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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My mother’s gift
A dandelion (蒲公英) in my dictionary always reminds me of my lunchtimes with my mother.
When I was in the third grade, I was picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had painstakingly (费力地) practised my lines with me. But no matter how easily I delivered them at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained that she had written a narrator’s part to the play, and asked me to switch roles.
I didn’t tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my unease, and instead of suggesting we practice my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard.
It was a lovely spring day and the rose leaves were turning green. We could see yellow dandelions popping through the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a little bit of gold.
I watched my mother casually bend down by one of the dandelions. “I think I’m going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, suddenly pulling a flower up by its roots. “From now on, we’ll have only roses in this garden.”
“But I like dandelions,” I protested. “All flowers are beautiful — even dandelions.” My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn’t it ” she asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over. “And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that.”
Relieved that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened.
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, reminding me of how much I loved to read stories aloud to her. “The narrator’s part is as important as the part of a princess.”
Over the next few weeks, with her constant encouragement, I learned to take pride in the role. Lunchtimes were spent reading over my lines and talking about what I would wear.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Backstage on the night of the performance, I felt nervous.
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After the play, I took home the flower I had placed in the pocket.
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【前文大意】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者三年级时被选中在学校戏剧表演中扮演公主,但因为总是在舞台上忘词而被老师调换成叙述者的角色。在妈妈的启发和鼓励下,作者学会了为叙述者这个角色感到自豪并努力背诵台词,认真做准备
一、阅读前文找—Who What happened How(feeling)
人物(Who):I, my mother
冲突事件(What happened): (前文第1段末句) She(my teacher) explained that she had written a narrator’s part to the play, and asked me to switch roles.
(前文最后1段) Over the next few weeks, with her constant encouragement, I learned to take pride in the role.
人物情感变化(How): painstakingly practised my lines—my unease—My mother looked at me seriously—she asked thoughtfully—Relieved that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry—with her constant encouragement, I learned to take pride in the role.
二、续写情节构思
(一)充分理解两段续写的首句,结合前文,合理构思每段2个情节。
1.由第一段首句Backstage on the night of the performance, I felt nervous.(演出当晚的后台,我感到很紧张。)可知,第一段可描写作者是如何克服紧张以及完美完成表演的,即续写线索:感到紧张——发现蒲公英——恢复平静——完成演出。
2.由第二段首句After the play, I took home the flower I had placed in the pocket.(演出结束后,我把放在口袋里的花带回家。)可知,第二段可描写作者把花收藏起来,对母亲心存感激。即续写线索
保存蒲公英——感谢母亲。
(二)充分理解前文,注意“伏笔”情节,在续写中呼应;划出前文的好词佳句,适切用于续写。
1. A dandelion (蒲公英) in my dictionary always reminds me of my lunchtimes with my mother.
在我的字典里的一朵蒲公英让我时时想起和妈妈在一起的午餐时间。
2. And for weeks my mother had painstakingly practiced my lines with me.
妈妈煞费苦心地给我练习台词。
2.But no matter how easily I delivered them at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head.
但是,不管在家里怎么背得滚瓜烂熟,只要一上舞台,我的脑子里就成了一片空白。
3.But she sensed my unease.
但是,她感觉到我的不舒服。
三、文末点题句
文末(通常是结尾句,但视具体行文,可能在接近结尾处)为点题句,升华故事蕴含的正能量意义,比如本文主题是
“Every flower gives pleasure in its own way.(每朵花以自己的方式给人带来愉悦。)” 或
“The narrator’s part is as important as the part of a princess.(叙述者角色和公主角色一样重要。)”或“母亲的持续鼓励帮助孩子树立信心。”
Backstage on the night of the performance, I felt nervous.
I struggled to memorize the words in the play painstakingly. Suddenly, I felt that there was something in my pocket. Taking it out of my pocket, I found that it was a dandelion. Immediately, Mother's encouragement occured to me. I said to myself, “I've practised for a long time to be well prepared. I can do it !” Taking a deep breath, I began to play, confident. The play was performed smoothly and successfully and the audience broke into a storm of applause. Backstage stood I, hearing the applause and helding back my exciting tears.
After the play, I took home the flower 1 had placed in the pocket. The second I arrived home, I ran to my mother and hugged her tightly with tears welling up in my eyes. “I've made it!” I cried out. A big smile appearing on her face, she squeezed me in her arms, saying. “ It's the result of your tireless effort ! You are the most distinguished narrator !” It was my mother that taught me the importance of confidence in a special way. The rose leaves turn green and fall. A dandelion in my dictionary always reminds me of being confident, which is my mother's gift for me that I will treasure forever.
Backstage on the night of the performance, I felt nervous. My heart began to race and my mind went blank. I could feel my pulse pounding in my temples and my palms sweating like crazy. When I felt almost fainted, my teacher came over to me. "Your mother asked me to give this to you. " she said, passing me a dandelion. When I saw it, I knew my mom was out there. My mother's encouragement and guide flooded into my mind immediately. I took a deep breath and calmed down. When the play started, I quickly entered a state of mind. I put the dandelion into my pocket and performed wonderfully as a narrator.
After the play, I took home the flower 1 had placed in the pockel. My mother received the dandelion and put it in the dictionary. Then my mother kept praising my successful role. During the meal, my mother smiled and said, "Although we are as inconspicuous as dandelions, we will also bloom our own unique beauty. After that, I often look back on our lunchtimes together, under the soft sunshine. The dandelion that represented my mother's education has always been well kept in the dictionary. For this, I am forever grateful to my mother, because the smile on her face and her gentleness have cultivated a brave and confident person like me.
gut
spill one’s guts to someone:(向某人)倾诉心里话,吐露心声
I had to spill my guts to someone about the broken window.
sweat (one’s) guts out:努力做某事
There’s nothing more disheartening than to sweat your guts out on an assignment, only for the computer to crash and delete all your work.
tub of guts:肥胖笨拙的人(贬义);庸俗的人
I used to be a tub of guts when I was in high school, but during college I really made an effort to slim down.
gut response/reaction:本能反应
gut instinct:直觉
go with (one’s) gut:凭直觉行事
beer gut/beer belly:啤酒肚
get the guts up (to do something):鼓起勇气(做某事)
I hope Jonathan finally gets the guts up to ask his boss for a raise.
step
a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step:千里之行,始于足下
a spring in (one’s) step:步伐轻快/自信;精力充沛
I bet you’ll have a spring in your step after I tell you this bit of good news!
Add an extra shot of espresso to my latte. I need something that will put a spring in my step!
be out of step:步伐不一致;引申为不协调,不一致
The chairman is out of step with the rest of the committee—that's why they want to oust him.
fall into step:步调一致
If you don’t fall into step with us, you'll get left behind.
keep in step (with someone or something):与……步调保持一致
step into someone’s shoes:接替某人的职位
I tell you, I wouldn't want to step into her shoes. Sure, the pay would be better, but I don't want all that stress!
step on the gas:加快(汽车)马力
word
a play on words:文字游戏;双关语;俏皮话
Most people groan when they hear a pun, but a clever play on words can always make me laugh.
a man/woman of few words:沉默寡言的人
a word of praise is equal to ointment on a sore:良言一句三冬暖
a word in (one’s) ear:私房话;秘密话
I’m confident that that intern will stop slacking off once I have a word in his ear.
bad words/a bad word:坏话;诅咒人的话
Please try not to curse around the kids—I don’t want them repeating any bad words!
at a loss for words:语塞;哑口无言
I’m so disappointed that I’m actually at a loss for words.
be beyond words:难以言表;无法用语言表达
become a household word:家喻户晓
As a result of the rapid and widespread adoption of touch-enabled mobile devices, “smartphone” has now become a household word.
eat (one’s) words:食言
devil
a devil of a time:非常艰难的时期
I’m having a devil of a time getting this window open—I think it has been painted shut.
an idle brain is the devil's workshop:游手好闲是万恶之源。
be a crafty devil:形容某人奸诈狡猾
Tabloid reporters are such crafty devils, spinning people’s personal problems into sensationalist stories.
catch the devil:遭到呵斥
If I get home past curfew again, I’m really going to catch the devil from my parents!
have the devil to pay:承受可怕的后果;遭遇麻烦
I just worry that we’ll have the devil to pay if he gets elected president.
speak of the devil:说曹操,曹操就到
the devil is in the detail(s):细节决定成败
Double check your code—with software, the devil is in the details.
star
(one’s) star is rising:运势向好
It’s clear the actress’s star is rising, as she is now confirmed for three more major blockbuster films over the next few years.
aim for the stars:目标/志向远大
When choosing a career path, don’t settle—aim for the stars!
back-cloth star:(不引人注目却仍设法与明星抢戏的)二流演员
born under a lucky star:天生幸运;天生走运
Janet found a fantastic job as soon as she finished college; I guess she was just born under a lucky star.
hitch (one’s) wagon to a star:胸怀大志
You can do anything you want, so why not hitch your wagon to a star
reach for the stars:追求难以实现的东西;雄心勃勃
My parents always taught me to reach for the stars when I was growing up—that I could be anything I set my mind to!
Blue
once in a blue moon:千载难逢
a bolt from the blue:晴天霹雳;令人大吃一惊
We all thought Grandma was healthy as can be, so her cancer diagnosis came like a bolt from the blue.
between the devil and the deep blue sea:左右为难;进退维谷
【同义词:be in a dilemma;between two fires;stand at a nonplus;be in a fix】
I was between the devil and the deep blue sea, for if I didn’t take out another loan—and go deeper into debt—I could not pay off the debts I already owed.
black and blue:青一块紫一块
I’m probably going to be black and blue after falling down the steps this morning.
be blue around the gills/pale around the gills:呕吐的;喝醉的
After all that drinking last night, I sure am blue around the gills today.
blue in the face:精疲力尽;气急败坏
【Often used in the phrase “till (one) (is) blue in the face.”】
You can complain about it till you’re blue in the face, but we’re going to your grandmother's whether you like it or not.
come out of the blue:出人意料;突如其来
You need to work hard—opportunities don’t just come out of the blue.
pink
be in the pink:形容身体健康;喝醉的
Jill is happy to be in the pink again after her hospital stay.
get a pink slip/get pinked:被解雇
He was in total disbelief when he got a pink slip from his boss today, as he had worked at the company for over a decade.
pink elephants:幻觉;不可能的事;离奇的事
pink-collar:一般由妇女从事的工作
There is nothing wrong with women finding work in a pink-collar profession. The problem is in expecting women—and only women—to work in those types of jobs.
sea
a sea change:剧变;翻天覆地的变化
The transition from using desktop computers to mobile devices represents a sea change in data management within the field of information technology.
be at sea:茫然;不知所措
I tried to do well in this class, but I’ve been at sea since we started.
follow the sea:做海员;当水手
I always assumed that I would follow the sea, like all of the men in my family, but I just didn’t have the constitution for that life.
get (one’s) sea legs:习惯于船的颠簸;(引申义)适应新事物/新环境
Oh, you’ve only been at your new job for a week—you’ll get your sea legs eventually.
high seas:公海
not the only fish in the sea/there are plenty more fish in the sea:天涯何处无芳草
I’m pretty disappointed that I didn’t get the job, but I’m trying to remind myself it’s not the only fish in the sea.
pale
(as) pale as a ghost:(脸色)苍白
She was pale as a ghost after that car nearly ran into her on the sidewalk.
★be beyond the pale:无法接受的;出格的
Disrupting my class is beyond the pale, young lady—go to the principal's office!
pale at (something):害怕;担忧;厌恶某事或某物
I know that David pales at the thought of flying in an airplane.
【同义词:pale at the notion of (something);pale at the thought of (something)】
pale beside (someone or something):在……前相形见绌;与……相比略逊一筹
All of my siblings are surgeons, so I always feel like my career in art pales beside theirs.
pale by/in comparison:与……相比,黯然失色/相形见绌
Though that issue is indeed serious, it pales by comparison with the threat of drug abuse that is tearing the country apart.
★turn pale:变得苍白(脸色)