the moment, we meet twice a week and we're preparing to attend a competition.你知道，我喜欢跳舞，所以我在舞蹈俱乐部。目前，我们每周开会两次，准备参加一场比赛。
I think my new school gives me a chance to become a different person and I like the “new me".
我认为我的新学校给了我一个改变自己的机会，我喜欢“新的我”。
Well, I must go now. I’ve got a presentation tomorrow and I need to finish my slides.好吧，我现在必须走了。我明天有一个演讲，我需要完成我的幻灯片。I look forward to hearing all about what's happening with you soon.我期待着很快听到你所发生的一切。
All the best! Wang Ying
FOCUS ON STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE
③Label the elements (a-g) of the email above.
A ending and wishesc B greeting
C subject linee D reasons to finish writing
E questions about the other person F information about one's own life
G signature
④Write 2-3 sentences about your school life that you want to tell your former classmate. Use the Sentence Builder to help you.
④ 写2-3句关于你的学校生活的话，你想告诉你以前的同学。使用句子生成器来帮助您。
COMPOSE YOUR WRITING
⑤ Outlining Complete the outline of your email. Use Activity 3 to help you.概述完成电子邮件的概述。使用活动3来帮助您。
Subject line:___________________________________
Greeting:___________________________________
Questions to ask:________________________________
Information about you:___________________________
Reasons to finish writing:________________________
Ending:___________________________________
⑥Drafting Use your outline and the Writing Help to write the first draft.
⑥ 起草使用你的大纲和写作帮助来写初稿。
⑦Editing Edit your email in pairs. Then share in class
编辑您的电子邮件。然后在课堂上分享
Peer Editing Sheet for Unit 1, page 90.
第一单元的同行编辑表，第90页。
Writing Help
Writing an Informal Email写一封非正式电子邮件
it‘s important to：重要的是
● write informal emails only to someone you are close to, like your friends and family只给你亲近的人写非正式的电子邮件，比如你的朋友和家人
● use simple and informal expressions, like don't, well
使用简单而非正式的表达方式
● use a proper email format with a subject line, a greeting, questions to ask, information to give and end with a reason appropriately.
使用适当的电子邮件格式，包括主题行、问候语、要问的问题、要提供的信息，并以适当的理由结束
● remember that you can use special punctuation to show your feelings.
记住，你可以用特殊的标点符号来表达你的感受。