Module 6 Unit 3 Language in use Writing课件(共30张PPT)2023-2024学年外研版英语八年级上册

(共30张PPT)
Welcome to my home town!
Step 1: warming-up (4’)
watch a video & guess
where my home town is
Sea Turtle
A sea turtle has a thick shell and lives in the sea most of the time.
The sea turtle is the largest reptile（爬行动物）in the world.
The sea turtle is an endangered animal.
We are friends.
&
We are getting closer!
BUT
When we are getting closer...
Are they happy
What can we do to help the animals
Module6 Animals in danger
Writing
Let's talk
Let's read
Let's write
Let's talk
Let's read
Let's write
giraffe
elephant
tiger
bear
monkey
panda
lion
wolf
animals
in danger
…
Step 2: Pre-writing (13’)
Why are they in danger
for clothes
for food
for medicine
for money
Why do people
kill them
Discussion
People kill animals
People kill animals
People kill animals
People kill animals
Why are they in danger
take away their land and forest
make the water dirty
kill animals for money
stop the killing
It is not right ___________________.
to stop the killing
not right
What can we do
to protect them
to kill animals for money
So we need ____________________.
Let's try our best .
So we need ______________________________________ .
make the water dirty
keep the water clean
protect our environment
It is not good _______________________________.
to make the water dirty
to keep the water clean
not good
to protect our environment
take away the forests and land
It is wrong ______________________________.
to take away the forest and land
to plant more trees for nature reserves.
wrong
plant more trees
nature reserve
So we need ____________________________________.
Fill in the blanks with the correct form of the words.
The WWF is trying (1) animals around the world. They want (2) people it is important (3) killing animals. Lots of people still kill animals (4) their meat or (5) their skins for clothes. But all animals should be able
(6) in peace with humans. For this reason, the Chinese goverment has made a plan (7) animals like pandas bigger ahd safer forests and to build nature park. These nature parks mean that we will get a chance (8) these lovely animals, and
(9) them from being extinct（灭绝的）.
to eat
to give
to help
to live
to save
to see
to stop
to tell
to use
eat
give
help
live
save
see
stop
tell
use
Let's talk
Let's write
√
Let's read
1、What are sea turtles also called
2、Why are sea turtles in danger
3、Where do the sea turtles take in pollution
4、How are sea turtles protected now
5、What can we do to protect sea turtles
Green turtles.
Because many people kill them for food.
From the sea.
By laws.
We should protect the sea first.
Sea turtles are also called green turtles. They are cute animals, but they are in danger. That's mainly because many people kill them for food.
Some scientists have found that sea turtles take in a lot of pollution from the sea. It is bad for both turtles' and humans' health. Now all many kinds of sea turtles are protected by laws. But some people around the world still eat them.
To protect sea turtles, we should protect the sea first. The health of the sea, the health of the animals in the sea, and our own health all have close relationships.
Reading
Let's talk
Let's read
Let's write
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惠东作为亚洲唯一的海龟保护区，响应World Wide Fund号召，向全体中学生征集以“Let's Help Animals”为主题的文章，呼吁人们呼吁人们爱护自然、保护动物。
内容包括:
1. 简单介绍一种濒危动物及面临的危险现状；
2. 描述野生动物濒危的原因（至少2条）及提出相关的保护措施。（至少2条）
3. 呼吁人们保护动物。
WRITING
Step 3: While-writing (17’)
Beginning
introduce an animal in danger
...
What is the animal
Where does it live （live in...)
What does it feed on (feed on...)
How difficult is the situation (in danger)
1.the reasons（at least two）
2. suggestions（at least two）
Body
1. We should... 2. Why not...
3.It's a good idea to...
Ending
(call on)
1. Let’s … together. 2. I hope we can...
What can we do to save it
Beginning
introduce the animals
1. reasons (at least two)
2. suggestions (at least two)
Body
Ending
（3分）
（4分）
（1分）
内容分：8分
内容要点完整且词数符合写作要求的作文可以得8分，词数在80词左右的作文在内容分上可酌情扣分。
（2分）
（2分）
call on
contents
语言分：7分
第一档：7分 要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误。
第二档：5-6分 要求：内容涵盖绝大多数的要点，表达清楚，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但有少数语言错误。
第三档：3-4分 要求：内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚、连贯 ,但有一些语言错误。
第四档：1-2分 要求：内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少数句子，但整体表达不连贯，且语言错误较多。
第五档：0分 空白卷或完全没有相关内容
确定语言分档次时要考虑内容的涵盖，每少一个要点语言分降一个档次评分。
Self-check
Step 4: Post-writing (6’)
内容（7分） 语言:人称、时态、连贯（8分） 合计
要点1（2分） 要点2（2+2分） 要点3（1分） 个别 错误 （8分） 少数 错误 （6-7分） 一些 错误（4-5分） 较多 错误（1-3分） 15分
互评
惠东作为亚洲唯一的海龟保护区，响应World Wide Fund号召，向全体中学生征集以“Let's Help Animals”为主题的文章，呼吁人们呼吁人们爱护自然、保护动物。
内容包括:
1. 简单介绍动物面临的危险现状；
2. 描述野生动物濒危的原因（至少2条）及提出相关的保护措施。（至少2条）
3. 呼吁人们保护动物。
注意（作文通用修改符号：优美句子~，漏词∧ ，错词O，去掉/）
第一人称
一般现在时
and, but, so,because,first，second
exchange your writing to your partners and give marks each other
The blue whale lives in oceans around the world. It is the largest animal in the sea, but it feeds on one of the smallest animals. Although it had a large number in the past, it is in danger now. Why
Well, there are two reasons. First, some people kill them. Second, people pollute the oceans. To help the blue whale, we must stop killing them. Also we shouldn't throw about the rubbish and keep the environment clean. Meanwhile, we can raise money for the nature reserve.
Animals are our friends, saving the animals is saving ourselves. I hope everyone can take actions together. Let's help animals in danger!
Reference
Let's talk
Let's read
Let's write
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Save animals
&
Save the world
Let’s do with us!
1. Recorrect your writing (e.g. spelling and grammar), and write down carefully on your composition paper;
2. Try to design a picture book about protecting animals in your group of four.
HOMEWORK
Step 5: Homework (1’)
Module 6 Animals in danger
Writing
6. Blackboard design
We should do something to protect animals.
We need to plant more trees.
What
Why
How
Animals in danger
Thank you!
love each other