北师大版（2019）必修 第一册Unit 2 Sports and Fitness WRITING WORKSHOP A TRUE STORY课件(共28张PPT)

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WRITING WORKSHOP
A TRUE STORY
GET READY FOR WRITING
①Pair Work You are going to write a true story to share with the class. Discuss the questions with your partner. 结对作业你要写一个真实的故事与全班同学分享。与你的搭档讨论这些问题。
1 Who is your story about
你的故事是关于谁的？
2 Why do you want to write this story
你为什么要写这个故事？
READ FOR WRITING
②Read the story “The Final Sprint". Answer the questions. 阅读故事《最后冲刺》，回答以下问题。
1 Who were the main characters 主角是谁？
2 Where and when did it happen
它发生在什么地方，什么时候？
3How did the story develop 这个故事是怎么发展的？
4 What was the result 结果如何？
The Final Sprint It was the final sprint of the Santa Barbara XV Grand Prix cyclo-cross race in Spain.
最后冲刺这是西班牙圣巴巴拉十五大奖赛自行车越野赛的最后冲刺。
Fans lined the road to the finishing line, cheering on the competitors.
球迷们排在通往终点线的路上，为参赛者加油。
Ismael Esteban, in third place, was just ahead of his competitor, Agustin Navarro, with only 300 metres to the finishing line.排名第三的伊斯梅尔·埃斯特班（Ismael Esteban）仅以300米的成绩领先于他的竞争对手阿古斯丁·纳瓦罗（Agustin Navarro）。
Esteban had been cycling as hard as he could for hours and with the finishing line in sight all the cyclists began to speed up to cross it. 埃斯特班已经骑了几个小时的自行车，当终点线在望时，所有的自行车手都开始加速穿过终点线。
Then,suddenly Esteban got a puncture. What should he do Give up or continue Esteban threw his bike over his shoulders and raced towards the finishing line.然后，埃斯特班突然被刺破了。他该怎么办？放弃还是继续？埃斯特班把自行车甩在肩上，冲向终点线。
Just a few seconds later, fourth-placed Navarro caught up with him. Surely, he could simply overtake Esteban and come third.
几秒钟后，排名第四的纳瓦罗追上了他。当然，他可以超越埃斯特班，获得第三名。
But Navarro slowed down and let Esteban run ahead of him, The two cyclist sreached the finishing line with Esteban ahead on foot, Navarro just behind him. 但纳瓦罗放慢了速度，让埃斯特班跑在他前面。两名骑自行车的人在埃斯特班步行的情况下冲到了终点线，纳瓦罗就在他后面。
Navarro had let Esteban finish in third place, while became fourth, The audience was amazed at his show of sportsman ship and cheered and clapped for the cyclists.纳瓦罗让埃斯特班获得了第三名，而成为了第四名。观众们对他的体育精神表现感到惊讶，并为骑自行车的人欢呼鼓掌。
After the race, Navarro said," didn't want to win that way." Later, Esteban, who won the bronze medal, tried to give his medal to Navarro.
赛后，纳瓦罗说，“不想那样赢。”后来，获得铜牌的埃斯特班试图把奖牌送给纳瓦罗。
However, Navarro refused.and his response was: "Offering me the prize was worth more than what I did for him.“
然而，纳瓦罗拒绝了。他的回应是：“给我这个奖比我为他所做的更有价值。”
The two cyclists made amazing sporting gestures - Navarro for refusing to take advantage of Esteban's troubles, and Esteban for offering Navarro his medal, This was sportsmanship at its very best.
两位自行车手做出了令人惊叹的体育手势——纳瓦罗拒绝利用埃斯特班的麻烦，埃斯特班向纳瓦罗提供了奖牌，这是最好的体育精神。
FOCUS ON STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE
③Read the story again. Take notes in the first column.
④Write 2-3 sentences for your story. Use the Sentence Builder to help you.
Sentence Builder
Sertence strucrure (2)
COMPOSE YOUR WRITING
⑤Outlining Discuss your sentenceswith a plete “MyStory" column in Activity
大纲与合作伙伴讨论你的句子。完成“活动”中的“我的故事”栏
⑥Drafting Use your outline and theWriting Help to write your first draft.
起草使用你的大纲和写作帮助来写你的初稿。
⑦Editing Edit your story in pairs. Then share what you have written in class.
Peer Editing Sheet for Unit 2,page 90.
编辑两人一组编辑你的故事。然后分享你在课堂上写的东西。第二单元的同行编辑表，第90页。
Writing Help
Writing a True Story写一个真实的故事
it's important to:重要的是
●introduce the setting and characters; 介绍背景和人物；
● describe the details of the story描述故事的细节
● write the story in time order;按时间顺序写故事
● include a comment on the story包括对故事的评论