人教版（2019）必修 第一册Unit 1 Teenage life reading for writing 课件(共14张PPT 内嵌音频)

(共14张PPT)
Susan Luo’s store
Write a letter of advice
解忧杂货铺
Welcome to
Susan Luo’s store
“I can help you solve the problems, come on.”
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible...
I recommend(推荐) that you talk to your friend about his behaviour... I think you should... Why not ... I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
All the best.
Susan Luo
Lead in
Find and mark the parts of the letter that match(匹配) the following points.
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason(s).
D. I think my advice will help.
Read for structure
推荐
Structure of a letter
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason(s).
D. I think my advice will help.
Read for structure
推荐
problem and understand
__________
advice and reasons
__________
hope/wish
__________
I always feel lonely after school because my parents work in another city. What can I do
Work together and try to give her a letter of advice.
Pre-writing
What
What’s Xu Ting’s problem
I always feel lonely after school because my parents work in another city. What can I do
You wrote that .
.
you always feel
lonely because your parents
work in another city.
how
How do you feel after knowing this
I you and I feel to hear that.
understand
sad/upset/sorry
Group work----Discussion
What advice can you offer to Xu Ting
__________
REQUIREMENTS:
Discuss with your classmates;
Show your reasons;
Use different expressions of giving advice.
First of all,
Firstly,
Advice 1: ...
Reason 1: It can...
What’s more,
Besides,
Advice 2: ...
Reason 2: because...
In the end,
Last but not least,
Advice 3: ...
Reason 3: because...
First of all, you’re supposed to join a volunteer group that helps other people
Because helping other people also makes us feel better.
Then, how about connecting with your parents online.
Because it doesn’t mean you can’t talk to them.
In the end, if I were you, I would keep a pet for company.
It could bring you happiness and drive away your loneliness.
Other expressions of giving advice.
While-writing
Try to finish your letter and send to Xu Ting.(8 mins)
Dear Xu Ting,
You wrote that . I understand you and . Here are my advice for you.
First of all, I recommend you that . Because . What’s more, why not . It can . Last but not least, you are supposed to . It is important to .
Hope you will be better.
Yours,
xxx
『Evaluation』.
Post-writing
Exchange your work with deskmate and mark the scores according to the
Evaluation(评价) scores（分数）
1. give reasons （有理有据？） 1 2 3 4 5
2. use linking words （用衔接词？） 1 2 3
3. use the expressions we learnt （学以致用？) 1 2 3
4. good handwriting （书写工整？) 1 2 3
5. use punctuation mark properly （正确使用符号？） 1
Post-writing
Dear Xu Ting,
You wrote that . I understand you and . Here are my advice for you.
First of all, I recommend you that . Because . What’s more, why not . It can . Last but not least, you are supposed to . It is important to .
Hope you will be better.
Yours,
xxx
Good job!
需适当表达关怀与理解
Paragraph 1：the purpose of the letter.
Paragraph 2：the suggestions and reasons.
Paragraph 3：the writer’s hope.
建议信是一种生活中常用的应用文文体。
Summary
Homework
Give advice to one of these two teenagers and help them out.
THANK YOU